《Nadia *Dropped*》


 Prologue: The Sudden Meeting

    Nadia Nightingale was a blessed child through and through. She belonged to the Nightingale family which was the richest family in the state. The Nightingales were respected but secretly disliked by most people. They were disliked because they were arrogant, selfish, and disrespectful. Well not all of them were like this. The heads of the Nightingale family were called John and Anna. John and Anna Nightingale were kind, sincere, and empathetic unlike they''re children. They wanted to change them but they tried and failed. But they didn''t give up hope. Soon after Anna found out she was pregnant with a baby girl. They were determined to change this.


    After the baby girl was born she was named Nadia which means hope. They wanted Nadia to grow pure and grateful and to not take things for granted like her older siblings. Anna and John made a plan. They planned that they would act poor to make Nadia grow up different. So they rented a small apartment in a quiet and small town. She grew up better than expected. Nadia was more mature than other kids at age 6. She would always understand her surroundings and  be able to do better than others. Nadia had the mentality of a 10 year old.  She was able to think rapidly and act wise.


    Nadia had a favorite quote that inspired her to learn better and observe others. This quote was "Only idiots learn from their mistakes,but smart and wise people learn from the mistakes of people before them." This meant that she was more behaved than others. It was because of this that Nadia was liked around town. But this was not the only reason. The other reason was that she was gorgeous. She had dark black hair like the night, deep blue eyes that seemed to go on forever, white skin, and luscious pink lips that would make you want to kiss them.


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    One day Nadia was walking through a shortcut in an alley heading towards her school when she heard voices. She quickly hid behind the first thing she saw and perked her head to listen to the two men that were taking to each other


    . "What are we going to do now that all the kids are dead? The boss is going to take my head. If only there was a replacement of some sort." said a man with a long chin and green eyes


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    "Maybe we can just kidnap a random child and say that they were the only survivor." said the other man who looked completely average with no special qualities of any sort.


    Nadia knew that she had to get away from them so she tried to quietly sneak out of the alley. Suddenly as if the man received an answer Nadia tripped on something on the floor. They looked over at her with lustful eyed and a nasty firn. Nadia didn''t even have time to scream as she was knocked out.


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    I would like to say thank you for reading this. I am extremely nervous because this is my very first fiction. I have been reading other people''s fictions for over weeks now. But I barely made an account and started my first story. I would love it if you would point out my mistakes as I am a novice at writing . I would also like to ask for suggestions and ideas for the types of horrible training that she will do and supernatural elements that I would be able to add. I do not know when I will write more chapters but because winter break is coming up it might be daily or weekly, it may even be monthly if I become lazy with this story.

 Chapter 1 The Boss

    The two men led Nadia to an ordinary looking building. It had to be ordinary looking in order to not attract too much attention, this was an assassin''s organization after all. The sign on the building said ''Wilburn Law Firm''.


    The two men looked around for people who would spot the kidnapped girl but couldn''t find any. It happened to be the perfect time to kidnap a girl and sneak her around. It was after rush hour. They quickly snatched her out of the ordinary looking car and brought her inside.


    The inside was the same as everything else, ordinary. There were people in professional looking suits talking to clients and holding papers. It seemed that even though it was an assassination organization it still had real clients and real cases presented to the judges. It was quite silly that an assassination organization would be tied to the law. But not only was this organization tied to the law but it worked for the law. It was a sort of secret, secret service.


    The ''boss'' as it seems was the exact opposite of Nadia''s expectations. Nadia thought that the boss would be an unfeeling muscle man. However the boss was a slender young looking woman. She had brown hair, dark brown eyes, and tan skin. If she was rated from 1 to 10 she would be a nine. She was just that beautiful.


    She welcomed Nadia with a radiating smile that seemed as if it could melt ice. This was strange for an assassin. But it seemed to Nadia that things would get even stranger.


    Nadia was not very happy with this situation. But she was still calm. Nadia knew that overreacting would not help this situation at all. She wouldn''t cry for her mother or father as most children would. The boss was surprised with her calm attitude. But being an assassin she was able to adapt quickly to any situation.


    The boss then started to speak, "Hello my dear. It seems that you are unexpectedly calm. Would you mind child?"


    "My name is Nadia." she replied with no hesitation and confidence.


    "Nadia, I like it. Do you know why your here?" she said.


    Nadia had made guesses with the few information the two men had left her with their conversation. It included killing and training. Nadia guessed that she would be trained to be a spy or assassin. But because this was only a guess and she wasn''t sure she answered "No."


    The boss said, "Well then I will be glad to explain everything to you. Nadia according to my information you are a replacement for the dead orphan children I sponsored as future students in the art of killing and missions. Though the men who brought you here tried to fool me I could see past their fa?ade. The ability to see past their fa?ade you will learn. But it will not be easy this ability comes mostly from experience and a good teacher. Hmm, I''ve gotten off topic haven''t I. Well I will be personally training you because you have brought to me great curiosity."


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    The two men that were watching the meeting at a distance had trembled at her words. Nadia took note of this. Nadia guessed that the woman was much, much, much more stronger than she seemed and if not she had powerful backup. Nadia also took note to respect this woman even though she was partially in fault for her kidnapping. She did this because if the woman was strong she could easily destroy her weak and poor family.


    "What will I be trained in, Master?" Nadia asked the woman.


    "That is a question you will learn soon after. I wrote the answer to your question on this list. I was never going to be the one to train or answer questions to the person before you. You will have to make due with the time that I was supposed to spend on the other child." replied the woman.


    Nadia just nodded at her masters answer and took the list that was handed to her. She was about to read the note but she stopped herself as the woman started to speak again.


    "Go now child you will be shown to your new room. You best not think of escaping or else I will be forced to punish you. I will see you later." the woman said. Nadia felt frightened by the woman''s words that were filled with bloodlust and killing intent. Nadia had already though of escaping but could only find that this place was filled with absolute security. There were cameras that covered every inch and angle of the building and guards at every door and she was sure that soon there would be guards in her room. She could only accept that she had been kidnapped and taken away from her lovable sweet parents.


    Once the Nadia''s master left she was guided to her new room by buff-looking men. Her room was better than she ever expected. But because Nadia lived in a poor environment to a normal person it would just be a not ugly not pretty room. The room was medium sized and had a bathroom and shower the right to the bed. There were only two pieces of furniture in the whole room. They were a bed with a metal frame and only one thin blanket and a desk that she would be allowed to use for studying in the future.


    Nadia then looked at her list. The list said..........

 Chapter 2 Training

    The list stated:


    1.Torture


    You will learn about torturing and interrogating people. You will also be tortured constantly to strengthen your body and will against enemy interrogations.


    2.Training


    You will be trained in defensive and offensive stances. You will also be trained in how to kill a person swiftly and silently.


    3.Poisoning and Bombs


    You will learn how to make most type of poisons and bombs out of common ingredients. This can be used to escape certain situations such as being caught.


    4. Manipulation/ Human Behavior Studies


    You will learn how to tell lies from the truth and how to use different ways to turn someone into your spy. You will also be taught how to predict a persons reaction and action to whatever you do.


    5. Studies


    As the name stated you will learn about things taught in normal school. But unlike normal schools you will be taught about vulnerable body parts which will help you about torture. You will also learn about how to make a weapon, a weapons properties, and how to use the weapon. You will also have to learn housework skills such as cooking and cleaning.


    6. Disguise an Acting


    You will learn how to act like any type of person. This is basically infiltration. This is a very important skill to have if you are trying to spy on someone. You will also learn how to change the way you look and sound.


    You will study each thing until you reach a point of near perfection. There is no time limit or known completion time. The completion of each thing you will study depends on how fast you learn it and how well you learn it. If you manage to break the record of completing this which is 10 years then you will be granted one wish.


    As Nadia read this her face changed expressions rapidly. She didn''t know if she should be happy that she would be taught so many ''useful''  things or sad that she would have to go through harsh, harsh training. She was especially scared of torture and a bit of training. Since Nadia had a good imagination she could just picture where they were going to hurt her. Oh the pain she would feel. But she still had hope because of the final paragraph. Nadia already knew what she would wish for. She would wish to go to public school like any normal girl.


