《[ Magical Amputee]》 [Prologue- True Happiness set me free Hello everyone I know I have been posting a lot of different light novels but I feel that with this one I will be able to get out what I¡¯ve been imagining and I will probably be ending my other fictions for this one since this one will incorporate all my other ideas. This is my characters narrative on his life so go with the flow bruh! *my slow breathing, reverberates through the room* Hello everyone my name is Rad I am the happiest person on earth. I have two older sibling a girl and boy named Relia and Ron jr. My mother name is Ralia and my dad name is Ron Sr. I love all of them I live in this wonderful hospital where there are beautiful nurses who take care of my every need from wiping me to feeding me delicious food of my choice. Hold on, hold on, you may be wondering why am I living in the hospital were sick people live to die? Well to answer your question I am slowly dying. I am only eight years old and I now have a very weak heart. Now let me tell you it wasn¡¯t because I was born with a heart disease, my health condition stemmed from the inactivity of me not moving my legs or my arms for eight years. The real reason I couldn¡¯t move them was because I was unfortunate enough to not be born with any nerve endings inside my limbs. Effectively since I was born I couldn¡¯t even tell if someone was moving my hands or feet without me even looking directly at them. I have missed many natural milestones in my life because of this ultimate short coming. Eventually even before my first birthday I had to be sent back to the hospital multiple times because of the stagnant blood flow. Then after careful consideration the doctor proposed that I become a quadruple amputee before my arms and legs undergo necrosis and it starts to travel across my body. This decision kept me alive for another seven great years. During these wonderful but short years I found out around the age of four when my parents came to visit that. The reason why I don¡¯t have arms or legs is because all of my nerves where concentrated it my brain effectively unlocking not twenty percent but fifty percent of my brains actual power unwinding some mystery¡¯s that have plagued the human psychological theory for years. With this increase in brain power I was considered a prodigy genius. I no longer needed a calculator or computer to help me study once I found out how something work or how the problem was solved I have never forgot. After some time I began to throw around theories of what and how the world actually worked. Then it all happened on that day the moment I first heard goddess voice and the day my parents and older siblings killed me with tears in their eyes. I was in my dream world. A world where I could run around as I would like and be a regular kid. But something is weird I always see this same woman in the park sitting on the bench watching me. But for some reason whenever I try to run over to talk with her I can¡¯t get any closer than ten meters away. I keep trying every day. Until one day I am close enough to her to see her actual features. She is a tall but very beautiful in her own right. If you encounter this tale on Amazon, note that it''s taken without the author''s consent. Report it. I do not think I have ever seen a more beautiful woman than her. She has slight white hair with magenta highlights. Her face is has a fine but oval shape with very defined angles which makes looking at her from any direction a heart attack for the eyes. But as I am staring at her she, speak for the first time. Goddess* young bed ridden child would you like to experience a life in which they may be able to fix your natural longing to walk and interact with others as do normal people do? I get a big question mark above my head. And I answer if I do would it mean I have to leave my loving family behind even though they care for me with or without limbs? Goddess* yes you will, but at the cost of that magic may be able fix and maybe even give you the body you always wanted. And btw as you are making your decision I have already spoken to your immediate family and they have been talking for years between each other in secret meetings. Questions like if you left would you be able to come back one day or will you have a happier life in that new world if there is one. Goddess* they have come to the conclusion that they want you to have a better life in my world rather than have you bound to a hospital bed for the rest of your life. Even though it has many benefits. Well if they feel as though I can live a better life I will but in my heart I do not know if I could sever the ties of this world. After I say this she snaps her fingers I wake up. To what I find standing above me is my family members crying but holding knives but that isn¡¯t what has me surprised the worst part is. That I am already dying from the wound in my chest apparently I have many stab wounds all over my body. As I let out a last question before I leave my loving family in this world ¡° why would you let me leave, when it hurts you inside? Then my soul leaves my body. I didn¡¯t get an answer all I got was perpetual darkness. Then a window appears in front of me.
You Rad have been transported into a world where your illness and handicap can be managed. Since your body was killed in your last world to separate your soul from earth body. Your new but same body is based off the one you had on earth since your soul cannot be changed to represent something it never had you will be given a quirk though with the new one. Ps. just think Voltron everyone unite that¡¯s my hint on what his new body will be able to do.
Chapter 1-milestones/once of a life time meeting Chapter 2: Well hello everyone currently I have final exams this week and the next but when summer comes I¡¯ll be able to let out more decent size chapters as of right now about 1500 to 2000 words is all I can muster. As I am waiting for my body to be made I am reading all of the windows that appeared before me. Second one reads, that I am hereby granted a skeletal frame made of magical magnetic nerves that will act as my skeletal limbs until I am able to cover them up with various materials. [Magnetic nerves]: the user supplements what he doesn''t have to keep him balanced by extending his nerves out and forming a basic limbs for normal use. If not covered up you are extremely vulnerable to dying of a severe strain of nerve pain. Currently you are only able to produce baby limbs they are very tender and weak. The moment you find a suitable material that can hide your skeletal frame you will be able to equip and detach at will till you find a suitable replacement or upgrade. My third and final window shows me my last skill. [Material configuration]: any matter present can be used and configured to suit your needs. Power to control the properties of matter. After I read the skills that will be beneficial for my survival in this world. I suddenly pass out. But as the darkness covers me I here in my mind a beautiful voice that wishes me good luck and to try and experience life outside of what I was use too. A day later. I have arrived in this new world, but thing is I do not know where I am at? For convenience I was transported right next to a large river in the middle of a giant forest. During the day when I first woke up the first thing I wanted to do was try out how to correctly walk but I think I first needed to know how to extend my nerves out to make my basic limbs. After a few tries I kind of got the hang of it, and I could extend it about a good six inches before it stopped and formed little hands and my two elbows knees and feet. With my increased brain power staying calm and collected while trying to manipulate these new limbs was rather easy. You could say I¡¯m a prodigy since it¡¯s been about eight years since I was born and I am just learning how my hands and feet move. After a few more tries I can feel the control getting better and better. At this moment I think it is time for me to skip a milestone I think it¡¯s time for me to start crawling/rolling. I slowly rock my body till I am able to roll onto my stomach and as the momentum builds I go for a hard left and roll right on to my stomach. And when I¡¯m safely laying up on my tummy I go into my first push up position. It was at this moment I knew I fucked up, my makeshift arms were wiggling uncontrollably and suddenly they disappeared back into my mini stubs and I face planted so hard into the ground I think I knocked my little self-unconscious. I didn¡¯t have enough time to cry since I immediately went unconscious but I knew I should have practiced a bit more. It¡¯s been two long hours of groaning and whining in my sleep. I woke up soon after. I feel a medium size bump above my forehead. That will take time to heal now, after failing a couple more times I sort of get the hang of pushing my body up and letting it be supported by the palms of my hands and my ever so ache knees. I don¡¯t know if it can actually receive wounds from my makeshift arms, the reason I think this is because ever since I¡¯ve been playing around with them I only feel when I touch something and if it hurts it just stings my entire arm instead of what usually happens when you get an injury or put pressure on a part of your body. Also my arms and legs turns from a dark purple bright green when I feel the stinging sensation. But enough time experimenting it¡¯s been nearly two days and I have not been able to eat anything since I got here, I blame this on me not being able to walk around and look for food. But crawling is the next best thing. As I am slowly approaching the forest I see a small bush that has many blue berries hanging from it. I question it for a second should I really eat this? But my hunger takes over and extend my hand to grab as many berries as I can after a few minutes of eating I went to sleep. With my head next to the berry bush I don¡¯t think my stamina game is Ai yet. Three hours later I wake up and I feel very thirsty so I rush as fast as I can but honestly it¡¯s just a few meters every five minutes. I finally arrive at the river. I try to cup the water in my little fingers but it slips out every time so I can¡¯t get any unless I put my head in and I don¡¯t want to drown myself by mistake. So for a few minutes I begin to think what can it do? Stolen story; please report.Then suddenly I just remembered I have a specific skill that lets me configure matter for my own needs I wonder if my needs include drinking water. I try to experiment I stick a finger into the river and say configuration! As soon as I say that water flows from my index finger up my arms and then it stops at my shoulder, I began to feel hydrated. I tried stopping the flow but once it covered my entire arm it moved across my chest and it began covering the other exposed limbs in water and once it was done a box appeared in front of me. Water skin has been attained! [Water Skin]: coats unprotected body parts in water to protect it from UN needed danger. It also reflects light in a way they would make it seem as though you have regular human skin. To keep water from evaporating you have to refuel with fresh water every seven days. As the box goes away I could feel the stinging sensation of the pressure on my knees go away now all I feel is a mild pressure feeling? Is this what people feel when they sit on their knees? As I start crawling I feel a bit more power in my legs and arms I take this as a chance. I move away from the river and I push myself almost upright and now my wobbly legs are standing straight up. I stay like this for a few minutes. In awe I feel a tear come out of my eye I stood up by myself for the first time in both of my lives. But as soon I start trying to walk is problem. I remember fantasizing which foot I would use to take my first step I ended up going for the left since it¡¯s always Left right. As I am moving my leg in a forward motion for the first time it¡¯s very hard to do and once my foot touches the ground I feel a tickly sensation and all in that moment I knew I fuck up my legs started going in different directions and I ended up hitting a full on cheerleader split one butt cheek going one way the other the other. But as my balls touch the ground I don¡¯t feel hurt as much. The reason why is because I¡¯m not a teenager yet and my balls have not dropped so they don¡¯t have much feeling inside them yet enough to cause a seen. I disregard it as I try to get back to taking my first steps and I do but only for a couple of meters and I tire myself out and I am forced to crawl on the ground again towards a nearby tree. I touch the tree and wonder since I can basically control matter for my basic needs I need something safe to sleep in maybe I can make a bed out of the bark on the tree. I say configuration and immediately the bark and some wood separate from the tree and forms into a long rectangle it looks un comfortable so I try to reach for the leaves but they are too high for my reach so I settle for the bush fuzz to sleep on over the bark for the night I go to sleep for the remainder of the day. And right before I go to sleep I hear ruffles in the bushes and immediately following the sound, a very short buff man comes out holding a very black hammer. He walks towards my make shift bed and looks me right in the eyes I do not know what to do I have never been in a fight, so I do the next best thing roll myself into the fetal position. And yell out please don¡¯t hurt me!!!!!!! [Short Man] chill youngin I ain''t go hurt ya, I felt a magic power unknown to me and I felt it in this direction did you see anything? But before he could even get an answer one came for him as he saw the youth with a strange glow around his arms and legs. Before I could even say anything he started staring at my arms and legs I could feel him looking through my fake skin. Is this what they call a discerning eye? Right when I was going to talk again he cut me off again. [shortman] well since you don¡¯t seem to have any parents young i would like to stay with me there aren''t that many humans in this area of the continent so you probably would have been taken away to a slaver. I reply yes because even though im by myself I know I can¡¯t support myself without knowledge of the world I need someone to teach me at least the basics so I reply with a yes. At this moment I did know my future would be so heavily influenced on this one meeting.
