《Eternal Horizon》
Prologue
The high level user forces a thousand strong had been sent to defeat a threat they thought it would be easy they were wrong...
It was an annihilation there users were slain left and right the user that was the main driving force behind the forming of this army stood alone whether it was by design or cruel luck it is unknown his force decimated culprit the user could not run fear had clutched him in an icy grip he was on his knee his legs had turned to jello waves of dark circled around them like hungry sharks and they were moving closer then only thing the user could say was "what are you" the darkness had draw in and began crawling up his leg then a little blue box appeared in-front of him with just one work
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and that was the last thing he saw as darkness engulfed him.....
chapter 1 the beginning part 1
this is a bit of a sad so you''ve been warned
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drake had not had an easy life he never knew who his farther was apparently according to his mother he ram off with some hussy that why they moved to England from america now his mother could not hold a job and was alcoholic so drake had to take on multiple part time jobs some illegal to keep a roof over there heads now drake never complained he loved his mother and deep down he knew she loved him but then thing came to a head when she started date a new guy he was a druggy and got her hooked on to crack now drake had tried many times to get his mother to leave him but it never worked worst yet the more he tried the more violent his mother got bruises all over his body but he hid these well at school.
one day after coming home from school he saw smoke coming out the front window of his house he ran it the house which had turned into an inferno he ran thought the flames trying to find his mother he located her in the kitchen giggling hysterically "mom what are you doing we need to get out of he now" drake cried franticly knowing this place might fall apart at any moment his mother giggled "look at all the pretty colours hahahaha!!!" drake realised his mother was high on drugs and was not thinking straight so he tried to grab her arm so he could drag her out but she went mad hitting him forcing him to let go she then grabbed a knife handle that was slightly sticking out of a roaring flame it was red hot she wave it about and as drake tried to get her to calm down she slashed at his throat it sizzled as it cut thought his flesh he gasped as his had went to his throat the pain as he gasped the last work he could weez out was "wwhhyy" he then collapsed the flames around him roaring he heard a crack from above drake start to crawl away from the kitchen as the celling collapsed crushing his mother who was still giggling madly drake heard fire trucks pull up in front of his house no doubt a neighbour had called them the firemen ran in and spotted drake on the floor the last thing drake saw before he passed out from the smoke was the fireman had reaching towards him.......
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drake woke up in hospital his neck bandaged up and a nurse walked in and spotted he was awake and ran out to fetch the doctor after a wile the doctor walked in and asked "hi how you doing drake" drake to say he was fine but his throat hurt but what came out was "ga ga guu" this shocked drake why could he not talk. the doctor sighed and said "we thought this would happen drake do you remember what happened in the fire" drake nodded how could he not forget "good well that cut as it happened the heat of what ever cut you Cauterizing as it cut essentially making repair of your vocal cords impossible we sorry but there''s nothing we can do" this shocked drake will he never be able to speak again.
2 weeks later
drake was currently attending the reading of the will of his mother the police had interviewed him asking what happened he told then about returning home and what happened with his mother they found her boyfriend dead in the fire an overdose killed him before the fire got to him. the lawyer entered with a letter and opened and began to read it it was the basic of sound mind and body saying she had left every thing to her son this did not surprise drake he was her only family but what surprised drake was what happened near the end of the will ready " now to my son drake i never told you who your farther was as i did not want anything to do with him but as i am now gone you need someone to look after you his name was roger Cain he was working for a company called midnight incorporated if you want to contact him start there now i know ive never been a good mother you had to work just to keep a roof over a heads but i always loved you" that was the end of the will drake vaguely recognised the name of the company it was a well know for making online video games he was currently staying with a neighbour he had found a phone number for the company and had the neighbour call the company "hello midnight incorporated how may we help you".
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will carry in chapter 2 hope you enjoy and if you spot any spelling mistake please point them out.
mc character description
realised i forgot to describe what my mc looks like so here it is
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name: drake
body build : has the build of a boxer (this will be touched on later)
hight: 5 foot 10
hair : blond and cut short
If you spot this tale on Amazon, know that it has been stolen. Report the violation.eyes: blue and has a small scar across his right eye
hands: long slender fingers but rough hands due to manual work
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part 2 will be done shortly them will get into vr world at the start of chapter 3
chapter 2 the beginning part 2
... "this is midnight incorporated how may we help you" said the receptionist "yes do you have a roger cain working for you" "yes hold on a moment " the receptionist checked and found he was the head of design "yes we do but may i ask why you wish to know" this was not a normal question and this could lead to problems if she dident find out the voice over the phone said "well im currently looking after my neighbours son and she past away god rest her soul but in her will she state that mister roger Cain was the boys farther so im calling to see if he remember her to see if he really is his farther" after hearing this the receptionist is was tearing at the eyes a sucker for a sob story she called the line to roger cain''s lab.
