《Brother》 Chapter 1: Brother I had this idea in my head for a while now and since I was having writer''s block with my other story I decided to finally start writing this story down. Dont know where I''m going with this probably wont even finish well maybe depends. As always reviews,ratings,Recommendations,Corrections,Questions and comments are greatly appreciated ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 1: Brother ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Bryan and Edward were Identical twins. They were so identical that nobody could ever tell them apart, not even their own mother but there was one person who could always tell them apart, their older brother George Ramirez. ¡°How can you tell?¡± They¡¯d ask ¡°I simply observe,¡± said their brother ¡°The way you talk and walk it¡¯s all different you just have to look at the small details,¡± ¡°We don¡¯t get it,¡± they said in unison ¡°For example Bryan you constantly shake your left leg when you¡¯re sitting down and Edward you¡¯re always spacing out looking at your surroundings it¡¯s one of your guys¡¯s habits,¡± So the twins worked on hiding their habits but even then their brother could still tell them apart ¡°We''ve fixed our habits how can you still tell a difference?¡± they¡¯d ask ¡°hahahahah The shapes of your heads,¡± George answered So the twins grew their hair but even then George could still tell them apart The twins knew their brother was smart even though the twins worked hard to get straight A¡¯s their brother would get C¡¯s ¡°Why don¡¯t you try to work hard you¡¯re smarter than us,¡± ¡°Funny thing about being smart, you can get through life without doing any work,¡± If you stumble upon this narrative on Amazon, it''s taken without the author''s consent. Report it. Although they were born of different dads it made no difference for the brothers. Where George was dark the twins were fair. Their Mother was previously from Mexico but she had moved to The United States with the one year old George escaping from her abusive husband. Then she met James Ramirez a young Caucasian man who was a former marine Their mother got pregnant they got married and James adopted George. James was a serious man he never showed any display of affection to his family. He was a good father nonetheless. It was strange even though they weren''t blood related George was quiet and serious like his stepfather. Things were great, George was a lazy genius although he never did his homework or classwork he would always manage to score top marks on his tests. So the fun times continued until George¡¯s graduation. George had decided to become a U.S navy SEAL. It all went well for three years as the twins were now attending college but then came the bad news. Their brother had been declared missing in action after an operation. All they were told is that their brother had gone missing and he probably died a hero. The brother¡¯s knew their brother they were sure he probably would die a hero but something was fishy. Maybe you could call it intuition, gut feeling or blood calling blood but the twins weren''t going to give up. So they attended college and graduated with top marks. Bryan was recruited by the C.I.A and Edward joined the navy as a United states SEAL. Five years had passed since the disappearance of their brother. Working as a newly appointed agent of the CIA Bryan saw the CIA¡¯s most wanted and on that list was his brother George. He had grown his hair out and had different colored eyes but there was no mistaking that it was him. Chapter 2: Donkey Kong Author''s Note I doubt i''ll be updating this story much As always reviews,ratings,Recommendations,Corrections,Questions and comments are greatly appreciated --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 2: Donkey Kong --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Five years ago ¡°Our target is Dr. Heather Allender,¡± Said Captain Webb as he brought up an image of a beautiful Caucasian woman with green eyes and blonde hair on the projector Some of the men whistled and jeered George was sitting in the briefing room listening to his Captain on their new assignment ¡°This will be your standard search and seizure operation, any questions? ¡°Hey cap¡¯n isn''t she that child genius from a few years back?¡± asked one of the men ¡°Oh yeah she graduated Harvard like at the age of eight,¡± responded someone else in the group ¡°Yeah why is she our target?