    Nadia had a wish that she had always wanted. She wanted to be normal. Not rich or poor, just normal. But that dream seemed impossible because she was going to be trained to become an assassin. But still she would try hard. Nadia was just that type of person.


    Nadia decided not to think about how hard it would be  after all nothing would change the pain. She quickly tried to forget about was waiting for her in the future and tried to focus on sleeping. Nadia believed that the best thing to do right now would be to sleep. Nadia thought this because there was nothing else to do in the almost empty room and if she wanted to get started on her escape then she would have to hurry. In order to hurry she would have to try hard and wake up energized.


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    Nadia was waken up by a cold bucket of water. When she woke up and opened her eyes she saw that it was her Master. She didn''t know why the boss would directly come to wake her up but she decided not to question it because the boss should be respected. She immediately stood up with her back straight acting like a person in the military without the salute even if she didn''t know it.


    "Good morning Nadia. I hope you slept well you''ll need it for today. We are going to start your torture training now. Get yourself ready. " said the boss.


    Nadia thought that she was mentally prepared against the torture training but as soon as the boss said that she started trembling. Even though the water was near freezing the only reason she was shivering was because of fear. Nadia didn''t know how to get ready for torture. No 6 year old girl would know. Actually no normal or still sane person would. She didn''t even have time to ask as she was carried to a frightening room filled with torture objects.


    For Nadia this was the worst time in her whole life. Nothing could have compared to the pain she felt while being tortured. Every single part of her body hurt. She had whip marks on her back, burn marks on her chest, and many other horrible marks that would most likely leave scars on the smooth skin she used to have. Not only did the torture hurt her physical state but also her emotional state. Nadia felt like an empty shell. She was asked questions but was not allowed to speak because she was told to keep silent. But the way the boss hit her and screamed at her to answer with killing intent made her want to answer.  Finally she was done with her torture. Now she would have to learn to torture others.


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    Please give me harsh criticism and suggestions . I really like reincarnation stories and I have an idea of how to fit it in this story. But it will take a long time to reach the right time for her death and everything because I want to make sure that she has no regrets in this world. I really don''t want to give any spoilers but if you ask I will tell.  Also should I just skip her childhood and move on to the climax or describe everything with detail. I will need some answers before I continue the story. Thank you for reading.

 Chapter 3 Training Part 2

    Nadia had now completely finished her harsh torture training. She had learned about all types of torture and how to make people spill information. In order to test if she had mastered torturing others and interrogating she had to use it on someone. She used it on a spy that was undercover sneaking around the assassination organization. Her master, whose name she found out was Anna, said to find out his goals and what he had uncovered. Nadia even with her dislike of torturing others passed with flying colors. Nadia not only managed to find out exactly the right information but managed to do so without inflicting a deep wound.  It had only taken her two months of people torturing her and one month of learning how to torture and interrogate others.


    Now Nadia was to learn how to fight and kill. She was trained by a different person than Master Anna. Master Anna was busy with other things. What these other things were Nadia didn''t know and didn''t dare to ask. Too much curiosity was a bad thing in a place that might hold secrets best left alone.


    This different person was a man who looked to be around thirty years of age. He had blonde hair and  light brown eyes. He had a small button-looking nose and tanned skin just like Master Anna. He wasn''t tall or short. He had a common height. He didn''t have any facial hair like a beard or a mustache. He looked refined, neat, and tidy. He didn''t look too strong but looks can be deceiving. He introduced himself as Eric Collins. But Nadia didn''t think Eric Collins was his real name. He was an assassin and to and assassin the ability to disguise yourself was a life or death skill especially if you were on the run.


    His training included much less pain than torture but still inflicted pain nonetheless. An average person wouldn''t have been able to handle all his training. But Nadia who was tortured seem to be able to handle a certain amount of pain without wincing or crying or even feeling it. It seemed even though the building was ordinary the people weren''t at all normal. Nadia was distrustful and wary of everyone around her because of that but when Master Anna was kind to her she was able to relax her guard.


    Even though Nadia was poor and had little money she still owned a low quality television and was able to see Tv shows and cheap movies. Nadia didn''t like them too much but didn''t dislike them either. She only watched them when she had nothing to do or was bored. Because of this when she heard of training she thought of meditating your Chi under a waterfall or slashing your sword around 100 times a day. Her guesses were not all that different from the real training she did.


    Nadia''s training sessions were running 1 mile with weights that would increase miles and pounds every day, sit-ups, crunches, and sword techniques.  This was done continuously and nonstop which strained Nadia''s body making her every move hurt . These were times when Nadia was grateful for the torture that allowed her to feel less pain. She also, like her guesses about training, meditated her chi (life force) and her aura. Aura was something invisible to the common and naked eye. It couldn''t be seen by anyone other than experienced Aura masters but it could skill be felt. The Aura was used to scare and make opponents and victims bow in defeat before the fight or killing even began. People who trained hard enough and had almost endless limits were able to materialize their Aura into things like weapons or anything they imagined. Master Eric said that this was a very useful ability because the Aura didn''t cause outside or physical damage but damage to the soul our damage to internal organs. He also said that Aura was not able to be identified which allowed an almost 0% chance of being identified as a murder or traced back to a certain person.


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    Nadia was stunned. She didn''t know that such a powerful ability existed and she would have known it if it was as powerful as he said. Even though Nadia was poor she would have known it because this knowledge would have spread like wildfire.


    Master Eric continued "But this power has its drawbacks. You have to own enough Chi to withstand it. Also there is a limit to how well you can learn this ability. You can not change the limit. Or at we haven''t ever had a person who has been able to change their limit."


    As Master Eric said this she was filled with curiosity.


    "How can you know what your limit is?" she asked with awe in her voice.


    "Hmm. It''s funny that you ask that. Today I prepared the test for you." said Master while he took out a crystal sphere. The crystal sphere looked very similar to the crystal ball that fortune tellers used.


    "How do I tell what my limit is?" Nadia said.


    "Just put your hand here. I will tell you." replied Master Eric.


    So as he instructed she put her hand on the crystal sphere. They were all silent. But nothing happened. There was no change in the crystal sphere. Suddenly Master Eric put on a shocked face. Then he called Master Anna with his phone. He spoke with a whisper and told her to rush over here because something unexpected happened. Master Anna came thirty minutes after with an exhausted look on her face. She had rushed over as fast as she could after her important meeting ended. She then told them to do the test again.


    Nadia once again put her hand on the crystal sphere. They were all silent like before. There was no reaction on the crystal ball once again. The only difference this time was the person who was making the shocked face. This time it was Master Anna.


    She looked towards Nadia and said ..................


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    I will hold off the reincarnation until the second volume and will continue the story. I will try to make the chapters longer. Thank you for your comments on my past chapters and thank you for reading. Please continue to comment and point out all my mistakes.

 Chapter 4 Training Part 3

    She said "Nadia, has Eric explained to you different types of limits and how to tell them apart?"


    Nadia shook her head. Eric hadn''t explained anything. She didn''t know why they were always shocked and speechless. The crystal ball wasn''t changing didn''t that mean that she had no talent in using Aura.


    "I see. Well then I will explain for him." she said while glaring at Eric making him sweat and think what horrors would await for him. Nadia felt sorry for him even though she thought it was well deserved. She had learned rumors about the strength of the boss. Apparently the last person that got on her nerves was put in the torture chamber and left there until Master Anna remembered him. He was on the brink of death when she was reminded of the person who angered her. She learned that Anna had a bad memory and always have to have an attendant or secretary to help manage her time  and remind her of appointments and meetings.


    "There are 3 types of limits. The first type of limit is when the ball turns fully black. This is most common. That means that the person who put their hand on the ball has not talent whatsoever in using Auras. The second type is when the black is half filling the clear sphere. This means that the person will only  be able to use their Aura to intimidate their opponents. This type of person is born around once every 5 years. Its not that special but still important. I am this type of person. The third type of person is fully clear this means that the person has no limits and will be able to use their Aura fully. This is extremely rare. The chance of being born with this is one child every one hundred years. And not only does this mean that they are extremely talented in using Auras but also Chi. You use Chi to harden your body. This will make you near undefeatable. Imagine an assassin that could not be assassinated by someone other than himself." she said this with respect written on her face.