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Roger was in his lab adding some extra code to be incorporated into the new game they were developing his eye blood shot and red the best way to discrible him was tall and slim with blond hair stretching down to his shoulders but at the current moment it was tied up in a ponytail and was getting a rough beard a sigh he hadn''t shaved in the last two weeks he had just taking a break and looked round his lab to the corner with his makeshift bed he hadent left his lab for the last two weeks and his thought for no reason drifted back to the past the that girl and that wonderful week before she dispereard he always wondered what happened to her did she ever get married just then the phone rang he picked it up "hello" he wondered why he was being called in the main lab "hello mister cain you have a call from England" he thought about it he dident know anyone from England "put them thought" thinking well will see what they want "hello is the roger cain" a woman voice came across the phone "yes im roger cain" "good can i ask do remember a girl called molly lane " memory''s came flooding back strange he was thinking strange i was thinking of her not just moments ago "y yes i do" he stammered "im said to say she pass away two weeks ago " a flood a sadness hit him as he heard this news to be unable to meet the girl again "but she has a son and in her will she says your his farther" and with that roger went blank his brain went into overdrive but one word just reapted "c c can i talk to him" worried about what he will say to his son "im sorry" said the woman over the phone "but due to an accident he is unable to talk his vocal cord so he will never be able to talk again" roger was shocked then the fire of determination lit its self within him "can you tell me your address im going to pick up my son" one he got the address he went to the ceo a long time friend of him and says "i need two weeks off " mick godly knows roger he''s never know him to take time off and says "why do you want time off " and roger replies "if just found out ive got a son" mick stand up in shock "WHAT!!" roger recounted the tail after mike heard it he said "fine take my jet a boy needs his father" and with that roger went to the airport the jet fulled and took off for england.
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drake had packed what things were left after the fire and was waiting for his farther thankfully his passport survived he then heard a knock on the door and opened it to see a man with long blond hair and slighty reddened eyes he knew this was his farther and started to tear up so did his farther and they hugged it and with that they flew back to america
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1 week later
drake had settled into his knew home it was a big apartment close to the midnight incorporated and was practising with a wrist mounted voice box it works simply typing in what he wanted to say and it would say it in a voice similar to Steven hawking and his dad was talking to him about there new game they were developing now as they were talking roger got a idea"hay son do you want to play the game" drake thought about it and though it would be fun to play he nodded his farther happy and said "well in about a mouth will be running the beta tests so would you like to take part" drake nodded happily in his old life he would have no times for games he would have to budget and work but now he can enjoy his youth "ok son as a special treat ill let you design a concept for a class and when you play you can have that class thought i can only give the concept to the AI what it will do to the class i don''t know but to make it fair you can make the class over powered" drake thought about this he spent a week drain storming but could not think of anything he then decide to surf the web and came across Japanese anime and enjoyed it particularly one anime called Nanatsu no Taizai and thought that when the one character when berserker that it was super cool then *bing* the idea hit him he had come up with the concept her wrote down his ideas and thoughts and gave it to his farther before he went back to work happy he had come up with an idea now he needed to wait for fateful day.
