《Forcer By maskdragon》 prologue Hi I¡¯m Cygnus. Here I am in front of my capsule. I''ve held a semi-normal life. A bit of krav maga, a bit of reading, and a bit of school (still in high school) probably the lone thing I think that stands out about me is I pretty good at games. So when the new game star wars vrmmorpg game Obliterate came out I screamed like a little girl. I and my friends got the first batch of the game. We always compete in the games we play choosing opposing factions. I usually pick an evil type character. Why you say? Because it¡¯s so fun. unfortunately we agreed(I was forced by a unanimous vote among my peers) that I would be one of the good guys this time because apparently I "go too far" or "become too broken" and my favorite "if you become sith you''ll break the universe¡±. So yeah I¡¯m going to try to become Jedi. Besides it¡¯s not like I enjoyed all the things I did in game. I¡¯m not a monster. In the end it¡¯s just a game. -Connect to forcer? "Yes" [a scan on your brain and eyes has identified you as a new user. Would you like to create a character? "YES" -Select the name of your incarnation "Kor" -Select your gender "Male" -Forcer has 1398 playable species. You may select your race from the primary sixty I went through the species like a madman. Did you know you can be a planet? The most disturbing of which is me as a Hutt. My choice was already made from the beginning as I always choose this option if available. "Human" -If you wish to become force sensitive you must resolve a few questions first. May I proceed? "Yes" -Do you have some knowledge of star wars lore? "Yes" -What''s your favorite thing about the star wars universe "the force" -what do you want out of this game "to be a jedi" -All force sensitive users will start at a younger age their non-force sensitive counterparts. Where do you want to start? "Coruscant" -Your skills will progress as you play the game. Everything went pitch black and then blinding white. Then my eyes opened and I looked about. It seems like its morning. I look at my body and I seem three or four. I get up and walk around. After getting a better look around this place, I realize it¡¯s huge. Going near to what¡¯s probably the kitchen a skinny man looks at me and says "Go get dressed signals you''ve got your first day of school today" I do as the man says, but man I got some weird clothes. When I¡¯m done changing I walk outside with what seems to be my dad. He seems to be important to some cause. A huge house and high altitude on Coruscant means something. I suspect he might be a senator. Scratch that I''m sure of it. Someone just called him Senator Caleb Laval. So I guess that makes me Kor Laval... I like it .I also take a long moment to stop and look at the planet I¡¯m on. Seeing Coruscant in virtual reality is amazing. The cruzers the buildings and the feeling you don¡¯t know how far down you''ll fall if you jump. Me and my dad get on a high class cruzer and fly to another funny looking building. When I get to the entrance he stops. "Son we are important people. Don¡¯t do anything stupid okay" And just like that I learned I hated the man. Who talks like that to a whatever my age is? I wanted to say something so snarky it would twist his face. But I couldn''t. Physically couldn¡¯t do it .I tried again but still nothing. That¡¯s weird right? In the end I just ignored the guy and went inside the funny looking building... I get why they made us this young now. This school is some kind tutorial about basic star wars knowledge. Like the common republic language is basic and what is the republic and how it works .I can tell who''s a player in my class by how many people aren''t picking their nose and all their other alien orifices .one of the kids was sniffing his finger .I waved and tried to say hi to the players so that maybe we could share information. But again nothing came out. I gave up faster than last time and just paid attention to class. This novel''s true home is a different platform. Support the author by finding it there. During lunch the finger sniffer was bullying a girl .I didn¡¯t like it so I intervened. Your probably asking why I care. Why me the bandit god of Calypso or the demon king of Karl would care. And as I said it will be different this time. Also I¡¯m not a monster. So since I can¡¯t speak I tap the filthy finger sniffer on the shoulder with a napkin (I won¡¯t¡¯ fucking touch him until I know what he¡¯s been sniffing) and try to tell him he''s being a massive douche nozzle through various bodily maneuvers. He and everyone around me got the message. He then punched me in the face. I didn¡¯t see it coming because I was busy twerking. Yes I know I took it far. Yes I know I said I would change. Shut up. Fuck you. Anyways he punched me. HE PUNCHED ME. WITH HIS FINGER SNIFFING FIST. First I punched him in the chin and knocked him out as quickly as possible because I saw what was coming next. Then I threw up making sure all of it touches some part of his body. you mess with the dragon you get the breath.....ignore that joke .continuing the game I was walked to the nurses office where I thoroughly scrubbed my cheek till it looked more damaged than it actually is. The nurse took some tests with weird funny looking tools and left for a bit leaving my file. The game obviously wants me to read it so I do. It seems I am temporarily mute .I can speak but won¡¯t .it says I¡¯ll speak when I¡¯m ready .I kinda expected this. I¡¯ll just wait it out. What an interesting system. The girl came back to take my blood which appeared mandatory as I just threw up. I tried to run away as I thought she had a needle. But it wasn¡¯t so bad once I was strapped down to the sick bed. As she unstrapped me from the sick bed she looked at me with a look I remembered from other virtual reality games. It¡¯s like something between fear and reverence. I smiled my most creepy smile by reflex. She then speed walked outside. I heard incoherent yelling then a long silence then more yelling. Did I have some kind of lycan disease again? The nurse returned and said she had called my parents. They came and took me home. When I come in I was told to go room for a bit. I could still hear the yelling from my room. Since I¡¯m curious as what¡¯s happening to me I try to get closer and listen in "honey we have to give him to the Jedi if we don¡¯t its like we''re saying we don¡¯t trust the system" "fuck no" "Honey, there¡¯s nothing we can do about it, he''s special the Jedi really want him. And the Jedi don''t want anything" The female had tears in her eyes. "You can resign from your job. That way we can keep our family together" "Honey joining the Jedi is an honor and a privilege, not just anyone gets to become one" "Oh!! What about this no attachments bullshit. I want to be able see my son everyday and watch him grow up." She said while weeping "Hon he''ll be fighting the good fight; our fight. And isn''t that why we''re here. And he has the potential to do more good than us. He can also quit at any time. More importantly our political standing will skyrocket. Who else has among the senators have a Jedi son? None that¡¯s who ha-ha. Also he''ll probably be safer their as a Padawan their then with us anyway. Then the woman who''s probably my mom finally notices me and says "Why don''t you play outside for a bit Kor" I did so as they were my (fake) parents... I''m gonna hurt Caleb. I can¡¯t hurt him now as this was my goal and doing so now would be counter-productive. I promised myself the next time I see him that I was going to hurt him. The next day a Jedi took me to the temple.Here I go again ------------------------------------------------------------------- :bouaaaaah: the mc will spend a lot of time being a padawan.if you see anything wrong with my lore, grammer, or spelling please tell me. i will correct it. Here We Go Again Here We Go Again When we were getting near the temple the Jedi, Dex Lomax, started getting talkative. He started talking about life at the Jedi temple and How you¡¯ll spend most your days learning and training. How you will be doing good for the universe once you become a Jedi knight or go into the core. How you¡¯ll get a training saber and practice with people your age. It seemed nice. When we finally there was another Jedi waiting. She motioned me to follow and gave me some new clothes. She said to wear them. As I equipped them I wondered what my stats were like. So I touched the menu and my stats We came across a group of kids in a class room. ¡°This will be the group you¡¯re going to be with throughout your Padawan training. We caught you just in time as this school started yesterday.¡± she directed the next instruction to the group ¡°Everyone this is youngling kor. He doesn¡¯t communicate well so be courteous.¡± She then motioned me to go sit in a seat. She went up to a kind of whit board. And she wrote the Jedi code on the board. ¡°We should start with the living force. The living force is a connection to the universe. Some view the light side of the the force as honesty, compassion, mercy, self-sacrifice, and other positive emotions. And some believe it is best to feel nothing at all. A few things that are unanimously frowned upon are attachment and negative emotions. They always lead to the dark side.¡± She then writes on a type of white board.
There is no emotion, there is peace. There is no ignorance, there is knowledge. There is no passion, there is serenity. There is no death, there is the Force.
¡°This is the Jedi code. This is the words you must live by in order to become a Jedi. Only through constant repetition and worldly experience will you truly understand the code.¡±
You have earned the title "padawan" -this allows you to understand the inner workings of the force on the side of light
You have learned of the Jedi code Understanding ¨C 0%
You have gained Force Affinity -you can now use the living force -use of the living force will increase your affinity -you can now can use the light side of the force -you can now use the dark side of the force -use of either light or dark side of the force heightens affinity to the force -power in force depends on your midi-chlorian count -control over the force increases with force control FA 5% Midi-chlorian count - 19,000
You have gained Light ffinity One of two paths of the living force -use of the light side of the force raises your affinity to light -use of the dark side of the force lowers your affinity to light -progress will be stunted if dark affinity is higher LA 5%
You have gained Force Control Affinity -with practice you can use less power for more arduous tasks FCA-0%
You have gained Force Power Affinity -entirely dependent on midi-chlorian count -midi-chlorian count may be increased through events and rewards -power you can utilize easier will be easier depend on practice *The midi-chlorian base count is based on luck of the draw Midi-chlorian count ¨C 19,000 FPA 0%
¡­..Awesome ¡°The first line targets negative emotions. If we are to use the force with emotion it will lead corruption and eventually a fall to the dark side.¡± The second line is targets knowledge or the absence of knowledge. Following the path of the Jedi means you are following the path of knowledge. You fall to the dark side if you ignore or are unwilling to learn this knowledge.¡± The third line targets attachment. Attachment has no place among the light side of the force. This can be fuel for the dark side. You must always be as impassive or as calm as possible .¡± "And lastly the conclusion of the code targets death. a Jedi doesn¡¯t need to fear death as we do not die we become one with the force retaining our sense of self and among the few coming back chosen to coming back to life.¡± ¡°The dark side is almost impossible to break away from once exploited. Do you understand?¡± The group answered at once ¡°Yes master Leeta¡±
Jedi Code Comprehension 30%
She talked about many things but it ended abruptly as a noise ended the class. The next class was force meditation. We moved outside as I saw the new teacher. He¡¯s small. If you encounter this narrative on Amazon, note that it''s taken without the author''s consent. Report it.¡°Hello younglings.¡± ¡°Hello master Draze¡± We sat on pillows on the floor with a small steel ball in front of each one us ¡°Today we will be trying to access to connect to the force. Close your eyes and try your best to think and feel as little as possible.¡± I did so and felt nothing at first. But then a white fire came into me and occupied all of my body. ¡°Great job everyone those of you did not get it this time keep practicing. Those of you who were successful did try moving it places all over your body.¡± I then tried to move the majority of it to my eyes and brain
You have gained the skill Force precognition Lv.0 (Passive) -able to feel the forces warning imminent danger to oneself - able to see the warnings through force lines -able to see distant parts of the future very rarely
You have gained the skill Force Lines Lv.0 (Passive) Rank A -able to see and feel strikes and blaster fire directions in the form of lines -able to tell different things through size and color -in the beginning levels you¡¯re only able to tell where it will land - in the beginning levels you¡¯re only able to predict 1 sec ahead
FPA raised to 7% FA raised to 9% FCA raised to 1%
Holy **** POV of Draze I was tasked by the council yesterday to test the potential of a boy who will come in today as we don¡¯t won¡¯t make him feel special they asked me to teach them how to access the force early. I tried to tell them it would take longer until they are ready but they were adamant. I smile as I see the younglings come through. And say hello. ¡°Hello younglings.¡± ¡°Hello Master Draze.¡± I instruct them on how to tap into the force. And as expected nothing hap¡­¡­he just did it. It was no small amount either. It was almost a tremor. 3 people other than him did it too. Let¡¯s go ahead and give them the next step. ¡°Great job everyone those of you did not get it this time keep practicing. Those of you who did, try moving it places all over your body.¡± Ridiculous. He did it. And the amount of force actually increased. ¡°Something urgent has come up and I have to leave. I hope you all will stay here and practice until your next class.¡± The council needs to hear this immediately POV Kor after cheering to myself a bit and the Jedi master leaving for something important i decide to try to move the force to my arms and feet now
You have gained the skill Force Enhancement (Passive) Rank A -you can enhance your limbs power and control with the force
FPA raised to 13% FA raised to 10% FCA raised to 1.24%
You have gained the title ¡°The Monster¡± Through incredibly quick progression in learning fundamental skills -you gain the skill battle precognition -you gain the skill force bellow -you unsettle your peers -unknown -unknown
You have gained the skill Force bellow. Rank A -Force bellow is a power in which the user would amplify their voice using the force. used by the insane and as a last resort. -adds a status to the victim. -confusion stuns the enemy for 5 seconds. -fear drastically decreases attack power. fear dampening effects are useless -courage drastically increases attack power. - shakes the foundations of starships
damn i could''ve used this
The skill battle precognition replaces Force Lines
Battle Precognition Rank SSS All the greatest Jedi and sith have had this skill -You see and feel the apparition of your enemies movement up to 3 seconds ahead of the corporeal -you can sense when a battle is near -unknown -unknown
Oh my goodness. The saber instruction class is different from the force classes. i look forward to them :sillyp1:. ----------------------------------------------------- i won''t be able to write another chapter for at least a month as I am traveling in 3 days and i didn''t start preparing :cries: but I WILL continue this after that. and if you see anything wrong with my lore, grammar, or spelling please tell me. i will correct it. i kinda rushed this so there might be a few theyre so dead I couldn''t focus school at all as today is when we do our Velocities. when i log in and find that they started without me. So I quickly run over to the training area. I get admonished for being late by battle master dax and was asked to pick a training saber and pair up with a fellow Padawan named Rane Parsa .he was 11 or 12.plus he was a Chiss so it was doubly unfair he was practically a grown man. We were doing sequences when he decides he wants to show off against the little guy. We were supposed to be doing form I so we weren¡¯t really supposed to hurt each other. He tried to hit first I could see it coming and hit his hand. he corrected his form so I wouldn¡¯t have access to his limbs. He tried swinging again I interfere with the pathway easily deflecting. The timing a bit confusing at first but this isn¡¯t my first rodeo. He is getting agitated. He aims a huge one at my neck . pretty ballsy right? I use force enhancement. And jump over him. While I was upside down I hit his neck. We continued like this for a while . I''m happy to say he didn''t get one single hit on me. After about 5 minutes of not so much as touching me the instructor tells me to stop and I notice then everyone one was watching us. I realized I humiliated him in front of the group he''s basically going to grow up with and felt guilty needed to exercise more caution with my power around other people.