***Author notes: Hello everyone please comment on my original story I have put a lot of work in to getting my ideas on paper this time I feel that I can only get better point out mistakes for me comment comment comment.*****
chapter 2- Feline model (1)? Chapter: 2 Currently I am with my new caregiver his name is Dorian and he is what this world would call a dwarf. I didn¡¯t really get why a person can naturally be so short but so rigged with muscles. It¡¯s very weird maybe they had these types of people in my past world. Also since I have just started walking, I did my best puppy dog eyes and asked him if he would be able to pick me up and carry my until I¡¯m able to walk by myself. Since I get tired very easily. He agrees and swings me across his shoulder. I have no problems with this position since it benefits me now I don¡¯t have to struggle as much. We are progressing at a fast pace threw the forest, on the way there I see many different animals roaming about, in particular I see a squirrel but the weird thing is that is flying by flapping its wings and flying from branch to branch. I do not think they have these types of squirrels back home in my past world. I guess you learn new things every day is really true. Since he has me on his shoulder facing the same way as him I could see a lot of small building all congregated in the same place. Outside these buildings of various sizes I can see many small men and woman roaming about, some are fixing and repairing items i have never seen before. But as I am studying the various new scenes I see a shift in view and my face plants right in too the dirt path. [Dorian]¡± damn boy, my bad I didn¡¯t mean to drop you I was just a bit tired, I carried you for about five miles straight without breaks. It¡¯s hard on an old man¡¯s body.¡± When he finishes talking he starts rubbing his back to alleviate the pain. Then he says kid follow me were going to my house before we go ahead and meet with the council to let them know a human will be living in the village. While he was saying that I was already walking, towards this big garden in front of the village. There are many children and adults working pulling weeds and various fruits and vegetables out, but what I didn¡¯t know was that Dorian was yelling something very important and when I turned back around all I could hear was. [Dorian] ¡°Kid you don¡¯t have any clothes on!!!!!¡± It was at that moment I knew I fucked up. I turned back around to see if any of the people working and playing had heard him say that, all I could see was woman blushing and turning around. The out of the blue a child next to his parent says ¡° mommy why does that boy have a baby carrot hanging from between his legs. The mother in question quickly covers the child eyes, and my face begins to flush bright red as I walk faster towards Dorian. Before I could even say anything he throws his shirt at me and tell me to just hurry up so we can go. A few minutes later we arrived at his home, and he tells me to wait in the living room while he goes to get some clothing for me to wear since I am fully naked. As he hands me the clothes I try them on they fit really well on the count that my arms and legs are not as long as their supposed to be, I guess I¡¯ll just grow into it. In particular my arms barely make it out of the long sleeves. After some adjustments such as rolling up the sleeves and the pants legs, Dorian sits down on a chair that was next to a big leather sofa but the weird thing is the sofa looked very modern it was all black leather with metal stools underneath it. ¡­¡­¡­. After a few hours of talking into the night I started to get tired, my stamina is still not as good as I would want it to be. Well honestly I didn¡¯t think walking and crawling for a day would help me build stamina regular children build up. I figured out many things over the past couples of hour what would have taken me years to figure out by myself living in the forest by myself. I am currently deep within the Dwarf country, a very secluded place that produces some of their nations weapons and tools. It learned there are status screens which let you see your current skills and strength level. That¡¯s mostly it when learned what it exactly is tried to pull up my status screen but it only showed me a few skills my name and my current rank. Right now I am what they call infant class based on my bodies current abilities can show off right now. Infant class is given to mostly children the ones that are barely one years old. When I found this out I kind of let out a few Boy Scout tears, to know that your body isn¡¯t even pass what a one year old child or new born can even muster can hurt a little boys heart. But that won¡¯t put me down I know I will have to train and build up my body it¡¯s not like I¡¯m flaunting a six pack when I knew I never even worked out before. I have a little of what a person would call a baby gut right now. Well ill lose that once I start slowly gaining more stamina. For now why don¡¯t I go to sleep right now today has been very eventful? Eventually I nod myself to sleep on the sofa before Dorian offers me one of the beds in the room. [Dorian]¡± well the young-in must be very tired he could barely walk for a few meters before tiring out. ¡­¡­¡­. Ten hours later I wake up to a loud banging sound coming from outside the house, then I notice that there is water leakage on the bed maybe some of the water from my legs dripped of through the night? I slowly roll myself out of the bed and before I could even touch the floor I slip and face plant right into the wood floors. It hurt but I didn''t pass out from the pain maybe my body is getting stronger, I slowly walk towards the sound I have to navigate myself to the right place since it¡¯s my first time in here. Once I cross the living room I see across the room there is a big metal door locked completely shut, but I can still hear the loud banging coming from inside the metal door. I slowly wobble across the room I still don¡¯t have that much control when walking so I make a lot of heavy squeak noises. I soon arrive at the door I try to push it open. But it¡¯s very heavy. Then I notice there is a handle right above my head I reach for it and try to turn it towards me a loud click resounds around the room, and the door swings open and a gust of hot air permeates threw out the room. If you spot this narrative on Amazon, know that it has been stolen. Report the violation. All I here is ¡°aww fuck who let in all the cool air, the weapons going to cool off at this rate.¡± I haven¡¯t noticed yet but my arms and legs are evaporating from the heat and soon I feel a slight shift in height and I notice there isn¡¯t any water on my arms or legs anymore. Then suddenly a window pops up in front of me ¡°There are four elements currently in your zone of influence would you like to configure them onto your arms and legs¡± I say yes out loud! Before I could even see what happens my skin is assaulted by the water in the air, the wind, the heat and the metal on the door. It flows onto me and my arms turn a pale silver with hints of red, blue clear blotches. Then another ding resounds in my head [Elemental skin]: the skill has been acquired
[Elemental skin]: (the user is able to control the elements residing inside his arms to a certain extinct currently you are only able to use the lesser qualities of the four elements you absorbed. ? Lesser heat ? Water drops ? Steel liquid flakes ? Wind breeze )
As I am reading the box in front of me I start to feel a bit dizzy, then I notice the sudden heat being emitted in front of me. I start breathing hard to the point where I am starting to black out then I hit the ground and the darkness overcomes me. A few hours later I wake up on the bed again, it think to myself I wonder what happened I remember reading a window box and I just¡­. Why is it so blurry my memories feel kind of weird. Wait, How long have I been out? Right as I think this in comes Dorian. [Dorian]¡± ah , kid you just woke up I thought you was dead for a second when you open the door to my forge. What¡¯s a forge? [Dorian]¡± a forge is place where people build tools, weapons and make new inventions using various materials.¡± Oh I see, Well can I see you work I would very much like to see how you a person would work in a forge? [Dorian]¡± of course you can lad but you will have get use to the heat you passed out before you even took a look at what I was doing.¡± You also kind of destroyed one of the weapons I was currently working on. Also since its going to take you awhile to get use the heat I might as well train ya before you even go into the forge. I reply with a yes because right now I am very interested to see how people make weapons. [Dorian]¡± youngin my first task for you is to sit by the door while I work on some tools and gradually you move towards where I am working. ¡­¡­¡­¡­. Fast forward a couple of days as of right now I can stand being in the forge for about two hours before my body heats up and I get a bit dizzy. But right now im also able to partially roam about in this heat box. ¡­¡­¡­ A few more weeks passed by and I am able to go up towards the actual forge and look closely at when Dorian is reconstructing and melting ore. Then it came the day I made my first equipment, it was one of the regular days in the forge and Dorian had got a request to make a versatile weapon out of the fangs and claws of this local feline that was known to have claws that extend two feet from its paws and can retract into back into its paws. While he was hammering away at the new weapon he finally finished, It was a scythe made with dark steel and the sharpened claws of the feline. It was a very menacing weapon every three centimeters there was a blade extending from the base of the scythe it looked like a birds wing without the feathers. He called it ¡°last flight¡± After he sharpened it some more he put it in a metal case by pushing down on the handle and the pole part of it condense down into one meter form and the blades on the base folded down on each other. While he was doing this I was messing around with the left over from the order there were many long cat claws and fangs in a corner, but since I couldn¡¯t make any equipment until I learn the basics I wanted to try this new thing out to see if I could make a weapon out of the left overs so I laid down some regular steel and some cat claws and fangs I touched them and said configure into a weapon for me. A bright light flashed in front of me, Dorian looked over to see what commotion was and before he could say anything to me the various materials floated together and made steel gauntlets and boots with that travel up towards the knee. Then it floated towards me and it phased onto my body and I heard a small click and clunk noise and I could feel my skin change and before I knew it. Pale grey lines with different color spots on it started to flow continuously on the metal parts and the edges of the fangs. Then another box pop up in front of me. ¡° Would you like to create a name for the new item?¡± I clicked yes. And in my mind since this was the name of the creature I named it ¡° Feline model (1)¡±
