《I did a good thing now What?》


 Prologue v1

    My name Is Saito Grey, a regular, fairly average "Above average if I say so myself" decent height at 178 cm curly brown hair and slightly tanned skin due to my heritage. Currently I am attending my prefectural high school with the aspiration to be an engineer like my father was. I would say I''m fairly popular the normal stuff Banging Girlfriend that I might slightly, maybe, am kinda starting to love a lil'' bit.


    RING RING RING


    My alarm shakes signaling the start of my day, my body stirs flipping around to face the one sound that is disturbing my lovely silence. Groggy I sit up and wipe my eyes ¡°As always this crust shit around my eyes is disgusting¡± I eek out in the darkness my vision slowly returns ¡°Now I have to go to school¡± I audibly sigh


    RING RING RING


    I swing quickly catching the clock on the side flinging it across the room and it hit the wall¡­Hard. STRIKE yurrr out! I say chuckling to myself SAITO!!! ¡°Oh shit¡± ¡°What was that?¡± inquires a young looking middle aged Half Japanese woman some would say it¡¯s a blessing having a beauty taking care of you, I would say it¡¯s my mother.


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    ¡°Good morning Kaa-san(Mother)¡± I leak out as fast as possible before she has a chance to continue ¡°She would tirade on and on and I¡¯d be late for school¡± ¡°Get up or ill rip your blanket off, strip you naked and pour cold water on you¡± She threateningly whispers as she¡¯s smiling. She turns and starts walking away while she¡¯s doing so I mutter under my breath ¡°Akuma(Demon)¡±. ¡°Ohhh? What was that?¡± she says while looking at me out of the corner of her eye her smile going from lovely to deadly in a heartbeat. ¡°TENSHI!!!(ANGEL)¡± I say next without hesitation and her expression returns to normal as she walks out the room and closes the door behind her.


    Quickly getting dressed in my school¡¯s uniform and Walking downstairs and out the door I call out to my mother before I leave ¡°Ok I¡¯m leaving¡± and take off with a sprint with the fading sound of ¡°OK, TAKE CARE!!!!¡±

 Chapter 1 School Life

    Green Denotes Internal Monologue


    Grey Denotes Regular Text if you don¡¯t like it tell me and ill change the colour.


    ¡°Saito!!¡± I hear my name reverberate around the hallway with the person who said it quickly closing in on my position ¡°Saiiitoooo¡± the distance is being covered very quickly. Finally, I decide to be a man and turn around and face the unknown; they, while still being 1 metre away from me leap and grasp me in a hug.


    ¡°It¡¯s Saya, who¡¯s Saya you say? Well, she¡¯s my girlfriend and the one girl who has my feelings in a storm.¡±


    ¡°Good Morning Saya¡± I say slightly retreating inside of myself as the attention of the students around; focus on us. ¡°Good Morning¡± she beams back a smile that makes the male and female students blush. ¡°Me included, yea; she¡¯s one of those Queen of the school Ojou-sama type girls AND SHE GOES AFTER ME!!¡± My body shivers as more eyes float to the main scene of commotion and as always I attempt to flee the situation. I take Saya¡¯s hand and bring her to another location away from the hustle and bustle and mainly the attention.


    Saya blushes as I grab her hand. ¡°We¡¯ve only been dating for a few days and yet you¡¯re so bold.¡± She giggles as we walk to an empty classroom. Finally, alone; I start talking; ¡°Saya I told you not to do that anymore in the morning¡± Frowning Saya replies ¡°Its only right to show how much I care for you who cares who¡¯s watching is that so wrong?¡± she looks at me with upturned eyes. I sigh ¡°No its not wrong I¡¯m sorry¡± I state defeated ¡°As always, I sigh again internally¡± ¡°I¡¯ll make it up to you¡± I said hoping she¡¯d let this one go. ¡°Ok! Then take me on a date¡± once again beaming that smile my defeat set in stone. To make it up to her we ¡°I mean her¡± decide to go to a neighborhood restaurant afterschool.


    We head back to our own respective classes, Class 2-C for me and she goes to the next floor in Class 3-A ¡°Yea, I know she¡¯s older haha, sooooo lucky¡­.¡±  As I walk to my class just as I¡¯m about to open the door I hear.


    Student 1 ¡°Did you hear what Saito did today he brought Saya away and did made her do this and that the sound trails off as the student starts to whisper random speculations.


    Student 2 ¡°I heard he¡¯s an emotional sadist and like to ruin her reputation by making her do stuff like this and that. The students around her start to giggle.


    If you discover this narrative on Amazon, be aware that it has been stolen. Please report the violation.I slam the door open, and as I walk into class all eyes are on me and it¡¯s as if a king waved his hand asking for attention. Then, one student breaks the silence ¡°Sooo, how did your private talk with Saya go?¡± he states flatly then breaks into a shit eating grin. I rush him put my hand at his mouth and do a metal gear solid type take down and drag him out of the room.


    ¡°FuFuFuFuFu¡± his laugh muffed by my hand as I feel a slight wet sensation moving around on my palm. ¡°Is this his tongue??!??!!¡± ¡°Eiichiro, what the fuck man?¡± ¡°My childhood friend, trouble maker, class clown etc etc you know the deal.¡± ¡°Don¡¯t act like no one knows what you did this morning¡± he says again his smile never fading. I don¡¯t answer; ¡°What did you do? He asks again eyes scan my face for a reaction.


    DING DING DING DING the bell signaling class goes off.


    ¡°Class is starting¡± I say completely avoiding his question once again. Wa What about¡­¡­¡­ his voice trails as I walk out of the room before he can finish what he¡¯s saying.