Jedi Code Understanding 40%
An unexpected bonus. we were watching some masters demonstrate. and then another gem came.
you have just grasped the form I: Shii Cho -the first form of the light saber arts or determination form Is used as a base point for all beginning jedi. Understanding 30% Application 4%
Oh the sweet nectar of rewards. I love this game. I wonder how my friends are doing. ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ Hi my name is Lucian. I am training in korriban to become a sith apprentice in forcer. And I am a friend of Cygnus(kor). Cygnus, I, and a few others grew up together. We all decided for the sake of beating Cygnus in this game we would plan it together. First we all agree he should be something that has major restrictions. A place that you can¡¯t get what you want through violence would be perfect. Next we needed to chose a profession he would aim for. Something that requires thinking and planning and not brute force.and seriously I cannot stress this enough a place with less violence would be amazing as he thrives in places of violence. If you encounter this tale on Amazon, note that it''s taken without the author''s consent. Report it.We all unanimously agreed that Jedi was the only choice but there was some problems. If he so much as opened his mouth he would be kicked out in a heartbeat. We didn¡¯t expect him to stay long in the Jedi temple even without his voice. Our real objective was a massive head start. We tried everything to get him to speak enough that you didn¡¯t want to strangle him. Watching British shows with him. Watching him watching British shows. watching him giving up on watching British shows. None of it worked. That¡¯s when Caleb (another friend of ours) had a great Idea. Why don¡¯t we call Lucas entertainment? We called them and I pulled out the most heartfelt story of how my friend was this amazing guy in all of these games. And how he would love to be a Jedi and even wants to place a restriction on himself. I emphasized extremely on it being his voice. You¡¯re probably wondering why at the last moment we didn¡¯t change it to a more crippling handicap. This was because he was blind in calypso and he became a pirate king that pillaged 100¡¯s of worlds. And don¡¯t tell him but I¡¯m the one who had him blinded in calypso. Paid more than my planet cost for the recipe. He was a mess for maybe 3 months and then boom my world was invaded. And if he was in too much trouble he would just start character creation over. it wouldn¡¯t of worked. No we needed it to be not too big and not too little. Our only objective is time. Besides No matter what you throw at the guy he always comes out on top. Anyways the Lucas entertainment guy bought it after doing a quick Google search. HA he actually bought it. But he warned me speech impairment can be healed through experiences and usually isn¡¯t permanent. That¡¯s fine all we want is to be on uneven ground with Cygnus... He¡¯s going to kill us if he finds out. ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ ------ It was lunch time in the Jedi temple. I was eating. when I see a gm mail I missed. ¡°dear kor, We are happy you chose to give yourself such a handicap. Your friends brought such a compelling arguments as to why you don''t need speech yet there was no way we could say no. amazingly your thriving. Just wanted to tell you were watching and your one of our favorites.¡± Oh they¡¯re so dead. [th_0fire.gif]. this is shorter than the others cause it''s late and I''m tired. longer ones will come in the future. if you see anything wrong i will correct it... late tomorrow. sorry i didn''t updated sooner. i was quite busy. Lava and Ice It¡¯s finally the weekend. I spent switching between working on my Shii Cho form and retaliatory beatings on my friends this week. When I logged in I saw a curious window.
you have understanding of the Jedi code has increased 50%. You now have to choose a path to follow.
age has increased. You are now 10 years old
Jedi guardian- Jedi guardians defended the upholder of law and defended the weak. Prime defenders of the order. The shield and sword of the galactic republic - All combat skills rise 50% faster - Force related skills rise 30% faster - Your diplomatic skills raise depending on the skill demonstrated. - You will see the most combat.
Jedi consular - Jedi consular are the most diplomatic part in the service of the Jedi. They if possible choose tactful solutions rather than lightsabers. they are very proficient in the ways of the force. The armor of the galactic republic. -All force skills rise 50% faster -All diplomatic skills rise 25% faster -All combat skills rise 15% faster -You will see the least combat. Resorting to combat when not needed lowers diplomatic skills.
Jedi sentinel- Jedi sentinel¡¯s are the most versatile group of the jedi knights . able to use a massive assortment of skills such from bomb defusing to lock-picking. They aim to be proficient in everything. -All force related skills rise 15% faster -All combat related skills rise 15% faster -All diplomatic skills rise 15% faster -All star pilot related skills rise 15% faster -All engineering skills rise 15% faster -All science related skills rise 15% -All improvisational skills rise 30% faster
your choice will affect the aspects of the world you will see. You cannot choose again.
Crap I wasn¡¯t expecting this. So it¡¯s basically between a warrior, a politician, and a spy. I¡¯ve always been a warrior. Always. Besides all the greats were guardians. And from what I can tell you can learn other skills the progression is just slower. so I tap on guardian.
you have just earned and equipped the title ¡°Path of the Jedi¡± -All combat related skills rise 50% faster -All force related skills rise 30% faster - You are slightly attracted to conflict - You can have no other title¡¯s equipped while still on the path.
you have learned ¡°Battle Meditation¡±. A skill unique to Jedi guardians -Rank AA -in the form of the force you can increase morale, and stamina, and overall power of the your allies.
Sigh. I¡¯m going to be so op. I was walking to my Jedi code understanding classes. When there was announcement that said class was cancelled. As there was a rebel attack on the senate most available. Of course they also told Padawans to stay inside the temple. Of course I was going to go see. Who do you think I am? I could feel the direction of the conflict because of my battle precognition .I through the vents and jump on a few lying cars like the movies. God that was fun. When I finally reach the galactic senate building 5 people were trying to escape armed with blasters. I jump in their way. ¡°get out of the way kid.¡± ¡°Just shoot him.¡± My battle precog kicked in and showed where he would fire. I easily dodged to my right and hit him in the nuts. The other guy shoots. I do the same thing except he isn¡¯t humanoid and it doesn¡¯t affect him at all. I also notice a glowing in his pocket. It looked dangerous. He then tries to punch me. I dodge and pick pocketed him. What can I say it¡¯s a bad habit. Don¡¯t blame me a few weeks ago I was a pirate. Anyway this went on for a while until a Jedi consular comes and takes care of them with ease. She didn¡¯t kill them though. I get admonished for leaving the temple but I also was recognized for stalling them. The guys were from black sun. they were trying to assassinate a senator trying to bring crystal regulations to the Coruscant . apparently it did not succeed. That¡¯s a good thing cause when I pick pocketed them.
you have just stolen a ¡°Lava Crystal¡± -properties are that of heat - can be used in a lightsaber - if in a lightsaber it can drip large quantities of lava that can be thrown by swinging the lightsaber -if in a lightsaber Seriating power is increased 3 fold. -if in a lightsaber heat will not affect owner of the cystal but the lava drip will
a crystal.a very good one too. one crystal down one to go. What a bountiful day. On day when I was getting up to go to the training area a Jedi told me to go to the center of council room. When I arrived there were other 3 other students a Padawan learner and Jedi master Letta. The students were around my age so I¡¯m guessing they had 50% understanding of the Jedi code. The Padawan learner was defiantly an npc. Master Leeta started talking. ¡°You all are here because we have deemed you ready to create your own lightsaber. All the kids were super excited. But the Padawan learner was confused. Leeta noticed and said something else ¡°And Padawan learner kiffiel this will be your first mission as a Jedi¡± His jaw dropped and he looked extremely happy. She looked at us kids again ¡°you 4 will be excused from class today. I recommend you do your research in the jedi archives. we wake at dawn in 3 days to depart for Ilum¡± She then left. I and the others quickly went to the archives. I went to the light sabers section. I know what I was looking for. Since I heard this game was coming out I have been doing continuous research on what lightsaber would be the best for me. And 3 weeks ago I found it. But as the technical details were not on the internet I have no way to build it. So I was searching for plans on how to make it. and then I found it. oh god this will be great. I wake up in the morning to go the launch pad near the entrance. The other kids came a few minutes later. And then we took off. When we were out of the atmosphere we went into hyperspace. In the ship there was this old driod explaining how to construct and repair our lightsabers.