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    Nadia was happy that she would be able to get stronger. But because this ability was special and one of a kind this made her forced to forget her wish of being normal. Now the only thing she could wish for was to be as close to normal as possible and to get stronger so that she would be able to protect her family from the bad thing in life and the world.


    She continued," I''m glad that my curiosity took over and made me make you my student. Imagine what our enemies would do to you if they found out. They would want to eliminate you before you became a threat to them and a valuable asset to us. But don''t worry with my authority and power I will make sure that no harm comes to you."


    When Master Anna said this Nadia became scared and then relieved to have her Master to protect her. She would surely be killed if she didn''t have such a strong person protecting her.


    Soon after Master Anna started talking privately with Master Eric. Because he was making scared expression Nadia thought that he was being notified about his punishment.


    She went up towards where he was standing and asked, "So, Master Eric what''s your punishment?"


    He made a pitiful expression and said, "No food for a week and no clothes other than underwear for a month."


    Even though no food for a week wouldn''t be too bad because oh his strong constitution and build being almost fully naked for a month would seriously harm his pride. Nadia had to look away and put a hand over her mouth before she let out a held back laugh.


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    Because some you guys wanted updates I quickly posted the start of the next chapter. I don''t like to keep you hanging on cliffhangers too long. In the next chapter I will try to add what her parents are doing and will continue with training. Thanks for reading.

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    I will be going to my cousins house this week. They only have one computer and trust me they do not like me staying too long on it. I''m making this message to notify you to not be expecting updates. When I am at my cousins house I will be only writing on paper and not posting it unless i''m able to have enough time on the computer. If I do not post be expecting a lengthy chapter. If I do well then just read it. Thank you.

 Chapter 5: Master Annas Feelings Part 1

    Master Anna''s POV Part 1


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    I have been in a way raising children from an orphanage. I have been doing this by donating money to them. I have done this because I want a student to personally raise. But it can''t just be any random little girl or boy. They have to have a sort of talent. I am personally looking for a child who is weak or pretty looking because then they will be underestimated. Underestimation is the best weapon. This saying comes from my experiences. It was hard for me as a small girl to be raised as the only girl assassin. But instead of that being a restriction it actually became a sort of blessing for me. My targets would never want to hurt a ''sweet and ''weak'' girl making their deaths much, much easier.


    I have sent spies to watch over the growth of the children in the orphanage. There does not seem to be be any kids that match my needs or should I say wants. That is why I allowed them to be unprotected and prone to attacks from enemy organizations. So, I should say that I am the cause for their deaths. This is a hame though I did ant to have a student that I would teach. I would make them call me ''Master'' and would care for them as i would for a child of mine. But I am way to busy for a child of my own.


    Today the unexpected happened. Two men who worked under me reported that my orphanage was exterminated, this was known so I wasn''t surprised. But what they said next rose up my eyebrows.; They claim that in that slaughterhouse that used to be an orphanage there was a survivor. This was wrong and a lie because I personally checked every single corner of that house in search of a survivor. This is interesting. I wonder which poor kidnapped child they will bring me. Perhaps it will be one that matches my needs.


    If you spot this tale on Amazon, know that it has been stolen. Report the violation.    They have brought me a little girl that has completely surpassed my expectations. This little girl, Nadia, is beautiful. This is good. People will not think that this beautiful little girl could kill them. She would not be considered  threat at all. The negative is that because of her beauty she will be implanted like a tattoo into the minds and hearts of people witness her. But this problem is one that a good disguise will be able to fix.


    Nadia''s torture training has been cruel and extremely harsh. I am being hard on her. I don''t want Nadia to be a spoiled brat but even I realize that this torture is excessive. However her gorgeous face covered in her blood awakened a sadistic feeling in me. Imagine if I had assigned a male to torture her. She would surely be raped in the most painful way possible. After I am done with her daily torture routine i can''t help but feel pity for this girl. Her body is covered in a variety of deep and painful looking scars. This is no time for regret but i can''t help feel that I should have treated her with care. This is not the only part that is making me feel pity for her. The other part is that she is almost completely like a porcelain doll. Her past vivid and strong willed eyes are now empty and hollow. In this day I promised that I would do the best that I could to make her as happy that an assassin can be.


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    Hello, this is blackrose156 once again. Sorry for the short chapter but I made sure to try as hard as possible to make it worthwhile and meaningful. They are already trying to hurry me and I must go and end this quickly. Thank your for reading. Please comment, give me suggestions, and HARSH criticism if I deserve it. Remember I always welcome negative comments as well as positive ones. Thank you.

 Chapter 6: Master Annas Feelings Part 2

    Master Anna''s POV


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    Now that we finished Nadia''s torture she would have to learn how to torture others. There are many devices that Nadia learned about.


    The Tub


    The victims would have their all their body parts except their head sticking out. The head that was sticking out would be painted with honey. Then after a few days insects like maggots and worms would decay their body alive. The tub wouldn''t be cleaned but the victims were still fed as minimum as possible.


    Impalement


    The victims would sit on a sharp needle. After this the executioners would raise the pole. The victims would then slide down slowly and painfully dying.. This was the favorite method of execution from Vlad The Impaler.


    The Iron Maiden


    In the steel coffin like device there would be needles all around. This would make the victim unable to move.


    The Thumb Screw


    Like the name states the Thumb Screw was a screw like machine that would crush fingers, knees, and ankles. There was also a head crusher which would crush the leg.


    The Guillotine


    The Guillotine is a device that everyone has probably seen in old movies or in other places. It was a machine made to decapitate. This machine was just a sharp knife connected to the rope. (Search it up yourself for pictures because I don''t know how to add them.)


    The Tongue Tearer


    This device looked like an oversized pair of scissors. Just like it sounds it would tear out the tongue.  (I don''t know why they would teach this fro confessions because the victim wouldn''t be able to spill any information anymore. Maybe they just showed this to the spies or really just victims to intimidate them)


    Rat Torture


    Rat torture was when a box or cage without a bottom was placed on the victims body. The box would have something that would produce intense heat. The rats wanting to escape would scratch and enter the body. Needless to say the victims died very painfully.


    Cement Shoes


    The cement shoes would have two holes for the victims legs. The victim would then be thrown into the sea or deep waters.


    Saw Torture


    The victim would be tied upside down. They were kept upside down so that blood would rush to their heads and would keep them awake during the torture. Then a saw or knife would drop down cutting their bodies in half. First would be the private parts which again needless to say would hurt.


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    (By the way my favorite type (also in my thoughts the scariest) of torture is the Hanged, Drawn, and Quartered it is not included in the torture descriptions so search it up. Maybe i''m a bit sadistic too for choosing this horrid torture method as my favorite but hey no torture doesn''t hurt.)


    These were just some examples of what Nadia learned.  Nadia hated these types of torture even without my observant abilities Nadia''s face and trembling body said it all. When learning about these tortures Nadia was mostly scared of the rat and saw torture. During the lessons Nadia asked me a question. She asked why we still had these type of tortures if most of them were abandoned and super old. I answered that it was I who brought them back into use. I have liked these type of tortures all my life. There was no other reason behind my interest and the fact that in the old times things were a bit more painful and much more interesting. I guess i''m just sadistic by nature.


    As a final test to see if Nadia''s torture lessons were completely learned and absorbed we had her test every single method on different people. It was sad to see Nadia cry and beg for their forgiveness but this was the test and it was not optional. We even had to use threats against her family. That did the job almost too well. Nadia passed with flying colors meaning that she wouldn''t have to retake this painful study course once again.


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    Sorry for the short chapter and the wait. I made a short chapter because I just wanted to continue as soon as possible. Also sorry for redoing and adding more to past chapters with this instead of continuing with the advancements of the story. Its just that some time ago I asked if I should include information of how she became what she will be in the future. Someone answered that they like detailed growth periods. This is for them. Thank you for reading. I will be expecting comments also what is the scariest of all the list and if you could chose one which would you pick. Just trying to get some more comments so forgive me for making you imagine and consider horrible things. Once again thank you for reading.

