《Re:Start》 Suggestions and Discussion Hey Guys Names Leekz and this is my first Fan-fiction ever. it was inspired by Re;Monster and other such Light novels. I hope you guys enjoy it, and please leave down any criticism that you think will help me to improve my story telling. Chapter 1 - Soul Inbound Before we began this tale I wanna ask you reader ''have you ever wish you could, you know restart over in life with a clean slate?.'' rather instead of just starting over, would you take the chance to be reborn, and live in a world filled with adventure and magical beings? after all I''m am currently in a situation that will end with me me being reincarnated in a foreign world with a stupid smile plastered on my face, day dreaming about all the chaotic adventures I''ll end up having. to be sure you understand whats going on let me tell you a little more about myself. For one thing my name is Derek I''m a 21 years old, I currently work at a local food mart as a cart attendant making extra change while I figure out what i truly want to do with my life. lastly I''m a gamer and a beloved fan of Japanese animation. To sum it up am just you topical ordinary young adult male with some hobby''s on the side. except I honestly might have a small case of being a Chuunibyou. admittedly I find my self day dreaming about a fantasy life I''ll never have, always telling myself my life has purpose and am destined for greatness. as a result my thinking like this often leaves me in very depressing situations when life doesn''t go the way I want it to go. yet I know that my thinking like this only ends up with me hurting myself cause I overly believe in the impossible happening. but I just don''t wanna admit that reality is really boring and repetitive like it really is. No magic, no super-beings, no other race besides humans, no nothing! hell the only thing I could possibly look forward to is advance technology, and that probably won''t amount to anything till am a old geezers. sadly only through other peoples artistic creations such as movies,comic books, and animations can I find my fill of worldly adventures. yet those things can olny be so entertaining after a while especially when you wanna do something meaningful yourself in life. only to find you have few options or choice in life, based on your expensively paid education that can take years to develop, and only to find out you don''t like your job in the long run. that in the fact that you waste most of your youth in a classroom not really experiencing the joys and wonders of the world. in short life to me on this rock ''Sucked'', still that was about to change for me and in a big way it seemed. first of all before anything happened, it was a Thursday night and I was catching up on reading one of my favorite Japanese Light novels about a guy that gets reincarnated into a whole new world, learning amazing skills and OP ability''s. He even was reborn as a different species. although ironically when he explained his previous life it also sound like he lived a somewhat interesting life. After I finished reading up on a few newly translated fan releases of my favorite series. I decided It was time for bed and got myself a nice cold bottle of water to quench my thirst. once I finished my drink I headed off to bed and made myself comfortable. while falling asleep I a somewhat prayer or better yet wish that something interesting or life changing in my life would happen. the wish wasn''t tailored to anyone, it was just a random though I let loose as a wish. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ''...ake up...'' I guess I was half asleep at the time, when I started to hear a voice supposedly telling me to wake up. ''it''s of the up most importance that you awaken right this instant Mr.Oniell!'' ''w-whoa...Whats g-going on?'' I awoke in a panicked surprise at someone calling my name, with a voice I wasn''t familiar with. besides I knew for sure I went to bed and that I leave alone in my 1 room apartment. ''Calm down mister O''Neill no harm shall befall you'' after calming down a bit, i noticed that I wasn''t in my room anymore. In fact I was floating in what seemed to be a somewhat bright colored void space. w-who are you...and where am I? before me came a lightly glowing figure that I think had the shape of a human male. if I had to describe it he reminded me of silver surf but glowing with a slightly bright shy blue color aura. ''The names Is Raza.'' ''Raza?...'' even thought a strange glowing being was before my eyes, I wasn''t scared or panicking anymore. its like my whole being was telling me there was nothing to fear from this being before me. ''ok Raza why am I here in this strange place?'' ''to fulfill your wish of course.'' ''m-my wish...what are you talking about?'' The narrative has been stolen; if detected on Amazon, report the infringement.''your wish for a chance at a second life that is.'' I was shocked at the answer I was given. i mean of course I''d be happy at such an out come but really this strange event came out of now where of course I''d end up confused. ''rriight...ok...I understand, let say I believe everything your saying, why bring me here? why even bother fulfilling my wish anyways, I mean I still don''t really know who you are!'' ''ahem...well then lets get down to business and let me explain the finer detailed of our current situation, well more like yours that is. my name is of course Raza, I am a being known as a Lesser god. furthermore you currently reside in the place know as the astral realm were all being come before being reborn into the world of the living.'' ''W-Wait!... am dead... but how did that happen, am a healthy 21 year old? did someone kill me in my sleep or something? ''N-no no no mister O''Neill I simply forced your astral body the soul out of your physical body. currently your still alive in your world do you see the cord attached to you stomach? that''s your astral cord that links your soul to your body. I looked down and saw a transparent cord attach to my body that was also seemly transparent and slightly glowing a bluish aura. ''I see...'' ''Lastly why am I doing this you ask, well that easy cause I feel like that''s why.'' I was given the most boring answer to my situation, yet it was well still acceptable....I think. ''but if you want a more appropriate answer its because I''d like some entertainment, its not like everyday I choose to mingle with a mortals problem.'' so your saying your going to help me to reincarnate? ''yes if that is still your wish that is, is it?'' ''o-of course I''d want to who wouldn''t!?'' I said excitingly. ''so...how do we go about doing