《Heaven Realm》 Heavenly Realm chapter 1 Color suddenly flooded my sense letting me see the cave. Tariq: Haha.. the time is approaching for us to return to the heavenly realm. i will show you how incompetent and powerless your gods are. Brave warriors of devil tribe charge! Tamir: Ruthless Devil Tribe! how dare you intrude! Guardians of the holly tribe! rise up and show your majestic powers. charge!......charge!....charge!....... Devine cabalry woosh... boom...arg...is this the end. Tamir: No..... this cant be happening ww will not bow down! start up ceusader magical weapon. wooshh... boom.....boom Tariq: Grr.....but i have prepared for such attacks.did you thinj that killing few soldiers would realy scare me. warriors attack! Tamir: mmph!.... how many more could there be? say your last prayer! prepare for doom Holy power of Heavenly realm.reveal your great power unto these wicked beings. (Star Fall) boom... boom.....boom... all most half of devil tribe being annihilated. Tariq: mmh..... it''s more powerful than i had expected Tamir.your not the only one who posses magical power! (Rise Dead) kings of Devil Tribe had withstood the power of your Gods for Millinium. grr.....hohoho..... You could be reading stolen content. Head to Royal Road for the genuine story. Tamir: arg.....could your forces be inadequate? Luxfere : Pontifex appologize for arriving late. i was held up recruiting renforcements. what is the current situation? Tamir: the power of Devil Tribe has strengthend . they seem to have endless supply of soldiers. Luxfere: I will show you the end of supply chain. Tamir:Heavenly brothers! lets display our power to those mobs once again attack!.. charge...... charge..... charge.....charge.... Tariq: today will be your final day warriors! rip those absurd thugs into million pieces. crack....crack...all over the place all place aee tearing apart.. Tamir: Tariq! what are you doing Tariq: nonesense don''t blame me for your tricks. arrgg......! no.....! Tamir: what the....! wah.....! Luxfere: nooo....! I hope you enjoy reading allso please post your suggestion so i can make more interesting chapter... dont hold back. Young chael chapter 2 Square Town of Iris(Earth) young boy blonde hair natural hair cut blue eyes his name Chael. young girl blonde long hair green eyes pale skin name Frey man age 30 scar on lef eye blonde hair long hair name Regret small fairy around 3 inches white long hair white skin white as snow name Runa Go away orphan. Chael: I''m not orphan i have my daddy and Runa. Yeah your daddy pick You up off the street. I''ve seen talking to himself. Thats insane get out off town crazy boy. pak.. Chael been hit on here face hey what are you doing there? the town young boy and girl run... i''ve been watching over you stop crying. boys aren''t supposed to cry. dont let them This story is posted elsewhere by the author. Help them out by reading the authentic version. pick on you like that stand up for yourself. im to weak. then you have to learn become stronger. father told me not to fight .he said violence is not solution. hmm...so you must be cry baby that lives in the mountains. im not crybaby! you''re still crying fine. lets go and meet your father. togethere...? yes im going to ask your father to train you. but there''s one consition. we''ll becom friends from now on okay. you we''ll become my-my friends. yes friends friend are people who care for each other. how about it? yeah! whats you''re name? my name Chael and you? call me Frey. its only short but the next chapter will.be longer.... Trainig what!!! magic circle has apperared chapter 3 Regret: Chael hurry up you will make me wait. Chael: sorry dad idid''nt know which weapon to take along. Regret: do you like that one. Chael: yup! its perfect. Regret: firstly show me what you been practicingyou need to be physically fit. Chael:huh test alkready. Regret: are you afraid. Chael: im allways ready. Regret: on the peak of nearby miuntains theres tombstone go and read what is wriiten on it. Chael: okay piece of cake Chael: is this the place that father mention? where is the tombstone? there it is. Runa: Chael walking back and forth is not much of a challenge. Chael: im gonna read now it said. Do not worry. Do not be anxious. Do not regret. Your choiece right away. Your heart is righteous Runa: do you recognize it? Chael: they are words of Lu Captain of the knight. he was heroic warrior who who defended the Aura kingdom from devil tribe. Runa:wow! he sounds like legendary figure. Chael: lets return home Regret: your back chael whose writing on the tombstone? Chael: it was written by Lu captain of the knights. Regret: Lu was an adventurer who become captain of the knights for strong realm. set your goals high and you too can became honorable person like him. Chael: become like Lu? Regret: Ecne,Morpiece,Daza who fought beside Lu during last war they were not warriors. their endless efforts and burning and burning passion. allowed them to save Andra kingdom and become heroes. Chael: can i become like them...? Regret: nothing is impossible in life. but Chael do you really want to learn how to fight? we live in peaceful world without monster and kings of the Devil Tribe. Chael: daddy you promise me! Regret: okay son i''ll keep my word. Chael: i want to be strong. Regret: your next task is to spar againts me Chael: wh- what? how can i beat you? it''s my first day. Regret: believe in your self come on give me your best shot Chael: if you insist! i''ll equip my practice claw here i come yahh.. what i cant even land single hit kapong... argg... my concious is fading i got on my back... damn. dad. few days later Chael: phew that was close. i''ve got to sneak out before some one sees me. Runa: Chael where are you sneaking off to? Chael: what a lovely surprize? Unauthorized tale usage: if you spot this story on Amazon, report the violation. Runa: hmmn.. your hiding some thing ? Chael: me? hiding? hahaha! but Runa.. please keep your voice down father will very angry if he finds out that i skipped morning training Runa: oh! mister Regret i have something to tell you! Chael is.... Chael: Runa please.... Runa: catch me if you can! haha.... Chael: you.. stop there i said stop !! grr... Regret: Chael ? are you outside? Chael: yikes dad''s awake ! im in trouble.. it''s all your fault Runa...! what will i tell to frey. Runa: oh..! you were to buy Frey''s birthday present im sorry i did''nt know. Chael: Rrr-Ruuuna! you. Regret: i have a lot thing todo today train by yourself this morning. Chael: really? yippee! Runa: huh! wait for me! Regret: skipping morning training he must really like Frey... time travel to fast. it seems like only yesterday that you were little boy. Frey: good morning Mr. Regret Regret: what''s bring you here so early in the morning? Chael''s not home he just left. Frey: Mister i came here to see runa not Chael blush.. umhh.. where is Runa? Regret: Runa went with Chael they should be back before lunch. Frey: oh.. then i''ll come back later today is the day... Regret: okay i''ll tell Chael that you dropped by. Frey: thanks... Rehret: how cute.. they could end ul being married. Middle Realm Secret Room Blackhood: flesh of Ladon from earth! rise and greet your new owner woosh.. woosh.. Epirity Paratique! woosh.. boom..has it failed ..? grr.... Iris Clip Earth Runa: Chael when will you finish? i''m bored Chael: chill out and relax fairybabe Frey only like flower which blossom in this region. don''t just hover in mid air come and help me. Runa: pfft! why do i have to help you find flowers for Frey? i''ll just hover here and look pretty! Chael: don''t be lije that i''ll buy you some of your favorite apple pies from the shop. Runa: really? apple pies? thats tempting offer. Chael: i''ll go to town tomorow and buy them promise! okay. Runa: in that case.. i''ll hekp but you''ve got to keep your promise. Chael: huh why is the Sky becoming dark? woosh.... woosh... Runa: Magic Circle? wahhhhhh........ find out on next chapter what happen ... to be Continue......
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