 Chapter 7: Master Annas Feelings Part 3

    Master Anna''s POV


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    Because Nadia had finished her torture training completely we were getting started on training in martial arts and weapons. Nadia studied different types of martial arts and weapons. The types of martial arts that Nadia studied were(Copied and pasted from website):


    Aikido - Aikido is a Japanese martial arts style focused on redirecting the attack away from you. Aikido concentrates on throwing, joint locks, traditional Japanese weapons, etc.


    Bartitsu - Bartitsu is an English martial arts that combines boxing, cane fighting, jujutsu, etc. Revival of this martial arts is due to interest in Sherlock Holmes.


    Bojuka - Bojuka is a self-defense system focused on grappling and strikes to an opponent''s vital areas.


    Enshin Kaikan - Enshin Kaikan is a Japanese martial arts that utilizes the Sabaki method (which seeks to turn an attacker''s power against him). This martial arts involves kicks, punches, sweeps, throws, etc.


    Eskrima, Arnis & Kali - Eskrima is a martial arts style from the Philippines focused on the use of stick and blade weapons (i.e. Yantok). This martial arts is also known as Arnis and Kali.


    The types of weapons that Nadia learned to use were spears (Pole Type Weapon), swords (and short swords), and guns like assault rifles, shotguns, and snipers. To be more specific some of the guns used are an AK-47 a durable and powerful gun, Beretta 390-391 series (semi-auto action type gun) a strong gun with much less recoil, and the m82 barrett 50 cal a strong long-ranged gun with bullet strength that can shoot through a wall (a website said this not me.)


    Nadia had an ability to learn fast and correct her mistakes easily. It was because of this that Nadia was able to almost fly through training. At first Nadia took a while to actually start shooting the targets. But about a week later when I checked up personally on her shooting skills I saw that in about every shot she had at least 60% chance of hitting the target right in the middle. This was a very good improvement. Most adults don¡¯t even know how to shoot much less children at 6 years old like Nadia. In about a month or less I think that Nadia will be too good at this for me to train her. I trained her in distance and accuracy. At the beginning of her shooting we started training at the distance of 15 meters. The target was 30 inches in width and length. Each time Nadia hit the target 10 times in a row continuously I would increase the distance and decrease the targets width and length. This was also how I was taught. Except for the fact that Nadia is six when starting this training and I was 8 when I started this training.


    In order for Nadia to train with more will and determination I decided to develop a points system. The point system included different prizes that Nadia would win each time she made a shot. In the target there were three parts. This meant that she would only get three possible amount of points. The outside section was worth 20 point. The middle ring was worth 30 and the very inside ring was worth 50 points. The prizes were:


    1,000 Points = A free day to enjoy with no restrictions. You will be able to go outside like a normal child.


    1,500 Points = Signs that your parents are looking for you.


    10,000 Points = A picture of your parents.


    100,000 Points = Seeing your parents without them seeing you for an hour.


    This really motivated Nadia even more than I expected. I was happy to see that my plan worked. Now Nadia¡¯s progress was almost three times more than before. I was very proud of Nadia as her Master.


    Nadia at the same time as she started weapon training also studied martial arts. Because I felt I wasn¡¯t suited to teach Nadia about martial arts I assigned my friend Eric to teach her. He was the strongest in the organization. I was the second strongest. I was right to choose him because I received notice that Nadia had completed the beginner training in martial arts in one month. If I was teaching Nadia it would have taken her two months to learn it. After all I would have been easy on her unlike Eric.


    When a member of the organization reaches a new level in something they test their Aura and Chi to see the improvements. The machine would change colors according to your level. The first time a person takes the test they would only get two colors because they haven¡¯t learned much. Because Nadia reached beginner in martial arts she needed to take the test. Unfortunately I was too busy with a meeting to attend. I had to leave this matter to Eric. When the meeting was about to finish I was called by Eric and told to rush over to the testing room as soon as possible. I did as he said as quickly as possible. When I reached over there I came to a silent and tense atmosphere. I was filled with curiosity. I quickly received a summary of the events that occurred. I was astonished. Had it actually done something like that? Nadia was looking at me with a blank look. I looked at Eric then asked if he had explained how the test worked. He said no and looked away. He would get a punishment later. I explained to Nadia then told Nadia to do the test again. It seemed that they weren¡¯t lying to me. I was breathless and proud. It seemed that I have come across an irreplaceable talent. I couldn¡¯t stay longer much to my dislike so I told Eric his punishment and left. Since I was the boss I couldn¡¯t neglect my duties any longer. Actually my manager told me first but that''s not important.


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    Recently I feel that Nadia is becoming too close to me. Instead of a student or disciple Nadia is becoming more like my very own child. I¡¯m actually thinking of officially adopting her. No matter how talented or mature Nadia is at her age she is still a child and needs family or emotional support. I plan on being her family. I feel that only I can do this for her it was my fault that Nadia was kidnapped and taken away from her family. I feel guilty and I don¡¯t like this feeling. I think a way to get rid off this guilt is to try doing something for her. I¡¯m afraid that Nadia won¡¯t accept me as her family because of the traumas I may have inflicted on her during torture training.


    Once again this child amazed me and left me breathless. The system I made really has produced unimaginable results. When I made the point system I thought that it would take about two or less weeks to even get the first reward. But Nadia in three days completed the second reward. I¡¯m afraid that Nadia will get too attached to her family which she most likely will never see again. But I am a woman who keeps her promises. I will never back down on my word. I am forced to do this.


    When I was first introduced to Nadia I didn¡¯t think to even investigate her background. Why would I? Nadia was wearing rags at our meeting. Very dirty rag made out of the cheapest type of cloth. She had long black hair that was so long it was dragging on the floor and collecting dust and who knows what type of dirt and germs. Nadia wasn¡¯t starving but wasn¡¯t full either in fact she was just hungry to the point of almost starving. I didn¡¯t even ask for her full name. I had thought that her parents wouldn¡¯t be able to do anything. Now that I actually investigate Nadia I am scared. Yes, I the boss of the most ruthless assassination organization is scared.


    Nadia¡¯s parents are our sponsors. They are the Nightingale family. The Nightingale family were actually the ones who started this company. But about 20 years ago they decided to give the organization to my father because my father was like the Nightingale families right hand man or in a way a loved uncle. My father ran it well. But about three years ago he died after getting cancer. When I first heard the news I was depressed and devastated. But when I finally calmed down I laughed because an assassin died of cancer not by being killed by another but by a sickness. The organization needed a leader someone to keep them running and in check. In my fathers will he appointed me the successor of the organization. I decided to follow his will and become the leader. I wasn¡¯t the strongest in the organization but I was the smartest. The Nightingale family agreed with this decision. I called the Nightingale family and told them that I was in possession of Nadia. I couldn¡¯t explain my mistake on the phone so I decided to make a meeting.


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    Hello readers this is Blackrose123. I just wanted to say thanks for reading and can you please come up with a name for the organization. I''m getting tired of having to say assassination organization again and again and I want to leave some of the choices to the readers. Can you make it sound a bit menacing but not too much and it can¡¯t be silly it has to sound professional. If I don¡¯t get answers I will just going to name it something along the lines of Withering Willow. Also I am getting a feeling that people just skip this part and I don¡¯t like that. And I want more comments please. Thank you once again.

 Chapter 8 The Decision

    The meeting took place in the Moonlight Rose¡¯s (the assassination organization) base so that when the meeting was done they could meet Nadia quickly. The meeting room was very modern looking. It had white walls, a glass table, and a small window. Even though it was modern it was a very plain looking like most other rooms in the Moonlight Rose¡¯s base. The people in the Moonlight Rose preferred comfort and efficiency instead of decorative and showy furniture and rooms.


    The people currently in the meeting room we¡¯re Anna Nightingale (Nadia¡¯s Mother), John Nightingale (Nadia¡¯s Mother), Nadia Nightingale, and Annalie Crimson (Nadia¡¯s Master). If people would enter the room they would feel a pressuring atmosphere so strong it would make normal people weak in the knees. The only reason why Annalie and Nadia were able to at least a small bit withstand it was because the pressuring aura was not aimed at Nadia and Annalie was able to make an aura envelop her to a certain degree due to her experience and talent in Aura. There was silence in the room but soon it was interrupted, the interrogation started.


