《Magune: Let The Magnet Rise》 Prologue- Birth Prologue: Hello everyone my name is Derrick Green Also known by the infamous name of (Toobadbro the God of Nipples.) I know I have been on this site royal road for a while but I have not graced you with a story as of yet I write a lot of stories in my mind daily and this specific one just came to me. I think it is time for me to bless my fellow commenters and authors with a unique story of my own which I can say I might post every week starting from today and it won¡¯t be like one of them short like fanfics I read every day I will try and give you the master piece you all deserve. I will give you a short Preview of what you might want to read over the coming weeks that I will be posting chapters. I will give you one paragraph of the snippet of story I am going to be dishing out every week for you. But before that I will give you a few ideas to bounce off that may peak your interest. ? First the character will be named (¡°Rai Magune¡±) ? Second I will name off all of the elements in the story, and yes it is filled to the brim with magic. There will be Fire element, Water element, Earth element, Wind element, Thunder Element, Darkness element, and the infamous light element. ? The Planet will be called Valor it has been around for about 200 million years. ? For the Prefix of the story there will be war alright and it won¡¯t be the stupid crap I keep reading where ultimately light is not bad but darkness is good and that demons are blood thirsty monsters no there will be none of that for my story it going to be the other way around well I¡¯ll let you see that when it happens cant spoil anymore of the story. Now on to the prologue It was just another ordinary day on the planet of Valor there are wars going all across the planet and guess what our little bundle of sun shine is being born today. In the slums on the out skirts of the capital city of Alveron, two parents who are to poor to afford going to the capital city hospital are awaiting their little baby to be born. Before we go into details of the pregnancy I have a need to tell you that were the family currently lives is which is in the alveron kingdom but the thing is that it is not the usual bundle of good plains and grasslands with lakes this city is a very tropical continental kingdom which on the planet on valor is very close to the equator. Now let¡¯s go back to the real story in a few minutes a baby is about to be born. Jin: please be a boy, please be a boy Railin: omg if you don¡¯t shut the fuck up and hold my hand right now I¡¯ll cut off your nutts, Andy and Frank¡­¡­. Jin: he turns pale in the face and quickly rushes off his chair so he could get closer to hold her hand. ¡°With the hand of quickness we hear a crunch sound come right after getting his hand grabbed. Jin screams at the top of his lungs while lying on the ground one hand in the air all helpless in the vivid darkness of the shed like shack house a bright light enters the room as the local doctor or what you might call the jack of all trades in the outskirts walks in to see jin on the floor with a purple hand while railin is in pain trying to push the baby out. He pulls out his magic gloves and puts his hands were the baby head is supposed to come out. ( the jack of all trades name is Ben smallpox let¡¯s just go with Ben) Support the creativity of authors by visiting Royal Road for this novel and more.Ben: just a few more second railin I can see his head just keep pushing as hard as you can. As his head comes out everyone in the room heard a plum noise the moment his head came out of her (you know what) then out of nowhere like a bullet made of thunder the newborn known Rai shot out of his mother and hit the doctor in his chest knocking him out. As Ben falls down, he quickly as he loses consciousness he grabs the baby before he falls and lands on his back this all happened in .1 seconds. After a few more heavy sighs of satisfaction from the mother, she ask jin if she could see her bundle of sun shine then out of nowhere the baby lets out a mind breaking shriek that encompasses the whole room too these new parents it sounded like a very happy and healthy baby. He tries to pick him up and as he does the baby clings on to the father as (Patatattta) sound reverberates in the room. Jin just stands there like he felt a bit of magic come off his new born son but he quickly disregarded it as you have to be ten too consciously do magic on the first level. As he extends the baby towards his loving mother she lets out a small giggle at how cute her little sunshine is. Then she says out loud I think his name should be Rai then across from her jin also says hmmmm Rai has a nice ring to it. When little Rai begins to cry this signifies in Railins head her maternal instincts that her little rai was hungry for his first sip of mommies milk. She quickly raised up as side of her shirt and tried to feed rai but his head would not go directly toward the nipple so after a few minutes of fighting it she started using inklings of her real strength this may not be known yet but Railin is an X adventurer who is living on the down low and so is Jin. As soon the nipple got close to rai¡¯s mouth it made the same Patatata sound he did early with his dad and she felt a zip and rai was firmly planted on her nipple. Author notes: Spoiler Alert: I¡¯ll just say this now Rai will only have one magic from the start to end of the series, it¡¯s just that when he uses his only magic it won¡¯t be classified under the other magic classes it will be something he has too think for himself. I will call them skills because that¡¯s all it will be. He will have to be creative to make better use of his only power, there wont be body strengthening other than the casual hardcore rebuild your body type work outs that will help him build his strength I think body hardening, or any kinda strength amplifier is just as damn cheat and that include (Ki, Chi, and any fake ass martial arts you people seem to put in for the fuck of it I hate looking at characters who are born knowing how to use every move in the book with a couple uses of training they do so that will not contribute.) Ill confirm this myself no matter what girl I throw in he will make them fall for him but it will not be a harem he will learn to grow and understand love from all different forms of life so if you get attached to one just know he might end up with her or he might leave her in the dust. Since its going to take me awhile to write chapters because of my typing speed ill give a spoiler on his magic type, I call it (Magnet Rise). Chapter: 2- the first pull/push CHAPTER 2: Author notes: I will quickly answer a couple of questions before I start