《The Menocht Loop》 Map of the World and Overview Map of the World
| Light | Control presence of radiance |
| Dark | Control lack of light, darkness, void |
| Life | Control life, like plants and living things; heal |
| Death | Control death energy |
| Mountain | Generally elementalist, earth |
| Cloud | Generally elementalist, wind |
| Sun | Generally elementalist, fire |
| Moon | Generally elementalist, water |
| Beginning | Augury based on the past; very easily pick up on patterns |
| End | Augury based on future; can see threads of fate |
| Regret | May create scenarios that branch off from a current moment in reality, effectively seeing into the future. Upon a scenario''s end, return to the present |
| Remorse | Psychological healing or damage, with the ability to root through people''s memories |
| Earth Elementalism (seismomancy) | Typically Mountain; rarely Beginning or Dark |
| Wind Elementalism (aeromancy) | Typically Cloud; rarely End or Regret |
| Fire Elementalism (pyromancy) | Typically Sun; rarely End or Light |
| Water Elementalism (hydromancy) | Typically Moon; rarely Beginning or Remorse |
Blood Oath: Until the drying of this wound, Bind this fate to truth.Though the oath wasn¡¯t very long, it seemed to have an effect: As Euryphel penned the last letter, the unconscious captive shuddered against his restraints, his pulse increasing. ¡°Blood oaths are quite weak, though they have their uses. They can be fixed while unconscious...and are non-consensual. All the same, they fade as soon as the blood clots.¡± Without warning, the prince slapped the red-headed captive across the cheek. The man opened his eyes and recoiled back slightly, teeth clenching together, though Ian ensured his motions were restricted. If the man tried anything, Ian intended to knock him unconscious. The prince leveled a cold gaze at the captive, though didn¡¯t say anything out loud. He began to circle the captive like a prowling panther, his gaze growing in intensity. After a minute, the prince sighed and turned toward Ian. ¡°Clot the blood and knock him out.¡± The red-headed man¡¯s eyelids barely had the chance to widen before drooping shut. The prince repeated his oath with the other two captives: first a man with arresting eyes the color of a pale sky, then a petite dark-skinned woman with a golden oath inscribed across her neck. It tugged and asphyxiated her repeatedly during Euryphel¡¯s uncannily silent interrogation, but based on how long the prince stared into her eyes, Ian figured he found a method to make her talk. Help support creative writers by finding and reading their stories on the original site. When the woman at last fell unconscious, Euryphel groaned and collapsed to his knees, squatting on the deck. A strong breeze swept past and wiped his brow of sweat, but the prince seemed exhausted, his eyes squinting painfully. ¡°Eury,¡± Ian exclaimed, stepping to the prince¡¯s side. Euryphel shook his head and stood, rebuffing Ian¡¯s attempt at helping him up. ¡°I¡¯m fine, just a bit overtaxed, especially after the last one.¡± Euryphel¡¯s pallid lips curled into a smile. ¡°I¡¯ll save you the trouble of asking: The only one with useful information was the woman.¡± ¡°What did she know?¡± The prince¡¯s eyes fell back to the woman¡¯s prone form. He pointed at the golden choker still visible on the woman¡¯s neck, its surface visibly frayed. ¡°She nearly died telling me the name of the Eldemari¡¯s fourth-ranked general, Lias Grevald. She was unable to say more than half a syllable before her oath destroyed the ability to speak.¡± Euryphel stepped forward and pulled back the woman¡¯s sleeve. ¡°Even when asked to write the names of her superiors, shackle-like bracelets appeared on her wrists.¡± No wonder Euryphel spent so long interrogating her. ¡°Eury...are you alright? You were interrogating them for a while.¡± The prince sighed and ran a blood-caked hand through his hair. ¡°I¡¯m fine.¡± I¡¯m not so sure you are. ¡°You should wash up and get some rest. I¡¯ll keep watch this time in the event that there¡¯s another attack.