    Soon, after we return to our classroom homeroom starts and I rest my head on the desk in front of me. ¡°Eiichiro wake me up I¡¯m going to catch some sleep¡±


    Unknown


    ¡°This child shall join us soon as he lives his days out as our champion.¡± One of the beings say.


    ¡°He shall be the one to right all of our wrongs¡± one says with a heavenly melodic voice.


    ¡°I hope it shall come to pass¡± says one with a Heavy commanding voice that could lead millions.


    On Earth


    ¡°Saito¡± ¡°Saito¡± ¡°Saito!!¡±  Eiichiro states louder and louder I stir. ¡°wWWhat?!?¡± I open my eyes light assaulting me partially blinding me for a second; stunned; I look around and a teen still with that signature shit eating smile comes into focus. ¡°Ohayoo (Good Morning) its lunchtime by the way¡± Eiichiro says urging me out of my slumber. ¡°Oh, and Saya¡¯s looking for you.¡± He adds.


    Truly startled I jump out of my seat, all feelings of drowsiness gone as I stare waiting for him to say more. Ignoring my stare, ¡°Well, let¡¯s go find Saya¡± he says as he darts ¡°WAIT YOU WERE SERIOUS?!!¡± I say running after him heading to the lunchroom.


    Not part of the Story


    I¡¯m not writing a lot here because I¡¯m just attempting to show case Saito¡¯s personality; the real part of the story starts next chapter. I love criticism so tell me and or show me what you don¡¯t like and how I can improve.

 Chapter 2 It Happened

    Its afterschool and it is time for me to uphold my side of the bargain for losing against Saya in our earlier argument. Time for a date basically the first one I would have so far with this girl. As we walk out of school holding hands I can already feel the seething anger turning into vapour and coagulating with the air making the atmosphere heavy and thick as blood. I attempt to hasten our pace many times but every time I try Saya lowers the speed two-fold thus by the time we passed the gate we slowed to a crawl. I quickly look to Saya and she looks away just as fast but not fast enough for me to miss the smile of absolute bliss on her face.


    Farther down the road Saya lets go of my hand and starts prancing around me in an orbit. ¡°Saito¡±


    ¡°Uhh, yea?¡±


    ¡°Do you even like me¡± she stops in front of me and looks at me with upturned eyes.


    I know in my head that a moment¡¯s hesitation would spell the end of everything I hold dear with the possibility of turning the whole school against me. I might have spent too much time thinking.


    In Saya¡¯s eyes tears start to form. ¡°I Sniff Though Sniff This could work Sniff Sniff¡±


    ¡°No, Saya I¡¯m sorry¡± by the time I can get that out she already bolted off.


    I chase after her, me knowing how she manages to get herself in trouble when she gets emotional. Street after Street, Alley through Alley; it really doesn¡¯t help that she is so damn athletic. We get near the family restaurant, although I¡¯m not sure how we managed to get here with the random twists and turns feels anime-esque; we just have to cross the street.


    Saya still in an emotional frenzy doesn¡¯t want me to catch up to her and bolts across the street but she doesn¡¯t see the car coming.


    ¡°SAYA NO!!!!!!!!¡± I can¡¯t help but scream while being almost 3 meters behind her there is no way for me to catch up to her.


    I hear a Sickening thud yet I can¡¯t bear not to watch my beloved get hit it. It knocks her 2 meters in the opposite direction and I hear a crack as her head impacts the ground, blood seeping out of the fracture.


    ¡°SAYA!!¡± Again screaming now in the pain of loss instead of screaming in horror; I sprint towards here ¡°Saya can you hear me PLEASE SAY SOMETHING SAYA!!!!!¡± all I can hear is a whimper


    ¡°I¡¯m sorry Saito¡± is all she can get out.


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    ¡°You¡¯re Sorry IM SORRY¡±


    ¡°I LOVE YOU SAYA¡± I whisper into her ear quite loudly.


    ¡°I¡¯m glad you feel that way and I love you too Saito¡± she finishes as her eyes dim the light of life quickly leaving.


    Within 10 seconds my life takes a turn for the worst; due to the fracture of the skull piercing part of her brain Saya bleeds out.


    ¡°NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO¡± I start screaming.


    ¡°I Refuse, I DENY, I REPULSE THIS FALSE TRUTH¡± I continue still screaming out loud.


    ¡°IF THERE IS A GOD OUT THERE ANYWHERE PLEASE HEED MY MESSAGE¡± I keep going.


    ¡°TAKE MY LIFE IN REPLACE FOR HERS BRING HER BACK¡± I continue to Plead.


    A blindingly white being appears in front of Saito and Saya¡¯s corpse.


    ¡°Very well, I shall take your life in exchange of hers; although, she will lose all memories of you and your existence shall be wiped from this plane of life. Also¡­¡­ ¡°I AGREE¡± Saito snaps out his answer before the being can tell him their full requirements.


    ¡°Hasty on are ye?¡± as the words come out of the being¡¯s mouth; Saito feels as if he¡¯s getting ripped apart piece by piece and he can see his body parts entering Saya and her visible fracture begins to close and her eyes start to glimmer showing the return of the light of life. Slowly, Slowly, her eyes regain their light and finally she sits up people around screaming if fear over the zombie-esque revival and then one thing comes out of her mouth.


    ¡°Who are you?¡±


    Broken by the pain of loss, denial and grief as soon as those words come out of her mouth Saito body begins to disappear and turn transparent sending him another wave of pain and he blacks out to not break mentally.


    But not after his heart gets destroyed and ravaged by the pain of loneliness.


    Saito wakes up looking at the scene from a 3rd person view floating, he goes towards his house and enters it only to see that his room is changed into an exercise area and all the pictures of him and his family are without him in them.


    ¡°IM Gone?¡±


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