¡°Lightsaber Construction¡± skill acquired. Stolen from Royal Road, this story should be reported if encountered on Amazon.-lets you use an assortment of equipment to build and further customize your lightsaber. -Constructing it with the force adds these effect¡¯s ¡¤ You will always know where it is ¡¤ You can activate it through the force
¡°Lightsaber Repair¡± skill acquired -Lets you repair damage done to your lightsaber -Depends entirely on prior knowledge
After that I got the parts I wanted from the ship. When I asked for what I wanted the droid looked proud although I wasn¡¯t paying attention at all. Unfortunately I was only able to take a very limited amount of cortosis. We were just arriving when we realized something was wrong. There was a skirmish going on near the planet. The sith and the Jedi. That¡¯s when our newly minted Jedi decided it wasn¡¯t safe so we headed back to the temple. On the way back was starring at space because of the other students talked only with each other. Then something unexpected happened
you have contracted hyper-rapture - Mental fatigue and dizziness happens when you stare into hyper space too long. it will fade in 1 hour.
Crap. While I was resting I overheard something from the other players. ¡°Dude back at Coruscant there is a Jedi master named zola who teaches you martial arts. I hear he doesn¡¯t even use a lightsaber. But he¡¯s really selective of his students. You have to pass a test.¡± ¡°What¡¯s the test?¡± ¡°He sort of stares at you. And then he decides.¡± After a while the dizziness goes away and then I see another message. When we go back to Coruscant we were extremely disappointed. Jedi kiffel apologized for the inconvenience. And we thought that was the end of it. But then master letta came and talked to us. ¡°Sorry students. Ilum has been compromised. But we will allow constructing of your lightsaber¡¯s in the top floor of the temple.¡± We all follow her excitedly. When we reach the top floor we enter a room that¡¯s full of crystals. ¡°you are allowed to take one crystal from these stores. But you can¡¯t just pick any one. You have to have a connection to it. if there¡¯s no connection you will not be able to use its higher most ability.¡± I had a connection to a few green crystals but I was searching for that special one. Then I found it. it was glowing really bright. It was also too cold to touch. I used the force to pick it up and examine it.
you have just acquired a ¡°permafrost crystal¡± - Has ice like properties - Can be used in a lightsaber - If used in a lightsaber when nearing solid objects it can create icing - - if used in a lightsaber machinery operates weirdly near you - If used in a lightsaber cold will not affect the owner of the crystal but the ice on objects can.
Perfect. This is soo perfect. I¡¯m grinning so widely it should hurt. For the next few days I meditate on my crystals so that I can use the force with them. I then start practicing with lightsaber construction with the force. it was very hard mostly because although my power is high in the force my control is very low. After a few days in game I finally got it down. And here is the result
you have just crafted a ¡°cross-guard lightsaber¡± with a ¡°lava crystal¡± -Lava can drip from blade -Severe heat is emitted from blade - Seriating power is increased 3 fold - Only people with the force can activate this blade - Heat does not affect the user -if any lightsabers enter the fork of the saber they will short out as cortisis is present - in order to control heat and lava output you must use a unique alter damage technique on your blade(search the archives)
You have just crafted a ¡°cross-guard lightsaber¡± with a ¡°permafrost crystal¡± -Can freeze objects near it -machinery doesn¡¯t operate well around when this blade is on. -cold does not affect user -if any lightsabers enter the fork of the saber they will short out as cortisis is present -in order to control the cold you can lower your energy output through the ion energy cell
With this I can get used to the combat more easily as the only things I¡¯m good at is swords and unarmed combat. I immediately turn them on. The lava cross-guard looked like moving lava it had also splurted every now and then. While the permafrost blade was a pale blue and the floor near it was starting to ice. I turn them off and head to the archives immediately. In order to use these around people I need to get them under control quick. When I arrive at the archives there seems to be a spectacle there. There was a player who was at 50% understanding of the Jedi code who was making light with his hand. He was speaking. ¡°This is called force blind. It is a move you learn when joining the sentinels.¡± There were a lot of people marveling at what he could do. What peons. I tried to enter the archives while ignoring them but the others were noticing my lightsabers. Then the guy doing the force blind stopped me. he looked at my lightsabers. Then he looked angry. He probably thought I was there to show him up. ¡°ooh I see you¡¯ve got lightsabers. Why don¡¯t you show us?¡± He acted pleasant but you could see he was angry at being shown up I smiled as he didn¡¯t know what was coming. I turned on my lava lightsaber and everybody felt the crippling heat. Now I didn¡¯t want to get in trouble so I quickly turned it off. Just so I could use the excuse that he asked to see it. I quickly went inside the archives quickly while sticking my tongue out as I do not want to get in trouble. I go to where I could find info on the alter damage technique. And apparently there were many variations. But the one I was looking for was a combination between alter damage and tapas. I memorized the text then started heading to the training center. ------------------------------------------------- i kinda rushed this one sorry for any issues. if you see any incorrect grammer or lore tell me and i will do my best to correct it. thanks for reading :sillyp1: The Monster When I got to the training center I asked the present Jedi through writing to there were a few people. He allowed it. They were training with their fists. I got distracted watching them for a while. They were good. One of them notices me watching them. He a player. ¡°you want to try?¡± I nod my head as confirmation. I¡¯m not going to brag. But am pretty amazing bare handed. Krav maga is the most effective for me. We enter a circle and we take our stances. He moves first really fast. Probably force enhancement. Of course because of battle precog I get out of the way in time. but just barely. He was really fast. Also I think my battle precog is acting up cause that definitely wasn¡¯t three seconds. ¡°wow that was a great dodge. None of these people can do that.¡± He immediately goes for a punch but I see it coming and this time I¡¯m prepared. I quickly bend back while doing a kick. It hits¡­ his hand. He blocked it. Damn it he¡¯s good. He¡¯s aiming for a trip with his leg and I can¡¯t dodge it is he is grasping my other leg. I try to kick him in the face. He grabs that one too. And then I see him throwing me using precog one second before it happens. It was a good throw too. Not too close as to have me counter attack. Not too far so he can get close and pummel in the ground. Before I hit the ground I use the force to make myself land right. Then a guy was yelling behind me. ¡°damn it you¡¯re not supposed to use the force in the circle.¡± He was defiantly an npc. I think in his forties. He had one arm which was weird cause in this world there were tons of mechanical prosthetics. All of this I noticed but the first thing I asked myself was when then the hell did he get behind me. The guy who I was fighting intervenes on my behalf. ¡° I don¡¯t think he knew the rules master Zola so it¡¯s okay.¡± ¡°is that so¡± he stared at me for a while. My battle precog went haywire it felt like I was going to get everywhere except my back I immediately tried to go backwards. But didn¡¯t think I¡¯d make it in time. I braced for the hit. But it didn¡¯t happen. ¡°so he has it to.¡± He seemed like he was thinking. i was getting up when he asked ¡°hey kid, do you want to learn from me.¡± I nodded so hard I looked like a bobble head. ¡° do you have any idea what you want to learn?¡± Of course I had ideas. I did my research. I write down gand martial arts. ¡° ooh hoo hoo what a leap. You sure you want to learn that?¡± I nodded very heavily again. ¡°alright then though I don¡¯t know if you¡¯ll be suited for it.¡± The guy I fought was being inquisitive and asked. ¡°what are gand martial arts.¡± ¡° it¡¯s definitely not for you. Stick to echani it¡¯s perfect for you¡± While they were talking I search for his lightsaber. He really doesn¡¯t have one. He notices and say¡¯s ¡° looking for the lightsaber every Jedi should have. You¡¯re not going to find it.¡± I was confused doesn¡¯t lightsaber=Jedi. He noticed my confused look and said. ¡° I am part of a very small group of the Jedi guardians called a Force Warrior. Typically we don¡¯t use lightsabers unless there is a door to open.¡± He said it with a sick smile. I wrote down the question ¡°how did you feint using the force¡± He looked surprised at my question. ¡°surprised you asked that so quickly. Took young Barak here took 1 week to ask that question and the answer is well it¡¯s because clinically I¡¯m insane.¡± I looked at him if he was joking. ¡°no I¡¯m not kidding. To me I was thinking about killing you with all the passion in my heart. Then decided never mind. The force acts strangely around insane people with high a midi-chlorian count. A condition only unique to me.¡± He paused for a second considering something ¡°anyway come here tomorrow at sunset for training. I¡¯ll tell your teachers.ohh silly me I forgot to ask you for your name¡± I wrote down kor and all of them left soon after. I was thinking as to why my battle precog was acting up then I saw looked at the skill again
Battle Precognition Rank SSS All the greatest Jedi and sith have had this skill -You see and feel the apparition of your enemies movement up to 3 seconds ahead of the corporeal -you can sense when a battle is near -for people stronger than you it is harder to see farther ahead -unknown
I wonder what the last unknown is. I completely forgot what I was here to do. I go into my private room. And ignite my lightsaber¡¯s and try to use the unique force technique. The problem is that I don¡¯t feel the difference. I go outside and reignite them. No one was sweating or freezing. Good job me. i was thinking that i should i was done for the day I go to my room as that¡¯s the only place I can log out. i lie on the bed and open the menu. Before I log out everything goes black. And one man and one woman were showing. I think it was a force vision. The guy speaks first. He had a sickly voice ¡°Darth wretches are all of the plans ready.¡± ¡®¡±yes darth anguish. We will commence our attack on Coruscant in three weeks.¡± ¡°any failure on your part will be met with unpleasant consequences.¡± ¡°In this I will be successful or die.¡± ¡°Your implying there was any other option my young apprentice.¡± She looked afraid then. ¡°good. Be afraid. Fear gives you power.¡± He coughs blood for a while for a while and then resumes. ¡°Do not fail. this will be my legacy.¡± After that the vision ended and I was back in my room. I go to the council room as quickly as I can. And bang on the door with both my hands very fast. And they open the door to see me. ¡°We are a bit busy now.¡± A familiar voice calls out ¡°Kor is that you¡± It was Zola. I nod. ¡°Let him in wolam.¡± He did so if a bit sour about it. He looked like a very bitter man ¡°What do you need kor.¡± I equiped my note pad and started writing down ¡°I had a dream about¡­ ¡± Wolam then intervened ¡°Ohm come on! Are you serious? Go tell your supervisor.¡± Then Zola coolly said ¡°Shut-up. Go ahead and continue kor.¡± ¡°a talk on the subject of an attack on Coruscant led by darth anguish and his apprentice darth wretches in three weeks. This dream felt incredibly real so I felt I had to tell you.¡± Both of them were silent for a while. ¡°You see what happens when you listen wolam.¡± He pressed a button on his seat that called up all the masters of the council available in the forms of holograms. Wolam told me to leave now. As I was leaving I head Zola saying. ¡°Ladies and gentleman we have a problem...
understanding of the Jedi code has increased to 55%
I went to my room and logged out to sleep. The next day I logged in and immediately after there was a knock on my room. I opened the door and found a Jedi in front of it. ¡°I have to take you to the council. Come with me.¡± I equip my Padawan robes and follow him. When we were at the door he opened it for me and stayed outside. 12 of the thirteen council members were present either in person or hologram. I was walking closer when Zola talked to me. ¡°Hi kor. Sorry for the inconvenience but my friends here don¡¯t believe you. Do you think you can identify him if you saw him?¡± I nodded ¡°Good.¡± A few holograms of sith lords were present. I saw the man I was looking for but he looked different. More healthy. I point at him. And everyone faces turned sour. Wolam even openly swore. He then told me ¡°You can leave now.¡± I equipped my notepad and started writing again. Wolam got annoyed watching me write. ¡°I said you can leave now¡± Zola gave him a huge glare saying ¡°Continue on kor.¡± I wrote down ¡°he looked very sick. He was coughing blood.¡± ¡°Damn wolam you are on fire lately¡± Wolam looked impassive. Zola continued speaking ¡°Sorry for wasting your time kor. Continue with your studies. And I expect to see you later tonight.¡± I continue on most of the day fine until lightsaber practice. I was hitting my partner very quickly when
Shii Cho form - Understanding 50% - Application 50%
When that happened another alert came
Lightsaber combat affinity - Allows you to move your lightsaber more efficiently through the practiced forms of ¡¤ Shii Cho form - Allows you to use other forms together with practiced forms for a more complete martial prowess - Does not affect lightsaber damage as it is already ridiculously high Love what you''re reading? Discover and support the author on the platform they originally published on.
