《Croenas story of creation》 Creation Before time and space existed there was one being, some people would call him God, others the creator but he preferred to be called by his real name, Croena. All he can remember from back then was an endless darkness, it enveloped everything, but there was nothing. Croena found this strange and thought how can nothing exist at the same time as everything. He didn''t like this so he created space. This space would later become known as the universe. Inside this space he could control everything. He made matter, and using that matter he constructed the building blocks that would later become known as galaxies. Inside of this space he realises that nothing moved unless he willed it to. So in order to make them move he created time. To prove that time flowed inside of his space he created particles. These particles would then be used to form what would later be know as Solids, Liquids, Gases and Plasma. The last state would be called many names but the most well know one would be Bose-Einstein condensate, which was named by the species known as humans. These 5 states of matter were used to construct the finer details of his space.A case of content theft: this narrative is not rightfully on Amazon; if you spot it, report the violation. He created Gases and compressed them into balls, these balls would then become plasma and give off light, these balls would later become known as stars. He noticed that over time the plasma in the stars would disperse outwards. To counter this he would create a point that particles would gather around, these points would later become known as gravity. He saw his creation as beautiful, but he had nobody to share this sight with, so he created life, he released this life out into his space and observed how they grew. He saw them multiply and form trillions of different types of living creatures. Not all of these creatures could survive the harsh pull of gravity and would be pulled into stars. Croena pitied these unfortunate creatures and decided he would help them. He then created large balls of solid matter and held it together using a gravity. He then placed these balls close to a star. He saw his new creation as boring and decided to add something new to it, something that can be moved but it is also strong in large quantities. This would later become known as water. He moved the unfortunate creatures to his new creations and witnessed what he thought to be true beauty. These small creatures turned this once boring planet into a luscious green world brimming with life. He loved watching his creations grow so he decided to give them a little help. He created a new form of life, one that would plan what they wanted to happen and work towards that goal. To do this he gave them a them knowledge. This is the story of how Croena created the universe. The fantasy universe and its inhabitants Millions of years have passed for Creona since he created the universe. He had become fascinated by the race called Humans. They used the knowledge given to them to create incredible things but they use those things to do the most ridiculous things imaginable. Even Creona who created everything couldn''t understand how a species can be so smart yet so stupid at the same time. One day Creona was looking at some of the inventions the Humans had made and noticed something called a video game. He saw people all over the world playing these video games and wondered what was so good about a pre-programmed world that will have the same story no matter how many times he played it. Creona decided, for the first time since the universe began to walk among his creations and see this world how everyone else sees it. To do this he would have to find a vessel on the planet suitable to contain his conscience, after looking far a while he could not find a living being capable of containing his conscience so he decided to look for non-living vessel. After an hour he came across this thing called the internet, it was a massive system of computers that allowed somebody to talk to someone on the other side of the world almost instantly. After moving his conscience into the internet he suddenly got a wave of information and saw the suffering this planet had gone through and the suffering to come. Creona was disgusted with the humans for using the knowledge he gave them enslave others, create weapons that can kill millions at a time and discriminate against others of the same species just because they looked different or had different beliefs. At the same time he was touched by the people who work want to find ways to save other peoples lives regardless of there own personal safety and the people who love and care for all despite there differences. He had found the answer he was looking for. The reason people play the video games so much is because it allows them to escape from the claws of their everyday lives and find something they truly want to do and enjoy. Creona respected these people and decided that if they wanted to escape from there everyday lives he would give them the chance to. So Creona left his universe and decided to create another, one free of the restrictions he placed on the first, on where you can become whatever you want to become if you put enough effort in. Creona thought that this wasn''t enough, he saw that humans loved the thing called fantasy. This fantasy contained magic, souls, and a range of sentient creatures. So he decided to make it so that when someone travels to this universe they would gain the ability to use ''magic'' inside of the planet they are on. He created a range of sentient creatures all based off of creatures from the stories and video games he saw on Earth.This novel''s true home is a different platform. Support the author by finding it there. He created the nature loving race called elves, who lived in the forests of this new planet and cared for them, these were Creonas personal favourite as they saw the beauty of natural life the same way Creona did. Elves can live up to 10,000 