this and what happens to my current body?'' ''first off when we begin your reincarnation process your astral body and astral cord will be severed from your physical body, those meaning your physical body will began to die as a result.'' ''worry not because since your already in you astral body you''ll feel no pain, its like dieing in your sleep.'' although I was happy to be afford the chance to reincarnation into a more interest world. A part of me was said that I was abandoning my previous body, it felt like leaving a part of myself behind. but of course i wasn''t going to give up this chance to achieve my dream. ''now..uh...Mr.O''Neill... ''please stop using my last name, Derek is just fine thank you...'' ''well Derek tell me what kind of world are you interested in reincarnating into?'' ''hmm...well...are there ones with monsters, magic, and multiple different races...like elf''s, Dwarf, beast-men?'' ''why yes...yes there are.'' ''well I''d like to be reincarnated in one of those types of world if its alright that is.'' ''sure that''s no problem at all...anything else?'' ''N-no not at all am grateful for just being given the chance to be reborn...although do I get to keep my memory''s?'' ''but of course lad, but it will cost you some of you soul points.'' ''Soul Points?'' ''why yes soul point or Sp for short. think of them like add benefits that will give you an advantage in your next life.'' Yet again I was shocked in awe at the explanation, he basically said I''d earn some OP ability''s to go with my next chance at life. ''Lets see...well..well...looks like you have accumulated about 236 SP.'' now choose how you will distribute them please...'' *Ding https://docs.google.com/document/d/1j5aeCtEuam49t7pRa0aODQhNhPdn-tS7BR8CuzP0tME/edit all of a sudden a window popped up in front of me, with a crap load of options to pick from. once again I had the biggest smile plastered all over my face. ''well let see what we got here'' Next Chapter Authors - I''m restarting this story since my second chapter that was upload got kinda corrupted when the site updated. glad I only had 2 chapter out at the time or this would have been even worst for me. P.S. if anyone is up to it I''ll like some help making a custom Stat table for my story. :)
Sorry to my current followers I''ll try and redo chapter 2 as fast as I can and upload chapter 3 once I make a custom stat table. Chapter 2 - Soul Transfer Author- Warning story is still Original but has some Small Crossovers from other series that will a big part of the story lol. '''' speaking {} Thoughts ** sound effects after looking at the pop-ups information I couldn''t help but get more excited, but I did feel like some of the options were stupid. ''''Really now why the heck would I pick reverse harem or Decreased exp skill gain!?.'''' Sure as an anime fan over time I have come to like the token trap characters in harems nowadays, but I wouldn''t wanna be surround by them. ''''Sorry mister O''Neill but the system options are randomized so each chance a person get to experiencing this process would have a different experience each time they under go it.'''' ''''hmm...makes since...I guess.'''' {Guess this proves reincarnation is a thing, although the name Raza...never heard of a god with that name. well he did say he was a lesser gold.} ''''Hey Raza I''ve been wondering what are Soul point really and how come I have 236 to use?'''' ''''ah, good question Mister O''Neill. Soul point or better known as SP, it''s negative energy saved up over a persons life cycle.'''' ''''Negative energy?'''' ''''Yes, as you may have noticed while living, there are very talented people that seem to just be of a different class than normal people right?'''' ''''y-yeah...'''' ''''that is because before they were born into your world they had a higher accumulated amount of SP saved up, that gave them each a special gift/talent.'''' ''''But...isn''t that kinda an unfair system?'''' I couldn''t help but say that out loud, I mean I pretty much just found out why my life sucked up till now... ''''well then mister O''Neill tell me, what would the world be like if everyone was a talented and gifted person?'''' ''''E--h...'' ''''Disaster! Disaster is what would happen. if there were talent/gifted people all over the world, people would began to fight for power and their beliefs way more than they already do, trust me.'''' ''''......'''' even though I kinda agreed with what he said it still stung a bit to know that my life was never fair from the start. although I guess the situation am currently in makes up for it... in a way. ''''Now where was I... oh yea, Normal people like you save up Negative energy from the misfortune and stress accumulated over you life time, so when you reincarnate you can be the next person born with special gifts. although to access this opportunity you''d had to have lived a good life. Me:''''.......'''' ''''Would you like to know anything else Mister O''Neill?'''' ''''no thanks, am good for now...'''' ''''Just ask if anything confuses you.'''' ''''Well, for now I just wanna get this over with a fast as I can...'''' {let''s see I have 236 points to use, so I can pretty much get anything on this list...} I click the +50 mana stat to see what would happen, I lost 10 Soul points. *Ding*
Selected Reincarnation options: +50 Mana
A pop-up window came to view saying that I selected +50 Mana. {Wish I could see my current stats, that would be interesting.} Raza: ".......'''' I couldn''t help but feel that an intense stare was coming from Raza, which made me shiver a bit. funny thing is you couldn''t see any real facial features on him since he was just a glowing spirit....thing... ''''D-Did I do s-something wrong,cause I feel like your giving me quit the stare there Raza...'''' ''''.....no, It''s just that I never seen that option before...So I was a bit...interested in what it is to say the least'''' ''''W-what option!?'''' Raza than pointed to the Legendary Class option. {huh} ''''what it''s just a legendary class isn''t that like normal in these kind of setups?'''' ''''....No, We normally only give stat boost and basic skills as a reincarnation gift.'''' ''''R-really!?'''' ''''yea, there is normally a add class option. although you''d have to obtain you own class in your next life, which are pretty easy to obtain. but strangely you weren''t that option which is weird.'''' ''''must be a really rare than, I feel kind lucky.'''' Raza:''''......'''' ''''well I worry about it later lets get this over with already.'''' I sad with impatience looking over the options once more and adding up the cost I finally choose what I wanted to go with.