    ¡°Why do you have Nadia?¡± started John.


    ¡°I ¡­. happened to come across her.¡± half-answered Annalie.


    ¡°How did you come across her?¡± he continued.


    ¡°Ummm¡­.. It¡¯s a long story.¡± she said.


    ¡°Long story¡­ huh, explain.¡± he commanded with a strong tone.


    ¡°Well¡­¡­. I wanted someone to train and so I funded an orphanage in hopes that someone would be qualified. But, they were killed so some of my employees or members found Nadia for me.¡± she summarized and explained.


    Anna Nightingale said with a teacher-like tone, ¡°Do you think that¡¯s right, kidnapping a young girl? Do you?¡±


    Annalie barely managed to stutter, ¡°No,...I¡­..I don¡¯t. But in my defense I was determined and Nadia proved to be a prodigy in whatever she did. When Nadia took her test she had the whole crystal be clear. Nadia has talent and I want to keep her as my student ¡±


    The Nightingale''s grew silent and looked at each other. Then almost as if they had communicated with only their eyes John started to speak.


    ¡°You know we don¡¯t even have a right to correct you or say anything against you. We lied to you Nadia. We pretended to be something we weren¡¯t. In fact just the opposite.¡± said John with a guilty look on his face.


    He continued while turning his head towards Nadia, ¡°In the beginning we wanted you to become a kind and sincere girl unlike your siblings which you didn¡¯t know about until now. We were going to wait until you were eight or nine to have you train here. Then when you were 15 we would have you go to a private school to learn about manners and other things necessary to be married off into a rich family that we would benefit from. This was going to be the plan. But it seems that things aren¡¯t the same. When you were kidnapped however we realized that this plan was selfish and cruel and that you should have the ability to choose what you wanted. But now instead of my plan being out of the picture you have started early on it. Annalie said that you have talent and she wants to continue being your master. I do not want to force you to do what I want but instead I want you to choose.¡±


    Nadia was dumbfounded. During her Master¡¯s and her fathers conversation she could see that her father wasn¡¯t just a poor person but was actually a person with such influence that he could make Annalie the boss and owner of the Moonlight Roses sweat bricks. Now he explained that they wanted to raise her in a way that wouldn¡¯t make her selfish and with a bad personality and then take full control of her life for their benefit. Now that was almost out of the picture but Nadia would have to choose. To Nadia the choice was kind of obvious. She wouldn¡¯t want to be controlled by her parents or by her future husband. But if she didn¡¯t choose that she would have to go back to train to be an assassin and she didn¡¯t want to face the fact that she would have to kill a living and breathing person.


    The story has been illicitly taken; should you find it on Amazon, report the infringement.However Nadia was certain that she wouldn¡¯t want to be controlled so she said, ¡°You know, I never thought that you were the type of parents who lied to their child and wished to have control of their future. I thank you for letting me choose and for being honest with your confession but if I will have my life controlled by anyone who goes against what I want then, I want to keep on training with Master Annalie.¡±


    Nadia¡¯s words made both of her parents feel guilty even more because they felt they caused their happy child to look emotionless and serious. They were expecting this choice but it still hurt because they would have to live with only visiting Nadia for at most once a week because of studies and training. They knew this because they were also once trained the same way that Nadia was going to train.


    Anna Nightingale said, ¡±I was expecting that answer from the beginning. That is why I prepared something for you. You will find it later but just remember it belongs to you and only you. Treat it with care. We will visit you every Friday because I do want to keep in touch with you.¡±


    Nadia wondered what the gift was. From what they said it seemed to be something important. How important it was Nadia didn¡¯t know. She just knew that she would have to take care of the present. Nadia didn¡¯t hate her parents so she wouldn¡¯t mind seeing them every Friday maybe she felt that she would actually look forward to it.


    Soon after a few exchanges like take care of Nadia with Master Annalie they hugged Nadia said goodbye and left. Then Nadia went back to her room. She was surprised. Before her room was plain with only the minimum amount of quality, furniture, and comfort. But now her room was beautiful. There was now a bigger window with soft and delicate white curtains, a queen sized bed and black blankets, instead of the hard and cold floor there was now a soft brown carpet on the ground, and a closet filled with expensive and beautiful cloths that Nadia guesses she would wear when her parents came to see her every Friday. But this was not al that caught Nadia¡¯s attention.


    In the center of the room there was a box. It had bright red wrapping paper with words like belongs to you and to Nadia. The box was about the same size as Nadia and Nadia was tall and slim for her age. Nadia looked at it with wonder and amazement in her eyes.


    ¡®So this is the present.¡¯ she thought.


    She went up to the present and slowly and carefully opened it. She gasped. It was a ¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­


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    Hello readers I just wanted to say thanks for reading and sorry for the wait. I was planning on posting this yesterday but the computer was taken away from me as punishment because yesterday and the day before that I slept at four. Oh, and they were for different reasons than the story. Right now I am practicing drawing so that I can draw the cover well. Can somebody give me ideas. I want it to be a high school teenage version of Nadia. If you can¡¯t remember Nadia has blue eyes and super long silky black hair. She has calm eyes that look as if they can see through your soul and luscious naturally red lips. She has pale skin that does not look strange on her and she is tall and had big proportions if you know what I mean. Needless to say she is very, very, very attractive. Once again thank you for reading and please give me suggestions and criticism.

 Chapter 9: Him

    The present had blonde hair and blonde eyes. It was small and cute. It had small round ears and a button nose. It had pale skin just like Nadia but unlike Nadia it didn¡¯t fit him too well. His skin and features made him look cute and cute was weak harmless to a lot of people.It was a little boy who looked to be around the same age as Nadia (around 7-8 if anyone is wondering.) He was wearing nothing but blue checkered boxers and a white undershirt. Nadia did not mind his attire but the thing that she did find strange was that he was wearing a collar. The collar was a blue-green that matched his eyes and had the words Nadia¡¯s future husband Amos engraved on them. He ¡®Amos¡¯ was currently sleeping in the box. Nadia already was shocked but she didn¡¯t show it. ( This is how Amos looks. Click on this link. Oh and here is Nadia¡¯s picture. Click this link. Obviously I did not draw them.)


    Amos POV


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    I was dreaming about everything that happened and how I ended up here in this box.


    I was like any other child, I think. I had richer parents than other children but they weren¡¯t too rich. I lived in an average 2 story house in a normal sized room. I was not common because I was bullied. Why I was bullied I don¡¯t know? Maybe it was because I never put up a fight or shielded myself from the bullies punches and kicks. Maybe it¡¯s because I had no friends, I was always ignored by the whole class. I can¡¯t be sure. (If you, the readers, are wondering why he was bullied it¡¯s because the bullies were very perverted and sadists at that. And the other classmates didn¡¯t talk to him because he was too cute to even talk to. In fact he had his own fan club that protected him from friends and especially girls. But because the fan club was threatened they had to leave him alone when he was bullied. If you are asking how can people so young have fan clubs it is because I said so and he really was that cute and smart too. I wanted to make him not notice this fact because I did not want him to be arrogant and narcissistic.) Anyways, I rather not talk more about this even though i¡¯m really just talking in my inner monologue. Bullying is a nasty things to talk about or think about. Anyways one day after my normal routine which is go to school, get shunned, and be hit and etc I returned home from school.


    When I got back home I realized that something was different. My loving parents who would usually welcome me and treat my bruises and wounds weren¡¯t there. I looked all over them in the house. It didn¡¯t take long to find them. They were upstairs in a room. I didn¡¯t like what I saw. My parents were on their knees with their hands up while two men in all black clothes held up guns to their heads. I was looking at this scene from a small crack in the open door. I did not want to be in the same place as them because then I wouldn¡¯t be able to save them. I crawled down the stairs as fast as I could to the home phone. I called 911 and told the police what happened. At that time I couldn¡¯t help but cry and place my worries on them. I went back outside the room where my parents were being held and looked through the small crack in the slightly open door. I silently started why they started yelling something about money and a location. Then my dad got up and started fighting the man with the gun at his head. Suddenly he was shot in the chest. His head was looking towards mom and then he said, ¡°Tell my son that I love him and that he should always stand up for his woman.¡± My mom around that time was crying and started to fight the man who shot at my dad. The same thing happened to her except when she fell she looked towards where I was silently crying truly  sorrow-filled tears. My mother was shot in the neck so she couldn¡¯t speak but she mouthed to me ¡®I love you, my little dear.¡¯


    Then as if I called them with my tears the police sirens rang out coming closer. The men then clucked their tongues as if that was as much they cared about failing. When they were leaving through the window I spotted something. One of the men who killed my father had a skull shaped tattoo on his neck.