two weeks later
his pod had been installed in his room once it was sent up he hop in to log on
| welcome to Eternal Horizon you scan reviles you do not have an account do you wish to create one
yes/no
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drake thought yes thankfully this pod was a custom job that used his thoughts instead of voice commands
| welcome to Eternal Horizon |
| due to your pod being a custom package you have been given a class |
| dark abyss weaver class acquired |
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next chapter find out the detail of this new class now the real adventer begins
chapter 3 new family member and new world
** = characters thoughts
"" = character speech
author:- was trying to add tables but had some trouble will add proper tables at a later date also if ive missed anything out from the temp tables ive put please tell me
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drake opened his eyes and saw a big white room and then heard a voice behind him say "hello big brother" he turned around and found him self in front of a seven year old girl wearing a white one piece dress drake went to type on his wrist mount talker (will refer to it as WMT from now on) but found it wasn''t there he then tried to talk thinking he could talk as this was virtual reality but could not the girl then said "sorry big brother but papa said you should not talk as it would confuse your senses but just think what you want to say and it should appear" drake tries it and the words appear in a little blue box "yay you did it" said the little girl clapping her hands | who are you and why call me brother |
"arr that''s easy Roger Cain is my creator and your his son so that makes me your sister and my names gaia I run the game but even thought your my brother I cant do you any favours" but.... | gaia has been added to your friends list |
"you can still talk to me if you have some questions but I can''t give out big secrets now then lets start by designing your character now your going to be half human and half demon so if anyone from the church finds out your in big doo doo but don''t worry you get some cool extras now then" she snapped her fingers and a two copy''s of drake appeared in front of him one an identical copy of himself the over with pitch black hair and black tattoos moving across his body as if they were alive "now here is how you will look normally and how you look when you activate your class powers" said gaia explain why there were two of him "now when you use your powers you hair will turn black so that the only thing you cant change the rest you can thought I advise you start the same hight and body shape so you can better get used to moving about" drake thought about it then made the changes in his normal form he maid his hair longer and made it pure white after doing this his change for hair became longer as well. "hehe you look cool big brother" gaia said giggling drake blushed as he had never been called cool before "now tell me what your going to be calling yourself in game" drake had thought about this beforehand had chosen a name that fitted his character perfectly then name of the Greek good of darkness "ok now then big brother there only one place I can send you as this is the beta run so enjoy your self but what ever you do do not activate your class powers in town as it will cause problems now off you go " a flash of light appeared blinding dra.. endues and when he opened his he was in a medieval like town he looked down and found he was in plain cloth drake thought *hmm what to do first* suddenly a blue box appeared in front of him and it said
| welcome traveller as this is the beta the 24 hour log out has been wavered to allow you to enjoy yourself also the one month seal has been wavered so you can go out and hunt thought training in town is advised before going out to fight |
*hmm* thought Erebus I need to find a quite spot to look at my stats so he walked about spotting a quite ally when he thought he was alone he thought *status window*
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class dark abyss weaver
fame 0
race:- half human half ?????????
health 5000/5000
mana 6000/6000
stammer 5000/5000
dark energy 100/100
stg 50
vit 50
int 60
wis 60
agi 50
luck 50
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elemental resit
darkness 150%
light -50%
air-0%
fire -0%
water -0%
earth-0%
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due to class +50 to all stats
Unauthorized duplication: this tale has been taken without consent. Report sightings.due to half demon side +10 to int and wis
50% dark affinity due to half demon
100% dark affinity due to class
due to have broken past 100% for dark affinity any dark affinity type attacks will be absorbed and will heal equal to 50% of attack power
new stat added dark energy
able to learn three over classes to grand master but all three class have to be ever rare,secret,hidden class no normal classes can be added and any class added will suffer -25% to experience gain also any skills not related to your classes will suffer -50% on experience gain
due to being half human light weakness is taken down to -50%
50% increase in stats when in darked areas
25% increase in stats when transformed
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hmm he thought ''im getting close to a cheat im the strongest level 1 plus I can lean over class but here but what skills do I have'' *skill window*
| dark manipulation level:1 novice(passive)
allows control of dark energy
+ 100 dark points every level
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| dark form level:max (activate)
transforms to allow use of dark energy
if activated in front of church member church will actively hunt you down
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| dark eyes level:max (passive)
allows perfect vision in the dark
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| imfermay eater level 1 (passive)
if you kill a opponent with imfermay there imfermay is transformed to dark point
1000 imfamery = 1 dark points
transfer rate will improve with the more imfermus opponents you kill and level up
current infamery eaten (0/1000)
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*hmm* he thought *i have some useful skills but I need to practice them some were quite but I cant use the one as the only applies to players but I can tests the limits of my transformation * and with that he started to leave town and walk into the forest but what he didn''t hear were peoples whispers behind him "what a noob walking into the forest there probably level 15 monsters in there no way a level one can survive".
drake encountered his first monster when he was walking thought a shaded patch when he heard a low audible grow behind him he turned to see a big wolfs behind him and saw it was level 15 *oh hell on fire water* he then tried to equip his beginner dagger for some protection but couldn''t then a message appeared | due to your class you can not equip any weapons at all and even if you gain a class that allows the use of weapons you main class will cancel use of weapons |
when drake read this one word coursed thought his mind now Erebus really swears but soon little blue screens were popping up all around him with just one word on.....
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hope you enjoyed this chapter please do give me your thoughts and suggestion if you think I can improve tell me
now find out how he deals with the wolf in the next chapter.....