the second chapter in this novel. First is going to be the point in which I explain the childhood of the main character Rai, he will not be getting the over powered baby thing he will just be hella smart to his surroundings while growing up as you can see with the first chapter he is not a reincarnated individual. Which in long run means that he will not have many instances when he gets too talk fluently before the age of 2. He might start to get smarter by listening to his parents talk but he wont be actually able to say anything so that he can talk to his parents. That is all so for this chapter and chapter three it will go pretty fast but they will go at a constant pace of him growing up. Now that I explained that lets get on with our story. We left of on our little guy sucking on his very beautiful mother Nectar/Milk of life. As the baby nods his head off into dream land his mother Railin decides that she herself is tired from the entire ordeal so she herself decided to go to sleep since its rapidly becoming night time. But before she finally nods herself off to dream land she tells jin to take ben to his house across the village. After getting up from the chair and picking up Ben, Jin goes and exits the house. As hes walking along the dirt path filled with flowers and weeds he starts to mumble to himself as he say what a beautiful baby boy I have. He looks just like his mother but with two different hair colors while he himself has brownish orange his wife has a black tinted bluish hair but the weird thing is his is orange and black with tints of blue at the very tips of his hair. That is so weird¡­¡­looking, well hes my son he will grow to be a handsome young man when he is older. As I was walking along the dirt path for a few more minutes Ben had woken up wondering why I was carrying him on my shoulder like a damsel in distress. But really shook him up was that a (A) class hunter was knocked out by a child be born. But the strangest thing he felt was when the child actually hit him he felt a bit of anger the moment the child touched him. But what he really cant get around is that he is known for being very calm in any situation no matter what job he does so what could have made him feel a bit of anger against the little bundle of orange sunshine that knocked him unconscious. He will have to look into this the moment he turns five so that they can test his Magic power and affinity. They have been walking for about ten minutes more before they got a large shack like house with two big bedrooms, kitchen, living room, study and a large garden. When Ben opened the door what he was faced with was a giant woman about six feet tall leaning on the interior wall of the house. After a few seconds went by he tried to think of an excuse for why he could not get home on time before jin stepped up and said it was his families fault. As she was about to open her mouth Agatha Smallpox, waited for a moment because for no goddam reason she really wanted to yell at Ben since he didn¡¯t come home early she felt a bit lonely with their new born which was sleeping head first in the wooden crib right smack in the living room. But the thing is since the baby was crying so much during she couldn¡¯t do none of the chores around the house she would usually do, but ben had promised hell be doing them today after he did a job for a friend down the road. Lets just hop right threw this situation since he was late he apologized and apologized to his wife for being late and leaving her alone by herself for the whole day. Then Ben told Jin he can head home and that he will be over with his wife so they all can see the new baby boy even though he helped with the pregnancy he did not get to see the boy other than the swirls of orange that hit him in his chest. As jin gets home he quickly takes off his cotton fur jacket and shirt before he tries to hop in his bead to get some shut eye. If you come across this story on Amazon, it''s taken without permission from the author. Report it.But the moment he tries to hop in bed he is pushed out by an unknown force¡­¡­.. But before he can try to jump in again he feels the force field of the sorts let up and he gets in the bed after his unusual battle with trying to get some shut eye. Then he nods his head too sleep as him his baby boy and wife sleep In dream land. After waking up literally four hours later to a crying baby in the middle of the night Railin jukes up and tries to see what¡¯s wrong with the baby but she suddenly feels a jolt that makes her spine shiver as she tries to find out what¡¯s wrong with little Rai. What she find out is that he just made a poopy¡­.. As she begins to find another cloth prepared by her throughout the pregnancy to clean up his little droppings of life she cleans him till he is dry after soaking the cloth in water and washing his cute little butt. After she cleans Rai she feels another jolt in her head from out of nowhere but what she didn¡¯t know was that for the first time Rai powers have actually started running amok. Then for the first time since he was born rai has just started thinking. And the first word he thought of in his head was mommy? I call this power ¡°Magnetic Bridge¡±( magnetic bridge is a special skill in which when he is close to a person he loves un conditionally he will be able to bridge a magnetic pull on certain memories and on other educational facts he can learn threw the other person too himself if you get what I mean. To his mother when she felt that jolt of pain he was pulling on a memory of he being happy learning in a certain academy I won¡¯t mention for a while.) By no means will he be able to leach information all the time about his surroundings until he gets control over it he will keep gaining information no matter what it is and how it¡¯s affecting him. After learning this memory the character just learned how to think and a few words from this world¡¯s vocabulary he won¡¯t be able to speak it without practice but you get my drift. Now let¡¯s skip ahead one year in the future, During this one year time skip while he was always near his mother in their shack house and while his dad was out making money for the house hold while they were in the house he leached a lot of information from his mother and surroundings including his uncle down the block or we can call him Uncle Ben lmao(Spiderman reference). During this time he met a lot with the smallpox¡¯s and with their own son Gin who is Rai¡¯s future best friend but they don¡¯t know that yet. Also during this time rai has learned a few small words to say after fixing his tongue many times in practice his first word was Mommy his second was Daddy. And after that he learned many other 4-6 letter words.