After that practicing it became a lot easier for me. I waited at the training center for what was to be my first martial arts lesson. And surprisingly nobody came but Zola and Barak. ¡°Sorry we¡¯re so few. I asked everybody to stay as this knowledge is not for the people who aren¡¯t interested in the path.¡± I write down ¡°they weren¡¯t your disciples?¡± ¡°goodness no. those are the people the council has dropped me with to explain the effects of using lightsabers irresponsibly. Barak here is my only disciple. And you might be. Anyway let¡¯s get started. Barak go through your forms.¡± Barak does so curious as to what he would show me. ¡°Alright kor I want you to know I only know two moves. But they are incredible. I want you to try to emulate this.¡± He showed me he his hand. And then he tried to hit me but it passed through me. no wonder my battle precog didn¡¯t act. I try to get the feeling right and then.
you have acquired the force power ¡°Phase¡± - A Hidden Force Power - The only way to gain this skill is luck of the draw in the beginning of your life or through teaching. With teaching there is a 30% chance you would get the skill. - As you have the title ¡°Monster¡± you had a 90% chance to get the skill - Allows you to go through solid objects - You can now touch the incorporeal(this can be good and bad) - Takes an incredible amount of force power.
Holy fucking crap. I put my arm through the wall in front of us. then i wiggle it around happily. ¡°Great work. this is needed in the move in piercing touch.¡± He demonstrated by punching the wall with virtually no resistance then pulling it out. ¡°it¡¯s not the way the findsmen do it but effective nonetheless. What you have to do is phase through the body and then exert a force shield out of your limb immediately. ¡± I write down ¡°how do you make a force shield?¡± ¡°Well you have to imagine armor around the body but for thus move it needs to push out from your body. The reason why is unclear but using phase and force shield together creates a very destructive blow.¡± I imagine something pushing out of my body and then I fly up and land on my butt. ¡°Don¡¯t try everything at once.try only your arm for know.¡± I first phase through the wall than punch outwards from my arm using the force and BOOOMM! It was a massive crater in the wall.
you have just learned ¡°Piercing Touch¡± - A powerful punch originally made by findsman remade by Jedi grandmaster Zola using the force - Can destroy most metals and materials.
¡°You really should work on your control. Try some of faalo cadences. Any way moving on to the second technique Striking Mist this is a technique to employ when you don¡¯t want to be seen before attacking. And again I don¡¯t know if you¡¯ll have the skill to do it or not.¡± Barak was getting itchy ¡°Why can¡¯t I try these moves.¡± ¡°You can¡¯t know because you¡¯re too weak in force power. The punch alone would drain you completely¡± He stayed silent after that though he looked angry. ¡°Watch me closely and try to emulate what I am doing.¡± He started to disappear slowly until he was completely gone. The force around him was moving very smoothly like a force shield of many blankets. I try to emulate the feeling onto myself and
you have learned the force power ¡°force cloak¡± - A Hidden Force Power - The only way to gain this skill is luck of the draw in the beginning of your life or through teaching. With teaching there is a 20% chance you would get the skill. - As you have the title ¡°Monster¡± you had an 80% chance to get the skill. - Allows you to hide yourself from sight and sense. - Beginning stages offer low protection from other Jedi
I''m going nuts when I see this message. I do all sorts of weird motivational movements. If even Zola was giving me weird looks. I stop after a minute of foolishness. ¡°I got to admit I thought that you couldn¡¯t get this one. You¡¯re a real monster." "alright the secret to Striking Mist is that you need to use force cloak while using force enhancement to move very fast. the best place for force enhancement for speed is the the thigh and the ankle." first i try his version of force enhancement. it''s super fast. and i have alot of control. then i do force concealment before i do force enhancement and
you have just learned "Striking Mist" - a move to strike unseen and quick - level of concealment depends entirely on level of "Force Cloak"
after i practice both moves for a while zola called us. "Come closer you to Barak.¡± We come close to him ¡°the next few weeks will probably be dangerous so. He then handed us bracers that go to our elbow. ¡°these are supposed to be a graduation present but I can give it a little early considering what¡¯s probably coming¡±
you have acquired ¡°Songsteel Bracers¡± - One of the most strongest materials in the galaxy - Can deflect lightsaber and blaster attacks - Is very lightweight - Has the mark of Zola you will be respected everywhere.
¡°Barak you have cortisis bracers while young kor here has the songsteel. Who gets what is decided by seniority.¡± The fact that I¡¯m still happy should say something about the gifts I have just received. Usually I would kill him and steal those bracers but I¡¯m in a great mood. Besides he might be useful in the future better not to make enemies now when I¡¯m younger. Before I head back to my room and log off for the day I check the title of the monster.
¡°The Monster¡± Through incredibly quick progression in learning fundamental skills -you gain the skill battle precognition -you gain the skill force bellow -you unsettle your peers -your chances of gaining new skills rises significantly -unknown
Excellent. ----------------------------------------------------------------- i think i''m gonna slow down the power gaining now. he''s becoming to op. I''m gonna focus more on story now. as always if you find any fault in my grammer or lore please tell me. i will try to fix it. :blush: Difference The next day you could feel the change all around. There were more people than I have ever seen in the temple. In my first class of lightsaber class there was another huge chance. The battlemaster was talking and finally got to the point of what he was saying. ¡°Due to the nature and timing of the threat coming we decided to start teaching soresu. It is going to be the bread and butter of all your fighting styles.¡± We started learning the form of soresu movements and forms. We were drilling them and the battlemaster made corrections when he something wrong in one of us. The next class was similar in force study. All we were doing for the past few weeks was talking. But today they taught us the force burst
you have acquired the skill ¡°Force Burst¡± - A close range skill that varying effects depending on the power and shape you give it.
see what I mean it¡¯s crazy. Later that day I was sparing with Barak and me were sparing as we traditionally do every day. I was getting better. He was aiming for my legs with a sweep when I jumped. He then used his hands to launch himself above doing a flip kick.
you have just acquired the skill ¡°Echani¡± - A technique that follows closely with the race of the echani - A formal martial art used by the echani to know a person better by action instead of words - There are three tiers to this martial art balance, attack, and defense (you always start at balance) - Very effective close combat martial art. - Because of prior practice you are at tier 1 :50%
Lightsaber Affinity has changed to ¡°Combat Affinity¡± - All forms of combat can now be effectively used together - Combat affinity catalog ¡¤ Shii Cho ¡¤ Echani
After that the fights against Barak became a lot more bearable. When I got up I attacked first. The battle precog was working a bit better. He aims a kick trying to use my momentum against me. I go under it grab it and throw him on his face. he flips himself upright and smiles ¡°so you finally have the skill.¡± I nod ¡°good this will be more fun now.¡± We fight for what seems like hours. The fight was gathering a crowd. Most are players. We don¡¯t mind it. this is the closest I¡¯m to winning without tricks like pulling down his pants. From this fight alone the tier 1 of echani went up 15 percent. I even try to use some krav maga. He more than makes up for it with his superior percentage in skill. We can¡¯t talk anymore as we are too tired. We are smiling though. This is so much fun. He tries for a kick near my waist. In a miracle I kick it away before it fully forms and he becomes open to attack. When I kicked his foot away he tried to jump away. I grabbed both his legs and slammed him down pro-wrestling style. He¡¯s knocked out. I finally beat him without a trick. HAAA. The crowd was applauding. I made a few bows in directions of pretty females and sat down in a corner to re-energize. When I saw a familiar face approaching me it was the show-off sentinel in front of the archives. He had an entourage of 7. Barak was awake by know getting his wits together. The group walking towards me is getting a lot of attention. By the stares and actions of the other players they appeared to be quite famous. When finally got near me the show-off sentinel spoke first. ¡°you appear to be quite strong may I enter the circle and give it a try.¡± He said snobby like. he also did pull out his middle finger. I see what he was trying to do. I was tired from my last fight so now he thinks he has a chance. I smile. It unnerves them. I enter the circle. I motion to them not to use their lightsaber. I also motion them all to come in the circle. This novel is published on a different platform. Support the original author by finding the official source. They get ticked off and agree to do it anyway. Idiots. . I wasn¡¯t worried because I had my bracers. They all advance slowly towards me. I allow them too. When they get close I run towards the nearest one. He was using a guard. I hit him in the funny bone. a move that I learned from air gear. He makes that weird face everyone does when they hit their funny bone. Idiot one Dropped his guard to grab his arm. I quickly hit him in the chin. And idiot one goes down. I felt a blow coming from behind me. I duck and hit him with an elbow to the stomach. He landed on the ground and then threw-up. Idiot 2 down. Immediately after that I get a running start to the third idiot. He is doing a guard that covers his face and body by going low. I jump and hit the top of his head with a drop kick. I grab the first three idiots and stack them up. I haven¡¯t done this in a while. While I piled the last body I felt another attack behind me. he was about to punch me In the back of my head .I just stepped back and gave him a head butt and piled him with the rest of the bodies. Three left. They tried to attack together but my battle precog showed me where they were going to hit before it happened so I just let them hit each other. My plan will make him draw out his lightsaber in the end. My goodness I am having so much fun. I knock out one the last two in a well placed kick in the neck and the other one was trying to punch me. I dodge and knee him in the chin. Finally Only one was left. In order to understand what I do next you need to hear a story. I was a young boy just like everybody else. I was never bullied. There were just people who would take my stuff and make fun of me. I wouldn¡¯t call it bullying would you? Of course not. Anyway my problem escalated as I grew older. When I was finally 5 I had enough. I beat the people up. But there¡¯s always that special someone you want to make pay extra. As I said I was a kid. And do you know what all kids love given the chance. Pro-wrestling. So my idea was to pile up the groupies to make the extra one pay just a little more by giving me more height. And then I jump and perform an aerial technique. My first one was a flying neck breaker. To my knowledge that one worked only because he didn¡¯t know what was coming. Neck breaker only works on idiots. Over the years I realized the poetry in using someone else¡¯s goonies to do pro wrestling move on them. Over the years the ones that especially got on my nerves were eventually subject to me and my magnificent aerial technique. Over the years it has become a ritual. This guy made the list because he shows me faces I don¡¯t like. It sounds stupid when I say it like that but they are usually the type to get in my in way. Well know you know what I am about to do. I first hit the douche sentinel in the solar plexus dazing him. I start climbing the bodies. I slip a bit once but I get up there. He still dazed but looking at me. I do my pro wrestling pose. And turn around to jump I decided on the seated senton for my move mid-flight. What can I say I¡¯m an artist. I land. Butt first on his face. He¡¯s out. I win. I exit the circle. And realize I lost a little control there. I could get in trouble here. Barak sees that and eases my worries. ¡°that¡¯s an echani circle if you enter a fight without good intentions it becomes a personal fight. He flipped you off before the fight so it¡¯s ok.