[New armor: Feline Model (1) (panther lily)] (This suit was made my Rad a curious boy who can configure matter to his will. This partial suit was only made because of the weird mistake of combining these different parts to make a special equipment for Rad. ? Is able to use extend claws in full feline mode. ? Helps the user by giving them perfect balance and the agility of a cat. ? Has good attack power when slicing)
Author notes: I will end this chapter right here since I¡¯m kind of tired right now its ten o¡¯clock and I have to be up early tomorrow. But comment and tell me if you like the chapter I will reply to everyone¡¯s comment
Chapter 3- inventions/ and mistakes ¡°On my body this partial armor still begins to glow, while I am still trying to figure out how to control the suit Dorian comes up to me.¡± [Dorian]¡± boy how did you create this? I have never before seen something of this nature before.¡± ¡°I think for a split second before I began to tell him the reason im able to create things of weird nature.¡± ¡°I tell him its cause of using this skill called Material configuration, every time I want to create something for my own benefit, all the various ingredient and items are drawn towards me and combined to my body to make what you would call new inventions. But the down side is that it will only cover my full legs and arms.¡± Then he asked me another question ¡°wondering if this skill is learnable since it could easily help him with new ideas in blacksmithing.¡± I told him I was basically born with the skill so I don¡¯t know all the secrets of what it could do, but I do know now that if I learned blacksmithing and other crafts it can maybe show me a pathway to understanding its uses. Then Dorian tells me why don¡¯t I just be his apprentice and whatever I build is my own but if he needs help on a particular item I help him by changing it when I get more control over my powers. ¡­¡­¡­. Just like that a month passed by I have come to the forge every day since then and I have been able to gain a bit more muscle over time. The first day I started my training Dorian told me to hit the anvil with as force as possible and do it as many times as possible till I got tired. I was only able to do it once before my body starting shaking UN controllably. After a few more times I got the hang of it and the rhythm. Then right before I was about to do it again, ding resounded in my head and a window popped up before me. It read ¡° You have just learned the skill vibration shock aborption.¡±
[Vibration shock absorption]: ? the user is able to absorb one percent of any vibrations that travels through the body. As the skill gets stronger you will be able feel exactly where the vibrations are coming from. ? Skill may develop into extreme echolocation if the skill toggle is on for too long subjecting the user to being extremely sensitive to vibrations in his sphere of influence. ? Once the user can tell how strong the vibrations are you¡¯ll be able to guide it out of your body making you immune towards this.
After I finished reading I ran towards Dorian he was sitting on his comfy chair while waiting for me to tire myself from the strength training. Then I blurted out ¡°Dorian Dorian I gained a new skill its call vibration shock absorption after hitting the anvil so many times with the hammer.¡± [Dorian]¡± huh, wait what kid you shouldn¡¯t have learned that skill until after you could find impurities within the ignots. What sort of monster are you to learn how to properly resist the vibrations. ¡°Damn this kid doesn¡¯t know it yet but he is extremely talented if was a genius for doing it in six months what would they call this kid that did it in less than a month, is he a god the making!¡± ¡° we might as well move to the next step, Rad my boy it is time for you to move on the next step you will build your first weapon you can choose which one to make and ill show you as many time how to make it perfectly, till you are able to do it on reflex.¡± ¡­¡­¡­¡­. Well it¡¯s been a couple of days since I have been practicing how to make a sword and I could say im getting fairly good at this after heating Up the ignots in the forge I poor it in the sword shape caste so it can to take the proper form. And I could say it came out nice. After a bit of precise banging on it for an hour. Usually you would think that you will get a skill for making a specific weapon for the first time and I did think that, but what I have come to figure out from Dorians instructions is that anything you build doesn¡¯t have its own skill black smiting is black smiting. ¡°so even if I was to create a sword, bow, armor, or helmet it will all be the same it¡¯s just black smiting, he also said it would be a waste of time if each one had their own sub categories since you would have to individually grind one till it¡¯s about master level which would in return waste a lot of time.¡± ¡­¡­¡­ A few more months passed while I am learning the basics of black smiting, then the day came when I learn that I have passed the basic rank and from now on anything I make will have to come from my imagination. I cant keep making the same swords shields and armors I have to make my own type of weapon that will make my own name known. In a few years Dorian sad I¡¯ll be going to school so when I turn ten I will be sent off to learn more about this world and about the secret and potential of my powers everyone has to go even if you are poor he said. s But before then, while I am creating my own unique weapons and tool I will venture out into the woods to train my body by hunting the various monsters so that I won¡¯t look weak when I leave, also so I could protect myself. This content has been misappropriated from Royal Road; report any instances of this story if found elsewhere. Since I already have my feline suit model one will be adding to it by creating weapons that¡¯ll be able to detach themselves from it or add on attachment. The first attachment I made after progressing passed the basic stage of my craft I tried making a unique weapon with a range feature. It will attach to my forehand, after I was finished crafting the thin disk shooter that will shoot out the projectiles I made I made another attachment to the side of the tube which will shoot out tiny needles made of metal. But the thing its I will have to make the tiny projectiles in quantity if I want it to be effective. The first one I decided to make first was the one I was un familiar with the disk . to make the disk I would need some kind of way to cut the the glass block in to tiny disk shapes without making them to big. After carving a long block with a knife carefully I finally made it into a perfect circle on the second try. Then I used what they call a paper an ore cutter and affixed the glass at the right width height and length and I gently cut the first slice and it looked perfect. Before I started to make more I inserted it in the cartridge and tried to shoot it into the testing area for weapons. But before I could shoot it a window popped up. ¡°what would you like to name this weapon attachment¡± \ I say I would like to call it ¡° [Mini Divider model (1)]:
[Mini Divider model (1)]: ? a weapon capable of severing any thing in its path if given enough spin and power. ? You can add elements to increase spin or destructive power. ? ???? ? ????
After shooting it the first time it did not go very far before lightly falling on the ground, then an idea popped into my head what would happen if I supplied it with some of the wind magic in my skin would I fly faster? Before long I inserted it again into the disk cartridge I made and I channeled the gentle breeze threw my skin towards the disk and before I shot it off at the target it I heard a light whistle and I fisted my hand and it shot out a bit faster before but what was different after getting some rotation it cut off the targets arm in one move. ¡° damn that was so cool my eyes lit up as I saw the slicing damage it had.¡± Omg this is so going to be my middle ranged weapon.¡± After a few more test shots I think it was time for me to try this on a the smallest monster in the forest and I think I know just who to try it on. As I am getting ready to go on my first outing I have Dorian as my emergency if I almost get myself killed, then I notice a flaw in my plan I have not set foot outside of this house since I first came here, ¡±what if the first time I set foot out and a giant bug comes and sucks the life out of me , I don¡¯t have a plan I do not know what types of animals to hunt first, am I going to be the one hunted? I walk over to Dorian to ask what is the weakest animal in this forest and where can I find it. I get a simple nod, as if he is affirming what I said and he said the weakest monster in the forest is a flying squirrel if you base it on power levels but it has great adaptability, the next weakest is the easiest to find and it¡¯s a paper snake it slithers on the ground shifting threw the blades of grass like the wind its fast but weak once you can avoid its first strike. After putting my partial feline armor model one on we head out to hunt. After twenty minutes of walking we quickly find a paper snake slithering around a baby mammal like creature. As it is squeezing it to death it pays me no attention to focus on its task. As I am getting ready to take the shot aimed at the snakes head to test my new weapons effectiveness, I make sure to gauge the distance from where me and the snake are. So as I steadly supply my gentle breeze to my glass disk I aim for its head and shoot it out, it travels the ten meters in a few seconds and right as it is about to hit the snake the parent squirrel comes out of nowhere ¡°I have come to save you son!!!!¡± To me I just heard a squeak, squeak, squeeeeeek! And right as the disk slashes the snakes neck it keeps traveling and it hits the parent flying squirrel right in the leg and it just gets sliced off, As I look in horror of what I have done, right before the parent squirrel hits the ground it looks in my direction and I could hear inside my head ¡°why human I was just trying to save my son? And a deafening splat resounds in the forest. ¡­¡­¡­¡­
Author notes: tell me if you liked it basically im going kind of slow because I am building up the main character first not the world since he is only focused on black smiting and learning how to hunt so he could survive in this world. Tell me if you liked it or not or how I can make it better Im not good at conversational dialogue so please don¡¯t bash me I can explain really well though.
