Normally I update every other day at the very least, but I''ve found a major flaw with this as I''m trying to transition to the war. I need to think further ahead instead of just 1 or 2 chapters because I keep going back to change little details to match the current chapters. (Many of which I know I''ll miss)


    One of the bigger mistakes I''ve made was Caleb''s personality, which I decided to chalk up to his own personal reflections and decision to change on his own. Another was the generals from the Alliance, they make an appearance, 1 of them seems to be important, then nothing. Where did they go?


    In a nutshell, gonna need a day or two to flowchart everything as right now I have like 5 different documents of notes, characters, and plot lines. I think if I work off of one it will help me maintain a better plot pace as right now it feels like it''s still warming up even though we''re already halfway through the 3rd volume.


    On a side note: I rejected the offer to go premium, this is my first baby and I want everyone to see it. Halo Master Chief Collection sucks with just Halo Reach so I won''t be distracted until Halo 1,2, or 3 gets released. (Every single official matchmaking game is just DMR vs. DMR, boring as heck)


    I''ll remove this chapter once I post a new one, I''ll be trying to bundle them more now since I found if I keep writing when I''m on a roll it''s better than stopping because I finished a chapter.


    @GD_Cruz, you never told me yet which side you want your team on, Dean seems like he''d be from the Hegemony so I might just put them there. (Will have to age them a few years since enlistment age is 18)