¡± Euryphel looked at him blankly, then began to chuckle softly. ¡°Ian, it won¡¯t do you any good to simply watch. I need to be looking into the future to vet our path. Everyone here is lucky I wasn¡¯t complacent.¡± ¡°Eury, if I stay awake and put in the effort to actively defend us...I¡¯m confident I can keep us all alive until the break of dawn.¡± ¡°...¡± ¡°How much have you slept throughout the entire summit?¡± Ian murmured, brows furrowing. ¡°I¡¯ve slept,¡± Euryphel retorted weakly. ¡°Of course you sandwiched your room between the two Life practitioners...¡± ¡°I slept!¡± The more the prince denied it, the wider Ian¡¯s cold smile. ¡°You almost had me fooled. Euryphel Selejo...you must know that you can¡¯t keep yourself awake for too long, even with vitality infusions.¡± Euryphel groaned. ¡°I really did sleep, Ian. And I didn¡¯t position my room between the Life practitioners; stop mixing up Jazeera and Veronica. They look nothing alike.¡± ¡°Why sleep soundly then but refuse to sleep now?¡± ¡°Because we were all under Shattradan¡¯s protection, Ian. If anything happened to our delegation...it¡¯d be unthinkable. In the grand scheme of things life would move on: The globe wouldn¡¯t mourn too long for a loss from a small, friendless state. But if the Fassari Summit lost legitimacy and states refused to attend...Stewing tensions might erupt and cause widespread chaos in both the East and West.¡± ¡°Are rifts and naturally-forming dilation caves really so valuable?¡± Ian asked, naming the top two tournament reward categories. ¡°They¡¯ve been worth going to war over, yes.¡± Ian shook his head and pointed back towards Euryphel¡¯s room. ¡°Enough beating around the bush. Get some sleep and I¡¯ll keep us safe. You¡¯ve exhausted yourself orchestrating a united defense and conducting the interrogation.¡± Euryphel¡¯s eyes were unbendingly defiant. ¡°Do you trust me?¡± Ian asked, voice barely a whisper. The prince¡¯s gaze held steady for another moment before faltering. ¡°Y¡¯jeni, Ian.¡± Ian followed him back to his room. ¡°I¡¯ll wake you in a few hours, alright?¡± ¡°Fine.¡± Euryphel closed the door with a gust of air, leaving Ian out alone in the cool ocean breeze. He sighed and turned back toward the stern of the ship, flexing his fingers. ¡°I better start preparing for the worst.¡± ¡ª Eury awoke in a cold sweat. He shivered and sat up, placing his head between his legs. You need to sleep, he thought to himself. Ian and the others are awake so you can rest. Knowing that he needed to sleep and actually sleeping were two different things. The prince knew he could reasonably blame a confluence of factors for his insomnia: the unfamiliar location, the rocking of the boat, leftover adrenaline from the attack, and fear of further assassination attempts. Just so...he knew the real reason lay elsewhere. He tightened his grip on the sheets and exhaled a shaky breath before flopping over in the fetal position, legs curling against his stomach. The scene that dominated the prince¡¯s nightmares was an old, indelible scar on his memory. The nightmare was always the same, and all the more terrible for it. In a way, it was the worst kind of nightmare for a Regret practitioner: Euryphel knew what the future held...and knew that there was no way out. In the nightmare, his parents were still alive. He and his mother observed from the balcony of the arena in their own private box. Father didn¡¯t often have challengers: He was strong, and well-liked. If someone wished to join the Princes Council, they could just challenge another one of its members. But on that day that never ended, Father had a challenger, a young man in his early thirties by the name of O¡¯osta Kestrelius Selejo from the up-and-coming Kestrelius clan. Little was known about him other than that he was a talented water elementalist. Euryphel remembered his father speaking before the duel to Mother. She¡¯d been upset, but father had refused to step