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    The police couldn¡¯t do much to help my parents after they died so all they did was investigate and try to tail the men who escaped. I was sent to an orphanage. I had no relatives that I knew about so this was the only place I could go. It wasn¡¯t much of a change from my past school. I was still bullied but it was different because I had lost a parents warmth. I was there for 3 months before anything happened.


    The big change was that I was going to be taken in by a couple. Apparently the couple were rich. That was all I knew. When I met them however I realized that they were no ordinary couple. They were wearing expensive clothes and had a strong look in them. They explained to me that I was going to be taken in as their daughters future husband. They didn¡¯t talk much more about my fiancee other than that she had a good personality. In the whole month I was with them I didn¡¯t see my fiancee. Finally they said that they would take me to her. They said that I would have to sleep in the same bed as her and live in the same room as her. They also said that I would be allowed to do anything allowed by Nadia. (Anything. *wink* *wink* Honeymoon, anyone.)


    They made a plan for me to meet them. Lets just say that it was a very creative plan. I was going to be put in a big box with a collar saying my position. Then the box would be wrapped and I would wait until my fiancee who I learned her name was Nadia.


    So here I am in the box. I was trying to go back to sleep after thinking about what I would say to her when the box was opened. Suddenly I heard noises of crumpling paper. I kept my eyes cloths thinking what kind of person she would be. Well I could tell that she was very patient because she wasn¡¯t rushing the opening of the box. Then the box opened and I saw a small goddess. This small goddess started at me in silence observing me all over. Which made me want to blush. Her eyes stopped on my neck. Oh, I had forgotten about the collar. I looked into her eyes and stared at her.


    Then I was going to introduce myself when she said, ¡°Please sit up. You must be cramped.¡± She picked me up with scarred hands and a firm strong grip and then sat me on a chair and brought out a jug of water and 2 glasses. Her words really surprised me she was taking this too calmly but I was still happy to be out of that cramped box.


    Then she said, ¡° So, would you please mind explaining the collar.¡± So  I explained why I was in there and who I was to her. I couldn¡¯t help but smile. My future wife was as beautiful as a goddess, kind, very calm, and apparently thoughtful as well.


    ¡°My name is Nadia. It is nice to meet you Amos.¡±


    ¡°It¡¯s ¡­¡­. nice to meet you too.¡±


    ¡°Do you have anything else for me with you?¡±


    Suddenly I remembered the letter. I had been told to give the letter to her when we met but I had forgotten completely. The letter was back on the box so I went to get it. She opened the letter and read it.


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    Hello this is Blackrose156. Did you like the surprise companion? I will write in Nadia¡¯s POV next chapter. Please point out mistakes that I make. I say that too much, huh. Oh, and can anybody suggest ideas for the next big event that will happen. Should I make the big event happen when they are young like now or later when they are in their teenage years. Also can somebody give me ideas for embarrassing situations for the couple. Thanks for reading.

 Chapter 10

    The letter said,


    Dear Nadia,


    Did you like the present? It may have come as a surprise. I know we said that we would give you some freedom but at the very least I want to set you up with someone I know I can trust rather than some unknown people like your brother¡¯s and sister¡¯s wives and husbands.


    But we won¡¯t force you to marry him right now. We will give you time to decide if you want to marry him or not.


    Like I said before in the meeting we will visit you every week. We want to see you after all this time. It may have felt short or long for you but for us it was lonely and long. Now that we know where you are we want to be with you.


    On another note you may not have realized this but it is your birthday.This present counts as my birthday gift. Your father will bring you his present the next next year. Don¡¯t worry there will be no more people in boxes as gifts. It will be an item that will be useful to you.


    Sincerely,


    your mother Anna.


    The next few years past by in a flash for Nadia and Amos. Nadia trained in weapons mastery every day and Amos started with the torture training. Unlike Nadia he actually wanted to do the whole training. He said to Nadia that he was determined to be strong and useful to her. This goal and desire came to Amos because he didn¡¯t want to be so helpless and weak. But because Nadia was already strong and very capable Amos felt that he would have to work harder and became determined. Amos¡¯s new Master Gabriel was happy and content with his determination to be stronger. Amos¡¯s Master Gabriel was a buff looking man who was a jack of all trades.


    After her weapons and body training time was shortened Nadia had to start other training. The first thing she studied was poison and bombs.Nadia was expecting poison an bombs to be dangerous and exciting but Master Anna said that before they tried to make bombs and poison she would have to understand exactly what she was doing. This took time and after two months of it the usually patient Nadia was getting impatient. Master Anna saw this and decided to speed things up because Nadia was learning well. At the end of this Nadia had to take a test to be able to actually get into the poison and bombs. Like always Nadia aced it. After a while Master Anna knew that she had no more to teach Nadia. They ended with a test yet again. The test was actually an assassination. Nadia had to use poison and bombs three different ways to kill a different target. Nadia wasn¡¯t actually happy about killing another person but she knew that she had to in order to be able to move on into different studies. For the first target she put cyanide in almonds. It was a quick kill because she put a large dose in the almonds. For her second target she used poison. The poison she used was Botulinum Toxi. For the third target she used a bomb. The bomb that she used was a CBU-52B. Due to it being a bomb she may have killed more people but thats not the point. She wanted to end with a big bang. Not minding the extra casualties Master Anna approved it and said that Nadia passed.


    For the next lesson Nadia studied Manipulation/ Human Behavior Studies. For this lesson Nadia had to have a test subject. Amos kindly allowed himself to be tested on. Amos was told to lie and then tell the truth so that Nadia would be able to learn how to tell lies from the truth.There were ways to tell a lie but there was no way to be certain of it. It may be shown through body actions, words, or expressions. All that was needed was practice and Nadia had a lot of practice. In order to test to see if she had mastered telling lies from the truth Nadia was told 4 things. There were three truths and one lie. Master Anna would not accept it if she had even one thing wrong. If she did get something wrong then Nadia would have to redo the lesson on lies and truths. Nadia got it wrong once and had to study it again. Nadia didn¡¯t mind getting something wrong but she was a little disappointed. But because the ways of telling lies from the truth is not foolproof or correct all the time she regained confidence. The next time she took the test she got it right. The three truths that Amos told Nadia were before torture training I have never gotten a bruise on my arm, my mother had brown hair, and my dad wore glasses. The lie was I have never been on a school bus more than once. But the whole lesson wasn''t done. Nadia still had to learn about human behavior. No test subjects or volunteers were needed this time so Amos had to go back to training. Nadia passed without even taking a test because there was no way to be sure of human behaviors because every person was unique and could react differently to different situations. The reason why she passed was because she had already learned all that Master Anna had to teach her about Human Behavior Studies. For manipulation Nadia learned how to twist people¡¯s words against the and make them do what she wanted. For manipulations test she had to actually use a person so Nadia was allowed to go outside. But she wasn¡¯t completely unsupervised she had a small camera hidden behind a pin on Nadia¡¯s fancy shirt. Her mission was to convince a person of her being right in an argument. Luckily for Nadia the new president was going to be elected. Nadia didn¡¯t have to make any big changes in the voting and polls but she just had to convince one person against voting for someone. For this mission Nadia studied politics. Even though Nadia was just 9 and ? she liked studying politics. Nadia picked a woman in her 30¡¯s for her mission. The woman was completely taken over and voted for Max Rownd. Coincidentally Max Rownd actually became the president.