Chapter 4- fix up/ and new inventions Chapter 4: ¡°As I quickly get up from my position I hurry over to the spot where the parent squirrel just dive bombed into.¡± What I see is a flying squirrel with lots of blood coming off its missing leg. I don¡¯t know if I think it will survive if I try to save it so I pick it up with a towel Dorian gave me and rushed off towards the little one before it could even try to run away I hurried and snatched him from his position. ¡°as Dorian sees what im doing, he tells me lets rush too my house I have a my first aid box at home we aren¡¯t that far.¡± we are running at the fastest pace possible I am struggling to rush at the same speed as Dorian, this is actually my first time running with armor on so I haven¡¯t really got used to running with it.¡± So I ask Dorian if he could rush the rest of the way, I know im only keeping up because hes letting me and before I could even hand the wounded parent squirrel over, something really incredible happens.¡± [Dorian]¡± young in I think it¡¯s time for me to show you one of my secret skills, I call it ¡°morphing strength¡± I know dwarfs aren¡¯t as fast as other intelligent species but I¡¯ll show you that they are wrong about us. After he said Morphing strength he gained three feet of height In a second then his entire lower body bulged until even his veins looked like they had veins constricting themselves then he gripped me by my waist with one hand and in a instant we were in front of the damn house. ¡° I could not comprehend how fast that was but what I did know was that I needed to hold on to the two squirrels as to not lose them. After arriving in front the house we hurried up and ran in to the house right after Dorian Morphed down to his regular size. ¡°As soon as we get inside the living room I set the injured parent squirrel on the table and wait for Dorian to get the first aid box..¡± The parent squirrel tried talking to me again through telepathy, it felt very weird to hear another voice other than yours when you¡¯re just thinking. It kept asking me if I got his son to safety, and I told him that I brought him with me he currently laying down on the sofa over there. After I said that Darion walks in and preps what we are going to do, he pulls out a glass like object and inspects the wound, he tells me that the bottom left limb was cut off so cleanly that he would need to sutures the blood vessels close and stitch the skin close that was cut off and attach it back on, and before I could think anymore I completely forgot to pick up the freshly cut limb. After thinking for a few minutes Dorian gets closer and closer to finishing the operation and right before he closes it I tell him to stop and that I have a sudden idea since I don¡¯t want the poor guy to be flying around unbalanced I said I¡¯ll give him a pseudo arm like mine, if I can do it right like mine. He won¡¯t have as much trouble as he would without it, so I began my first experiment on sentient life, I touch the squirrels little stub and I transfer a bit of my ability on it. It takes a while after a few mishaps and I can see the stub slowly turning into little squirrel paw. Then I tried another thing so he wouldn¡¯t be so sensitive pain so I tried to tap into his monster core and bring out his specific attribute. ¡°When I did do it something weird happened once I touched his monster core with my configuration ability, a screen popped up in front of me. [Elemental Skin Upgrade]: ¡°would you like to upgrade your elemental skin, you have come into contact with the next level for your gentle breeze attribute, ¡°lesser gale¡±. As I read through the content of the message I obviously clicked yes to it. After learning this secret I wonder if this is the clue I need to upgrade elemental skins affinities. Then while I was happily exited on my discovery, Dorian and the parent squirrel was just looking at me with the face that would say what are you happy about. I quickly turned my face out of their glancing range. ¡° I had told each of them how after I fixed the nut berries leg I had gained an upgrade to one of my affinities after I had touched berries monster core. My skill went from gentle breeze to lesser gale. Also yes his name is Nut berry.¡± [Dorians]¡± eyes suddenly went wide after he had heard what I had said. This was his first time ever hearing that after connecting your mana to a monster core would you be able to upgrade an affinity based on its compatibility. After we talked for a while I had offered berry and his son to stay here if they wanted, of course with Dorians Permission. ¡­¡­¡­¡­.. Later that day I had to tinker a bit with my new weapon I had added on a new feature an air compressor that when I run out of disk I can shoot it off even without it but with lesser force. The narrative has been taken without authorization; if you see it on Amazon, report the incident.
[Mini Divider model (1)]: ? A weapon capable of severing anything in its path if given enough spin and power. ? You can add elements to increase spin or destructive power. ? Lesser gale divider-shot of quick slices of air when thin glass disk run out. ? Lesser gale blowback- able to blow back or stun anything under two hundred pounds.
I also built into an attachment that with the combination of the compressor and my lesser gale winds I could blow back someone who is trying to get close with a large burst of air. It¡¯s a feature I put in since I have not had any close combat training, yet. Today after our close miss call with reckless killing i have learned a valuable lesson and the main one is some of my ideas are very strong in nature, but if I don¡¯t regulate their power they can cause reckless damage. Let¡¯s fast forward a week. I have currently been given a regiment to build my body up a bit more since hunting other monsters would be too much for me. ¡°so I will demonstrate my current regiment, first I run around the village for about an hour, but hat didn¡¯t turn out so good. My first day I did not know how lazy I was till I made my first lap around my legs felt like pudding after I made it to Dorians house.¡± ¡°But I didn¡¯t let that stop me so I went around a few times until I hit number four and I ended up laying in my bed for a week.¡± I could feel the lactic acid build up around my butt cheeks and my whole chest area. I don¡¯t think I can move for a while. I reminisce about a certain anime of when you beaten down enough your body will get stronger based on how strong you pushed it. After remembering it I now know how wrong that lie was, well I was younger back then and I thought if you casted a spell on your jello it would turn into a slime monster, but that never happened but I didn¡¯t let that stop my abundant creativity. ¡­¡­¡­.. It¡¯s been three months since I first started my body strength training, and today was the day that Dorian will teach me how to make a special ring. I think he called it a portable inventory it will help me carry all of my equipment and partial suits if need be but the trick part is that you have to be able to hold up to the weight all it does is condense items into a denser form to be carried easier. It was a technology built to help merchants and mercenaries carry their supplies when needed. It took a few tries since I haven¡¯t worked with this metal before they call it, ¡°voided metal¡± it metal that when you craft it you have to be able to craft it your specific strength so you can carry it. [Before people start wondering how a merchant holds all those supplies it¡¯s that they are incredibly buff to become one you have to be able to lift 1000 pounds while calm.] Since I didn¡¯t want to deal with crafting it to my specific strength I changed up. My technique in configuration has been getting stronger and I am able to mold most common metal to my biding. I uttered configuration and the metal floated towards me and instead of going to my hand it floated towards my head and right before I tried to stop it it floated into my right eye. I didn¡¯t become blind from this but the pain of it slowly entering my eye it hurt like hell I fell down in agony as I rolled across the floor holding my eye from the pain I kept rolling until suddenly the pain went away and something weird happened my whole right sight vanished. Then my partial armor suit floated up to me and once it latched on to m limbs It begun to actually fade into my skin and right as I was wondering what happened a grey box appeared in my line of sight. Inside it was my armor in a more tiny form and it says ¡°panther lily¡± and after I said that it appeared back on my body. I thought that¡¯s very convenient if only this darkness disappeared I could enjoy this. Then what do you know it disappeared.
