《Abandoned: The Story About Ryu The Banished God》 Chapter: 0 : Prologue. Author note: This is my first fiction and i''m not quite good at English , so forgive me for mistakes and please write suggestions how to make the story better. ;) Name of the one who''s speaking at the moment: "What it is speaking at the moment" Name of the one who''s thinking at the moment *What it is thinking at the moment* --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hello, this is a story about me a god of war Ryu. At the moment i''m in the middle of slaughtering all the gods, but let''s not get ahead of ourselves and i will tell you how my story started and get to this point when a god is nothing more than an ant to me. When i was born a god from nothingness like the other gods and i was named even before my birth because there is even someone stronger than us gods and he is called Titan the father of gods, but we don''t know who he is we even don''t know how he looks... Well i was named Ryu god of war ,because from my birth i was a prodigy of fighting and at my age of 100 i rivaled the strength of 1000 old god and because of that i started being too arrogant and before i knew all the gods feared me and hated me. When i least expected it they used some kind of magic against me and when i waked up i was in front of council of gods. Elder God: "God Of War Ryu you''re banished from the heaven for 100 thousand years and will live a life of human for the entire time" When he finished telling what i did wrong he didn''t even let me tell a world and used rebirth magic on me and from that moment everything that i saw was black and nothingness just like when i was born as god ,but suddenly i heard voices. Doctor: "Queen, push, push i already see the head" Ryu: *Queen? Push? Head? What the hell are you talking about? Oh yeah... I''m now human* This narrative has been purloined without the author''s approval. Report any appearances on Amazon. Doctor: "King, Queen, Congratulations it''s a healthy girl" When Ryu heard those worlds he''s/she''s hearth almost stopped Nurse: "Doctor, please wear your glasses it''s clearly a boy" Doctor: "Oh yeah.... Sorry my mistake" King/Queen: "Doctor can we see the baby now?" Doctor: "Yeah, please take him" Doctor places the baby in the queens arms. Doctor: *But very strange the boy didn''t even cry or anything* Queen: "Look ,darling, it''s very handsome and strong baby and he didn''t even cry he must be very strong like he''s father" King: "Yeah he didn''t cry. What should we name him?" Queen: "I thing he will be very strong and smart so how about Ryu to honor the god of war?" Ryu: *Great... The same name i had...* King: "Ryu you heard that? It''s your''s name. Can you give me him i would like to play with him" Queen gives Ryu to king , but at that moment king has the expression of the wolf who didn''t eat for months and just catched his prey. Ryu: *I know what you will do, PLEASE DON''T!! Oh i know the only privilege the baby has! Crying!!* Ryu: "Wouaaa wouaaa wu wu wouaaaaaaaaaa!!!" Queen: "Darling, give him to me he clearly doesn''t like you" King: "But why? I just wanted to play with him..." And from that moment my life clearly took a wrong turn.... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Author: "Dear ,reader, if you can please tell my mistakes and suggest something for my fiction at the comments section ;)" Can someone explain how to make stats board or something like that? :D Chapter: 1 : Introduction to the world. Author note: This is my first fiction and i''m not quite good at English , so forgive me for mistakes and please write suggestions how to make the story better. ;) Name of the one who''s speaking at the moment: "What it is speaking at the moment" Name of the one who''s thinking at the moment *What it is thinking at the moment* --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hey, it''s Ryu again now i''m 2 years old during this time i learned to speak, read, crawl, walk and run ,but of course my mom and father only thinks that i can crawl at the moment and thinks that i read books only to look at the pictures ,but of course that isn''t true. I learned that my mother is the queen of the Marbletown and my father is the king. Their names are Cecilia and Arthur, so you can guess i''m the prince. huhh... During these two years i completed my information gathering about the world. This big planet is called Eexis. In this planet there are 4 major countries: Marbletown - where humans lives, Strongwolf - where beast-mans lives, Dragonhill - where draconiacs and other lizard tribes lives, Prylyn - where a lot of other tribes lives ,because in this planet there are: beast-man, humans, draconiacs, dragons, elfs, dwarfs and a lot of more. I learned that this planet is with magic, like i liked to call these planets: Fantasy planets. I learned that there are 10 magician ranks and 10 warrior ranks. Magicians uses mana in their bodies and here is an explanation about the ranks: 1. Beginner: at this rank you can control the mana in your body ,but you can''t cast any spells... Yet. 2. Basic: at this rank you can freely control mana in your body and can start absorb mana which is in the nature and cast spells ,but of course the spells are very weak. You can start to use 4 basic elements: fire, earth, wind and water. 