Authors notes: Ill end chapter two about here¡­.. and you can wait next Wednesday for another chapter itll be longer explaining a lot of Rai and Gins adventures in a four by four meter dungeon they call a crib. Did you like the chapter was it long enough did it get you hooked for some old fashion training and learning. I hope to turn I can turn this into a battle drama adventure with romance in towards the end as Rai learns his polar opposite get it lol. That¡¯s a big hint (my new readers you may be thinking wow what was that how did that happen omg you lied you said he wouldn¡¯t be a OP super powered baby) but no I did say he will be a genius in the first part of the chapter. What I mean by that is I said before he will be very attuned to what he can from his surroundings. His power is called ¡°Let The Magnet Rise¡± which gives him all power over magnetism every form of it and what he just used was a skill he wont know how to really use till he is a bit older. bye
chapter 3- First Nature pull/ info head ache Chapter 3: It was like any other day with Rai¡¯s new best friend Gin. Since the two best friends are only around the age of one years old they both can barely lift their head up because of their disproportionate baby bodies. As they have started growing up Gin has also been showing signs of him gaining little to no intelligence based on him being around Rai so Much during their play dates or what you might call it. But to these little guys being together isn¡¯t just so random child¡¯s games these guys have been growing a lot faster since they have finally been told a story about a hero. Now that they know the new fad in their mind is to keep playing hero and companions it was one time that Gin wanted to be the demon king while Rai wanted to be the hero that bridges the gap between the humans and the demons. During this time we have been going through the same war style pattern in every original fanfic novel but the way I want it to put is that. The demons always are portrayed in hero novels as the main antagonist to the plot of peace but what if it was the fanatic individuals of the church promoting their gods worth on the unsuspecting kingdom of humans. During the old times it was said for a fact that demons were evil because of their robust appearances with horns red scary eyes all black skin and sometimes being over seven feet tall on a regular. So basically what the citizens of alveron do not know is that their hundred thousand year war is based on discrimination and now is just getting out of hand. Let¡¯s get back to our little hero and companion as they finish their little play on the war of yesterday. It¡¯s happened many times since they can barely walk these two are basically scurrying across the room of Gins house as they are getting skin burns from scurrying on the floor. They ram each other from the fantastic battle they just had because their negotiations based on who get the last piece of berry pie failed threw. Threw out the house all you can hear it is mine rai!!! No it is mine Gin, said rai!!! Then they both fall down a inch away from each other dead tired as they both get scooped up by their parents then as they are about to go to sleep. Their mothers both suggest why you guys don¡¯t split it down the middle. Then as they both nod off to sleep they both start to go off in dream land. One thing I think I should explain is the reason why Gin is as smart are even a little but smarter than Rai. This is the effect of Rai¡¯s ¡°Magnetic Bridge¡± another effect is that before Rai met Gin a couple months ago both of them did not like each other at first. Rai hated Gin because he always cries all the time when he didn¡¯t get too drink his mother¡¯s milk so whenever they were together they played by themselves on the other sides of the crib. But what you didn¡¯t know was that Gin had a total personality change from being a mommies boy to being a little more independent at the tinder age of 1 which set his mother off because he use to always want to play with and be only around her. During their second year of birth Rai followed around gin almost everywhere when they were together except when they needed to get their body wiped clean of the mister dirty. The second year of their birth was a very bad year For Rai he was suffering from constant headaches of information his baby mind could not remember. He started to have the feelings of wear when he quickly lifted his head up after sleeping for a while he would see a very thin like lines all over the room for a milli-second but it will quickly disappear. During these instances he would be bombarded with sudden headaches as he begin to walk around his room what he thought was pretty rainbow lines across his room was actually his planets magnetic lines that are not visible to the naked eye. Stolen from its original source, this