    The narrative has been stolen; if detected on Amazon, report the infringement.For Nadia¡¯s next lesson she had to study normal academics. Obviously Nadia wasn¡¯t sent to a public school but instead was homeschooled by Master Anna. being a super fast learner Nadia was able to catch up with the normal education even though she hadn¡¯t been taught at all. In fact in just five months of continuously studying and keeping up with weapons and body training Nadia was in 8th grade level studies. Amos again became a bit depressed and unmotivated but like before regained his motivation.


    Amos had completed his beginner training and Nadia had completed her advanced training. The levels went like this Beginner, Student, Advanced, Expert, Master, King, Emperor, etc. Currently Master Annalie was King ranked while Master Eric was Emperor and Master Gabriel was Expert. For Amos that meant he was going to have his Aura and Ch tested. For Nadia it didn¡¯t mean much. Amos¡¯s crystal was mostly empty which meant that he had less talent than Nadia but more talent than the average human. It wasn¡¯t too bad.


    But despite her many talents and lessons Nadia¡¯s favorite thing to study was disguised and acting. Master Anna was surprised that the expressionless Nadia could change so much. When acting Nadia¡¯s face would change drastically. She would be able to make a smiling face that would melt hearts and she could also make a depressing face that would make you want to make her happy no matter what the cost. But because of her love of acting she developed a habit. Whenever she was caught off guard she would regain her expression. That was the good thing about acting it let Nadia freely express her emotions which she usually kept hidden which was the reason why Nadia liked acting best. For disguise Nadia had to put on makeup and different type of clothes on but because Nadia was young she didn¡¯t have the height and stature to really completely change how she looked.


    But through the years Nadia started to develop nicely.Her beauty as a child had not decreased at all and instead had become many times better unlike how most children grow out of their looks. She was now taller than most teenagers at 14. She also had more curves and size than most. Nadia¡¯s hair had also grown to be as long as her buttocks.She was exceptionally gorgeous and though she had gone through loads and tons of training luckily she didn¡¯t look like it. Amos also changed as well. He also grew taller, in fact he was only 2 inches taller than Nadia. Instead of being cute like before he had grown to be more mature and handsome. He wasn¡¯t even breaking out even though he was in puberty. He had grown muscles but they weren¡¯t noticeable if you didn¡¯t look closely. Like Nadia he had grown pink muscles instead of white muscles.His face was so handsome if he looked at a woman he could make them fall in love instantaneously. Luckily for Nadia he was already completely in love for Nadia and was set on marrying her. For Nadia it was the same. She had grown to love him over the years.


    One day Nadia and her parents were talking like usual and a certain topic came up. This topic was ¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­..


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    Hello readers, i¡¯m sorry for not writing in a while. I just lost my motivation because of something. But I got it back and i¡¯m here. Nadia¡¯s training and childhood took more than I thought it would and i¡¯m thankful that you waited this long. We can finally get on with the story. Here is a picture of Nadia.


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    Thank you for reading.

 Rewrite: Prolouge

    In a white hospital room a woman was groaning in pain. This woman was named Annabelle. According to everyone she had met she was very beautiful. But she was so humble that it made it hard for others to swoon her. By others I meant playboys.


    Only one man had made her fall in love. This man was named Jacob. Currently he was making an extremely worried face as he watched Annabelle, his wife, give birth.


    The two had met in college. They had both been in college. Jacob was in a scholarship he had worked for his entire life. He had started to work as soon as he could because he was one of the less fortunate people. His father had become a drunk and a gambler after his mother died from the deadly type of skin cancer.


    Jacob had not followed his father¡¯s unfortunate footsteps and had worked and studied hard to be a doctor so that no one else would have to go through death. But he wasn¡¯t so pure and innocent to think that no one would ever die and that he could save everyone. He just wanted to save as much people as he could.


    There relationship was a very tough one as they lived completely different lives. On Annabelle''s side she didn¡¯t have to work for anything. She had butlers and maids follow her every command. She was filthy rich! Her parents owned an internet business and they spoiled Anabell a lot. She had gotten in to college with her grades and her parents money (but mostly her parents money.)


    Annabelle hadn¡¯t fallen in love with him instantly but after she tried rejecting him more than once his charming ways had melted her heart. After college ended and years of dating Annabelle was pregnant and her family who had opposed their relationship ever since the beginning got furious that she was about to ruin her life for this poor. But Annabelle had chosen to run away from them thinking that if they wouldn¡¯t let them be together she would leave them.


    Unexpectedly they just let her go. It was a mystery for them but they wouldn¡¯t dare go near them because they knew they were cruel enough to force them to have an abortion.


    The baby was out after a hard excruciating amount of pushing and pushing.


    ¡°It¡¯s a beautiful baby girl.¡± said Jacob while holding the baby tightly in his arms.


    ¡°What should we name her?¡± muttered Annabelle with as much strength as she could muster.


    Jacob looked at her with love in his eyes and said, ¡°Her name will be Nadia.¡±


    ¡°What does it mean?¡± Annabelle asked with curiosity in her voice.


    ¡°The name means hope. She is ours, right?¡± Jacob said with confidence.


    Annabelle nodded and extended her hand. Jacob grabbed it with his free hand and whispered, ¡°I love you.¡± in her ear.


    Annabelle looked at him in the eyes and kissed him lightly before turning her attention back to little Nadia.


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    Years had passed and Nadia was now 9 years old. She was a normal child in all aspects except for her looks. She had gotten her mother looks except she was twice as beautiful. She had beautiful aquamarine eyes and black hair as dark as the night sky.


    Currently she was reading a book at the park. The book she was reading was the only one she owned. Her parents had worked hard to get enough money for their rent, insurance, light bill, water bill, and school expenses.They didn¡¯t have enough money to actually buy a lot of toys for Nadia, much to her disappointment. But Nadia was old enough to understand that her parents loved her and cared for her enough to be working like a slave for her.


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    When she was young she had been quite the crybaby because she couldn¡¯t be with her parents for a long time. At that time she had required much more attention than when she got older.


    Nadia stretched her hands like a cat waking up and slowly jumped down from where she was sitting. She looked at the other children playing and thought, ¡°I wish I could be like them. So carefree.¡± Nadia started to go back home. Right after school she was supposed to go home and wait for her parents with a babysitter. But Nadia didn¡¯t want to be stuck inside like usual. So instead she went to the park thinking that it would be okay. It wouldn¡¯t be.


    Nadia started walking home slowly not wanting to face the trouble she had caused by disappearing when she wasn¡¯t allowed to.


    Suddenly she heard footsteps behind her. This was unusual because the route she would usually take would be empty. It was her shortcut because she was trespassing some other person¡¯s grounds.


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    In another part of town a young looking woman was sitting in an extremely long table. On the other side of the table there was an woman long past her prime.


    ¡°Are you sure that we¡¯ll be able to do anything we want with her?¡± (Young woman)


    ¡°I¡¯m sure. As long as we never see her again you are free to even kill her.¡± (Old woman)


    ¡°That would ruin the fun though. She needs to suffer.¡± (Young woman)


    ¡°Is that trash of a granddaughter even worth your talents and time?¡± (Old woman)


    ¡°Even if she isn¡¯t worth it she will be a fun to to break.¡± (Young woman)


    The started deeply into each others eyes as if having a staring contest. Then they slowly started to smile. But their smiles weren¡¯t sweet ones. They were sinister.


    After the old woman had left a servant of the young woman revealed her curiosity with a question.


    ¡°What exactly are you going to do to her?¡± (Servant)


    ¡°You will see in time. For now just mind your own business, or else.¡± (Young woman)


    As she said ¡°Or else.¡± her hands had moved but her action was invisible to the naked eye. The servant was shocked and scared out of her mind as a small dagger almost hit her throat. The servant slowly kneeled down on the floor.


    ¡°Did you think we didn¡¯t know who you were?¡± (Young woman)


    ¡°I ¡­. I ¡­.. ahhhhhhh.¡± (Servant)


    The young woman grabbed the servants hair and with almost no strength at all pulled out her hair causing a scream. Then she grabbed her by the neck and dragged her away leaving only the sound of screams and the clacks of her high heels.


    ¡°I guess it¡¯s double the fun today.¡± (Young woman)


    The young woman licked her lips and started to laugh as she pressed a button and slowly went down the stairs to the torture chamber breaking the undercover servants head after each step.


