《My Revenge: For a lack of a Harem》 Sample Prologue Author notes: Just a sample Would love feedback Will edit the grammar mistakes later just want to hear some opinions on this story. If positive reviews will continue on with this story, was a fun time writing this prologue..:). so would love to continue just need to know if people are interested in it. _______________________________________________________________________________________ Prologue: ¡°Come in¡± a woman¡¯s voice called out of breath from a tent The scene I walked into was a usual scene I had gotten used to. The queen age about twenty, Getting screwed by a young knight. ¡°What do you want?¡± ¡°Just reminding you husband we leave at dawn for the battle tomorrow, that is all you may leave¡± She gave me her sadistic smile as I turned to leave the other guy I didn¡¯t even look because I didn¡¯t really care about him. Why you ask I don¡¯t care about that guy screwing my so called wife. Well I¡¯ll explain it all and this fucked up universe I¡¯m in. My name is Vick my last name doesn¡¯t matter. I was born on earth in the year 1990. So you would think I¡¯m 25. Well I guess half true but I haven¡¯t aged since I reached 20. Did I fall into the fountain of youth? Or am I a machine? You may be wondering Wrong it¡¯s none of those I gave my life/soul to a god; in exchange I go to fantasy worlds as a hero. Why I chose that exchange isn¡¯t it obvious in all light novels in those genres those guys get major busty babes and many of them to form a harem. The god Carmichael is his name took my exchange and even guaranteed I¡¯d be sent to gorgeous woman as a hero when they summoned me. Sounds great right? Freaking wrong that God toyed with me; I could only have a harem after I got the queen/princess. I was sent too to love me first. One problem he sent me to all the stuck up, sick twisted personality ones. This tale has been unlawfully lifted from Royal Road; report any instances of this story if found elsewhere. With this new Queen it¡¯s my 10th time sent as a hero, a rule which this current queen should be lucky I have to follow is, I can¡¯t kill her or anyone on her side/ her kingdom¡¯s soldiers etc. Oh forgot to mention you are probably wondering if I change forms? No I don¡¯t I¡¯m still in the 5¡¯8 brown hair, brown eyes, slim body and ugly mug I was born with on earth. Probably the reason I can¡¯t get these woman. For example when I Came to this world by summoning, the people proclaimed I would marry her. First words she said when she saw me when I arrived was ¡°he¡¯s ugly I won¡¯t marry him.¡± So ever since that day which has been two years, she calls me into her chambers or private tent in this case. Too see for my own eyes I will never lay with her. I hate that freaking God Carmichael he even put it in one of my rules I have to obey her commands excluding a few. Tomorrow I plan to die in this battle. I¡¯m going to use all my magic which is basically a death sentence when your inner magic hits zero. I¡¯m going to take my anger out on those men deemed my enemy by the snot queen. But this time when I go back to Carmichael I plan on making it the last time. He and all his other god buddies are going to die by my hands. Once that¡¯s done I¡¯m coming back to this world and all the others, I had been to before to kill these Queens. That¡¯s right I¡¯m going to overthrow heaven, the worlds, even hell if I have too. The universe should have thought twice before screwing me over. The battle and a meeting with a god notes Decided to continue story have written two more chapters besides this one. Will try to get them up on Wednesday or by the weekend might be busy with school New at writing so would love feedback hope you enjoy ________________________________________________________________________________________ Chapter one: The battle and a meeting with Carmichael ¡°Finally the battle is about to begin¡± I shouted in my head full of excitement, before my eyes stood a massive army on a large open green field soon about to be turned red in the distance. That army was led by a guy named King Drac of the Evest Kingdom. I estimate they have about close to a hundred thousand men, don¡¯t believe my words though I never was good with math. On my left next to me on a white horse my so called wife and queen. Her name is Leah Vander the fourth she is in her twenties with blonde hair, blue eyes and a gorgeous body looking like the gods themselves crafted them. GOD I HATE YOU CARMICHAEL sending me to another gorgeous woman I can¡¯t have. Next to her is Grey Valister a young general in his twenties a so called pretty boy with blonde short hair and emerald eyes. And yes to your question he was the one banging my so called wife last night. He is also on a horse, as for me I don¡¯t get a horse. Leah likes to humiliate me, even though it¡¯s in title only I¡¯m still a King. Have you ever seen a king in battle not on a horse while most other important people are? After surveying the army we divided our forces following the young pretty boys plan. The queen and pretty boy would charge the front with most of our infantry and mages. While I and another general would lead cavalry on the left and right flank so they can¡¯t surround the main force. After several minutes pretty boy gave the signal for the battle to start, I still had no horse while all my men did. But