down. Euryphel knew that his father had trusted his Regret affinity to deliver one-sided victory. The duel commenced without theatrics. After a minute of fighting, O¡¯osta nicked Father with one of his many watery knives. The wound was shallow and non-vital, though Father increased his wariness moving forward. Roughly a minute and thirty seconds later¨Cthe limit of his father¡¯s Regret scenario length¨CEuryphel¡¯s father began to move much more frantically, like an insect caught in the web of a spider. Euryphel¡¯s Mother began to weep. O¡¯osta¡¯s watery knives flared and Euryphel¡¯s father grunted in pain. The knife blades had only made purchase three times since the start of the battle, but each wound began to widen. Through the largest hole, just above Father¡¯s stomach, O¡¯osta began to pull. And pull. And pull. Father watched, face agape with horror, as his organs began to tear and squeeze through the wound in his skin, turning it from a cut into a massive, weeping hole. ...And that was the point at which Euryphel woke up. He thought the memory might grow less potent over time, but it still ate at him, even after killing O¡¯osta with his own hands. In a way, killing O¡¯osta had almost made the nightmare worse. Sleep, Euryphel commanded himself, squeezing his eyes shut. Please just sleep. 87. Return Lanhui was first to see the coastline. ¡°Just another hour and we¡¯ll make landfall,¡± he announced, turning toward Shivin¡¯i and Euryphel. ¡°Though traveling from Port Thumb to Zukal¡¯iss will be another six hours at least.¡± No matter how Ian craned his head, he couldn¡¯t see anything but the dark green-blue of the waves. Overcast clouds cast everything in a dreary light, blocking out the morning sun. ¡°We weren¡¯t detoured too badly,¡± Euryphel observed, his voice scratchy. He still doesn¡¯t look like he got much sleep, Ian noted, though not for lack of trying. ¡°Captain Del, can you foresee any complications?¡± the prince asked. The captain looked almost as exhausted as Euryphel, his eyes tinged red. ¡°None, unless we¡¯re intercepted by assassins.¡± He said the last word softly, as though still coming to terms with the fact his vessel had nearly been destroyed by a team of hostile practitioners. ¡°They would¡¯ve attacked again by now,¡± Euryphel said, Shivin¡¯i and Lanhui both nodding in confirmation. ¡°We¡¯re too close to the coast at this point. If they started blasting us from here, they¡¯d be signing their own lives away.¡± Ian recalled the heavy artillery positioned all around the SPU¡¯s coastline. When he snuck into the SPU originally, he avoided detection by limiting the use of his practice. If he¡¯d come in like an elementalist, beams blazing...things might not have turned out so well. Port Thumb eventually came into Ian¡¯s field of view, a rather large port city that primarily serviced the SPU, Shattradan, and Kester. Ian observed that its docks were mostly filled with commercial and privately-owned vessels rather than warships. Though it was fairly close to Godora, the port was far-removed from all other Selejan allies, leaving it fairly unscathed by past decades of conflict. ¡°That was the longest ride of my life,¡± Diana moaned, breathing a sigh of relief as they approached the docks. ¡°Y¡¯jeni, I missed land.¡± Shivin¡¯i rolled his eyes. ¡°It wasn¡¯t that bad, Diana.¡± ¡°I was sick nearly three times after Lanhui turned on the turbo,¡± she muttered. Ian agreed that the ride hadn¡¯t been as pleasant after Lanhui used his water elementalism to speed the ship forward, making up time lost when they detoured after the attack. What had made it even worse was the stifling atmosphere of paranoia that now pervaded the ship, each of them silently preoccupied with the night¡¯s dark implications. Lanhui snorted and stepped up to the starboard side of the boat. ¡°Stop whining: If I hadn¡¯t sped us along we¡¯d still be at sea for another few hours.¡± ¡°I know, Guardian,¡± Diana said. ¡°I do appreciate your efforts to keep us safe.