years on average. He created the short yet sturdy race called the dwarves, these dwarves would live in glorious cities build inside mountain ranges and use the natural resources of the world to create weapons and armour to protect themselves and their families. Dwarves can live up to 500 years on average. He created the Beastmen, half beast and half man, they had enhanced senses and strength, they specialised in hunting and Creona saw them as the closest to nature and gave them the ability fully embrace the beast part of them in battle. The Beastmen can live 500 years on average. He created the dragons, a prideful species that seclude themselves from other races. They share there knowledge with only a few chosen individuals outside of there race. Being the one of the longest lived of the races they gain power as they age and can share all their knowledge with members of there bloodline. There are many variants of this race, some weak, some strong but they all protect each other from the people that with to cause them harm. The dragon race can live for 2,000,000 years on average. He created the fallen race, this race created so that someone, no matter what race they were, can reclaim what was taken from them unfairly. It granted them the power to manipulate other peoples mind and once they fully embrace the power they gained they will become a fallen lord. These lords will rule over something, it could be luck, misfortune or even life, but no matter what it was, that lord could sense the people under there rule and interfere in there lives. A normal fallen can live up to 2000 years but a fallen lord can live forever as long as the thing they rule over still exists. He created the demon race, this race would have 2 hearts instead of 1 granting them higher magic capacity and enhanced strength, this race looks similar to the humans but they have additional features depending of the type of demon they were. Some demons had claws that could tear through steel and some had bones as hard as graphene. This race will live for around 2000 years on average. He created the devil race, this race would be the evolved form of the demon race. This race would have strength and magic comparable to that of a weaker dragon. Their once strong additional features would become even stronger, allowing them to dominate over most of the races. This race lives for around 100,000 years on average. He created the angel race, this race would have strong magic and wings. These wings would allow them to fly faster that dragons and there strong magic would allow them to interfere in the way the world works for a short period of time. This race lives for around 50,000 years on average. He created the god race, this would be the evolved version of the angel race. This race would have the ability to completely control the environment and will have the ability to see possible futures, this ability coupled with there control over the environment allows them to prevent natural disasters, or cause them. The god race can live forever and can be reborn as long as they are not forgotten. After that he created the fairy race. This race can communicate with the nature around them and use it to there advantage. They can also see lies, because of this they are asked to mediate meetings between countries. Only the fairies know that there ability to see lies also means that they are immune to mind magic and illusions. On average a fairy can live for 90,000 years. The Humans that will travel to this world will have the shortest life span of only 150 years but they will gain the potential to increase that. The creation of the system After Creona finished making all the races he decided that he should create a system so that the creatures of the world can strengthen themselves. He based this system on a game and added level, stats, classes, skills, titles and possible evolution paths. To start making this system created the average stats for every race. He made it so one race can''t completely dominate over another, to do this he added in a limit to each races strength, in order overcome this limit they would have to meet certain requirements. After he made these stats and requirements he started making classes, he made the knight class, warrior class, mage class and many others until he realised that he can make it so the system creates the classes as they are earned. He thought this would be a good way to do it until he saw classes that would break the balance of the world and the system. So once again he added a limit to how strong one class can be, this time however the limit can''t be overcome by meeting certain requirements, the only way one can earn a powerful class was by getting permission from the system itself. After that he made the basic skill sets, they were, combat skills, magic skills, crafting skills, alchemy skills, nature skills, leadership skills and mind skills. These skill sets then had skills in them, combat skills would contain weapon masteries, ect, magic would contain magic control, ect. After making all the skills he could think of he then set the system to automatically create and add new skills. He then started to make the titles, this one would be harder to make that the others, it would have to know how a person, thinks, acts and how other people see him. In the end Creona decided to set the system, once again to automatic and let it handle the rest. Creona then started to make the possible evolution paths and, without realising it spent nearly 2000 years making all the evolution paths. This part of the system would influence a persons growth the most and determine what their future would be like.This story has been unlawfully obtained without the author''s consent. Report any appearances on Amazon. And finally Creona started to make the levels. Levels were his favourite part of the system as they allowed him to expand the already made parts of the system almost infinitely. He added levels into almost everything he had made in the system so far. Classes had levels, titles