Author¡¯s notes anybody want to make up a name for this new eye inventory thingy it would be appreciated. Also comment and rate if you would like I just love putting out ideas on paper and you guys are to judge what makes it good. Also do you guys like the ideas I know I introduce a lot of inventions do you like it. also im still pretty new so please disregard my bad writing habits, i am an aspiring engineer so my english essays were not always well im more of a science tech guy
Chapter 5- First Enemy encroachment/ King kong suit Chapter 5: First enemy encroachment Rad¡¯s point of view: It¡¯s been another month of training and my strength has increased again along with my stamina, since I have been going outside to train my still weak body on the way I have made a few regulars who join me on my endeavors. The first one is an older woman named Michel, she runs the local medical shop, don¡¯t get it wrong I didn¡¯t say alchemy, apothecary, none of that of what you¡¯re thinking of. She heals people with various types of healing magic and medical techniques. I guess you could say she a bit ahead of her time with being a doctor. She reminds me a lot of the nurses I had back on earth. She also has a daughter but she¡¯s currently cooped up in her room studying so she can be the best doctor in the world, of course just like her mother. Well that¡¯s enough about her let¡¯s get into the real things I¡¯ve been doing while training. Since there is only so much time a day I have to multitasked so I can learn and train new things, while running I have learned how to control my new eye feature. I call it the ¡°voided Inventar¡± it helps me store items and equipment in my eye minus the function of adding weight to my body based on the inventar¡¯s weight. Just think if the weight limit was still there I don¡¯t know if I could have held up my head as much I¡¯ll probably be eating dirt everyday while trying to run. It took me this whole month to get the equip and also how to put it back in my inventory the whole process can be time down to about a bit less than a second, I know im not that good but at least its manageable. ¡­¡­¡­.. Today me an Dorian are going to the river where he found me at first to mine for some water stones he had an order to make a short range dagger. Since it will be my first time crafting on something other than steel and other common ore¡¯s he thought it was time for me to grow up and start on some weaker uncommon ores. After walking for a few minutes Dorian stops me for a secon. Dorian¡¯s point of view [Dorian] ¡° boy get close to me there is something watching us from a hundred meters out in front I don¡¯t know if its hostile or not but as we are getting closer to our destination, whatever it is has been getting closer to us.¡± ¡°Kid right now we are going to progress toward the river at a slow pace so I can see if whatever¡¯s watching us keeps advancing closer to our position.¡± ¡­¡­¡­¡­ Back to my Pov: As we are walking we soon arrive at the river near where Dorian first found me since Dorian hasn¡¯t spoken of the creature following us so I head towards the river, its been awhile since ive seen my face in the river so I wonder how I look. I look pretty good to say so for myself I have a very distinct jaw line but you could barely see it since I haven¡¯t grown my body that much. My hair has a few new different colors I have a few strands of blue, brown, red, and weird clear silver hair it¡¯s so weird. Well I still look quite handsome or cute for a kid. Also since I haven¡¯t talked about the nerves growing in my limbs I can tell you I grew a half a foot. Since coming here right now you could say I just hit midget level. Well since I didn¡¯t come here to admire my features I get to work by putting my hands in the water a tiny jet of water covers the entirety of my arm and right before I push a bit of my mana in it, I need to make sure before I move out some the water that im doing it in the right place so we can excavate. Dorian points to a point in the river that¡¯s unusually clearer than the other parts of the river. Then I see it out the corner of my eye a rock under the water with a reflecting texture, the water is refracting light but this is doing it a step more. Its reflecting the light the waters reflecting making it a bit clearer. Dorian snaps me out of my stumper. [Dorian]¡± boy the easiest way to find water stones, is to look for the clearest part of the body of water. ¡°Well since the water isn¡¯t that high I slowly insert my toes in the water, it¡¯s very warm contrary to what I thought it was going to be.¡± I pull out my little baggie from Inventar to collect some samples for myself before getting the regular bag out. After I filled mine with twenty or so stones I put it back in my Inventar under sample 1. Then I filled up the project back which weighed about a ton afterwards I needed help from Dorian to lift it out of the river since my strength was not as strong. ¡­¡­ After ten minutes of walking I heard a low growl vibrating through the air. I think whatever that was geared towards us. Im still kind of scared since dorian told me something has been slowly encroaching on our position but he doesn¡¯t know what it is. Then after a while of standing there, whatever it was must have got tired because it let loose a deafening roar in which it shook the part of the forest we were in. I hurried and equipped my ¡°Panther lily armor¡± and got ready for my first impromptu battle. As it walked out of its hiding spot the image of what I though it was mild in comparison to what we usually would think a growl would be. I thought it was like a regular lion that was going to pop out. No matter what I though it wasn¡¯t going to prepare me for what im going to see. The tall figure of the monster before us is a wolf like creature its very slim when comparing the top portions of his limbs but as you start to look at its body in total up until its elbows and shins are humongous, giant monstrosities of what you would call arms and legs. The narrative has been illicitly obtained; should you discover it on Amazon, report the violation. They look like all he this creature has been doing is pupping iron in its fist and feet. Dorian utters something and he grows a few feet until his bulging body starts to condense a more streamline body, but somethings a bit different his skin is light pinkish grey. As I admire this new technique Dorian just displayed the monster in front of us takes his transformation as a sign the hunt is on!! I try to run a bit in the other directions but before I could even get behind one of the trees for cover I am sent flying towards another tree in the opposite direction. Right before I impact with the tree I let out a lesser gale to guide the impact of my momentum towards the tree. I slide down the tree till my butt touches the roots covering the ground. Right in front of me all I can see is two titan like beings slugging it out in the middle of the forest. I can see the monster that attacked us first being pushed back little by little, then after being corner into a tree its left arm bulged for a second and it right arm slimmed a bit. Then a powerful blow launched dorian threw a few trees before he could brace for the impact. [Dorians Point of view] Ugh this little one packs quite the wallop for just a little adolescent ¡°Wolf Kong¡± even though Im just playing around with it forced me back a bit, maybe I should up the tempo. My leg glows a bit pink for a bit and Instantly teleport and punch it right dead center in it heart. Since I have to show my apprentice my strength I can¡¯t let him think im weak. So after punching it dead center in its heart I activate on of my black smith techniques. ¡°Vibration fist¡± following right after that I can feel this monster dying as its beating hearts is shredded up. Point of view change: ¡°Omg, master are you ok!¡± For some reason I don¡¯t think he noticed what I just said. After I see his legs turn a bit pink he instantaneously moves to the wolf Kong I he punches it in the heart and it just falls down dead I don¡¯t know what he just did but it was so cool! After checking that it died Dorian begans to insert the corpse in his inventory I wonder what he going to do with it after wards I really want to do a few experiments with that body of the beast. Just like that I had my first run in with a creature way stronger than me and just like I thought I could do nothing to fight against it. ¡­¡­¡­¡­. After an hour of walking a bit slower than usual we arrive at the familiar black smith house but before we could rest I asked Dorian if he would let me use this Wolf Kong so that I can make an new suit. He agrees after looking at my puppy dog eyes, I guess he couldn¡¯t resist since he instantly gave in. I take the body of my new experiment and after looking through the forge I find a few dark steel ingots with a bit of gold ones to I bring it over. I take out some water stones since it¡¯s the only other ore in the forged and I don¡¯t really want to use silver. I lay it all around the Kong¡¯s body and I say in an overly dramatic voice¡± material configuration.¡± And the ingots and water stones float towards my body of course with the body of the Kong and it starts to merge a bit with my body not that much it feels like a tight but flexible suit of armor On my arms are gold and black steel like gauntlets the size of three of my heads. It feels kind of weird on my feet as well as my hands these gauntlets are very heavy I could feel my strength being slowly sapped. I just noticed but I have a breast plate as well guarding my body that glows a faint clear blue is this where the water stone went? After a few more minutes the glowing light disappeared and I felt my power draining faster until my legs buckled and my arms went a bit numb I couldn¡¯t hold up the weight anymore so my body leaned forward and I landed on my forehead effectively knocking me out. Then a ding resounded in my now unconscious head ¡°would you like to name new suit? ¡­¡­.
[suit two: Primate suit (1)][¡±king Kong Jr¡±] ? Suit amplifies strength at the cost of movement. ? Channel water mana to keep your equilibrium, it carefully maintains posture until you can get used to it. ? ????????? ? ?????????
Author notes: hello everyone I''ve been very tired from doing finals every week, I hope you guys enjoy this chapter well of course it does it introduces a new suit for you guys to comment if you like or not since I don¡¯t know if I made it clear one doesn''t means it¡¯s the last upgrade. Comment, rate like all you want I want to hear what you have to say about the chapter and the suit and its abilities. also if you want to add an random animal i will be sure to make a feature monster or suit from it, but since he has two right now that''s all that''s needed for now
Chapter 6- you only have one best friend/ first hell pushup [size=xx-large]Chapter 6- you only have one best friend/ first hell pushup[/size] hey everyone i just noticed but guess what we got to 51 followers today i thank you again by doing the ultimate gratitude bow jumps in air lands on forearms starts spinning gratitude bow!i also just noticed that i made a chapter that did not use the "..." but''...'' for thoughts and narration ill take it off if you dont like it I try to catch my breath and right before I speak he says ¡°please don¡¯t hit me I didn''t mean to be a half breed.¡± ¡®I wake up in bed again, nut berry in the corner of my room flying around"-thought Rad,¡¯ I wonder what he is doing in my room? - He thought again. "Right before he could even ask Nut berry interrupts him, " OMG Rad your awake!your awake! Me and Dorian thought you would never wake up again, you hit your head very hard on the steel flooring."- said nut berry. "well all I remember was loosing all the power in my body after putting on the new suit then darkness, by the way nut where is my suit how did you guys take it off?"- rad questioned "the thing is we didn''t so much take it of it disappeared before we were able to take it off, well Dorian tried to take it off but right before he touched it glowed blue and faded like a swirly line inside your eye."-explained nut berry "Just to check what he''s saying I close my right eye and what appears in front of me is a second suit titled "King Kong Jr¡± floating right next to the panther lily suit.¡¯ ¡®after getting out of bed nut berry didn¡¯t say anything else other than for me to take it easy, also that I wanted to know how he was doing with his new limb, he said it works and is more responsive towards his thinking and reactions.¡¯ ¡®I walk towards the door but not right before I get past the mirror I see something different, my limbs have once again changed a different color but that not what¡¯s weird my shoulder blades and my top portion of my chest also have the same colored engravings like my arm and for some reason they look a bit harder to the touch.