story is not meant to be on Amazon; report any sightings.The skill will be called Magnetic vision: (also known as Axle eyes): Which allows a user to be able to see the magnetic outline of and area on top of the topography on the current area. It allows the Rai too see wear his powers are most affected and can be but in effect. Being exposed to looking at magnetic out lines of the planet makes the user susceptible to his eyes not working for a few hours. Pov Change: During the two years of children rearing, the mothers of the two bundles of joy were talking every day they were together with the kids. Every now and then they would let one another watched the other kid at their house. Literally every week they had a switch in environment so the children but mainly themselves would not get bored. Let¡¯s not forget that even if I did not mention it the parents lived in the outskirts of a very abundant but poor village. They had an over product of fruits and vegetables but there was a scarcity of meat in the village mainly because there weren¡¯t any real herbivores within the range of the village when the children were born. But when Rai was born he had another one of his secret magnetic abilities activate. Idk if it was a sudden indication that all he ate was fruits and vegetable but he didn¡¯t really have any iron in his body. As a safe measure over time when he began to wean of his mother nipple. He was able to get a solid intake of fruits and vegetables since he was barely able to chew with his two new front teeth. Nature sounds- but in the village a lone babies stomach is making a zooms zwoom humming noise barely audible to the human ear. (THINK OF IT AS Rai¡¯s body as a big animal whistle..zzzzzzz) Over a period of a year a gradual amount of herbivores and omnivores started to migrate to the forest outskirts of the village. ******* Over the course of the year the village deemed it was necessary because if the frequent animal extortions they have been bringing a lot of animal meat this year. It also back fired as the abundance of animals meant it was more needed Security to protect the village if any animals or monsters start to encroach on their human settlement. So they erected a fifteen foot wall of earth two meters thick to keep themselves protected. And¡­.. that¡¯s how this measly village started gain food other than fruits and the vegetables. I call this future ability as Natures Pull: Any monster or animal that has blood with iron in their body is drawn to your area of life. They will not come to hunt or eat you. It¡¯s more like they will comes to in a migration pattern first. it will be the lowest on the food chain, then when there is enough grass and fruits and vegetables many pig birds will start to migrate to your area. As naturally many other monsters will come after the pig bear because of its succulent meat.
Author notes: mainly this chapters was too focus on the phenomenons happening around the village and in his every day life think this will be the last chapter of the week for my start I got too many essays piling up lol. But ill write more on Monday and Tuesday to make up for it Also please tell me if there are any mistakes are changes to make and I can even implement an idea if you want me to later down the road just write a comment. also next chapter i promise to go into real detail of explaining my character from how he looks too how he going to grow up and personality he will also have his best friend with him too so expect a good ass detail chapter.
Chapter 4- "Magnetic Touch" Chapter 4: Age three-- As Rai gets older he begins to actually notice vital signs that his body is changing too adapt to the new senses he begins to develop frequently over time. It all happened one day when his parents bought him for his third birthday a new bed made of wood and iron bolts with a straw and monster fur bed. Which encompasses his new room. [rai] hmmm I miss my crib it was a little more, homey like feeling when laying in it rather than flat bed with no bars to hold him in place from rolling right off the bed. So he starts to plan out a way to get his crib back so he could sleep in it next to his parents. As he walks in parents¡¯ bedroom he wonders where they put his old crib so he could sleep next to them, since the bed makes him feel lonely. After minutes on minutes of looking he could not find so he found the next best thing. He slowly crawled on his parent¡¯s bed so that he could lay between them but he couldn¡¯t because something was blocking his way. It was his mother¡¯s leg he tried crawling over it but the thigh of his maiden mother would not budge from him crawling over it he would always end up at the start of the leg. Then after quietly giving up he just used his mother¡¯s leg as a pillow and nodded off to sleep. Railin: fufufufufu so jin you want to get it in