¡± Ian, Lanhui, and Shivin¡¯i all shared a look of incredulity. Had Diana just said that she appreciated someone? Captain Del and Euryphel came up to join the rest of the delegation. ¡°Captain, are we good to depart?¡± the first prince asked. The captain nodded. ¡°Safe travels to all of you.¡± He bowed his head to Euryphel. ¡°And thank you for the offer...but as the boat and its crew escaped unmarred, I¡¯m going to refuse.¡± Ian had no idea what offer the captain was referring to; was Euryphel trying to offer compensation for entangling the crew in their mess? Euryphel offered his hand. ¡°Very well. At the very least, your crew has done the SPU a favor, one that won¡¯t be soon forgotten. The captives are bound and unconscious; we¡¯ll wait for the local soldiers to collect them and get out of your hair.¡± Del smiled back and gave the prince a firm handshake. With that, the SPU delegation disembarked and stepped onto the dock, their feet unsteady. Diana in particular seemed off-balance, her heeled boots encumbering her more than the others. Diana suddenly tripped, nearly stumbling into the bay. When Ian held out a hand to stabilize her, the fourth prince gave him a strange look. ¡°Thank you, Skai¡¯aren.¡± She turned her gaze to Shivin¡¯i and Lanhui, the Beginning practitioners giving her innocent looks. ¡°It seems that at least someone was paying attention.¡± She turned back toward Ian and began to speak, her words uncertain. ¡°I appreciate your...arm?¡± Lanhui snorted and covered his mouth with a hand. ¡°Diana, you¡¯re remarkably thankful today,¡± Ian observed, tamping down on a grin of his own. Ian noticed Diana glance at Euryphel. ¡°I¡¯m always grateful: I just don¡¯t show it.¡± Lanhui failed to conceal his laughter this time. ¡°What!?¡± Diana crowed, fixing Lanhui with a glare. Lanhui shook his head. ¡°Nothing.¡± Ian shot them both a wry look. If this is how this voyage back is going to be, I¡¯m not sure we¡¯re going to survive the journey. The first prince and Lanhui walked off to debrief a group of local guardsmen hailed by Euryphel¡¯s wind elementalism. Ian noticed the locals¡¯ ramrod-straight posture and racing heartbeats from afar. This is probably the most exciting encounter these men are ever going to see: the Crowned Prime, his delegation, two dead men, and three captives. When Euryphel and Lanhui returned a few minutes later, they resumed their commute to the nearest hovergloss station. ¡°According to the local guards, this is the fastest way back,¡± Euryphel explained. ¡°They had an armored hovergloss carrier that would normally have been able to take us, but it¡¯s been under repair for the past month. We¡¯ll just need to go through more standard channels.¡± ¡ª Due to space constraints, they split up into three hoverglosses and rode to Port Thumb¡¯s transit hub. There they regrouped and boarded a cross-country hovergloss tram headed all the way to Mount Ziggura, stopping at Zukal¡¯iss along the way. How...did I end up next to Diana? Ian wondered. He¡¯d planned to sit next to Euryphel, but the prince instead pulled aside Shivin¡¯i, the two discussing politics and plans in lowered voices. Since the larger hovergloss model was arranged such that people sat in groups of two, Ian had sat down behind Euryphel¡¯s row...only to have Diana drop down into the seat next to him with a dramatic huff. Half an hour later, as Ian was on the cusp of sleep, Diana addressed him. If you stumble upon this narrative on Amazon, be aware that it has been stolen from Royal Road. Please report it. ¡°Skai¡¯aren,¡± she began, ¡°what did you think of the peace summit?¡± Ian blinked himself awake. ¡°The summit?¡± Diana¡¯s eyebrows furrowed, her voice growing impatient. ¡°Yes, the summit.¡± ¡°I feel like I saw very little of it, to be honest. I mostly shuffled between my room and the tournament arena. I tried to stay inside as much as possible to avoid interacting with anyone that might be working with Selejo.