¡± Thank god. I guess being cooped up here for a while is starting to make me edgy. I haven¡¯t let myself go in a while before this. After staying a little longer to spar with Barak one more time Later that night. I had another vision about darth anguish and wretches. ¡°master anguish I am not responsible in any weakness that allowed them to become aware of our attack.¡± ¡°I am aware as you are alive. It was a vision of a Padawan in their temple.¡± She looked surprised at the accuracy of the knowledge. bearing in mind her surprise she asked him a question. ¡°do you think I could have done this alone? No we have a powerful ally.¡± ¡°who is it?¡± ¡°Seeing as we changed the schedule I don¡¯t see any harm in telling you .also his apprentice is arriving soon. It¡¯s darth Voth.¡± He pauses for a moment to let his apprentice absorb the knowledge. ¡°Your friends with one of the dark assembly?¡± ¡°not friends just have an equal share of hate against Coruscant. He is sending his disciple to help us. That¡¯s it¡­ a there he is.¡± It was Lucian. IT WAS LUCIAN. -------------------------------------------------------------------- there are 2 reasons this is a smaller chapter. first cause i want to see if you guys like this more descriptive writing style. second i am dumbfounded on the path to take him. should it be more of archeology type story progression or be more the traditional guardian and have crazy adventures. please leave your input. i plan on putting him on a path soon as always if there are any grammar or lore errors please alert me and i will try to fix them. :blush: this was not proofread so there should be a few The Sith attack He actually looked a bit menacing. He had yellow eyes with a red veins going towards it. He also looked skinny and pale. He also has 2 lightsabers on his belt. He started talking. ¡°Hello darth anguish. My master sends his regards.¡± ¡°I have no need of his regards Darth Midas. Have you brought the failsafe?¡± ¡°I have.¡± ¡°Will you offer your assistance in the attack?¡± Lucian smiles ¡°Of course I will. I have a friend I need to kill.¡± Darth anguish looked like he was impressed. ¡°Darth Midas your master must feel pride in having created you. If only my apprentice were as ruthless.¡± ¡°Give it time. No one is born a sith. If in the end she¡¯s a failure you can always get a new apprentice.¡± ¡°That¡¯s true.¡± Anguish looked satisfied Lucian was trying to get to the point. ¡°Do you want to make any last minute adjustments?¡± ¡°No. I am fine with the way things are. Besides I have a fail safe.¡± Lucian smiled. ¡°Then we commence the attack tomorrow.¡± Said Midas gleefully. But then he looked like he just remembered something and said. ¡°Oh yeah. If you fail and try to come back my master said he would feed you your arms. Don¡¯t try to come back if you fail.¡± ¡°Thank you for the warning although it is not needed as I have everything in the palm of my hand.¡± Lucian was looking at darth wretches. ¡°Better improve quickly or you¡¯re going to be replaced. You will die if you are weak. That¡¯s how things are here.¡± The vision fades out as I see wretches very afraid¡­. I run to the council with force enhancement as fast as I can. It¡¯s still night so there is a bit of time left. I could feel that vision was another real-time so I''m in a bit of a rush to get the info out there. No one was guarding the council door so I just barge in. in the room only wolam present. Damn. ¡°This better be something important young Padawan.¡± I equip my notepad again and began write down everything I¡¯ve seen in the vision. Before I am done I feel my battle precog warn me a battle is coming. Craps are they already here. Wolam sighs. ¡°it would have been so much better if you had just stayed quite. Damn it I didn¡¯t want to blow my cover until I uncovered the element.¡±
Congratulations you have just solved who has been feeding darth Voth information. - You have just unlocked the mini-boss wolam OBJECTIVE: SURVIVE -Rewards come after you are in a state of peace
Fuck. I ignited my lightsabers. ¡°Darth Voth will not accept a second failure. You have to die.¡± He ignited his lightsaber He moved first executing a strike on my head . The lag of battle precog was half a second. He¡¯s strong .damn it. I didn¡¯t dodge the dodge the blow. The speed was phenomenal. After witnessing it I do the only smart thing available. I phase through the hit. ¡°Ah your one of those. No wonder Zola took such a liking to you. But there are ways to do deal with you.¡± He then used a force burst on me I flew back to the wall even though I was currently phasing. I¡¯m going to lose this fight. So I run. I head for the door. Wolam noticed and threw his lightsaber; I had to jump to avoid his saber throw while running towards the door. I phase through it and run some more. I run into that new Jedi that took us to ilum. I tried to use my body language to run. I try for a good five seconds when a lightsaber slices of his head. Luckily it was thrown. Damn it where was Zola. I run to the cafeteria and use force cloak as soon as the door¡¯s close. I hide next to the doors waiting him to come out. A lightsaber went through the wall 3 inches to the right of my face. damn it I¡¯m going to die. As soon as he enters I phase out of the wall back into the hall exhausted. I only have two left in me. I run some more with force enhancement. I found wolam behind me and gaining. I phase through the bottom of the floor hoping to gain some time. I get down and start running again though I see his lightsaber going through the ceiling before I get out of sight. I try to go to the counselors chambers. I knock on a random door to get the attention of consular. The door opened and a consular named ezza came out. Wolam was out down and I saw him running for me. ¡°ezza nice to see you. This kid knows about us kill him.¡± Fucking shit-bitching fuck. This text was taken from Royal Road. Help the author by reading the original version there.I phase through the lightsaber attack aimed at my head to fling lava at him. It melts through him like butter in an oven. The only reason why I was able to do this is he wasn¡¯t expecting lava. even then he still tried to block.
You have just killed a rogue Jedi consular whose strength is several times above yours through surprise. -new skill acquired ¡°force reflex¡± -new title ¡°goliath¡±
new skill acquired ¡°Force Reflex¡± - The feeling time slowing around you so better quick judgment can be implemented. - At the beginning levels the time spent in this mode is no more than a few seconds - Causes great fatigue afterward
I quickly use it everything seems a little slower. Almost manageable. But his martial prowess is too good. I move to block a quick overhead. He hits it quickly than aims for my body. That¡¯s it I¡¯m going to die. I tried to make my bracers get hit instead. He hit a part of the brace and a part of my skin. It burns. My blue lightsaber was starting to mess with his lightsaber. It was flickering. The next thing I know me and wolam were being thrown to the walls opposite of each other. The consulars awake from our fight Zola their holding his hand up keeping us there. ¡°both of you drop your lightsaber¡¯s and I¡¯ll put you down and give you a chance to communicate your side of the story.¡± I put both my lightsaber¡¯s down wait for wolam to do the same. Wolam would not do the same. I was put down slowly and equipped my notepad and began writing everything that happened. Zola looked shaken. ¡°consular cifra is he telling the truth?¡± ¡°I am afraid so.¡± ¡°Put wolam in the holding cells.¡± Wolam started talking. ¡°It won¡¯t matter were all going to be dead soon anyway. I just wish I could¡¯ve seen the surprise on your faces tomorrow.¡± ¡­.. ¡°Everyone be on high alert. Wake up everyone we have an attack coming. Kor you wake up the younger padawans and make them leave. Those strong enough to stay do so.¡± I nod run for the Padawan quarters. When I arrive I grab Barak and tell him to yell to awaken everybody and evacuate. He yelled the situation and everyone was awake panicking. We run to a cargo ship. How I sorted who goes and who didn¡¯t was if they were a player or not. The players stayed the npc¡¯s went. I told them to go to my home planet of naboo. Just as they took off I could see a starship hover over the planet. Damn they¡¯re here. The ship ejected 3 smaller ships and a drop ship. They landed around 500 meters from the temple damaging 5 or 6 buildings in the process. The drop box landed next to one of the ships Some Jedi were going to infiltrate the star ship. And left quick some were standing outside the temple ready to defend the planet. They exited their ships one was anguish with the drop ship. Midas alone near anguish. And wretches further away from the fight than the others. The drop box was opening. It was a massive crystal. Anguish was saying a few weird words when Zola yelled. ¡°STOP HIM.¡± We all went forward very fast jumping from building to building. ¡°HAHAHAHHAHA IT¡¯S TOO LATE.¡± The crystal shot a beam up into the air and the sky turned purple. Then people started falling out of the sky. A closer look made me realize they were force ghosts of sith lords. DAMN IT. ------------------------------- sorry i''ve been away awhile it''s been quite hectic. the star wars trailer came out a few hours ago number so here you go also some better star wars fanfic''s than mine about what anakin skywalker and what he would do differently if he had traveled back in time here and here as always if you see any errors tell me and i will fix them as best i can. hope all of you had a happy thanksgiving Fighting Spirit Lucian pov I see the scene before me and smile. Anguish is a real master when it comes to sith magic. He just executed an advanced version of force walk. I smile as I see the results. It¡¯s raining down sith lords. I feel like I¡¯m looking at art. I notice one of the consular¡¯s tell them to attack. The man with one arm looks strong I should stay away from him. I have a Job to so I leave them to their work. As much as it pains me today will not be the day me and (Cygnus) kor fight. Voth sent me here to retrieve the element and that¡¯s what I will do. If I were to battle him it would be at my place and choosing. In the long run I will be better for it. I learned a lot from Voth. anguish must not know what I¡¯m doing so I have to go through the battle. I throw a few Dark shear¡¯s at the Jedi in my way to create a pathway to the temple. I run into this guy with no lightsaber. He takes a fighting stance. My thoughts were that I didn¡¯t know they had martial artists in the Jedi too. I ignite invisible long-handled lightsaber. It looks clear to the human eye because of the barab ingot clear crystal although sometimes it glitches and can be seen. Him not knowing I ignited it and aimed for his leg to cripple him and then kill him. I was pushed away by the force in to a wall. I had force shield on as soon as I was pushed so I am relatively unhurt and get up quickly to finish the job. It was the one-armed man who pushed me. quite annoying. But he pushed me further to the temple so it saved time. I run for the temple to be interrupted by the same no lightsaber wielding man. How did he catch up with me? it doesn¡¯t matter anyway. I swing my lightsaber at him he tries to block with his hands. Fool. I slash his robes to reveal a metal. Must be very resilient to withstand a lightsaber strike. I move to strike his head. He moves in to deliver a fatal blow. Fool isn¡¯t even keeping his guard up. I move my lightsaber down. It didn¡¯t hurt him. How? His fist is moving towards my solar plexus. I block with my hilt. I use his momentum to move further back to assess the problem. I quickly slash the ground. No marks my lightsaber isn¡¯t working. That must be a rare metal. I was to careless. I quickly use my dark shear hold in my hand. And strike with my hilt and shear. I feint him with my hilt and use the shear to stab his arms. Then I quickly go forward as I am running out of time. I enter the Jedi temple and follow the map I¡¯ve memorized to the study of one of the consular¡¯s. force traps are something the Jedi aren¡¯t adept in. I easily get past their meager defenses to enter a room with a bright colored rock. There are some tech traps here. I take out a controlled emp grenade from my packet and throw it in the room while hiding from a safe distance. I enter the room again and take the rock. God this game is fun. I leave to re-enter the battle. ======================================== POV Kor Zola immediately tells everyone to attack probably to get an advantage while we can in numbers. He also suggested using the force to cover our lightsabers as we can¡¯t hit them unless they want to be hit. I conceal myself hoping to get a good shot at (Lucian) Darth Midas. But he goes a separate path. Coward. A sith lord sensed me. before he could strike I sliced of his head.