¡¯ ¡®I wonder if this has anything to do with my individual element attributes going up in the next stage, I can see the clear silver and blue lines are getting a bit bigger than the other one elements since I don¡¯t really try to merge myself too much with fire or other metals.¡¯ ¡®Omg, I look so bad ass with my shirt off also my hair is starting to get long I wonder if I should cut it before it starts to interfere with my black smiting and body training.¡¯ ¡®Well this can easily be fixed since I¡¯ve been training my body a lot I should be able to make like a short razor out of my wind.¡¯ ¡­¡­¡­.. ¡®2 hours later I have cut my long flowing hair into what a person would call a tapered spiky fade not to long not short. I found out that I had separate color hair spiked at the crown top of my head it goes in order as blue, silver, red, and brownish black I wonder if this is weird in this world.¡¯ ¡®I also have been seeing improvements in my calculation abilities I can now work on three different things at once.¡¯ ¡­¡­¡­¡­ ¡®Just across the village in the council room the elders of the village are talking about the unprecedented dangers floating close in proximity to their village.¡¯ ¡°Dorian I heard you say that there was a baby wolf king Kong stalking you while searching for water stones¡± said elder 1. ¡°Well yes, it happened around the time we were walking away from the village about twenty to thirty later after we left I started to feel the watching eyes of something hundreds of meters away from my position at the time.¡± Explained Dorian ¡°As we got closer to the river I could feel its prying eyes getting closer and closer towards us and at the time we left it decided that it was time to make a preemptive strike while we were leaving.¡± Said Dorian ¡°The strange thing was that when I faced off against the beast it displayed power it shouldn¡¯t be able to use at that class and age. It looked as though it was just born a year ago but it was displaying power of a normal adult wolf king Kong.¡± ¡°So you¡¯re telling us basically we have an abnormal crouching on our living quarters that wasn¡¯t there before, the last time there was a pack of these monsters living close to our proximity in fifteen years they usually inhabit the lower mountain forest.¡± Elder woman 1 ¡°we might have to start training the kids to combat this threat in the future, we can¡¯t have the, unprepared for the future, so I think it¡¯s a unanimous decision? The kids in the village before the next batch goes to academy in a few years we need them to be strong enough to protect themselves from a threat of this size.¡± said elder ¡­¡­¡­¡­. Rad¡± At that same time someone was walking around looking for his master. ¡®Man where the hell is Dorian I thought he was in the forge but it turned out to be he was not there working on anything, he is not even in the house.¡¯ ¡®I wonder where he went, you would think your caretaker would be in the house in case you woke up but no he¡¯s out somewhere well whatever he should still be close ill just wait till he comes back but before that lets take a stroll around this big village.¡¯ The genuine version of this novel can be found on another site. Support the author by reading it there. ¡®I might meet some new people today, and right as I say that i turn the corner to see some small like kids beating on a bigger but still small child I wonder why they are ganging up on him, I thought this place was fairly peaceful other than the monsters lurking around.¡¯ ¡®Maybe I should help him and right before I could say anything a lady shouts from behind me stop what you¡¯re doing before I tell all your parents what yall are doing!¡¯ ¡®Well that kind of saves me the trouble I don¡¯t think these kids would have taken me serious if I was to help since im only a foot taller than them.¡¯ ¡®I walk up to the kid who was getting bullied after seeing the other kids clear out from the threat from earlier. ¡®I Start to introduce myself but something unpredictable happens right after saying ¡°hi my name is Rad¡± the kid just gets up and runs away super fast it takes me a sec to register what just happens and I say wait as I try to run after him.¡¯ Im right behind him when he gives another burst of speed and he¡¯s almost out of site, but not before I channel the wind on my feet something weird happens my feet turn into tiny circles of air and I start gliding two inches of the ground super-fast and I try to tackle him when I got close enough he tries to dodge but I grap his shoulders to revent him from taking a sudden turn. Right as I grab him we both come to a stop by rolling on the ground. I try to catch my breath and right before I speak he says ¡°please don¡¯t hit me I didn¡¯t mean to be a half breed.¡± I reply back with a huh¡± I wasn¡¯t going to hit you I just wanted to know why you ran away when I tried to introduce myself and also I wanted to make my first real friend since you looked like you needed one.¡± I try to catch my breath and right before I speak he says ¡°please don¡¯t hit me I didn''t mean to be a half breed.¡± He just nodded his head and said¡± my name is Vlad im a half human/half dwarf in this village and many others dwarfs feel as though If they breed with other species it was a sign of lesser status and so they bully me a lot for not being like them I hate it sometimes I wish I could have been born normal. Why couldn¡¯t I be born normal im just like everyone else I grow up normal, I eat regular food, I play the same as any other kid I just want to be normal¡± ¡°Whoa, there chill Vlad you see, like you were going to blow at any moment, its ok if you feel lonely I used to feel lonely and wonder why I was not normal either but back then I had people who played with me regardless of what I was so how about as of today we become friends.¡± {[It was at this time he didn¡¯t know but this will be his right hand and friend for the rest of his life, also Vlad doesn¡¯t know but he¡¯s going to be one of the strongest people in the world but not yet.]} ¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­ It¡¯s been a couple of days while Rad is still a bit tired from expending himself from the new suit and running after Vlad, these two guys have been hanging out ever since and it was right at the same time Dorian noticed this and came up with an idea since he has to start training the kids to protect themselves. ¡°Rad and his new friend come over here!¡± said Dorian ¡°Yes¡¯ said rad, ¡°sir yes sir¡± said Vlad ¡°today and until you guys go off on your adventures I have been assigned to train two kids in the village enough to protect themselves from most monsters in the surrounding and further out regions.¡± ¡°welcome to hell and the first thing I want you to be able to do Is do 10,000 pushups in one day five times a week till your training is over, now start! ¡­.. Two hours later I time out after thirty two pushups dang this is very hard, vlad times out after a hundred maybe hes use to it?
Author notes: well hello everyone just a bit tired and sleepy, tooth still aching a bit but guess what im starting to manage better after taking these pain pills of death. You guys are probably wondering why the character has not learned Anything from using his elemental skin reason is if he learns something it just means its his elemental skin not a separate skill. So if he uses the lesser gale to hover he can only hover because he can manipulate the air under his feet but its not like he can fly. Im not going to just put a stupid skill up like everyone else and put the skill fly, then explain why flying is a separate skill from his elemental skin, a lot of people think things like that are separate when there not. Also reasons why his skin is not as hard as you think to protect him from his sudden falls of death, just common sense it¡¯s only around his limbs not his body or head. Also yall don¡¯t know it yet but I put an Easter egg inside one of my characters in the chapters have fun figuring it out. Hahahhahah comment away!
Chapter 7- Blaze Jelly Core/ Flexibility Chapter 7- Blaze Jelly Core/ Flexibility ¡®It¡¯s been three months, me and Vlad have learned an easier way of doing our new training after completing a set amount of pushups we run one lap around the village it helps us keep time one how many pushups we have done as of right now currently I am on my 99th lap and my legs and arms feel like jello.¡¯ ¡®the reason im more tired than usual a week ago I was forced dawn my ¡°king Kong¡± suit its very heavy my teacher said it was perfect for training so I had to wear it with every exercise I do.¡¯ ¡®pushups are very hard to do when your forearms are as thick as log and your actual body is thinner than a tree branch.¡± ¡®then it came to me in the form of a light bulb since I wanted to get rid or at least move the thick gautlets away from my arms something wonderful but equally painful happened.¡¯ ¡®As I tried to move the thick metal liquid away from my limbs it traveled up my arms and stopped right at my shoulder blades.'' ''It felt as though I had two big weights on top of my shoulders.¡¯ ¡®I tried doing a regular pushup it was equally as hard with the weights on my back pushing my center of gravity downwards at all times, to me its pretty effective.¡¯ ¡®After getting used to it my current reps were do a hundred pushups, then run a lap then come back and do a hundred till I got to ten thousand. It took me about 6 hours while it took Vlad about four.¡¯ ¡®For some reason Vlad is about always two times faster than me in anything I wonder why?¡¯ ¡®after our daily session it was time for our combat lesson but before that we have to pass the first test strength realignment.¡¯ ¡®Dorian explained it as, the reason why people feel as though they are inferior to others in speed, power, agility, dexterity, defense, and mental strength is because they don¡¯t know how to utilize their strength correctly all around.¡¯ ¡®Strength takes a lot of effort to attain but the reason why there aren¡¯t that many strong people in the world is because everyone focuses on a specific attribute of strength.¡¯ ¡®in Vlad¡¯s case his body type is more centered around his speed, but with proper training his power can also be as strong as his speed Is, but thatll only happen if everything is trained together.¡¯ ¡°for you kids you don¡¯t need to know any other attribute other than strength nothing else, the reason is ill show you!¡± ¡®Before our eyes this very short man grew about three feet of height after his muscles grew up close he looked like an angry buff balloon.¡¯ ¡°Wow Teacher you look so cool¡± said Vlad with sparkles in his eyes, also teacher will I be able to do that if I train as you say? ¡°Of course but before that I have a present for you little guys since your so diligent in your training ¡° in teachers hand was a black and red transparent like slimy looking creature but before you go on to your next step you guys will eat this Blaze jellyfish core.¡± Said Dorian ¡°What ewww Dorian why do we have to eat this it¡¯s so slimy what does this have to do with training.¡± Replied Rad but before he could argue some more Dorian appeared and shoved the core in his and vlads mouth! ¡®immediately the side effect showed my ¡°Armor was forcefully recalled to my ¡°inventar¡± and as I see it fading away my hand starts to distort and change while we are on the ground agonizing, our master picks us up and brings us to the living room so we don¡¯t make a mistake and hurt ourselves.¡¯ ¡­¡­¡­. ¡®Two agonizing hours later im on the floor sweating because of the heat in my body.¡® ¡®One of those windows I see every now an then appeared in my face the moment I ingested the core.¡¯ ¡®it clearly said since I have met the standards of an upgrade to elemental skin, my fire attribute has went from heat to Blaze and now instead of shooting out hot air I can now control a blaze like fire but what¡¯s weird is the flame isn¡¯t red, orange, blue, or white, it grey and its very pale as I try to control it.¡¯ ¡®Another thing happened while I was concentrating on this pale grey flame I didn¡¯t notice my hand forming and replicating the same shape and vibrancy as the flame, a second passed and I tried to change it back into my hand and as I was trying to control it my hand and the pale grey flame touched and instantly I thought I felt a burning sensation.¡¯ ¡®but it came and went really quick as I forgot I can¡¯t hurt myself with my own magic how stupid.¡¯ ¡®As I try to will it back into my system the flame sucks into one of the Grayish red lines in my arm it just fades away.