¡± Diana hummed her understanding, though lowered her voice and motioned for Ian to come closer. She whispered in his ear, saying, ¡°But didn¡¯t you meet the Eldemari herself, anyway?¡± Ian swallowed his saliva, whispering back, ¡°She sought me out, yes; it¡¯s hard to avoid someone who always knows where you are and is trying to find you.¡± Diana was quiet for a few seconds. ¡°What was she like?¡± ¡°Domineering.¡± Alluring. Diana leaned away and sat back in her seat, her knees raising up to her chest. ¡°In what way?¡± ¡°She¡¯s confident and acts like she knows exactly what she wants. She¡¯s well-spoken and polite, but...you can tell there¡¯s something underneath the surface, like she¡¯s waiting for you to make a mistake. It¡¯s unsettling.¡± Exciting. Diana nodded her head slowly. ¡°I¡¯m not like that at all, am I?¡± Ian sucked in a breath. ¡°Well, not really. You don¡¯t have the same presence. It¡¯s not necessarily your fault. She¡¯s been controlling people for decades: It¡¯s natural she¡¯d exude predatory confidence.¡± ¡°Ugh. I¡¯d like to be like that. Everyone just thinks I¡¯m a brat.¡± ¡°Yup,¡± Lanhui called out from the seat behind them. Diana turned and grit her teeth. ¡°Insolent...¡± Ian placed a hand on her arm. ¡°You need to earn people¡¯s respect, Diana. Being prince won¡¯t give that to you.¡± ¡°Hmph.¡± ¡°It¡¯s not like you need to figure it out now,¡± Ian murmured. ¡°You¡¯re barely an adult: You¡¯re just seventeen.¡± ¡°That didn¡¯t exactly stop Euryphel¨C¡± Ian cut her off. ¡°Euryphel¡¯s not the best example. Find your own way and stop worrying about it so much.¡± The young prince turned away, clearly frustrated. ¡°That¡¯s easy for you to say. You¡¯re so powerful you don¡¯t even have to worry about earning people¡¯s respect.¡± ¡°Y¡¯jeni, Diana, you¡¯re so angsty,¡± Ian remarked with a short chuckle. Diana blinked and brushed back her hair. ¡°I suppose I am, aren¡¯t I?¡± Everyone in the delegation simultaneously revealed that they¡¯d been eavesdropping by chorusing their affirmation. ¡°Yep.¡± Diana¡¯s face reddened and she sunk into her seat, arms crossed in front of her. Ian frowned. It¡¯s easy to forget how much younger she is than everyone else. She¡¯s playing on the level of not just wisened adults but world sovereigns: If I feel overwhelmed and out of my league, she must feel doubly so. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a chain of light-colored soul gems, the less-dense variants he¡¯d thrown together from ambient energy after the final duel. He threw the chain over to Diana, startling her. She reached into her lap and held the gems aloft. ¡°What¡¯s this?¡± ¡°It¡¯s a bracelet,¡± Ian explained. ¡°Put it on and I¡¯ll show you how to clasp it.¡± A minute later, Diana held up her wrist, inspecting the way the crystallized Death energy refracted light. ¡°Euryphel has his hair clip; now you have your bracelet. It¡¯s probably even more valuable than his sapphires,¡± Ian noted with a grin. ¡°Hair clip?¡± Euryphel interjected from the seat ahead. ¡°What do you call it?¡± Ian asked. ¡°A hair ornament,¡± the first prince replied. ¡°I love it,¡± Diana said quietly, ignoring Ian and Euryphel¡¯s aside. Ian froze, surprised by her candor. ¡°I¡¯m glad you like it.¡± She smiled at him, heavy makeup failing to conceal her simple, youthful beauty. ¡°Thank you.¡± ¡ª ¡°Y¡¯jeni...home at last,¡± Ian sighed, collapsing onto his bed. A knock on the door interrupted him a few minutes later, stirring him from his nap. ¡°Mother...?¡± he muttered, recognizing the vital signature beyond the door. I didn¡¯t even think she could enter the inner palace. He opened the door to see his mother¡¯s severe features pinched into a worried expression, her eyes narrowed and her forehead furrowed. ¡°Hello,¡± Ian said simply. Mother closed her eyes and exhaled sharply, her arms tense at her sides. She opened her eyes again, her features relaxing. ¡°I see you made it back alright.¡± Ian nodded. ¡°You heard about the array station going down, I presume.¡± ¡°Yes. I worried for you.¡± Ian scratched the back of his head. ¡°Well...we got back okay.