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The other sith noticed but I was still concealed and far from the place it happened. I go closer to the crystal. I am getting a bit winded. I¡¯ve been so since the whole wolam debacle. I used to much force power on him. I was moving forward when I see the end of the road. There was this huge sith ghost in front of me. he stood between me and the crystal. he looked like he could see me. he was pointing his hand at me so he really could see me. he used the force to push me back. I was trying to fight it with a force shield. It wasn¡¯t working I was being pushed back while others were noticing me. damn it. I push back as hard as I can. It¡¯s working a little. I push harder, and harder , and harder. I feel the fatigue from everything else that happened over the last few intensify a million fold. I come close and use the lava lightsaber to unleash the most force enhance blow I ever executed. It cut him in half. My arm was broken from the impact. I moaned out of pain. It was a wretched moan. I turned around and saw the fight and we were being massacred. My scream started changing from one of sorrow and pain to one of power. I added as much force as I can muster into it. the ground was shaking the buildings were breaking the air felt as if it had this huge weight on it. the effect was massive seeing me so close to the crystal. Gave the Jedi hope and courage and as an affect of the skill it made them more powerful. The sith hearing it reverted back to their training and felt the fear the use so much and that made them significantly weaker. I thought this skill was very unbalanced at first but this skill was a real sith killer. Some alerts come up
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I tell the windows to stop popping up. Unfortunately I was rather close to darth anguish and darth wretches while I did this and both started to attack. Darth wretches attacked while wretches on the outside waiting for an opening. Fortunately My battle precog prepared me. he was rather sick and exerted a massive amount of force power on that crystal so he was rather weak. Also Darth Wretches was not a very good sith apprentice. unfortunately another thing that was a downer was that my left arm was useless. I draw out the lava from my lightsaber and put it into a ball over my head. Wretches would burn when she got to close me as she didn¡¯t know how to do tapas. Anguish was afraid I might use the ball on him but I don¡¯t have the control to do that while this tired. But I feint acting as if I¡¯m grabbing the ball with the force when I¡¯m actually grabbing my lightsaber. I throw the ice lightsaber at him blade first he deflects it leaving him wide open . I take out one of his legs. My battle precog warned me of an incoming lightsaber. I dodge. It was a lightsaber thrown by Darth Wretches. Wow she threw her only weapon. Bold. Anguish stood up and started laughing maniacally ¡°HAHAHAHHAHAHAHA. Your all dead you just don¡¯t know It yet. Wretches go to your ship It¡¯s time to use the fail safe.¡± he wasn''t aware because wretches was at her back but wretches started smiling. Darth Anguish rolled up his sleeves where crystals where embedded to his skin. They started glowing brighter and brighter. ¡°HEHEHEHE. Time to go SUPERNOVA!!¡± I braced myself for a very crippling blast. But it never came. And the great thing was he looked just as disappointed and mad as I was surprised. He screamed again very loudly. ¡°VOTH THAT TRAITAOROUS SCUM! IT COULD¡¯VE ENDED HERE! I COULD HAVE DESTROYED CORUSCANT!!!¡± Then all of a sudden i felt the most dangourous thing on the I¡¯ve ever felt through battle precog aiming for my leg .I moved out of the way and saw a hole appear on the ground . Darth Midas was behind me. But the talking was done mostly by Anguish. ¡°MIDAS!!!!! WHY HAS VOTH DONE THIS TO ME?!!¡± ¡°it was nothing personal. It was just the element was here on Coruscant and my master had no wish for it to be destroyed. If it were another time another place he would have aided you genuinely. It¡¯s your own fault for being so easy to manipulate.¡± ¡°I TRUSTED YOU PEOPLE.¡± ¡°in the sith trust is an illusion. Don¡¯t try to blame us for your weakness. It was fun though. The funny thing is that you don¡¯t even know the extent of my manipulation.¡± Midas took out what looked like a bomb switch and pressed it. Anguish coughed up more blood. then he looked dumbfounded ¡°h..ho¡­.how? ¡°it was easy I just offered the person who could do the most damage to you what they wanted. Isn¡¯t that right wretches.¡± Anguish looked at wretches ¡°what c..could he have possibly off..offered you?¡± Wretches looked pleasantly guilty. ¡°a new chance at the academy to get a new master.¡± Anguish smiles as he was splitting blood ¡°y..you fool¡± Then he died. Midas looks at me. ¡°I see you¡¯ve got your voice back. that was even a rather impressive skill. But even I can tell your exhausted. I could kill you know but I want to kill you when we are both at full strength. Besides the Jedi are gaining ground quick and I don¡¯t want to die just yet.¡± I answer his retort ¡°even exhausted I can still kick your ass. Come at me.¡± I strike to the side with my lightsaber he kicks me hand up with my lightsaber. I turn around for a kick. He tries to block with his hands. But using my last bit of force energy I use piercing touch. I phase though his hand and try to repulse. he looked worried for a second but I don¡¯t have enough power. so I phase back and fall on the ground exhausted. ¡°well you attacked first and this is just a juicy opportunity soooo.¡± Just as he was about to give the finishing blow he was pushed away by what I believe to be Zola very far back towards Wretches. Darth Midas realizing he had no more time said ¡°unfortunately wretches you have proved your incompetence by throwing away your only weapon for a man who was going to die today anyway and that is just the precipice of your mistakes." ¡°Didn¡¯t we have a deal?¡± She looked afraid again ¡°If It makes you feel any better I would¡¯ve killed you anyway as you are too weak and malleable to be a sith. think of it as a mercy from a life you¡¯re not suited for. Goodbye.¡± He Killed wretches by stabbing her neck with an invisible spear then ran for her space ship without a moment¡¯s hesitation. He launched and escaped before the rest of the Jedi could get close. And finally the attack was over. --------------------- sorry for the long wait but i get pretty busy in other matters. thanks for your for reading my story. i feel like I''m getting more and more ideas for a great story and it''s all thanks to you guys. though i feel i should redo the first chapter. as always if there are any grammar errors point them out to me and i will fix them to the best of my ability. New Mission When I logged in I awoke in a bacta tank in an infirmary.i felt like vegeta ;D but no seriously it felt nice. Though I was in my boxer briefs so it was a bit weird. I looked at myself to find I¡¯m all better. A nurse from the Jedi corps drained the bacta from the tank where she gave me clothes. ¡°Get dressed the Jedi consul wants to see you immediately.¡± I did as the woman said and started walking to the temple. As I was getting to my destination I realized I was being stared at. I wasn¡¯t surprised as I the battle was on YouTube and got tons of views. I arrive at the large doors of the consular room when they open them. ¡°We are here to thank you for your commendable service to the republic and Jedi order.¡±
you have significantly influenced the result of the war. - You receive 5,000 credits. - You receive the title ¡°harbinger of victory¡± - You¡¯re reputation with the council has increased significantly - Your reputation with Zola has maxed out. - You are in no danger of joining the Jedi corps - As you are a guardian all combat type skills increase by 15% percent - All force skills increase by 3%
based on contribution to the battle you have received 2,500 midi-chlorians
¡°During that skirmish something of extreme value and danger was taken from here. It¡¯s called by many names. But we now call it the element. It was found by the aing-tii. And it¡¯s purpose of creation is unknown to us at the moment. But we have a clue to its whereabouts. Thanks to a disciple of mine. It is a republic school for creating officers and soldiers. The location is mandalore. We believe they have sith agents their and that is where the intelligence suggested they were holding the element.¡± He was waiting for my comment. Probably to confirm my voice is back. ¡°Why are you telling me this?¡± ¡°Because we believe the force is guiding your training. Because 3 consular¡¯s of us had a force vision of you battling that sith apprentice. Because you are the most proficient one of your age and that age just happens to be the beginning enrollment to this academy.¡± ¡°Isn¡¯t that a coincidence?¡± ¡°This is no coincidence. This is the force guiding your path. Think on it. what your capable of is made for this mission.¡± ¡°Will I be able to keep my lightsaber¡¯s?¡± I really really liked my lightsabers. ¡°No. but you will be given a beskad short sword and a song steel short sword. And you will be allowed to keep your bracers. Lightsabers will bring to much unwanted attention to you if caught.¡± This seems like a fun quest. ¡°Ok I¡¯ll do it.¡± ¡°That¡¯s great news. You will leave tomorrow morning with master ashveela. She will be looking into things through other means. Mind her advice as she is an expert sentinel. She¡¯s also one of my disciples as well as the one who got us the info.¡± Just as I was leaving Zola said another thing. ¡°Oh and you are exempt from classes today. In one hour report to the training grounds as I need to teach you a few things before you go.¡± I go to the training area and check my skills while waiting
Force affinity (light side) One of two paths of the living force -use of the light side of the force raises your affinity to light -use of the dark side of the force lowers your affinity to light -progress will be stunted if dark affinity is higher 57%
Force affinity (dark side) One of two paths of the living force -use of the dark side of the force raises your affinity to dark -use of the light side of the force lowers your affinity to dark -progress will be stunted if dark affinity is higher 0%
Force control affinity -with practice you can use less power for more arduous tasks 9%
Force power affinity -entirely dependent on midi-chlorian count -midi-chlorian count may be increased through events and rewards -power you can utilize easier will be easier depend on practice *The midi-chlorian base count is based on luck of the draw Midi-chlorian count ¨C 21,500 FPA 60%
Jedi code understanding There is no emotion, there is peace. There is no ignorance, there is knowledge. There is no passion, there is serenity. There is no death, there is the Force. Understanding 80%
Battle precognition ¨C Beginner lvl 7 89%
Force precognition - Beginner lvl 2 54%
force cloak - Beginner lvl 5 94%
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force phase beginner lvl 6 12%
shii-cho form understanding- 80%
shii-cho form application 63%
soresu form understanding 20%
soresu form application 44%
Gand martial arts All moves depend on execution so it has no levels -piercing touch -striking mist
echani martial art Tier of balance 80% ¡¤ easier to keep your balance ¡¤ easier to keep your stance Tier of attacking 0% ¡¤ higher attacking power ¡¤ higher attacking speed Tier of defense 0% ?? ?? ??