while I was sleeping, but you know I can feel the package all on my thigh so if you¡¯re trying to be sneaky ill beat you too the punch. She lifts her leg up and scoots it over Jin¡¯s waist and pulls him in. Then out of nowhere rai starts to wake up. As he stirs around in bed barely awake his dad jin wakes up thinking its time to fool around again. Then rai wakes up, [rai] he slowly opens his eyes to find complete darkness as he tries to get out of it. Coincidently his mother and father try to scoot even closer so they can embrace each other the moment they almost touch both of Rai hands began too glow yellow with a black rectangle in the middle of it horizontally. [Jin]-[railin] what was that small little touch just now and as soon as they said that they both flew across the room and hit both sides of the walls. While they try to understand what happens jin gets up first and grabs the first weapon he see and it happens to be a metal disk like object and before he can get any closer another flash of light appears and he is suddenly pulled towards his wife railin.. [railin&jin] ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh¡­ thud as they both collapsed from the impact of colliding with he and his wife. After a few seconds it appears that it caused both of them too fall unconscious. [rai] mommy daddy where are you im scared it¡¯s so dark¡­. Heiii its kind of easier to see, he notices that he is still inside his mother and fathers bed so what happened. But as he just now notices he has two glowing hands on one it has a positive symbol on the left it is negative. As he looks closely at his hand he makes a mistake and touches his forehead with his left hand. A big dark negative sign pops up on his forehead and as he tries to figure out what happens he is met with the most impossible opponent of his child life his own right hand as he tries to slow it down by opening his hand he ends up slapping the life out of his head as he hits the pillows on the bed. The narrative has been stolen; if detected on Amazon, report the infringement. [Rai] yeouch!!!!! He begins to rubs his head and the two signs disappear. He ask himself I wonder what that was and we he does he get a big light bulb above his head omg I can use magic just like mother and father. ¡°Then he recalls his mother always finding clean water to wash him in even though he doesn¡¯t know where it comes from and just one day he asked her and she said it was a unique magic she has. That when there is no water natural to the eye can see but its in the air she sucks it out she called it i think¡­¡­¡­atmospheric drain. Atmospheric Drain: the user of this ability is able to suck out water from the air around them to supplement her magic if there is none in the vicinity. Hmmm as rai thinks he begins to wonder what kind of magic does he have then he tries to figure it out. So he thinks mentally where that jolt of power came from and he starts to feel a sensation near his stomach he tries his hardest to draw the power out and before he can pull it out he farts then he loses his concentration and laughs. To any man a fart is just funny in any way. Then he almost forgets his parents laying on the floor grueling from the pain they just endured unconsciously. Then for a few seconds he tries to figure out what he has just done by thinking again in his mind on the magic he thinks he has just done and a gets a response after concentrating for a minute. He gets a response and the same symbols appear on his hand but they are a bit smaller. So right after that rai begins to try and clap his hands but they push each other away then he remember it being two different symbols when they came together so he had an idea if he could change his hand too a positive on one it will attract any thing with the other symbol mark on it. [rai] say hmm if opposites attract I shall call this magnetic touch and after saying that. Hmmm it rolls off the tongue nicely I can¡¯t wait to tell mother and father when they wake up. Yeeeeeeeeee. Since all the extortion is building up rai decides to sleep it off. Magnetic touch: Whenever the user touches a person or object with the corresponding symbol his hand depending on where he puts it you will either be repelled or crushed against whatever the other hand touches but if the user touches himself with it can back fire if touched, to prevent this all you have to do is touch yourself with the same symbol to cancel out. I will end it here for the week lol I know I said this last time but this is the last one my fingers hurt¡­¡­¡­
Author¡¯s notes: so what do you think of the new chapter did I fix some things I didn¡¯t in the past chapters. It will be great if everyone who read can comment what they feel on the fourth chapter of the week. omg like im so happy that over a hundred people read my threads.i let out some tears....