¡¯ After that little experiment Dorian walks in with some water and lunch, since I haven¡¯t had it yet. We chow down and listen to Dorian''s reasons to why he made us ingest a monster core. ¡­ ¡°well young ins the reason why I made you two ingest that monster core specifically is because it will help you with controlling you body to its finest and now with the change in your bodies youll be able to use strength wherever in your body.¡± Enjoying this book? Seek out the original to ensure the author gets credit. ¡°you guys won¡¯t be the same as other people in this world you cannot be pre determined to only be good at one attribute you¡¯ll be strong in all attributes equally. ¡°now let me explain for your new body it only relies on strength nothing else, what people don know is that strength is just wrote six different types of ways to make others think that there different when they are not.¡± Explained Dorian ¡° strength is present throughout your whole body you just won¡¯t be able to be fast you¡¯ll be able to have better defense, attack and agility. If you keep building up strength it will regulate in your body and all your attributes will be exactly the same, some might say it¡¯s a cheat but don¡¯t let them put you down you worked for this power.¡± ¡°next I want you guys to check your attributes no matter what they will be the same in every category so tell me that one number.¡± [[Author comment: the classes of strength are broken up into every 50 is a rank up or ten for each stat, it goes as Class 1-12 the next three is for the rank of gods but you never really meet gods so don¡¯t anticipate to see it until we are like 200 in im not going to have the characters K¡¯o gods at any age under 40.]] ¡°As of right now all my say about 153 master and for me master 171¡¯ said me and vlad ¡®Hmm so Rad is Rank three overall and Vlad is about mid-way to Fourth rank. If that¡¯s the case these kids are a it more than I thought they would be they are already stronger than average people in this world who rank only at two. These two will be Monsters by the time they are adults but as of right now I can¡¯t let them know how strong they really are , as to not get them cocky¡¯ Thought Dorian ¡°Since you guys have already passed the strength test its time for the next exercise you will be flexing contracting and loosening your muscles for an hour every day so that your flexibility stays at its best. Vlad you come over first since you have a bit more power than Rad put your arm on this pole and grip it as hard as you can and you cant let go no matter how painful the next part is.¡± Said Dorian ¡®right as he grips the standing pole Dorian morphs a bracelet around his hand effectively locking him down to it, ¡°now next is rad come over too this one and put your hand on and grip as hard as you can.¡± After putting my hand on it the bracelet locks down my hand too and I can¡¯t pull it off.¡± ¡°This next part is both of you start pulling your arm till you feel it stretching and stretching and stop right there what you guys are going to do next is the painful part you will try to individually control each of your muscles and if you mess up and try to control more than one your arm will contract and pull you towards the pole at a fast speed your job is to keep from getting pulled back in.¡± ¡°By the time this is over you younglings will be able to control the individual hairs on your arm, now start¡± ¡®First I tried to control one of my small muscles around my fore arms and it felt kind of easy until Vlad start flying towards the pole.¡¯ ¡®I almost started laughing when that happened it made me loose concentration and I too was sent flying into the pole.¡¯ ¡°Ouch Damn it Vlad, you just had to make me laugh just now.¡± me ¡°It wasn¡¯t my fault this is very hard to control exactly one muscle from your body.¡± ¡°Well try harder next time, and also lets make a bet first one to complete this gets the others dessert.¡± ¡­.. ¡®its been another full month and right now we have moved on to our legs and since our feet couldn¡¯t be stationed to something Dorian built us what my world would call a brace but what different is that we have to be able to control each muscle contraction to walk perfectly but if you fail it tightens up and both of your legs bend straight and you might fall or trip mid walk.¡¯ [Dorian] " when your part two of your training is over you two will be coming with me on a trip to the nearby mountains so train hard.
Authors notes: I got this suggestion earlier on one of my post that if I wanted someone to proofread my work to make it better I wondering if anyone wanted to do it for me since i''m not that good at doing it. Also how do you like the chapter do you like the explanations on why strength of body is stronger and more efficient to strength of only one part? Also next chapter will be a bit of action versus this informational one. Does anyone want any cameos or monster cameos next chapter you guys can pick the monster that¡¯s going to appear the only thing i''m going to say is it has to be a Earthly, metal attributed one.
Chapter-8 first journey/unfated man-wife Chapter-8 first journey/unfated Man wife ¡®It took a bit longer trying to figure out how to use the correct muscles in our legs to walk because mainly even though we know how to walk we do not know what actually triggers what to move what so it is vastly harder than learning the muscles in our arms.¡¯ ¡®After a few weeks of trying we are able to crawl on the ground not walk crawl, Dorian kept telling us the foundations to strength is what you did when you were a baby, build that up and you will be strong, crawling is another strength of really learning to move.¡¯ ¡®well it¡¯s no problem for me since I have already passed that mild stone of crawling, I can kind of semi walk for about a few meters then stop and have to crawl I found about five muscles that help with walking and I don¡¯t really know which ones are the strongest but I have a feeling with more practice in another month I¡¯ll be able to walk like I did before the brace.¡¯ ¡®you¡¯re not going to be surprised but something is weird why is Vlad always ahead of me in everything I do.'' ''he is already running with the brace and it¡¯s looking like he is a bit swifter his another thing is his body is constantly letting out little burst of steam and its making his body a bit pale red.¡¯ ¡®I honestly think it looks sort of cool I never saw something like this other than when my skin changed color I wonder if he has the same ability as me.¡¯ ¡°I quickly get on Vlad¡¯s case since I want to know more about him I wonder if he is just like me an abnormal.¡± ¡°Aye Vlad why is steam coming from your body is because you ate the Blaze jelly core, I heard from Dorian that when people eat a core depending on their body they gain different Abilities nobody gets the exact same ability.'' ''for me I just got an attribute upgrade and now I have pale grey flames but his is hot steam.¡± ¡° then I ask Vlad before you ate the core was your attribute Water?¡± ¡°um I think it was water but since I never got my affinity checked I just assumed I have basic water but I had a feeling that before I ingested that core I has another element and I think it was wind since I can run really fast.¡± ¡® I think for awhile and suggest since he doesn¡¯t know what its called and since it was wind and water before he got his next attribute it should have just been Water Cyclone but now let¡¯s name it ¡°Steam Cyclone.¡±¡¯ ¡®as I am studying Vlad¡¯s body I spot something bad, I don¡¯t know if he doesn¡¯t notice the change but his blood vessels I can see are bulging out and are using a bit more oxygen and are pumping a bit faster than normal.¡¯ ¡®but the thing is with all of that he is still breathing normally like nothing is wrong, should I wait for his body to show more signs are should I stop him from pushing his body too much till I know if this is a good or bad thing.¡¯ ¡®I may need to when we are older build him A new Heart than can regulate his flow because now it could get worst but his life is not in danger since we ate that core its giving me and him elasticity.¡¯ ¡­¡­¡­¡­¡­.. ¡®A few days later me and Vlad are able to run around with these braces and right as we are finishing up Dorian stops us and says its time we have finished part two of our training and he relays some new information.¡¯ [[Dorian]]¡± Today my younglings you have now passed part two of my training you guys are now able to use up to the second layer of ten.¡± [[Dorian]]¡± the reason I had you guys flex and learn how to use specific muscles in your body is because, as of right now im not going to baby you any more you guys should now be able to move in any environment and it¡¯s time for you guys to really learn how to protect yourselves by adventuring with me and after we finish I will send you with the rest of the kids to the academy to make a life for yourselves.¡± ¡°But as of right now you guys are coming with me to the mountain to learn more of how to use your new found power.¡± Said Dorian ¡®well let¡¯s get going said Dorian other than Vlad, Rad just stay right here and wait so he can go tell his mother that he is going on a journey for a while.¡¯ Love this novel? Read it on Royal Road to ensure the author gets credit. ¡®While waiting for Vlad to come back I went to go grab some supplies to put into my storage ring I know we have a minimum of about 2 year before we go to what this world would call school so training will help us pass the time and I might want to try something else.¡¯ ¡®I got my trusty Black hammer and various heat and magma rocks it took me awhile to get them in my Inventar mostly because I was afraid I was going to burn my eye but, this cool thing happened it just faded into the darkness and it appeared in my selection under ores.¡¯ ¡®After getting the necessary equipment I walked outside the house to See Dorian ready to go and in the distance I Could see Vlad telling his mother that he will be away for a while.¡¯ ¡®Then after he caught up it was time to set off on our journey with our mentor.¡¯ ¡­¡­¡­¡­. ¡°ugh, master why do we have wear this full body brace up this mountain it takes ten minutes just to walk up a tens of meters.¡± Said rad as he tumbled up the mountain side. ¡°Well the reason why is that you learned how to use each muscle separately but did you learn how to use them all at once with top and bottom half, no you didn¡¯t.¡± said Dorian ¡°But now you will learn how to when using your body walking up a hill you don¡¯t only use your legs to climb a mountain you need your entire body to move and stay up right.¡± Explained Dorian ¡®I sighed after getting my answer, meanwhile I am complaining of the treatment I get new found blaze In my gut after looking at what Vlads Wearing he has the same full body brace I have but he has this cool mask on I wonder what it¡¯s for?¡¯ ¡®after a few more hours of walking we start to see more and more clues on that there is less life the more we go up the monsters we did see were staring at us but for some reason they did not attack was it because we didn¡¯t or was it because our master was here with us.¡¯ ¡®the latter seemed more of what I was thinking because they weren¡¯t staring at me or Vlad they were Eyeballing Dorian the whole walk in hunters Eyes.¡¯ ¡®then it happen one of the monsters appeared as a shadow and it catapulted into Dorian, I took this chance since Me and Vlad was closer to huddle together to make sure no other creature tried to one up us.¡¯ *Then a peng sound resounded in the area* ¡®next before my eyes even shocked me the shadow monster that was near Dorian was sent flying all the way off the mountain and because we were sort of high up we didn¡¯t hear when the body touched the ground it seemed as though if I could react faster u could have shot off one of my medium ranged Disk.¡¯ ¡®main problem is it wouldn¡¯t be able to shoot it with this braced covering my whole arm.¡¯ ''after a few more minutes of walking the scenery is starting to change and right as we get through the first parts of vegetation right before our eyes is a sleeping girl but the thing is she is naked!!'' ''as we get closer before our eyes is a naked girl with leaves on her private parts but what makes this weird she has monkey ears and a long slender tail with two balls at the end.'' [Dorian]" youngsters get away from her that''s the king of the mountains daughter get away from her if your within ten meters of her, the closes male will be forced to marry her!" ''right as he said that i instantly jumped away, but it didn''t go so well for vlad right as he tried to jump away latched on to his thumb was the monkey kings daughter fully awake.'' ........ right as I hear our master say this I try to jump away but what happens next scares me more than the bullies this girl is fully awake holding on to my thumb.(said vlad) what i hear next is "you shall be my man-wife!"