I am really coming along. I think I¡¯m scaring myself. When these go higher I¡¯ll be unstoppable. I must have looked at my progress for a long time because Zola came along. ¡°Alright time to get started. We need to get you to the second stage of echani before you leave¡­. This will hurt.¡± We trained all day and some of the night. It was painful. It was also fun Zola does this cool thing where he uses the force to create an arm for himself.
echani martial art Tier of balance 100% Tier of attacking 30%
The next day I woke up and started packing. Sadly leaving my precious lightsaber¡¯s alone in my room. I packed a breath mask, the swords that were given to me, and the mandalore officer uniform. The bracers never come off of me. Ever. I enter the ship and leave Coruscant behind. The ride was a short long one as it was in the outer rim. me and ashveela started sparring to pass time. She was strong. i didn¡¯t use force power¡¯s because this is an echani circle. but she didn¡¯t either. So I don¡¯t know her level of strength. We also started talking plans. ¡°When we arrive we will both use different ways to get to mandalore republic academy. Your name will be Lile crow. Everything has been paid for by scholarship. they will think you¡¯re up and coming talent. Show off as much as possible. We also shouldn¡¯t speak to each other about the mission unless absolutely vital. ¡°Isn¡¯t not talking to each other and showing off bad.¡± ¡°No that would attract attention. I will treat as I would a teacher meeting a promising student. You will act like a talented student. Nothing less nothing more. Trust me this is my 26thundercover mission.¡± Man that¡¯s bad ass. Maybe I should have been a sentinel. ¡°Okay¡± ¡°Moving on. I am an unarmed and melee combat instructor. You will sign up for my classes for your majors so we can be close a lot of the time. You will also take weapons instruction and tactical combat. These are the prerequisites to be a battle ready officer. The administration will know what you are aiming for. Getting everything so far?¡± ¡°Yes¡± ¡°You will only be allowed to use your force power¡¯s at night. We have checked 2 dozen times. There is not a single force-sensitive in that school. So you can use your unique skill set to see the things going on here. Now get changed.¡± I went to the bathroom to get changed. My god this is so much more comfortable. I get out and see that ashveela changed into a pilot suit. ¡°You go out first once we land. I go out later than cover my tracks. Oh two more things the people in your class will be snobs because usually rich people offer for their kids to go to that branch of school. And you have to look power hungry in order for the sith to be interested in you¡± Hmm so I just be myself. This sounds perfect. We landed and I came out with my suitcase looking like a rich snob. I walked with swagger to the school. When I entered the school I came to the front desk and started talking to the receptionist. ¡°My name is Lile Crow. I am new this semester may I know where my bunkers are.¡± ¡°Of course but first you must sign up for your classes. Take this.¡± She handed me a tablet. It had my name on the top. ¡°This is your personal assistant all upcoming officers own one. Register the classes you need and it will tell you where your room is. We do the registering early so that you can have better positioning for your room.¡± ¡°Ok. Thank you for your help.¡± I register for unarmed combat and melee combat for my majors. And weapon instruction and tactical combat for my minors. And it tells me to go to my room A-7. It also has a map so I don¡¯t get lost. Convenient. I enter my room to find four beds and one person. He¡¯s a bit big in the stomach but it¡¯s not that bad. ¡°Ooh so you must be the scholarship exchange student they sent from Coruscant. Just be wary to not get in my way and we¡¯ll be fine.¡± Don¡¯t punch him in the face. Don¡¯t punch him in the face. Don¡¯t punch him in the face. come on its your first day don¡¯t screw up here. Wait I can be myself. So I punch him in the face. ¡°hi my name is lile crow. And I am trying not to punch your face again. but it¡¯s hard you see. Your voice and tone make it ever so hard. If you shut up your face will be safe from my fist. Do we have an understanding? He nods vigorously. I¡¯m going to like this place. Feels like I¡¯m home. ----------------------------------------------------- hey guys the reason why i''m late is because i wrote another fanfic. i wanted him to do at least one under cover mission before he finds his master. as always tell any grammatical mistakes you see. and lastly thank you for reading my story good sir. School Life I established dominance among my snobby roommates which was a chore in itself as they kept saying their families¡¯ power will crush me. As soon as I was done showing my roommates how things will work in this room. I went exploring. This place was massive. Not bigger than the temple of course but still massive. I touch my pocket to make sure I took my tablet. I go to the cafeteria to fill up my virtual stomach. Then I go to the gym to go through my echani moves to try to get more experience. I continue my training for a few hours and then go back to my room. I only got a 2 percent increase. Sparring is much faster. I go to my room and sleep peacefully. I wake up at six due to the stupid tablet. It was beeping ever so loudly. I throw it with all my might and it still didn¡¯t break. I equipped my republic clothes and headed to unarmed combat. The class structure is weird here. The classes you major in are longer then the classes you minor in.So I will be spending most of my time on close combat. I enter the classroom just 13 seconds late. ¡°You¡¯re late student. Run around the gym 5 times.¡± I start running. ¡°As I was saying before the latecomer intruded. My name is master Syrena. You will call me by nothing else.¡± ¡°For today I will pair you up with another person of your class. Then once I see who is where I will pair you up based on how close you are in level.¡± She sorted me and a random person from my year. He looked confident. The fool. Even after running around the gym a few times. I still knocked him out with one punch to the gut. Then Syrena (aka ashveela) pointed at me and said. ¡°You fight Grupen my teacher¡¯s aide.¡± ¡°You¡¯ve got to be kidding me.¡± I see who¡¯s protesting to see who I¡¯m fighting. He has a face you want to punch. Oh this will be fun. He is still complaining. ¡°I was last year¡¯s star pupil. This kid is a first year.¡± ¡°And what I¡¯m saying is that you are close in level to each other. In fact he¡¯s a bit stronger. And that if you want to be my aide I shouldn¡¯t have to say things twice. Now go.¡± He grumbles his way to me. We wait for the signal and start. He tried the good old sweep the leg. It was pointless as battle precog is a passive. I jumped and landed a good distance away from him. He comes again with the intent to strike a fist to the face. Before he does I clothesline him. He gets up and tries to go for a tackle by going low. i knee him in the face. My abilities are suited for fighting opponents more powerful than me. so he stood no chance. This continued for a while until the teacher stopped us. ¡°It seems I was wrong in my first assessment. Maybe he should be the teacher¡¯s aide Mr. Grupen.¡± Everybody laughs. ¡°I was going easy on him.¡± ¡°No Mr. Grupen it was he who was going easy on you. He didn¡¯t use one piece of technique from any martial art I know of.¡± Of course I didn¡¯t I was having fun. He looks at me with hate. And I smile at him. ¡°Don¡¯t worry I do rankings not by skill but by seniority. Now will you do your job as a teacher¡¯s aide our will I have to tell to do this by demoting you?¡± He was properly humiliated. ¡°No master Syrena.¡± ¡°Good. Continue.¡± We fought for a while but every now and then when thought ashveela wasn¡¯t watching he would try to go for a move that shouldn¡¯t be used on another student. I made him pay heavily for each one. By the end of sparring time he was beaten like a sack of meat. ¡°Next time don¡¯t take so much out on him in the beginning. Your name was? ¡°Lile.¡± ¡°and Grupen next time don¡¯t aim for critical hits you can¡¯t make our you get punished like so.¡± He looked ashamed and furious at the same time. Ashveela was really making me look good. I guess that¡¯s part of the mission. The next part of class was solo work where we drill through our moves. Well everyone except me. ¡°you Lile will spar with me during this time as I do not feel that sparring you did was enough to push yourself. We wouldn¡¯t want that talent to go to waste would we?¡± At least it¡¯s good practice. But it¡¯s also going to be exhausting. ¡°alright.¡± Thus commences one of the longest hours of my life. Man I wish I could use the force. After the hour was up we stopped. Lastly we did exercises like running, ground drills, and lastly stretching. ¡°good job today students. I see real potential here. Your dismissed. Lile stay behind.¡± When everybody left she motioned me to give her my tablet. I did and she put them in a box turned a little switch and started talking. ¡°today at night you will the people I suspect to be hiding the element. First is the science teacher. Most of his time is unaccounted for. Second the tactical combat teacher. He has a group of students who are tight nit about something. The last suspect is the principal. This is happening under his roof so it is unlikely he is not involved somehow. For today focus on the science teacher. Any questions?¡± ¡°um what are you doing with our tablets?¡± ¡°This is in case the principal turns out to be our man. I recorded your voice on the way here and mine to create simulated conversations. The worst they can believe now is that we¡¯re having teacher student relations.¡± ¡°How very¡­..thorough?¡± She paid no mind to my tone. ¡°Thank you. Any other questions?¡± This is weird. I need to get out of here. ¡°Nope.¡± ¡°go to your next class then.¡± My next class was weapon instruction. I will have no trouble there I mean come on I was a space pirate. I enter. ¡°Your late do 100 pushups.¡± Damn it. Am I going to be late to every class? ¡°As I was saying today you will choose the weapon that suits you the most. My senior apprentices will help you in your choice.¡± When I was done a girls was waiting for me. ¡°Hi my name is kiera I will be helping you choose your weapon.¡± She was a player. She was also stunning. Not that that mattered .My interaction with the females has left something to be desired. It¡¯s always ¡°you¡¯re a psychopath¡± or ¡°you don¡¯t have a clue about relationships¡± and my favorite ¡°your too good at everything for me to be with you.¡± what? That last one is true too!! Shut up. Fuck you. Sigh anyway she shows me to the weapon rack and hands me a weapon. It¡¯s a bryar pistol. It looked sexy. I head to the range and fire four shots. They all missed awfully. What the hell was wrong with me? I checked my hands then my settings. Ahh it¡¯s that damn gun auto assist. I turn it off. And fire again. I hit the targets head, heart, stomach, and penis. The last one is a pirate oldie but goodie. Beautiful. Kiera is looking at me like I¡¯m a cheater. I smile. Unauthorized tale usage: if you spot this story on Amazon, report the violation. I don¡¯t like that weapon though. It¡¯s no fun. I go look for something more physical. There was a Z-6 jet pack. Come on it may not be for me but what self respecting star wars fan wouldn¡¯t try it. Although kiera was trying to discourage me by saying it needs years of training to be able to use one. I won¡¯t be discouraged. I put on my back (with help from kiera) and turn it on. It was awesome I love it. I was never a mage as I think the class to be weak and incompetent so I never flew in other games. Well there was that time I was catapulted but that doesn¡¯t count. From watching the movies and reading the books this could be a drawback as much as an advantage. So I put it back. Then I saw it. It screamed ¡°take me¡± in my head. It looked beautiful. Unfortunately it was in a glass case. I ask kiera ¡°What is this?¡± ¡°That is a blastsword.¡± ¡°How do I get it?¡± ¡°You don¡¯t.¡± I looked like I just stepped in shit. ¡°whyyyyyy?¡± ¡°it¡¯s reserved for weapons major¡¯s and people who pass the simulation.¡± ¡°Can I try the simulation?¡± She thought about it. ¡°Let me ask the supervising officer.¡± She went while I stared at it. When she came back her face looked dejected damn it. ¡°He said sure but you might have to skip a bit of lunch.¡± ¡°What¡¯s the simulation like.¡± ¡°It gives you a scenario and you have to act accordingly.¡± ¡°How many people pass the simulation?¡± ¡°Don¡¯t worry you won¡¯t.¡± ¡°why not?¡± ¡°Only one or two pass every year. And that is with repeated tries. 12 tries is the lowest count we have.