Chapter: 5- Explanations/ Amazing Reveal Chapter 5 Literally five hours later the sun begins to too start shining the first one to wake up is Jin as he woke up begins to exibit signs of having a crick in his neck. [jin] ughhh. My head hurts I wonder what happened last night But as he looks up he sees his son resting asleep in his bed. I wonder what he is doing there he wasn¡¯t there at first when I got flung out of bed. As he tries to turn his head he sees his wife squirming on the ground beginning to wake up. [Railin][thoughts]omg this head ache hurts so much I wonder what that weird magic that was last night. As she begins to lift herself up against the bed railing she is met with her husband being in the same predicament. [jin] honey do you know what kind of magic that was last night that knocked each of us out when we were going to do the deed. ( yes my characters parents are some freaks in the sheets since their son Rai has got his own room and bed) Back to the discussion [railin] do you think someone broke into our house to steal something or did they come to steal little boy. [jin] of course not who would try to break into the house of the former greatest b ranked [b] adventures Raiden¡¯s wave. To have knocked both of them out they would have had to be at least [c] rank and above since their skills have degraded a bit over time from the easy life out in the sticks. As of right now the parents are trying to figure out what could have happened that could have flung them around the room without actually burning, crushing , freezing them. Then appearing like a sudden after thought, eureka!!!! like sign appeared in both of their eyes as they remember something similar happening after railin gave birth to rai. [(the incident when rai shout out like a football and towards his pregnancy doctor and knocking him out after the impact. Of rai¡¯s head hitting the center of his chest.)] Then as they begin to formulate an answer for these weird phenomenon¡¯s they begin to look for rai thinking he is still in the room. Suddenly they hear a slight snoring noise coming from the top of their bed! Then as the begin searching the bed the see a small little bump in the bed next to the wooden head bored. As jin walks up to the back of the side of the bed he reaches across and pull the cover from over the lump very quickly. Revealed to the both astonished parents is the perpetrator in all the weird magic phenomenon¡¯s for the last three years. But they did not know the full extent of his powers as of yet so what they can speculate will have to be confirmed by [rai]. [jin [railin] So as jin and railin look over their son for a quick second they began to shake him awake so he could explain to them what did he last night or what just happened in general. [Point of view change] [rai]-[dream] I wonder what mister ball and string wants every night that I see him he starts too swing faster towards my direction I¡¯m about 50 feet away from him today I wonder if anything new might happen as he says that he instantly get closer within 20 feet of it and begins to glow he notices that his body is starting to itch near his belly button. Then suddenly he begins to float towards to ball and string and by the time he is within one foot of it shines brighter and brighter till he has to close his eyes from the sudden osculation in light and as he closes his eyes he instantly wakes up the moment his dad touches his body. He starts to feel incredible pain on his back hands and belly button area. Three big black balls appear on his body and they began to form into a natural rectangle. After a few more seconds the light in the room dies down and [rai] opens his eye after going through the pain a few seconds ago. Then he noticed while all of this was happening his dad was still reaching for him to see what was wrong with his child. Out of nowhere his mother picks him up and cradles him half way in her arm binding him to her chest. She thought something obviously bad was happening to her little boy. [pov change] [railin] omg my little ball of sunshine was in pain I wonder if he has truly awoken to the start of his magic. While holding rai up she starts to concentrate on the faint magic still in the air from the recent awakening. She opens her eyes and looks down she cant see it but she could make out a big black square on both of rai¡¯s arms. She tells him to quickly undress his shirt so she can see what¡¯s wrong with his body and as she looks on the moment rai shirt goes above his waist she starts to see a black box around his belly button area. It¡¯s still lightly glowing from the magic being unconsciously ciphering in to his new tattoo of the sorts. Then as she starts telling him what¡¯s going on she ask for her husband to come over to look at this. [jin] woah what is this big black box on my sons body hmmm it seems to be letting out a bit of magic power unconsciously he looks towards his wife and says I think we need to tell him he as just awoken to his abilities as a mage but one they do not know how to explain. [rai] So rai says," mom dad I think I figured out how to do magic but it¡¯s hard to control how to use it without thinking hard on what I want to push or pull away". [parents] I wonder what kind of magic he¡¯s awoken too. As they explain to him about different types of magic he begins to get and acute understanding of the power he has been born with. And what are the differences between the elements. 1. Fire- too be able to cast fire magic or other variations of it you need to be exposed to very hot weather based on how much your natural body and talent can handle that¡¯s how much you will be able to use for the rest of your life this goes for all of the element you can get tiny boost from artifacts but that is all you are born with with you are born with. 2. Water- to be able to cast water you need to be greatly exposed to water when your young from that age till when your about five is when you stop absorbing the natural affinities with it or any other elements. 3. 