authors notes: anybody think I should start putting in more personality related dialogue like complaining, being lazy talking back stuff like that? Next chapter before ten
Chapter 9- unexpected position/ Nature punch Chapter 9- unexpected position/ Nature punch ¡°Ahahahahahhahahahahahahaha, my sides, my sides she said you¡¯re her man wife omg this is too damn funny¡± said I ¡®Dorian just shuck his head with a facepalm.¡¯ ¡°oh why don¡¯t you shush rad, you know if it was a switch of situations you would be the one being held down by your thumb.¡± Said Vlad ¡°But im not am I so, ha.¡± Said rad ¡®then the princess chimed in her thoughts well after I said that¡± well since it inconvenience how about you also become my concubine young mixed human.¡±¡¯ ¡®What mixed human? What¡¯s a mixed human, is she talking about my Elemental skin since its starting to travel over my body every time I upgrade?¡¯ thought rad ¡°Um how about no I just met you and you¡¯re trying to make me number two instead of number one I would reconsider but im too young to be thinking about marriage so¡­¡­ stay with vladdy.¡± Said rad ¡­¡­¡­ It¡¯s been a total of thirty minutes of going back and forth I guess the monkey princess got a bit tired of going back and forth with me so currently I am in a headlock trying to get loose and but right around my neck is her tail and the two balls at the end are kind of like plugging my mouth so I couldn¡¯t talk anymore. [Dorian]¡± princess would you be able to let my to disciples go they have training to do and your just holding them down, how about if you come with us while they train since we know you wont let them out your sight now.¡± ¡°ok¡± said the princess but on one condition you cannot leave the mountain for the next two years you have to keep me company until my father comes back. ¡­¡­. ¡®in my head I was like what an easy girl, so I asked ¡°would you please let me go in gibberish because my mouth is currently plugged.¡± After feeling a tight sensation go away, I immediately tried to make a run for it, but It was at that moment I didn¡¯t know but the universal law of physics new I have (fucked up). Out of nowhere i come to a complete stop after my neck get hit by the tense part of the tail instantly Rko myself. (yes, Wrestling moves work in this universe.) Well im unconscious so I don¡¯t know what happens after this. ¡­¡­ Vlad doesn¡¯t even register what happens until he too tries to make a run for it but ultimately he isn¡¯t even able to move one centimeter without being pulled back into her embrace. ¡°dammit why me god¡± After getting pulled back in Dorian suggest we get moving there is a special place where they can train up the mountain that has a very good flat surface to train at. ¡®Coincidently master Dorian says around there are many monsters and various animals that can supply us with experience and food for the next two years.¡¯ After walking for a bit we fight a couple unruly monsters but at that time what they see the princess with u they immediately run, the weird thing isn¡¯t because the monsters are running but every monster we have come to see has been females and very old male no young male species. Suddenly Rad wakes up out his sleep and immediately want to be let down since he feels something in his chest thumping hard I wonder if it is heart, is he sick? ¡­¡­.. Oww, owww my chest it feels like the time when I was in the hospital on earth maybe it wasn¡¯t Vlads veins were weird maybe it was mine, I haven¡¯t noticed yet but now that I haven¡¯t been walking for a while I can feel the individual muscles in my body I can feel the fatigue a bit even after training so much to build my endurance. Is it because I haven¡¯t been resting as much I can feel my body breaking down and rebuilding does this mean im getting a bit stronger? Is my heart finally normal like everyone else¡¯s I feel fatigued but my heart isn¡¯t weakly beating? After calmly resting for a few minutes my heart has calmed down, well for my to do list in the future I should maybe learn the anatomy of the body. I have a few more restless and calculated thoughts before I am brought out of my stupor and brought out of my train of thought by Vlad and monkey princess. After looking at the monkey princess I say those words out loud without thinking, and right before I can correct myself ¡°can you stop calling me that I have a name Saru, Sa-ru idiot mixed human.¡± Then I hear it again ¡°ok Saru im sorry for not saying your name correctly, but can you stop calling me mixed human I have a name too my name is Rad and the one your holding onto is called Vlad and our master over there is Dorian I hope we won¡¯t keep calling each other by different names since we know them now.¡± Stolen from Royal Road, this story should be reported if encountered on Amazon. We shortly enter the entrance of our new home. ¡°both of you go get yourself some rest for the night, tomorrow you will go through hell. And you Princess where will you be resting¡­¡­. After the awkward silence we are barely able to retaliate before both me and vlad in up in Saru¡¯s arms and we are put to sleep on some make shift leaves as a bed and Saru as our pillow. [Dorian] ¡° I wonder what¡¯s going to happen when she finds out in the next two years they will be going to school and they might have to leave her here¡­.. ¡­¡­.. The next morning we are awoken to Dorian clapping loudly above our heads with his morphed body, it sounds like thunder striking right above our heads. I jump up to get away from the loud noise while Vlad still half asleep wipes his eyes to get up. In a loud booming voice ¡° you guys will not be wearing the braces anymore you have moved up into the active sparing sessions everyday.¡± ¡°you will spar with each other in the morning in the middle of the day and right before bed I want you to learn how to fight being similar and different from your body so for part one you will only be sparing against each other once you get proficient in fighting each other you will move on to fighting monsters.¡± ¡­¡­¡­. ¡®Its been about three months both me and Vlad have ranked up to number four our respective strength values are overall 205 and 210 lately I have been able to catch up and fight almost on a even playing field with Vlad im Starting to catch up in body strength but it seems as though he can still over power when sparing.¡¯ After a day of training Saru told us she wanted to spar with us too if all we were going to do Is spar every day since it was getting boring, we let her for that one day but boy did we make a mistake right as we tried to thrust towards her she instantly KO us with only one punch and after that she was forbidden to fight with us until we were respectively high fourth rank like hear she basically fifth rank but its just one point off from two hundred and fifty. When we got that out of the way we were able to grow a bit stronger we are pretty much beginner fourth rank and we are now able to take a punch from her during the next few months we were able to slowly keep up with her. Then it was time for us to learn our first technique from Dorian it was jab technique called ¡°Elemental pound thrust¡± or what I call it Natures pound which channels your basic affinity in to your fist and until you make contact with your punch it will not stop consuming magic. So its basically like a one hitter knockback type move used to deflect or make contact with your enemy, but the thing is it doesn¡¯t always have to be a punch in Vlads case it comes out as a fast moving tornado with water and wind blades circling it the first time I got hit with this I went flying into the wall because of the knockback. My nature punch is a bit different the earthly metal in my fist turns dark silver and a gray blazing spear tip comes out from my fist twisting around it is clear flowing wind and water mines has two abilitys that are different from Vlads mines can pierce and shoot out mid ranger after launching it like a quick jab only down side it looks cool but its incredibly slow like a decimeter a second. I have also found out a way how to use it as a set up move it I shoot one out as I circle around my enemy and as they build up my enemy has nowhere to go Vlad finds this out the bad way after blowing me into a wall which blat him in directions until he makes a mistake and hits every set up jab. After some available free time with my blacksmith skill i have made what i call the masochist Robot or dummy which can take hits but when blown to smithereens by our practice thrust absorbs the surrounding metals and reforms itself to make it stronger. main reason i made this in my free time i was tired of getting beat up from these practice magical attacks Chapter end
Natures thrust: Channel your magical affinity into your fist and it takes the shape of the easiest form to use your own special ability. Set up jab: moves slow but has powerful knockback and piercing ability Current forms: Spear head
Authors notes: hello everyone im just chilling writing chapters for you how do you like the new female character and the new training arc. This will probably be the environment and scenery for the next ten or so chapters since it¡¯ll be training and monster task. Anybody want to try and suggest a name and ability that works for making movement faster?
should i annouce my return to writing fanfictions hello everyone its been a few months since ive even wrote a chapter ive been super busy with school engineering stuff then one day i had some new ideas after visiting royalroad last month. i have been reading alot of chinese wuxia and xianxia hope i can get back into writing next month after classes are over. Find this and other great novels on the author''s preferred platform. Support original creators! i hope this will suffice till i start throwing chapters like running water.