Selected Reincarnation Options: +50 Mana +50 HP +4 Agility +4 Wisdom +4 Intelligence Light Affinity 5% Dark Affinity 5% Electric Affinity 5% x2 Increased EXP Gain x2 Increased Skill EXP Gain Void Magic Summoning Magic Improved Senses
A total of 124 use SP, I have 112 left. Everything else I can pretty much learn later, although that Luck of God looks interesting but I don''t wanna Really want to be overly OP, wouldn''t be fun if I couldn''t put myself to the test. Plus I also had pride as a man if I wanted a Harem I''ll make one with my own social ability''s and skills. You could be reading stolen content. Head to Royal Road for the genuine story. ''''now Lets see what Race I should go with...'''' I didn''t really want to be human again, but they do have the most stable and balanced power in the world based off of story''s and games. ''''Hey Raza is it possible to be a mixed breed or Hybrid?'''' ''''why yes, what do you want to be? I can help modify what race you want.'''' ''''interesting, I want to be mostly human but part angel and demon please.'''' ''''as you wish, a moment please.'''' after Raza made a few movements and gestures, which I believe was him doing some modifications with the screen, I Received a message. *Ding*
You have select the sub-species Double cross hybrid. The races are Human, Angel and Demon is this correct?
I pressed yes. *Ding*
Please Select Facial Features.
''''Cool I can even choose how I wanna look!'''' I selected Amber colored eyes, Silver-blond hair, and light-brown skin. *Ding*
Facial Features Selected...Processing...Processing Complete.
Update! Since your only a quarter part Angel and Demon you only spent 6 SP Total. Warning: Your Natural Angelic and Demonic attributes will be greatly lowered since you only have 1/4 of their abilitys.
{sweet 6 extra SP, a total of 106 SP Left.} I didn''t really care much about the power decrease I will still be considered strong compared to my fellow humans. ''''Now lets finish this and get going!'''' With my remaining 106 points I began to Select my final options. *Ding*
You Have Selected the Legendary Class. Warning: The Class will be randomized and may or may not come with benefits or restrictions. Do you still wish to proceed?
I pressed yes of course. *Ding*
The Legendary Class X-Blade Master was Gained Class Skills obtained: X-Blade Mastery X-Blade Magic Mastery
''''what the heck is a X-blade Master!?'''' Raza: ''''.....'''' I was confused at the class I got, mostly because I had no idea what the heck it is, but it must be a good one right? even Raza looked confused. *Ding*
Selected Reincarnation Options: +50 Mana +50 HP +4 STR +4 VIT +8 Agility +4 Wisdom +4 Intelligence Light Affinity 5% Dark Affinity 5% Electric Affinity 5% x2 Increased EXP Gain x2 Increased Skill EXP Gain Void Magic Summoning Magic Improved Senses Legendary Class
Finally I was done with the my reincarnation process, I really couldn''t wait for my next life to start. ''''well mister O''Neill, seems like we''re done here, are you ready to depart?'''' ''''Yup, am totally ready!'''' ''''Then off you go.'''' ''''Bye Raza...and Thanks'''' Raza: ~nodes and Waves~ with that I felt a slight shock as my Astral Cord popped off and vanished. the next moment later I was swallowed by complete darkness and lost consciousness. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It was dark but warm when I next regain my conscious somewhat. I couldn''t open my eyes and my body was so heavy that I couldn''t move any of my limbs. but the funny thing is that I wasn''t one bit scared of my situation, after all I had memory of my past life, although some stuff were beginning to be a bit fogy. I knew I reincarnated so am most likely still in my new mom''s womb. {crap I totally forgot I''ll have to grow up again} I couldn''t help but laugh in my head at the situation. ???:''''P....h.......ho...y.....sh'''' {w-what!?} I started to hear shouting and I think I was beginning to move. ???:'''' Push!!!"" {t-this is!} To Be Continued