3. Earth- you have to be exposed very earthy environments such as large mountains or caves or many natural rock formation. Let your imagination sore with this one. Earth is one of the most common affinity in the world of valor. 4. Air- to be attuned to the affinity of earth it is a highly sought after affinity since it has many uses other than being cut up and creating barriers. The reason why this affinity is so hard to get is because the only ones who can get the affinity have to strictly have wings of the sort. Also all people with the wind affinity could float, fly, or jet threw the air they are used a lot for transportation needs You could be reading stolen content. Head to Royal Road for the genuine story. 5. Thunder- last of not least there is thunder this is another sought after affinity to get since it has many benefits to battling and traveling. To get the thunder r ability you have to be not attuned to any other affinity that¡¯s a first. Then naturally any person who is not attuned to the first four are automatically attuned and thought to be of thunder affinity. To awaken to your abilities as a thunder mage you have to be able to sit threw and entire thunder storm naked and survive this is all. Ps there are some that died. [parents] they know it¡¯s not thunder because he hasn¡¯t been let outside by himself before and they know it isn¡¯t any of the other four since he doesn¡¯t show signs of being able to cast any of the five forms of magic. So what kind of magic is it.well we will have to wait until her turns five and takes the test to figure his mana affinity and his exact mana reserve? From what they know they may have just found a boy genius but they don¡¯t really know that yet. As they began to discuss more on his future they mention him joining the academy on a scholarship when he older. ¡­¡­¡­¡­ (Skips a head to the future two years it is the day of the test in the village) ---As the Magune family is getting ready for the annual magic test for the kids of the village this year the first one too wake up is rai. [Rai] oweeee!!! I cannot wait to take the annual magic test as he get up on his feet he presides to get ready for the event. And as he put on his newly made shirt and pants he proceeds to get his socks and shoes too wait in the living room so that he can wait for breakfast. And as he opens the door to his room too the living room a good aroma enters his nose. As he smells the sweet but savory aroma of the pig bird bacon. And as his mother is just finishing up his father walks in the house with his smallpox¡¯s in tow. And as soon as rai and gin see each other they quickly run up too each other to catch up on some things. Before they get to the breakfast. Both their moms call them to come sit at the table. Made of thin wood and metal. They both sit down and begin to eat and as they begin gin says he does not have a fork or knife. As soon as he says that rai begins too channel mana into his right arms and as he does a negative sign opens up and floats toward the kitchen cabinet and a fork and knife its engulfed and attracted to his hand slowly. Everyone stares in amazement. [gin] woah so cool rai I see you been working on your magic a lot when you first showed me it could barely hold a pebble. And as they kept talking they both of them got off their chairs and by that time everyone was finish eating so they decided to head to the academy guild in capital city. They arrived there in a couple of hours on the local wolf bear transportation in the village [Yes, a wolf bear lol] And as they were approaching the great walls of Alveron city they began to com to a stop at the big gates of passing or what you might call a large line. As they waited their turn and showed their registration cards towards the city they were let in. And as they were let in the giant doors opened up to a beautiful city with many sites. And since both gin and rai have never set foot out of the village this was thei first time seeing so many people. Their parents grabbed both of their hands and brought them to the academy guild building in the heart of the city and what they were met with was crying kids and furious parents mad at life because there sons and daughters could not get into the capital city academy. [Do you guys remember what I said earlier your born with your born with.] As the six of them stayed and waited in line it was about time for the first one to get tested. [rai] gin I think you should go first. [gin] you sure rai I could wait, and when he said that a man covered head to toe it silver armor came to pick him up and bring him to the big status plate Ten minutes later¡­¡­. Gin came out with a happy face and as he was getting closer his parents and the magunes were hawking hi for results they said his power Is called ¡°Kinetic Fire¡± and that he has an above average mana pool Kinetic fire: when the user activates this ability is the faster speed you can achieve and the more momentum you can charge the more stronger the flames coating your body will be able to use stronger magic. You can also use the flame of heal by applying the fire onto your injured area as of now it only works on small cuts and scratches. As they were talking the man in silver armor came again to see to take rai next away for his test. [rai] so cool I wonder what that big metal thing with the words are on it is that where we are going to take the test, he had many questions. And as he gets closer the man in armor stops and says ¡°put your hand on the plate¡¯. He does as told and as he puts his hand on the plate and after a few seconds of him getting scanned a voice speaker spoke out and told him everyone in the room including what his mana reserve was and the name of his ability. [also im sorry for changing up a lot of stuff while writing its hard I will get use too it] Then a clearly shaken voice speaks out mana reserve¡­¡­¡­¡­. Above average and that his magic is named¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­.magnet rise. [random thoughts] tf is magnet rise is that a new type of ability? Its not categorized in our data¡­¡­¡­¡­. Ill end the long chapter here.