it didn¡¯t matter I had magic I had gotten magic from Carmichael when we made the deal. I basically became a demi-god. He gave me some of his power, but he limited it every time I came to a world. If I had full power everyone on this battlefield would be dead. At the most now I was in the top two hundred with magic on this world. A case of literary theft: this tale is not rightfully on Amazon; if you see it, report the violation. That King we were facing is the strongest magic wielder in this world. But I don¡¯t really care I am going to die on this battlefield anyways once I vent my anger for my cursed existence for a while. I will kill myself and take many people with me. Bringing my hands together I bring forth my inner magic, the one thing users with magic never should do in this world. ¡°Hey what are you doing¡± knight calls from behind I can barely hear him. Overwhelming pain burns into my body as it¡¯s slowly replaced with magic itself OH MY GOD IT BURNS Pain like fire itself scorches everything; I can barely control my shaking. Looking at my arm it¡¯s now been replaced by a blue flame. The fire that is now my arm is slowly starting to disappear. Signaling the short amount of time I have. Suppose it¡¯s about time I start. Flying forward still in pain towards the cavalry of King Drac¡¯s forces I smile a sadistic smile this is the only part of going to worlds I like. But this is all just practice for the real one I want to kill Carmichael. *cough* *cough* ¡°Ugh I always hate this part coming back with the taste of shit in my mouth¡±. I already know I died. I took a total of eight thousand guys me a new record I¡¯m getting better. How do I know I died? Simple I can feel a soft cushiony feeling on my hands and knees, after I die I always come back to a place on the clouds which have the cushiony feeling. ¡°Did you have fun¡± A powerful teasing voice calls Still on my hands and knees I look up. At the silver haired, white skinned man holding a glass of wine with his legs crossed, Surrounded by gorgeous naked woman clinging to him. While sitting on his golden throne, the source of my agony Carmichael. I can feel my blood boiling. Time was limited I only had a short amount of time my power was fully unlocked. Lifting my arm I released my full power a huge blue fireball the size of the sun at the smug bastard on his throne. Today the first one on my revenge list would be gone then it was on to the others. I sure hope a god can die. Trickster Author notes/ First part is a flashback Hope you enjoy feedback/tips always appreciated..:) ________________________________________________________________________________________ Chapter two: The trickster The day my life was supposed to change It was a sunny afternoon walking into the stone school building; I felt butterflies in my stomach more than usual. Yesterday I asked a girl out who was in the same college, same class, and going for the same job goal in life a job as a teacher. We had talked many times before in class but I misunderstood things. It was my first time sadly at the age of twenty talking to a girl so much before. Thus misunderstanding her intention I got rejected I could only imagine what awaited me in class today. Ugh I was almost to the classroom keeping my head down; I must look horrible I stayed up all night cursing myself for being an idiot. Here I was entering the classroom only a few people were there; the teacher was not here yet as the class didn¡¯t start for another six minutes. A group of girls were sitting around each other whispering looking at me and laughing. THUMP Oh god she told them didn¡¯t she Then one a sexy blonde named Courtney around twenty five came over. ¡°Hey your Vick right¡± ¡°y-yes¡± ¡°You know amber said she was disgusted by you asking her out for a date, I would be too if a guy that ugly thought he had a chance with me.¡± FUCKING BITCH I shouted in my mind GOD WHY AM I SOOOO STUPID I SHOULD OF NEVER ASKED HER I CAN¡¯T STAY IN THIS CLASS, THEY WILL HARASS ME FOR THE ENTIRE YEAR Getting up, grabbing my backpack I had laid on the floor turned to leave holding my face which felt red down. ¡°haha what a loser¡± A voice called from behind as I stepped through the doorway Once away from view I started sprinting towards the doors leading to the parking lot. Many people stared at me as I ran towards my car. I didn¡¯t care but man why did I run out there is no going back now. My life is freaking over, how could I be so stupid. OH GOD What will my parents say? They will probably drag me to school like they did in kindergarten. Finally at my car quickly swinging the door open, throwing my backpack in the passenger seat. Putting the keys in and switching the gear from park to drive I hurriedly left the parking lot. Now on the highway I still cursed myself it was all over my life is done. A large tree was in the distance Maybe I should just drive into it My life is over anyways, and even if I continued what that bitch blonde said was true I''m ugly no woman out there is going to fall for me. Slowly turning my wheel I decided I''m sick of this world there is no shot for me. Yet the car didn¡¯t move, looking around it looked like nothing was moving ¡°What the hell is going on¡± I yelled nothing outside was moving cars a few feet away from me weren''t moving either. Then a silver beam like lightning appeared, then