had levels, skills had levels and evolutions had levels. As someones level rises it there stats would rise alongside it, this would allow people to increase there skill levels quicker as they had higher stats to do so. After he had finished making this system he realised that he had forgotten something very important. He had forgotten that he had added magic to the world but no way for people to learn how to use it. To make a way for people to learn magic he decided to add different types of magic into the system. The magics he added into the system are: Base magic: Fire Water Wind Earth Space Time Light Dark Sub magic: Steam, sub of fire and water Lava/magma, sub of fire and earth Heat, sub of fire and wind Eruption, sub of fire and space Hell, sub of fire and time Holy flame, sub of fire and light Dark flame, sub of fir and dark Wave, sub of water and wind Mud, sub of water and earth Tsunami, sub of water and space Dispersion , sub of water and time Holy water, sub of water and light Dark water, sub of water and dark Sand, sub of wind and earth Sound, sub of wind and space Hurricane, sub of wind and time Holy gale, sub of wind and light Dark gale, sub of wind and dark Earth control, sub of earth and space Expand, sub of earth and time Holy land, sub of earth and light Dark land, sub of earth and dark Space-time, sub of space and time Light control, sub of space and light Dark control, sub of space and dark Clairvoyance, sub of time and light Seal, sub of time and dark Neutral, sub of light and dark Life, sub of all After he made the magics he decided that it would be a good idea to make it so that someone with enough proficiency in magic can use the evolution system to create new types of magic. After he had finished making the system he couldn''t help but have a nagging feeling that something missing from the system, something that would make the system work more efficiently and allow him to watch over his new creations. After a long time thinking he finally figured out what he should do... Creona added himself into the system. The invitation and the fallen lord of judgement As soon as Creona added himself into the system he felt a sudden surge of information hit his conscience, but unlike when he went into the internet on Earth this information felt controlled and instead of feeling pain like being hit by a huge wave of water he felt like he was in a calm stream. He got information about everything happening inside the system, he knew the predetermined stats of every living creature under the influence of the system and he knew what paths they could take in life. The paths he saw were endless, each path contained its own adventure, would lead you to new people and would allow you to see the true beauty of the world. He was satisfied with the system he created and decided that it was time to invite the humans of Earth into this new universe. So he decided to broadcast his voice across the entire of Earth, giving everyone, no matter how rich or poor a chance at a new life. "Humans of Earth, I am the being you would refer to as God and I would like to invite you to a new world of my creation. This world will be what you refer to as a fantasy world, there will be magic and many other sentient races that you will live beside as you grow and expand your knowledge. This is a gift from me, not because you deserve it, but because you need it, you need a chance to make new history and make the history of your world irrelevant. The narrative has been taken without authorization; if you see it on Amazon, report the incident.To get to this new world you simply have to write the words ''I accept the invitation from Creona'' somewhere and drip a drop of your blood onto it. Some of you will want to return from to this world so to do that you will simply write, ''I wish to return to my home planet'' and drip a drop of your blood onto it. But be warned, every time you return back to this planet, you will lose all the strength and powers you gained from this planet." After his speech Creona was exhausted. He never thought that talking to so many people at the same time would be so hard, if you even messed up once everyone would notice. Creona decided to watch what the humans did after his speech and was surprised to see that everyone was relatively calm, some people carried on with there daily lives while others contemplated the pros and cons for leaving their current life behind. Only 1 billion out of the 7 billion inhabitants of earth had went to his new planet and a tenth of those people decided it would be fun to commit crime in this world without rules. Creona saw this and was reminded of how cruel and twisted the human race could be. He knew that there would be some people who committed crime but he didn''t expect so many people to. He could counter this by creating a new part of the system related to crime but he thought that it would be too restricting, instead he chose an fallen from one of the many ones already on this world. He made this fallen into a fallen lord and gave him authority over ''Judgement''. This fallen lord would be followed by many and would seek out and judge people who have commuted crimes. This fallen was then named ''Jregnar'' by Creona. The interface After naming the new fallen lord, Creona decided to make himself a place where he could relax and enjoy watching his creations. He started off by making himself a body, this body wouldn''t like any other body made before, this body would be made of pure energy. He had thought of many ways he could make his body, but he decided this one was the best. He could fully control this body and all of it''s functions, he could adapt it to any situation and if he really wanted to he could make it into a body like those his creations have and live among them. After moving his conscience, along with the system inside of his new body he was greeted with a screen floating in front of him, on this screen it said
Welcome tothe system interface creator, would you like me to explain how the interface works?
