| Before you read:
This is my first fanfic which was loosely used as a rough draft for my FF Reaper which is already submited and has 6 chapters. (or more depending on how long it has been since I uploaded this) This FF, Imperator, has 6 chapters and I will not be making any more. My reasons for uploading this is so I could get feedback on my writing to further improve. It would be great if I could get input as to whether or not there is an improvement between the two FFs. The biggest aspect of my writing I was trying to improve was characterization, which I beleive I have improved on to some degree, although I¡¯m still not happy with it.
If you have read my FF Reaper then the begining of the first chapter will be very familiar, however, the story line changes dramatically from there on. This FF also has the character Nile which did not appear in Reaper, but will likely be getting his own FF called the Holy Archer. I already have half of the first chapter written. Any input on how to improve the storyline of The Holy Archer would be apprecieated, I plan to keep the plot similar to this FF, but with many changes to improve.
Side note: I did not know how to make table as of writing this, however, my current FFs do have tables in them. |