¡± Please I used to be a space pirate. I¡¯ve invaded planets. This is nothing. I continue searching the rack for weapons I might use in the simulation. In the end I just chose a bryar gun and a vibrosword for classes. Before I take the simulation my bryar gun was filled with stun rounds and my vibro sword was exchanged for a dummy saber. I entered the simulation room. It changed into a spaceship hallway. A guy tried to shoot me by using surprise as a factor I shot him in the head. It was a stun round so he¡¯s not going to die. Probably. A guy appeared from an entrance I shot him while a girl was closing in from far away while shooting at me with awful aim. Before the man I shot falls I use him as cover to shoot the girl in the head with one shot. Another one appears behind me and I kick him in his tentacle. I pick up their ammo, weapons, and flash-bangs. I keep the guy I¡¯m using as cover in my front killing all the people by headshot. This is why guns are boring .sure it has tactics and aim and timing. But it ends too quickly if you¡¯re on the wrong end of the gun. No fun at all. Using this method I was getting near the command center. There were thirteen people guarding the door. I throw a grenade I picked up. It was a stun one. I shoot them while they¡¯re disoriented .all in the head. I enter the command center and see a man who was using a sword .he threw it. I thought there were no force sensitive¡¯s in this school. Damn it. I quickly moved out of the way. Then I observe closer and there is a thin string connecting the sword and the humanoid. There was a machine type sound when the saber came back to the owner. Phew he¡¯s a phony. I shoot him but he has a personal energy shield. He throws it again. I shoot it away this time. He quickly winds his sword back in his hand throws it again. I shoot it away again and I go up close. This time he tried to strike me with the sword. But I could see it. I knock it away with my gun. I underestimated the power behind the strike and my gun flew away. He goes for another one but I knock it away with my bracers and elbow him in the gut. I hit something hard and metal. I hit my funny bone it was painful and giddy. I backed away and got my sword again. He didn¡¯t try to throw it anymore. I got up close again with the sword. He was good swordsman. Coupled with the fact that he¡¯s as hard as steel it was hard to see an image of winning. I back up again and get my gun back. I had an idea. Personal energy shields are weak against anything not energy. I holster my gun and get up close again. This time I go for a grenade turn it on while fighting. It¡¯s beeping. He sees what I¡¯m trying to do and backs up. I don¡¯t let him. It blows up. We both get hit. I try to shoot him because sense we were in the personal energy shield it malfunctioned. Though I¡¯m still a bit groggy I shot him. I WIN BITCH. Phew that was actually really really hard. Why would they do that to a first year? I get out met by stares of disbelief. I stop caring as soon as I saw the blastsword. ¡°can I take this now?.¡± ¡°S¡­sure.¡± A guy unlocked the glass and gives me the blast sword. I equip it to my back. it feels right. Unfortunately the time that took up was enormous. I was already late for my next class. Which was actually ashveela¡¯s class. Damn she¡¯s going to make me run again. I am actually tired. ¡°since I passed your simulation can you give me a note to my next class.¡± ¡°uumm ¡­.ok¡± ¡°thanks.¡± I hurry to the classes. And open the door. ¡°run 10 laps.¡± ¡°but I have a note.¡± ¡°excuses. Go run 10 laps.¡± Dammn iiit. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Pov Midas I just returned. To korriban. Jedi are very hard to outmaneuver. I enter Darth Voth¡¯s chambers. ¡°Welcome back midas. I thought you dead.¡± ¡°almost master.¡± ¡°oohh don¡¯t call me that yet. In your absence I started to train a new disciple. As I thought you were dead.¡± Crap. ¡°Do not worry. We will settle this like sith. He will come and fight you. And the survivor takes the place.¡± ¡°Come tyrannical¡± ¡°Yes master.¡± ¡°I JUST SAID NOT TO CALL ME THAT!!!¡± The man started burning where he stood until he was just ash in the wind. Then he had a cheerful face on. ¡°Welcome back my disciple. Did you put the element in place?¡± ¡°Yes¡­.master.¡± ¡°Good.¡± ¡°All we do know is plan more. soon we will overthrow the emperor.¡± ¡°When will you teach me what you did to him?¡± I point at the ash that used to be a person. ¡°Why not now.¡± Midas smiles ----------------------- thanks for reading again. as always please tell me of any grammatical errors i can fix. sorry this is a bit late. i had a bit of writers block. Suspicions POV teacher¡¯s lounge for dinner ¡°What the hell is he?¡± Said the weapon combat instructor. ¡°I don¡¯t know.¡± Said ashveela said with no emotion ¡°You don¡¯t get it. There are 7 different type of simulations. They are randomly assorted.¡± ¡°I get that.¡± ¡°But that¡¯s not all the one he did is the sith warship simulation. Out of the seven that one is the hardest. Most weapons majors give up in the beginning as it is too difficult. I can count the people who completed that simulation on one hand.¡± ¡°I see.¡± ¡°And here¡¯s the kicker he did it on his first try. Beating it isn¡¯t impossible but beating after only doing it once that¡¯s just ridiculous.¡± ¡°Maybe he did it on Coruscant.¡± ¡°You must not go outside your area of expertise. Coruscant doesn¡¯t have the simulator. They think a soldier¡¯s worth can¡¯t be determined by a computer.¡± ¡°Well apparently they are doing something right.¡± ¡°Apparently so¡­¡­ You know the real kicker. Technically he should have graduated once he completed the simulator. In fact he is technically a major because he beat the hardest simulation. But he¡¯s not a weapon¡¯s major. So it¡¯s not in my authority to graduate him. And I assume you won¡¯t.¡± ¡°There is no shortcut to passing my class. That¡¯s what I did in Coruscant and that¡¯s what I¡¯ll do here.¡± ¡°That¡¯s a shame. He would make a phenomenal addition to the republic naval corps.¡± ----------------------------------------------- POV kor I was late to tactics and I don¡¯t regret it. Tactics was boring as hell .That combined with the fact I was tired as hell means I slept through all of class. The teacher was furious. But it did give me the alertness I feel now that I¡¯m about to spy on the science teacher. Maybe I should sleep in tactics class all of the time. I make sure my roommates are all asleep and then I conceal myself and phase through the door. I go to the science teacher¡¯s room and look through his stuff and datapad. Hmmmmm¡­ he¡¯s a weird guy. Most of the papers were on mating habits of certain animals. On his data pad was a whole bunch of science stuff and pictures. Though I do think he takes a bit too many selfies nothing here incriminating. I go to my room and sleep frustrated with the results. I wake up thanks to the datapad. I equip my things and head to the unarmed combat. As soon as I entered I saw ashveela. I was not late. ¡°go run twenty laps.¡± ¡°WHHAAAAT. WHHHYYY?¡± ¡°you have more talent therefore you should be pushed harder.¡± ¡° but why do you keep adding more laps?¡± ¡°Because you¡¯re not tired enough. And since you like asking so many stupid questions it¡¯s now 30 laps.¡± I start running before she increases them more. I didn¡¯t complete the laps until after the class was almost done sparring. So I was going to sit down and rest. As soon as I sat down. Ashveela speaks. ¡°class it¡¯s time for practicing form.¡± ¡°isn¡¯t it a bit early master Syrena?¡± ¡°Nonsense. You can never have too much form practice. Lile come with me we will spar now.¡± BULLSHIT. ¡°Um master I am a bit tired now. Can we do this in another hour?¡± ¡°Excuses. Get up and come over here.¡± I really want to do quit this quest now. Uggghhhhhh. I get up and walk towards her. The other students till staring at us. ¡°What are all of you doing get back to practice.¡± And they did so.I hate this class. We sparred or more correctly put she beat me like I was a piece of meat. But surprisingly it wasn¡¯t as bad as I thought it would be. Then I heard it. The sweet release of the bell. ¡°Alright class good job today. Lile you stay behind.¡± I¡¯ll just update her on the progress and leave. She takes our data pads and stores them that box again. ¡°any progress?¡± ¡°no. if the science teacher had something it wasn¡¯t on his data pad or in his desk.¡± ¡°None of the teachers have a residence outside so it must be hidden within the school. So we have to be a bit more thorough than that. Search his quarters and then check the tactical combat teacher¡¯s desk and data pad.¡± ¡°Alright I should go now to not be late I have weapon instruction.¡± ¡°I heard about that. Congratulations major.¡± ¡°What are you talking about?¡¯ ¡°The simulation you passed made you a major. That¡¯s a pretty high rank for someone still in the academy.¡± She smiled. ¡°It seems you have talents outside being a good fighter.¡± I needed to ask. ¡°Why have you been making me work so hard?¡± ¡°Nothing irks me more than wasted talent.¡± She smiled again and I left soon after. I got to my next class late. And the teacher noticed. ¡°your late lile.¡± ¡°sorry sir master Syrena is a very hard taskmaster.¡± ¡°Yes I got those feeling. Anyway today we are going to have our first team battle. I put you on a team with you and 2 other first year students.i will be pitting you against all the rest of the first years. Show them how a weapons specialist¡¯s gets it done. What do you say ehh?¡± The tale has been illicitly lifted; should you spot it on Amazon, report the violation. ¡°sir it seems I''m not feeling well. Could I go to the nurses office I feel I might have broken something during me and master syrena¡¯s spar. It seems rather serious.¡± ¡°well I guess if you¡¯re sick that¡¯s fine. Shame though I was offered by Syrena for you to be moved to her class for all of the morning till lunch. she said if you try to escape I should leave you to her. ¡± This guy could be sith related. I should add him to the list. ¡°sir I am feeling better already. Your voice must have magical properties sir.¡± ¡°doesn¡¯t it? I think so too. Now get out there.¡± He will pay for this dearly. Ever so dearly. I get to the battle game stage. And I take out my blastsword. I talk to my teammates. ¡°just stay here and I¡¯ll take care of everything.¡± I wait for the game to start 4..3..2..1..0
the terrain is a jungle. Destroy the enemy.
Holocron trees start popping up with steel beams. The terrain also became bumpy. Time to go. I search for a small group to take them out and take their provisions. I find a single person. I double check to make sure this is legit.fool¡¯s should stick together otherwise they could get picked off. I take him out using one shot to the nuts. Because this is a boring mission and I¡¯m under cover I have to stay away from them because it¡¯s the ¡°smart¡± thing to do. If I started blocking blaster shots with my arms they would think something is up. What a lousy mission. I take his grenade¡¯s and ammo. The fire draws other people so I leave for cover. They came and I lob a grenade out and they become easy targets. This process went on till I won. With 15 minutes of class to spare. I rest peacefully ignoring the stares until lunch. I got to the lunch room when I noticed I¡¯m being followed. It¡¯s that guy Grupen and his goonies. I wanted to have a little fun. So I go to the gym so no one will question what we are doing. When I enter the gym he comes out to play like this was his idea. idiot. I talk first. ¡°is stalking something they teach here Grupen.¡± His face turns angrier. ¡°I hate you for humiliating me. I hate you for hurting my brother. I hate you for the way you talk to royalty. We are not equals. You are not important. So I''m going to fix those things.¡± ¡°You are all equal in being weaker than me. ¡° Woah I think that sounded a bit to sithy. ¡°just curious who was your brother? ¡°he¡¯s your roommate.¡± ¡° Was he the fat one? No. I don¡¯t see the similarity. Was he the bald one?¡± His face turns more livid. I push him over the edge. ¡°I see so it is the bald one. You know the funny thing I don¡¯t even know his name. hmm maybe I should ask for people¡¯s names before I beat them up. Thank you Grupen this talk has made me a better person.¡± He draws a knife. He¡¯ll pay for that. He lunges. Slap the back of his hand to disarm him.then I punch him in the throat. He grabs it while he falls. I direct my stare to Grupen¡¯s groupies. ¡°You follow me now.¡± I stomp on him. ¡°Get it?¡± They all nod heavily. I leave the gym. And go fill my virtual stomach. Melee combat was just as arduous as unarmed combat. she made me run 40 times around the gym. And spar with her the rest of the time..Ashveela really wants me dead. so next time I¡¯m going to run super slow. Tactical combat I fell asleep again. What I was tired? And finally the night was here again. I went out to search the science teacher¡¯s room and the tactical combat teacher¡¯s class. Nothing and nada. These people are clean. Except for the tactics teacher. He¡¯s defiantly not clean. He and those group of students do something unspeakable. They poop on each others knees. There I said it. I¡¯m not going to let them so much as be 6 feet near me. We don¡¯t want another virual incident now do we. I go on my way back to my room. When I see a weird scene. It was the principal talking with a someone I don¡¯t recognize. The principal starts ¡°Is the experiment going well?¡± ¡°Yes. Well have a model ready in 2 days. How about the candidate?¡± ¡°No problem there. It seems we have found the perfect candidate. He will be very suitable for our model.¡± ¡°Really? So soon? ¡°Yes. Just have the model ready sooner.¡± What were they talking about? ¡°Alright. I¡¯ll get it done tomorrow.¡± They both leave. I start following the other man.¡­ --------------------------------------------------------------------- a bit boring and short i know but i couldn''t just jump to the good stuff. if you see any errors tell me and i will correct them. and as always thanks for reading