Authors notes: well I am tired from typing so many words this is a new damn record for me seventy six hundred words in two days something must be wrong with me lol. But hello fellow authors and commenters today can you comment on this latest chapter and tell me whats good and bad about it ill fix it in the coming chapters its my first time writing so wish me luck please. I will talk about how gin got such a weird ability from an accident in the next chapter .Rate if you want to. (NippleGod-sama out?¤Ä?Òæ??¤Ä ©¤=¡Ô¦²O))
main character concept art of Rai hello everyone today i am currently writing the new chapter for this series. as of now i just finishe my break and i started drawing concept arts of Rai. i will be doing this with all of my characters but since i draw slow dont expect to seee them all but yea lol. post a comment below to tell me how the concept art i drew sucked or not. This narrative has been purloined without the author''s approval. Report any appearances on Amazon. I know it cannot compare to the professionals some people use but tell me how it is if you liked it i havent drew for amusement in years since i graduated highschool so post a comment below. :-TsavKAnz-: Prologue-birth/short revise Hello everyone I know it has been awhile since I posted a chapter but the reason being I have a lot of test to take and essays are due almost every week I thought I was going to be able to start over but guess what I¡¯m going to go strong. I plan to rewrite the story but what I mean as in rewrite is that everything will be redone since I have had a poor reception with my writing skills but I think I have improved a bit. This story starts off on the outskirts of capital city. Today a child of mysteries is being born today. There are two parents expecting their first child to be born today. As the mother gets in the ready position she waits for her contractions to build up and she begins to enter labor. ¡°Jin¡± [[come on honey open your legs a bit more, I heard from the local mothers in the village that the more you open the easier it is too push the baby out so to say.]] ¡°Railin¡± [[Oi, why don¡¯t you shut the fuck up and go look for Ben, he said he would be here when I was ready to birth my child. But he has been late for abut thirty minutes.]] [[And as she says that JIn activates his Search magic!]] ¡°Jin¡± [[I have picked up on Ben¡¯s signature he should be here in another few minutes.]] [[And as he says that there is a knock on the door [bum,bum,bum] JIn, Railin I just got here can someone come open the front door?]] As he says that jin rushes to the door to unlock it, [click] unwinding noise as the door opens with a low creek. ¡°Ben¡± [[you wouldn¡¯t believe how bad it was this morning my wife was giving birth early in the morning before I had a chance to come here so I was a bit late.]] ¡°Jin¡± [well was it a boy or girl?] ¡°Ben¡± [well it came out as a boy but I really wanted a daughter for some reason. Idk I can¡¯t put my finger on it.] ¡°Railin¡± [she yells, I know you guys are having a nice chat right now but could you hurry up and help me deliver this baby I feel like he¡¯s going to shoot out any moment.] They both rush to comfort her Jin holds her hand while Ben takes out the necessary utensils to clean and make sure the baby is healthy. [Suddenly lots of blood spurts out Railin ******, her face begin to grow pale. Omg, the baby head poke out a bit and ben tells her to keep pushing.] ¡°jin¡± [[omg honey what¡¯s wrong omg there is so much blood ben please tell me you can save her, I think she is letting out too much blood!!! If she lets out anymore she might die!!!!]] ¡°Ben¡± [ill do everything I can to save her and the baby so just wait, Ben cast an energy and health regeneration spell. I think she should be ok for a while but idk if there is anything else I could do I only know basic healing spells that can only regenerate health not get back loss of blood.]] And as he says that the baby is half way out you can see Railin¡¯s eyes begin to glaze over after her last push the baby starts to glow with a blueish golden light.
¡°[Skill: Magnetic push]¡± If you stumble upon this narrative on Amazon, it''s taken without the author''s consent. Report it.Has been activated!
The new born baby encased in the blueish golden light shoots out like a bullet and lands dead center in the chest of Ben, his heart skips a beat and before he passes out he tries to hold on to the baby. ¡°jin¡± Ben? Hey been ben, wake up ben I need you to heal my wife she is dying on the bed here help! He stares at bens body lain across the floor carefully holding the baby. Then all of a sudden the baby starts to cry, and the only thing it wants is the milk of his mother his instincts are crying for it when a black dot appears on hit little body and it begins to glow. And as he glow Railin¡¯s body begins to glow as to the blood as well. Then another blinding light occurs.
¡°[skill: Magnetic Reversal]¡± Has been activated!
And all of the sudden the blood on the floor and that is imbedded in sheets begin to congregate into a big ball of red and starts to rush towards Railin¡¯s body it enters threw the female maiden part and enter back to her blood stream. As this is happening her skin color turns from deathly pail to a healthier glow of light brown and milky color. She falls asleep after this. ¡°Jin¡± [[omg what is happening a few seconds ago I could sworn my wife had been only seconds away from dying but now she is resting soundly in bed? This is so weird if it wasn¡¯t me who healed her and it wasn¡¯t ben since he is currently unconscious then who is it? ]] As he thinks that he stares at his new born son who also is still glowing with a strange magic force. [I have never felt this type of magic power before.] But before he could investigate his son lying on the ground is till crying, so he picks him up. And tries to rock him so he could settle down and then he notices oh he must want mommies milk and as he says that he lifts his wife shirt and instantly as he puts his new born next to her a small static sound reverberates and zip he is happily sucking on his moms tit and before he can finish he falls asleep holding onto his mother.
Authors notes: everyone help me and tell me do you want me to start off from here are keep going from where I left of last time I have 10, chapters ready to be post till new week if you want. Its about 15000 words so tell me is this better than my first chapter enough to replace it. I¡¯m not changing the story I was just trying to change the way the dialogue looked but with a few major changes to the pace and story problems.
everyone tell me if this is better than when i first started and i am ready to start from here i just had a few problems with my college classes that made me take awhile