"Yes, thank you system"
The system has one main screen that displays your name, race, age, gender, class, stats, level, titles, base skills and possible evolution paths. Most of these has a sub-screen that will give more details on each one. Name sub screen will display your family members and previous names you''ve had. This tale has been pilfered from Royal Road. If found on Amazon, kindly file a report.Race sub screen will display the details about the variant of the race you are. Age sub screen will display you age to the second. Gender has no sub screen. Class sub screen will display details about your class, your subclass and possible future classes you can take. Stats sub screen will display the regeneration speed of you health and mana. Level sub screen will allow you to see the stats you will gain when you level up and the required exp for the next level. The titles sub screen will allow you to see the reason you have that title and the advantages and disadvantages for having it. Base skills sub screen will show you the different type of skills you have and what those skill will do. Possible evolution paths sub screen will allow you to see the advantages and disadvantages of each evolution and what is required to obtain that evolution. Was this useful to you creator?
"Yes, thank you system. Could you display my stats for me system."
Name: Creona Race: Unnamed Age:N/A
Gender:Male Class: None Level: 0
Stats: Strength: N/A Dexterity:N/A
Endurance: N/A Health: Infinite Mana: Infinite
Titles Creator, The one who exists yet is not possible, Administrator, The admirer, Doting parent.
Possible evolution paths N/A
Well, I should probably name my race. I''m a being made of energy and can become anything I want. I''m going to name this race the Transcended. The interface After naming the new fallen lord, Creona decided to make himself a place where he could relax and enjoy watching his creations. He started off by making himself a body, this body wouldn''t like any other body made before, this body would be made of pure energy. He had thought of many ways he could make his body, but he decided this one was the best. He could fully control this body and all of it''s functions, he could adapt it to any situation and if he really wanted to he could make it into a body like those his creations have and live among them. After moving his conscience, along with the system inside of his new body he was greeted with a screen floating in front of him, on this screen it said
Welcome tothe system interface creator, would you like me to explain how the interface works?
"Yes, thank you system"
The system has one main screen that displays your name, race, age, gender, class, stats, level, titles, base skills and possible evolution paths. Most of these has a sub-screen that will give more details on each one. Name sub screen will display your family members and previous names you''ve had. Reading on Amazon or a pirate site? This novel is from Royal Road. Support the author by reading it there.Race sub screen will display the details about the variant of the race you are. Age sub screen will display you age to the second. Gender has no sub screen. Class sub screen will display details about your class, your subclass and possible future classes you can take. Stats sub screen will display the regeneration speed of you health and mana. Level sub screen will allow you to see the stats you will gain when you level up and the required exp for the next level. The titles sub screen will allow you to see the reason you have that title and the advantages and disadvantages for having it. Base skills sub screen will show you the different type of skills you have and what those skill will do. Possible evolution paths sub screen will allow you to see the advantages and disadvantages of each evolution and what is required to obtain that evolution. Was this useful to you creator?
"Yes, thank you system. Could you display my stats for me system."
Name: Creona Race: Unnamed Age:N/A
Gender:Male Class: None Level: 0
Stats: Strength: N/A Dexterity:N/A
Endurance: N/A Health: Infinite Mana: Infinite
Titles Creator, The one who exists yet is not possible, Administrator, The admirer, Doting parent.
Possible evolution paths N/A
Well, I should probably name my race. I''m a being made of energy and can become anything I want. I''m going to name this race the Transcended. My class choices are... actually very limited "Thank you System. Can you please update my race name and show me the classes I can choose."