¡± ¡°We¡¯ll we got a tip that she was selling WMD¡¯s (Weapons of mass destruction) to a couple of terrorists,¡± ¡°How does someone go from child genius to weapon¡¯s dealer,¡± ¡°Who knows any other questions? No? Well then dismissed operation starts in thirty-two hours¡± said Captain Webb George stepped out of the briefing room and was on his way to the Mess hall when someone called out to him ¡°Can you believe that? A beauty like her man if she was with me she wouldn''t be a weapon¡¯s dealer,¡± Said a young black man two inches taller than George standing at 6¡¯2 ¡°Seriously David didn''t you read her profile she¡¯s only like sixteen,¡± said George ¡°Yeah well if she had a man things would be different,¡± responded David ¡°Honestly you¡¯re such a predator,¡± said a young white man with brown hair standing at 5¡¯8 ¡°Ah come on Kevin don¡¯t be so mean,¡± said David ¡°Whatever I¡¯m hungry let¡¯s go eat,¡± said Kevin ¡°Dude you eat more than any of us and your still so small,¡± said David George smiled he hadn''t lost any friends yet but he felt like something bad was coming. Granted he always felt this way before an assignment but he simply calmed himself and He¡¯d do what he always did Keep cool and follow his training Somewhere in the Middle East 2100 Hours George was sitting in the Blackhawk hovering over the landing point ¡°Ok boys comms check,¡± said Seargent Graham ¡°Predator,¡± ¡°Check,¡± said David ¡°Lunchbox,¡± ¡°Check,¡± said Kevin ¡°Aztec,¡± ¡°Check,¡± responded George ¡°Pretty boy,¡± ¡°Check,¡± Said a large man with scarring from acne ¡°Hippie,¡± ¡°Check,¡± Said one man with a laid back attitude ¡°Ok then remember boys we want her alive we also have marine force recon standing by as our QRF(Quick Reaction Force) in case shit hits the fan,¡± ¡°Let¡¯s go go go go!¡± screamed the sergeant George was the first to rappel down; he checked his gear a third time while everyone came down George Looked down the scope of his M4A1 checking his surroundings They were behind a mountain and it¡¯d take them an hour long hike to get to the facility where the weapons deal was going down. ¡°Pretty boy take point,¡± commanded the sergeant The men walked for over an hour until they reached the facility ¡°Team one is in position,¡± said Sergeant Graham in to his radio ¡°Roger,¡± ¡°This is Stinky, Team two is also in Position, Ready when you guys are¡± said a voice over the radio belonging to Corporal James Davis call-sign Stinky ¡°Predator you¡¯re on overwatch,¡± said the sergeant Roger,¡± ¡°Ok everyone stack up,¡± The men lined up on the side of the facility¡¯s wall ¡°Pretty set up the charge,¡± Pretty boy set up the C-4 to breach the facility ¡°Ready,¡± ¡°On my mark,¡± 3¡­.2¡­.1 ¡°Breach!¡± The explosives went off leaving a small ringing in George¡¯s ears as he entered through the door behind Kevin There were several surprised enemies inside that is until bullets ended their lives before they could figure out that The U.S military had come knocking It was over in less than a minute ¡°Stinky how is it on your side?¡± asked Graham into the radio ¡°Were all right but something smells fishy here ,¡± answered Stinky over the radio ¡°Sure it aint you?¡± muttered Lunchbox ¡°Keep it quiet,¡± instructed Graham ¡°Stinky what¡¯s wrong?¡± asked Graham ¡°Well I thought we¡¯d be facing a bunch of Osama bin Laden¡¯s but all these dead guys look like Putins to me,¡± ¡°Hippie check the bodies,¡± Hippie approached one of the corpses and removed the mask. What they found was a young causian male. Hippie then checked all the dead bodies ¡°Sarge none of these guys look middle eastern,¡± said hippie ¡°Well there¡¯s no point in worrying about their nationalities let¡¯s continue,¡± If you stumble upon this tale on Amazon, it''s taken without the author''s consent. Report it.The team continued walking deeper into the facility but they found no opposition. ¡°Team two you guys find anybody?¡± asked Graham ¡°Negative we''ve got zero contacts,¡± responded Stinky The men continued walking deeper into the facility until they entered a room full of tubes and cylynders ¡°What¡¯s all this?¡± asked pretty boy ¡°Dunno¡± said Hippie ¡°Guys there are things inside,¡± said Lunchbox George walked up to the closest tube and upon closer inspection noticed a blob of tissue floating inside the tube. George had seen this somewhere but he couldn''t figure out what it was then it clicked ¡°Guys aren''t these fetuses?