the light was gone in its place was a tall man with silver hair and red eyes smiling at me. ¡° My name is Carmichael I have stopped time to give you an offer, Your life that you were about to throw away for anything you want so do you want to make a deal¡± My eyes were bulging out of their sockets, this is a dream no way this is happening. But what if this wasn¡¯t? ¡°dream or not I will take your deal¡± The silver haired man named Carmichael smiled I will take this god¡¯s deal and get something I never could in this world beautiful women and lots of them. That day things were supposed to change _______________________________________________________________________________________ Part 2 The blue fireball closed in on him but it suddenly stopped in its tracks just before him. Then it was gone all that remained was Carmichael now standing in front of his throne with a hand up. With a sudden motion barely visible he moved and now stood in front of me . Drawing his face close to my ear, my rage turned into fear. ¡°you can¡¯t kill me you know, I may have given you power but it was only a third of mine¡±. I felt a pain in my stomach as i looked down. I saw his arm it had gone through my stomach, there was no blood it was like my body was steam. You could be reading stolen content. Head to Royal Road for the genuine story. ¡°I control your soul boy, just as easy as this I can send you into the abyss¡± A sudden pain, then nothing but blackness surrounded me. I had done it now the blackness nothingness this was the eternal abyss. Worse then hell nothing but darkness and yourself. Agony of being by yourself forever. ¡°do you want power?¡± A woman''s voice called ¡°who is there?¡± I moved around still not seeing anything but darkness ¡°do you want power to kill Carmichael?¡± My eyes went wide Turning around again this time I saw a very attractive woman with black hair. A black dress barely covering her mouth dropping body. She wasn''t a god I had seen before. But i could tell she was one with the power i felt emitting from her. ¡°yes I want power¡± ¡°fufu, first answer me a question why do you want to kill Carmichael?¡± ¡° He took my deal then spat on it. It wasn''t supposed to be this way. He gave me power to become a hero someone should of loved me now!¡± I couldn¡¯t stop the tears from falling No one loved me not even my parents they spent all their time with my younger brother. I was ignored nothing but a cast away. That¡¯s why I took the deal with power I could of become a hero and have people love me. I told her all of it i didn''t mean to but it felt good to let it off my shoulders. She smiled ¡°very well¡± A sudden burst of energy went into my body I felt power rise up combining with the power I already had. ¡° now i¡ª¡° The woman started to speak but using my own power and the new I flew to her grabbing her face. With a sudden burst I crushed her head " Thank you for the power but I hate gods¡± ¡°aah¡± I suddenly came to see light again. I was on the ground my body hurt. ¡°he-he you should of heard him, No one loved me *sob sob*, he even tried to kill me¡± Looking up I saw Carmichael smirking next to him was a small little girl looking almost like a doll wearing a red dress laughing. I scowled at her. I should of known it was just an illusion in the abyss one by that red dress loli god trickster. ¡°what a good girl another very good trick I am pleased¡± Carmichael stroked her hair as she made a huge grin. Picking myself up I felt no power Carmichael had locked it all again. I turned to leave to my room. ¡° just so you know Vick in three days you are going to be summoned again this time to a very special queen¡±. Cringing barely able to stop from falling over i left. My rage fueling again ¡°fucking gods¡± ________________________________________________________________________________________ Part 3 A woman watched from her room looking at the desire of her lust she let out a moan. His anger, his hate made her lust after the Man named Vick. She was the goddess of hate and desire: Sable "Aunty" A young girls voice called from outside her room Quickly sable hid the mirror she had used to watch Vick in. "come in" A little girl with black hair and a bright red dress entered the room with a huge smile on her face. "Did you have a good day trickster?" "Yes! Aunty the trick you suggested worked Carmichael loved it! Your so smart aunty" The goddess trickster loved anything that made Carmichael smile. The goddess Sable gave the trickster who had been making a huge grin a small smile. "That''s good, i have another trick this time on Carmichael." Trickster smiled but after hearing the trick was on Carmichael she frowned "oh don''t worry my dear Carmichael will love this one" Sable reassured the little girl Handing her a pair of papers. Sable let in Trickster on the trick they would play on Carmichael. After some time the little girl left after agreeing to help play the trick. "For making me feel such pleasure, i will grant you your wishes. Then you will be mine Vick" Looking at the mirror Sable let out a smile that would make any who had seen mortal or god fall in fear. Her plan had gone into motion. With Vick to be at the very center of it. update Not a chapter First thank you to all who have read my story. I feel my writing could be better, with that said i plan to focus solely on this one for