3. Intermediate: this is the rank where it gets interesting because you can already do spells which can even harm other species bodies ,but with very minimum damage like light burns and etc... 4. Advanced: this rank is the most common one ,because every mature man or woman automatically reaches this level with or without training. When you reach advanced if you are experienced with spells you can already do fatal wounds to your opponent. 5. Expert: when you reach expert you can start to use dark and light spells. 6. Professional: at this rank you can already mix 2 elements like: dark with fire: you can use fire which is 10 times more hot and isn''t red ,but black and etc... 7. Wizard: when you reach 7th rank: magician you can already call yourself a powerful magician. At the moment the youngest man who reached 7th rank was 34 year old elf. About the 8th : Magus, 9th : Grand Magus, 10th : Divine Sorcerer, i can''t say much because there isn''t much people who reached those ranks ,but when you are magus you can already dominate 1 thousand man army and you would win at the end, but Grand Magus can easily kill Magus ,because between those ranks is too much of a difference and Divine Sorcerer can kill easily a Grand Magus, but Divine Sorcerer usually goes to a heaven to become a god and doesn''t come back so their number at the moment is very, very low. Stolen content alert: this content belongs on Royal Road. Report any occurrences. Warrior - they use "Ki" in their bodies to fight and there is 10 ranks ,but usually people choose to become magician, because to become warrior you need constant Ki refinement and body training, but warrior of second rank can rival the power of the third rank magician. Well there is explanation about their ranks: 1. Beginner: the only people in this planet with this rank are slaves ,because with magic you can soil another persons soul and ki. 2. Intermediate: you are born with second rank of warrior ,because you are born with pure ki ,but of course you can only control it when you reach 5 year old when your receive blessing from gods. Only when you receive blessing you can start your training, but the gods only give blessings to the people who deserves it. 3. Advanced: when you reach this rank you can strengthen your body ,but can''t strengthen your one part at the time. 4. Specialist: when you are specialist you already have full control of your ki that is in your body. 5. Expert: when you reach expert you can control the ki that isn''t in your body. People call it "inner ki" and "outer ki" 6. Captain: the youngest who reached this rank was 27 years old dwarf. 7. General: when you reach general rank you can join every army and they will give you everything that you want ,because someone with 7th warrior rank can change the course of the battle easily. 8. Warrior: very hard to teach because between general and warrior is very big power difference. 9. Divine Pupil: there are only about 100 in the whole world who are at the moment people of this rank. 10. Divine Master of Fighting: when you reach this rank you can already go to heaven to become god and continue your training there. Well that explains it,but right now i''m useless... I don''t have any powers and was almost killed by assassins of fourth rank... Ridiculous...But how i wait for my 5th from that moment i will train like there''s no tomorrow and i promise that i will personally deal with every god who was against me. But at the moment i can only try to strengthen my body and learn more about the world :/. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Author: "Dear ,reader, if you can please tell my mistakes and suggest something for my fiction at the comments section ;)" Can someone explain how to make stats board or something like that? :D Chapter: 2 : 5th birthday and surprise. Author note: This is my first fiction and i''m not quite good at English , so forgive me for mistakes and please write suggestions how to make the story better. ;) Name of the one who''s speaking at the moment: "What it is speaking at the moment" Name of the one who''s thinking at the moment *What it is thinking at the moment* --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hello it''s Ryu this time i''m super happy, because it''s my 5th birthday and from this day on i can start my training. Yeah guess what? When i was 4 years old mom gave birth to a girl, so now i''m big brother! Right now i''m on my way to party hall where everyone will celebrate my birthday with me and will see which blessing i receive. Guard1: "Prince Ryu Marble, has arrived!!" Guard2: "Congratulations ,Prince" Well when i entered the hall i saw many faces which i even don''t know and they just started to run towards me to congratulate. ???: "Congratulations, Prince!" ???: "Congratulations, Prince, you''re just handsome as you father even more." ???: "Congratulations, Prince, you''re just getting manlier and manlier. I know just perfect fiancee for you she''s my daughter she would be a perfect match." Ryu: *This is getting scary by the second. Father, Mother do your job protect your child!!!