¡± She took a step forward and embraced him. Ian¡¯s eyes widened, his entire body stiffening. I can¡¯t remember the last time she hugged me, he realized, a feeling of hollowness coming over him. He stepped back, disoriented, but she held on, her grip like solid iron. ¡°I truly had no idea the level of your power,¡± Mother breathed softly. ¡°To win the entire Fassari Summit...¡± Ian gritted his teeth and forced himself from her arms. ¡°Does that matter so much to you?¡± ¡°It¡¯s an incredible accomplishment,¡± she replied, her voice clipped and emotionless. ¡°I wished to express my congratulations. You¡¯re clearly more capable than I ever could have hoped.¡± She smiled sadly. ¡°No thanks to my own pitiful actions as a mother.¡± ¡°What do you want to discuss?¡± Ian sighed, leaning against the door. ¡°I don¡¯t think you came just to congratulate me.¡± Mother flexed her fist, rubbing her thumb over her index finger. ¡°The princes are going to have a discussion about you.¡± Ian frowned. ¡°Pertaining to what, exactly?¡± The way she said it didn¡¯t make it sound like the discussion would be positive. ¡°I¡¯m not exactly sure,¡± Mother replied. ¡°I¡¯ve been speaking with Guardian Druni; she seems to think that the princes are debating war. And at the crux of their discussions is, of course, you. The princes, the Congress, and the generals have all been tied up in meetings ever since you won the tournament. ¡°I do know that you should be careful,¡± Mother continued. ¡°From what I understand, your prince is going to be stuck in nonstop meetings regarding the SPU¡¯s path forward. I believe that he¡¯ll be advocating for you to be treated fairly, but he very-well may be outvoted or outmaneuvered, as he hasn¡¯t been here to politic the past few days. You¡¯re going to need to prepare yourself for the kind of responsibility you¡¯ve never wanted.¡± Ian licked his lips, his mouth dry. ¡°You think they¡¯ll choose war?¡± ¡°It¡¯s likely. And if they do choose that path, I believe they¡¯ll move quickly and decisively, seizing upon the current moment.¡± Ian had reached a similar conclusion that morning, as he silently surveyed the bay for assailants. If the Eldemari was bold enough to orchestrate an attack on the delegation, it meant the Union¡¯s window of opportunity would soon be closed. If Achemiss spoke the truth, Pardin can still be saved. Even if I fail my ascension... He looked up at Mother, whose stern look had dissolved into an unfamiliar expression. Why are you afraid Mother? Ian thought. Do you fear what will happen to me, or what I will become? ¡°Thank you for telling me,¡± Ian murmured. ¡°I can see you¡¯ve been trying to make yourself useful.¡± ¡°What else would I be doing here?¡± Mother replied, a bit of heat entering her voice. ¡°If I were just going to sit around idly, I¡¯d have returned to Jupiter.¡± Ian¡¯s expression tightened. ¡°Do you know anything else?¡± ¡°Unfortunately not. I did my best to keep my eyes and ears open, but there¡¯s a limit to my gossip-mongering abilities,¡± she replied, a bit of dark humor seeping into her tone. ¡°Meanwhile, your sister¡¯s been trying to read every article that¡¯s come out about you. She has an entire projection board mapping public sentiment from the beginning of the tournament through the present day.¡± Ian¡¯s heart swelled, a smile lighting up his face. ¡°That¡¯s incredible.¡± Mother nodded. ¡°She is.¡± An awkward silence fell upon them. Ian sighed and rubbed his eyes. ¡°It¡¯s been a long week, Mother. I appreciate your concern and congratulatory remarks.¡± Something about his words seemed to have affected her; she began to blink rapidly and turned away. ¡°Yes, well, I tried my best. Reach out to your sister, won¡¯t you?¡± ¡°Of course, after I get a bit of rest.¡± She nodded. ¡°I¡¯ll take my leave then.¡± Soon Ian was alone in the doorway, his thoughts tangled. Mother...I hope that one day, I¡¯ll be able to forgive you. [The Samsara Crucible] 144. The Long Hall Book 4: The Samsara Crucible