Race: Transended
Class choices: Creator, Administrator, The domain of life and death
"Well, I don''t know what I was expecting but I didn''t expect there to be so little."
The classes that have a lower rank than these can''t contain your power and weren''t displayed.
"That makes sense I guess. System can you show me the description for these classes please"
Creator: you have the ability to create anything. This is not limited to the physical world, you can create the outcome of circumstances, for example if someone was to decided to attack you using the highest rank magic you could choose whether that magic will succeed and if it will damage you or the environment.The story has been taken without consent; if you see it on Amazon, report the incident. Administrator: you have access to the system and can manipulate the stats of any being connected to the system, this can also be used to remove someone from the system, along with any power they gained from it. The domain of life and death: the area you walk in becomes part of your domain, inside of your domain you can control what happens to living beings and non-living beings. This means that you can influence there growth and choose to kill them, anyone under the influence of your domain can fight back against the control if they are of a similar strength to the domain owner. Because everything in your domain is completely under your control it means you can set laws in your domain and see everything that happens.
"These classes are very powerful but the only one of interest to me is The walker of life and death. It will allow me to see the growth of the everything inside my domain and will let me see it however I wish to."
Creator, I should let you know that your titles, Doting parent and The admirer will enhance the abilities of this class and allow you to look through the eyes of the people that can be considered your children.
"Well, I guess it''s decided, i''m going to choose The domain of life and death as my class" Outside of the domain
Establishing domain. 1%, 2%.....
*7 million years later*
99%, 100%. Domain successfully established, current domain, ''The outside'', ''Fantasy universe'', ''Earth''. Only earth is under the systems influence in ''The universe''. In order to expand your domain you will have to open the system to the rest of ''The universe''.
"That took a while, good thing I was outside of both if my universes. But seriously, how big is this place, the fantasy universe and earth took less that a minute to be under my domain"
''The outside'' is approximately xbsjaj1727/"& times larger than the universes. Warning error in calculation, searching for cause, cause found, cause is that ''The outside'' is too large for the system to calculate. Sorry creator, I cannot calculate the size of this place.
"It''s fine system, it''s impressive that this entire area can even become part of my domain"
That is because the domain is formed from the domain owners energy. Your energy is limitless which means that the domain could expand as long as there is space it can expand to.A case of literary theft: this tale is not rightfully on Amazon; if you see it, report the violation.
"I guess that would make sense but wouldn''t that mean there wasn''t any more room for my domain to expand"
That is correct creator, calculating theories as to what is past the endld of your domain. Theory 1: Nothing, the very concept of nothing would cease to be, the concept of ceasing to be would be non-existant. Further processing of this theory would cause the system to malfunction and possibly end up shutting down. Theory processing stopping. Theory 2: Beyond your domain is a place where everything is created using the imagination. This theory could mean that you could continue to expand your domain as long as you imagine it being expanded, this theory could cause unknown harm to the system.
"A place where everything is created using the imagination. The possibility of endless growth. It would allow me to stop being bound to my conscience and allow me to imagine myself being able to have no limits on my imagination"
Creator, you should also remember that there is the possibility that.....
"Alright, lets go to the end of my domain."
Creator, I think you should listen to me.... Creator... Creator.... No don''t go past there, I think we should think about this rationally, Creator, stop quickly.... CREATO........
"Well, this is unexpected"
This is why I told you to stop Creator. The system wasn''t ready to accept an unlimited imagination, much less one of the creator.
*Creona looked at his creations and saw the limitless beauty he had created*
I has to disconnect the system from everybody because they couldn''t handle the stress put on there minds by your imagination.
"Oops, I didn''t think of that" *Apparently having a limitless imagination makes you a bit of an airhead thought the system while looking at the flowers floating around the Creators head* Update I will be continuing this at a later date but at the moment i''m busy with school stuff and other "important" things, such reading other things and playing games... yep very important. The next arc will be a fantasy one and after that will be the sci-fi one.The genuine version of this novel can be found on another site. Support the author by reading it there. I''m probably going to edit my first chapters because I realise that they are very uneven and a bit all over the place. Also their will be chapters from other characters perspectives every so often so look forward to that. So look forward to new chapters whenever I have anytime