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    Nadia kept on walking not wanting to face what was following her. Inside she knew that she had to look because of her curiosity. After about walking for a minute more she slowly turned around.


    What she saw was a man dressed all in black. His face was covered but you could just tell that he was a monster. Nadia stopped still in her tracks but when she saw that he was walking to her she started to run because of her survival instincts.


    Even though she ran she didn¡¯t escape because she was still young and her body didn¡¯t have the capability to run from a grown man. She couldn¡¯t run from him especially if that grown man was like a monster.


    He quickly caught up to her making Nadia¡¯s nerves go wild. He took hold of her shoulder giving Nadia a feeling of extreme disgust. Then he turned her around to face him and punched her right in the middle of her stomach.


    Nadia felt extreme nausea and anguish. She tried to hold to her conscious but it was her first time being hit like that. She had been loved and cared for by everyone she met. She wasn¡¯t used to this type of treatment. Nadia was knocked out and completely defenseless.


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    Hours later Nadia woke up. She scanned the room to see where she was and as soon as she realized that she was in a strange grey room with menacing tools laid out in front of her. There were pliers, hammers, nails, saws, screwdrivers, knives, blades, needles, and many more things.


    At first Nadia thought that this was a workroom for a construction worker or something similar because of all the tools. But when she took the point that she was tied up and left alone like in neglect play she thought that she was kidnapped by an S&M person or just a sadist or torturing person. How she knew that even I¡¯m not sure.


    Processing what she had seen she started to try to move. But she couldn¡¯t. Her hands were tied up to a metal chain that was connected to the ceiling. The same went for her legs and feet.


    Other than being tied up Nadia had also been changed. Unlike before she wasn¡¯t wearing her casual clothes. She had on a flowy and thin white undershirt. This offered no protection from anything. Since there was no protection from the cold temperature Nadia started to get chilly and started to shiver.


    Nadia started struggling. She was trying to move but she couldn¡¯t. To her surprise an opening suddenly came from the wall right in front of her. Light washed the room and Nadia was blinded for a few seconds until her eyes managed to adjust. Then she saw a young woman.


    The young woman had black hair and brown eyes. She had sharp teeth making her look even scarier.


    The young woman came in and stared at Nadia with threatening gaze. She picked up a hammer and started to talk.


    ¡°Now, I know you¡¯re probably wondering what you¡¯re doing here. Well you are here to be my toy. I can¡¯t say any more than that.¡± (Young Woman)


    Nadia tried to avoid her sight but it was impossible as the young woman grabbed her chin.


    ¡°You know, you¡¯re quite beautiful. I don¡¯t like that. But ¡°just because¡± I¡¯m going to give you a choice. Up or down.¡± (Young Woman)


    Nadia tried thinking what she meant by up or down and with her holding that hammer she thought that she might¡¯ve meant that she was going to hurt her.


    Thinking that she might be able to outsmart her Nadia said, ¡°Neither.¡±


    ¡°Acting smart with me girl, huh. Fine, lets give you neither.¡± (Young Woman)


    The young woman tightened her grip on the hammer and without any hint of hesitation hammered her in the stomach 3 times in a row.


    At the second hit Nadia was already at her limit; puking blood and a bunch of other stuff. The young woman saw that she was near unconscious and decided that she should swiftly do what she came her before.


    The young woman got close to Nadia¡¯s face. Then she whispered in her ear.


    ¡°My name is Amelia and we will become very close for the next year. Oh yeah, and my disciples will be coming here tomorrow. You will be our torture subject. Be prepared because unlike me they don¡¯t know much and might break your bones.¡± (Amelia)


    Around 4 hours after Amelia left, the door opened again. Nadia was afraid and thought that it was Amelia. Much to her relief however it was actually not Amelia but another person entirely.


    Amelia had an intimidating aura but this was a gentle aura. Slowly Nadia¡¯s eyes adjusted again letting her slowly see the persons outline. It was a teenager.


    He looked to be around 17 years old. He had normal features but everything about him screamed to be gentle. To Nadia he must¡¯ve looked like an angel because of her trauma.


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    He walked towards her with an emergency kit and started to talk to her.


    ¡°Are you alright?¡± (Young man)


    Nadia looked at him as if he were stupid. You could see in Nadia¡¯s face and body that she was barely still awake and sane. He put his hands up in defense as if Nadia was shooting daggers at him with her eyes. She might have as well been too.


    ¡°Hey, it was a rhetorical question. I know you¡¯re not okay and I¡¯m going to help you.¡± (Young man)


    Nadia didn¡¯t look surprised. His gentle manner and the emergency kit had told her that he was going to. She didn¡¯t even know his name or anything but she thought it would be okay. Nadia attempted to speak but failed. Her body wasn¡¯t working with her. Maybe they and injected her with something. Not that they needed to she wouldn¡¯t be able to do anything to resist or escape. She looked as if she wanted him to continue.


    ¡°Can¡¯t speak huh. Well, my name is Albert.¡± (Albert)


    After a while of her opening up to him he started to talk more about himself. He was a disciple of Amelia by force. He said that his parents had given him up for money and that he had no other place to go. He also said that he wasn¡¯t supposed to be helping Nadia but he knew that she would be extremely hurt.


    ¡°You know she was actually being gentle with you, or at the very least in a way more lenient.¡± (Albert)


    Nadia looked at him with a look of disbelief. Nadia wasn¡¯t able to speak during their conversation but now she was trying to.


    ¡°She ... is¡­¡­ evil.¡± (Nadia)


    ¡°First time I hear you speak. Well, I have seen worse than what she did to you. Like for example ¡­.. Wait I forget that you¡¯re just 9. It¡¯s too much to handle.¡± (Albert)


    ¡°I ¡­. I ¡­ can.¡± (Nadia)


    ¡°Well,  I have to go. Like I said before I¡¯m not supposed to be here. I might come back here but I¡¯m not sure.¡± (Albert)


    He waved her goodbye and left her hanging. Nadia was happy to talk to someone after being left alone for hours. She was just a child and got very lonely.


    She had so much things on her mind. She wanted to see her father and mother. But she couldn¡¯t even move her fingers. How was she going to get to them? She needed to tell them so much things. She needed to tell them that she loved them before Amelia killed her in a gruesome way.


    Right now though she needed to plan her escape. She needed to get out even if she had to kill someone. Nadia spent the night thinking until she couldn¡¯t stay awake anymore.


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    The next day Nadia woke up with a start. Ice water was thrown at her making her scream and she was slapped causing her face to swell up.


    When she finally opened up her eyes she saw that the person who did all those things to her was a young boy around the age of Nadia. He looked to be around 9 years old. He had green eyes and brown hair.


    On his side was Amelia and a 13 year old girl. Amelia was smiling her usual sinister smile at Nadia.


    The young boy slapped her again gaining her attention. He spit on her face causing Nadia to shriek and then started shouting at her.


    ¡°My name is Chase. It seems you are going to be the frog I dissect.¡± (Chase)


    He smiled at her and his smiled seemed to be an almost exact replica of Amelia¡¯s.


    Amelia looked at him with pride and motherly affection as he punched Nadia near the spot she had been hit before. He missed it by inches but it still hurt Nadia. Once again she coughed blood.


    After 30 minutes Chase gave up his ¡°Play time¡± with Nadia after saying a few words.


    ¡°I hate you. I mean who doesn¡¯t.¡± (Chase)


    Then he gave the spotlight to the 13-year-old girl.


    She looked at Nadia with lust and started speaking.


    ¡°Well, I¡¯m going to do a different type of torture that will stick with you forever. Oh, and my name is Constance¡±


    After an hour they left with wide smiles. Nadia was the exact opposite. All her clothes had been taken off and her whole body was filled with bruises and cuts. Most noticeably though was there was blood dripping down through the floor from the center of where Nadia was hanged. Her eyes were lifeless and she seemed to have lost all previous will.


    ¡°What will happen to me now?¡± she barely managed to whisper as she started to shed tears.


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    Hey everybody. This is a sort of darker version of Nadia. I did this to make it more suspenseful and to have a better plot. I hope you enjoyed it.