* Someone pulls Ryu''s hand and runs with him to hide. Ryu: "Thank you very much, stanger, can i have your name?" The stranger shows it''s face. And it''s a beautiful young girl about 4 years old. "Wow, i never though that there existed a girl at your young age this be beautiful": Ryu just tells accidentally and when understands what he just told starts blushing. When the girl understands what he just told her ,she too starts blushing. (Author: *Start the blushing game!! There''s no winner!! DRAW!*) At the moment Ryu''s father comes. Arthur: "Ryu happy birthday!! Oh i see you met your fiancee already she''s quite beautiful young girl don''t you think?" Ryu: "What fiancee? But i''m just 5 years old!" Arthur: "I wed your mother when i was just 14 years old." Ryu: *Oh yeah..I forgot when you''re 13 you''re already can have a wife* Arthur: "Don''t you like her? Her name''s Aimi." Ryu: "Well let''s ask her do she truly wants for me to take her as a wife" "Well i don''t mind" :Aimi says while blushing *BLUSH LEVEL OVER 9000* Ryu: *Oh so she''s the shy type. Hah.* Ryu: "Okay ,father, i will ,but please let us choose who we want to marry and first ,Aimi, let''s start at just friends ,okay?" Aimi: "If you wish that thats okay, *cough* darling *cough*. *blush*" Ryu *Did i just heard right? Did she called me darling? Or i heard wrong? Please tell me i heard wrong...* Arthur: "As you wish my son. Okay let''s go to have some fun it''s your party after all" When Arthur said those worlds everyone agreed and gone to hall to celebrate. Of course Ryu is still 5 years old so he can''t drink and when he took a glass of champagne to drink. But when he saw he''s mother looking at him with those red eyes and killing aura he was too afraid after that to even drink normal water. Arthur: "Thank you everyone for coming to my son''s special day his 5th birthday! Okay now let''s ask high priest to show him how to unlock his power''s." High priest enter''s the room. He looks like a 80 years old grandpa ,but he''s back is straight and doesn''t have facial hair, with a pure white turban, golden tunic and wearing no shoes, holding a crystal ball in he''s hands. High priest: "Come here, young Ryu, i will tell you what to do" Ryu goes to high priest. High priest: "Just place your hands on this ball" Ryu places his hand even without thinking ,because of too much excitement and the ball starts glowing every possible color and it glows for a while. After about one minute it finally stops and on the ball appears very big board: [/tr]
Status Window
Name:Ryu MarbleAlignment:Neutral
Level:(Hidden)Class:(Hidden)
Race:(Hidden)Gender:Male
Titles
(Hidden)
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Health:(Hidden)Health Regen:(Hidden)
Mana:(Hidden)Mana Regen:(Hidden)
Stamina:(Hidden)Stamina Regen:(Hidden)
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Strenght:(Hidden)Agility:(Hidden)
Vitality:(Hidden)
Intelligence:(Hidden)Wisdom:(Hidden)
Leadership:(Hidden)Luck:(Hidden)
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Elemental Resistances
Fire:(Hidden)Water:(Hidden)
Wind:(Hidden)Earth:(Hidden)
Light:(Hidden)Darkness:(Hidden)
Stolen content warning: this tale belongs on Royal Road. Report any occurrences elsewhere. Ryu: "Why''s everyhing hidden?!" High priest: "Well it''s because you don''t want us to see. Try saying "Status Window" in your head ,but this time it will only show for you and noone even will think that you opened it." Ryu: *Status Window" [/tr]
Status Window
Name:Ryu MarbleAlignment:Neutral
Level:5Class:God Of War
Race:Human/Banished GodGender:Male
Titles
Banished God, World Savior, God-Slayer, The Chosen One, Master Of Fighting
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Health:500/500Health Regen:0.3 / Sec
Mana:1500/1500Mana Regen:0.9 / Sec
Stamina:4000/4000Stamina Regen:4 / Sec
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Strenght:57Agility:89
Vitality:52
Intelligence:1297Wisdom:1341
Leadership:0Luck:14
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Elemental Resistances
Fire:50%Water:50%
Wind:50%Earth:50%
Light:50%Darkness:75%
Ryu: *Well i expected more, but i guess it''s good that i can even have these.* Everyone: "Prince Ryu/Ryu/Son/Darling happy birthday!" Ryu''s mother and father walks to Ryu and tells: "Ryu from tomorrow you will start you training and you will today meet your new teacher who will teach you anything" Ryu: "Thank you, i will make sure not to let you down." The rest of the evening everything was peaceful. The party ended everyone congratulate Ryu again and gone home. Ryu walked to his room, tired not physically ,but mentally ,because he needed to talk with everyone and to make sure to be very nice with everyone. Well Ryu quite liked the party except if there wasn''t any guest that would be even better for him ,but i guess being a prince is sometimes a bad thing. Ryu: *Tomorrow starts my training! I can''t wait!!* --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Author: "Dear ,reader, if you can please tell my mistakes and suggest something for my fiction at the comments section ;)" ---Abandoning the Fiction--- I''m very sorry for closing this ff ,but i promise that tomorrow i will create another one with more interesting story and bigger chapters. I Started Writing a new fiction http://www.royalroadl.com/fiction/2265