¡± asked George bewildered ¡°Like developing babies?¡± asked pretty boy ¡°No shit ,¡± said lunchbox As the men were wondering why there were breeding babies radio traffic from team two ¡°Sarge multiple contacts, Guh It¡¯s fuckin Donkey Kong!¡± the radio then went quiet ¡°Stinky Stinky what¡¯s wrong? Respond!¡± said Sarge over the radio As the sergeant was going to contact command the doors to the room were brutally opened by a large man with the body shape of an ape wearing full-body armor and carrying a large machine gun The ape-like man unleashed fire upon the Navy Seals. Hippie was hit in the knee and the Seals immediately took cover behind the large tubes. ¡°Take him down!!!!¡± screamed the sergeant as he unleashed his own firepower on to the opposing man The team unleashed hell upon the full bodied enemy but none of the small arms fire seemed to even remotely hurt the man ¡°Fucking juggernaut!¡± screamed Lunchbox Pretty boy shot his grenade launcher and hit the man straight in the chest ¡°Hold your fire!!¡± screamed Sarge The man had finally been killed after taking fire for several seconds As the men reloaded their weapons two more ape like enemies entered the room ¡°Light em up!!!!¡± But like the last enemy these ones were unaffected by the continuous fire that the Seals were pumping out ¡°Frag out!¡± screamed Hippie as he threw a grenade between the two large men but rather than instantly killing them the two bulky men look concussed ¡°There armor is too thick use your grenades!!¡± screamed Sarge The men threw their grenades and managed to take down the two men ¡°Hippie you ok?¡± screamed predator ¡°Yeah they got my knee but I¡¯m fine,¡± said Hippie as he struggled to sit up ¡°Predator take Hippie and go back outside and contact command, I¡¯m thinking the enemy activated jammers in here,¡± Commanded Sergeant Graham ¡°What about you guys?¡± asked hippie ¡°We got a mission to do and we have to meet up with team two<¡± said Sarge ¡°We¡¯ll be waiting in the copter,¡± said predator as he picked up hippie ¡°Yeah we¡¯ll be their¡± said lunchbox ¡°OK then let¡¯s go¡± said Sarge ¡°Lunchbox take point,¡± The Seals walked deeper into the facility As lunchbox entered a corner he was brought down by machine gun fire from point blank range Lunchbox died instantly Pretty boy grabbed onto the large man who had just killed Lunchbox Pretty boy was a big guy who could stand toe to toe with the biggest linebackers Pretty boy managed to wrestle away the mask from the man. What was underneath was an ugly man with apelike features pretty boy was surprised for a second but that second cost him his life as the ape-like man snapped Pretty boy¡¯s neck ¡°AAAHHHHH!!!!!¡±Sergeant graham as he used his Benelli M4 to blast several bullets into the man¡¯s face at point blank range The ape-man died after the second shot ¡°Fuck,¡± ¡°Sarge what do we do?¡± asked George as he checked on the bodies of his teammates ¡°We,¡± Sergeant Graham was interrupted as another ape-man came out of the opposing door The sergeant and George Immediately went for cover as the Ape-man fired his machine gun but as The sergeant ducked for cover a bullet went through his neck George noticed his sergeant bleeding out. In a rage he unleashed all his ammo unto the ape man. George quickly ran out of ammo. They weren''t expecting much of a firefight on this operation. George didn''t know what to do. The ape-man had run out of bullets and was reloading. George knew this was his chance and with nothing but his knife and a frag grenade he rushed towards the Ape-man ¡°You Donkey Kong looking Motherfucker!¡± screamed George as he stabbed his knife into the Ape-man The ape-man punched George in the gut robbing him of his breath.George however manged to grab the Ape in a choke hold. The ape screamed but as he opened his mouth George threw the grenade in to it¡¯s mouth The grenade went off and instantly killed the ape-man George was surprisingly still clinging on to life as the ape¡¯s muscle mass had protected George from the full brunt of the explosive power of the grenade George was lying on the ground fighting the urge to close his eyes as he heard voices ¡°Wait don¡¯t kill him,¡± said a young seductive voice "He seems interesting," George turned hid head and his eyes met one of the most beautiful girls he had ever met she was like a goddess The picture from the briefing was over four years old. George gave into the darkness