awhile. As with three stories going been focusing more on all three and writing chapters fast. Evidence of my grammar mistakes, will come back and re-edit everything as well. Unauthorized use of content: if you find this story on Amazon, report the violation.Next chapter will be short. Thank you all for reading, even if you didn''t like it. Plan to have a release schedule: every Wednesday, Saturday and Sunday starting next week once my exams are over Thank you once again expect the next two chapters very soon. Chapter Three: The deal ___________________________________________________________________________ Chapter three: The deal Pov Vick: Walking down the long white marble covered hallway, I was filled with dread. For the past two days I had laid unconscious, my soul had taken a heavy toll from being in the abyss. Thus today was the day I would be getting summoned to a world as a hero once again. With my actions against him, Carmichael would surely make the one who was going to summon me an awful person. Nothing could be as worse as my first summoning to Olivia though. I fell in love with the girl and her with me. It was an all a lie coming back one night after clearing a dungeon, to find her sleeping with several guys. Her smiling face when she saw i was watching haunts me every time I close my eyes. Needless to say my time in that world was short I killed myself soon after. Having reached the tall wooden door I braced myself to see that smug bastard there no doubt probably smirking for whatever hell he was going to send me to this time. Much to my surprise in the brightly lit room that had large white circular walls and a summoning circle on the ground. Carmichael was not there instead it was a tall woman around 6''3 wearing a black dress that showed off her voluptuous body. I''m glad that bastard isn''t here but this is odd why is the goddess Sable here? "Oi what the hell-- forgot it just send me to where that bastard as planned for me" I was going to ask why she was here but it doesn''t matter, I''m still probably going to the same hell hole Carmichael as planned. *giggle* " actually Carmichael and I made a little deal, If you complete the task on the world i choose, you will belong to me and if i lose he gets the one thing he cannot have me" rolling my eyes i walk into a small circle within the bigger summoning circle. "whatever i don''t care just send me to the world you choose then" i could really care less about her deal or the task for that matter, all these gods and goddess can go to hell for all i care. "oh i see but you should care as you are special. A god can only have one familiar and you are Carmichael''s. I do not have one thus if you complete the task i can take you and grant you some of my power" "but wh-" Before i can finish sable is now next to me her face close to my ear "your not the only one who wants Carmichael dead, if you become my familiar i will bestow you with some of my power, then you will be able to kill him" Reading on Amazon or a pirate site? This novel is from Royal Road. Support the author by reading it there. This seems to be good to be true but i can''t deny my interest is peaked. "you can only give a third of your power, even with yours i doubt it could be done" (Authors note: only assumes this after Carmichael told him last chapter) She smiled one that sent shivers up my spine "Trickster gave you some of her power the other day in the abyss, even in her illusions she can give power. the fool is not very smart and doesn''t even realize she gave it to you" her mouth did not move this all seems to good to be true "what makes you think i won''t kill you?" " Because Carmichael and I are at the same level power wise. Once you have my power along with the other two you will reach are level but that doesn''t mean you can kill him alone. Only with my help will you succeed" Thinking about her deal it makes sense. Carmichael, Trickster and Sable are the strongest of the gods with all threes power in me i could definitely be strong. That is if Tricksters power really is there and if Sable will actually bestow me power. But one thing keeps nagging me "What do you get out of it if we kill him?" "obviously with me being the strongest i will rule the heavens and for your help you can have anything you desire. So is it a deal?" Getting Carmichael out of the way is my top priority doesn''t mean i wont kill this bitch later. "fine you have a deal, First what is this task i have to do" Moving her arm in the air, suddenly a piece of brown paper appears in her hand. She then gives me the paper. reading it my mouth drops "you can''t be serious!, I''m not sure but this can''t be done in that amount of time!" The hope this crazy woman has given me of killing Carmichael is all gone. "try your best" Is all she says while winking at me Before white lights engulf me i yell "Its impossible!" _______________________________________________________________________________________ Author notes Sorry just need to explain some things i didn''t get a chance to put in or know how to Obviously there is more gods/goddess most are sided with either Carmichael or Sable so that''s the reason she hasn''t tried to kill him off yet basically power wise it goes Sable/Carmichael huge gap between their powers and third strongest Trickster Hope you enjoyed Any tips/feedback always appreciated