《One piece: My story》 Chapter 1: Dexter Impel Down, the prison for criminal and pirates. Inside exist "6" level, the deeper you go the worst the condition is and so are the prisonner. But not everything is known to the public at the deepest level exist secret stair going down to the secret level the 7th level from the outside it looks like a simple cage but the director of impel down knows better, on the inside is trapped the worst human possible, he killed countless marines, destroyed entire island on a whim. In the past his is head had 3.000.000.000.000 belly on it , he was chased for 2 years before finally getting caught and "killed" by the marines, Fighting to death against thousnd and thousand of mens. The truth however isn''t so glorious he just decided to surrender and stop being a pirate saying that ''nothing else interesting happens in this world''. He was locked up inside Impel down on the seventh level forgotten by age. His name is Dexter --Present time-- "Oh? This looks interesting the strawhat pirates beat crocodile huh? That bastard probably deserved it, I still can''t believe he was schichibukai He was such an asshole and he worked for the marine. Anyway it''s been 5 years since I saw the world and it looks like interesting kids are taking the present left by the Old man¡­ I''m gonna go for a walk haha." * shattering noise * I can''t believe they thought those weak chains would stop me, oh well better start exercising my body is rusty. --Meanwhile-- Magellan P.O.V. * alarm noise * what''s this someone broke free? Where is i¡­¡­. I need to move quickly * glass breaking * I broke the alarm glass and activated it, this is a disaster we need to stop him or we are all doomed. " Message to all the guards, everyone is to go to the 5th level end and get ready, I repeat go to the 5th level and get ready! A prisonner escaped and we need to stop him before he gets out! " " Hannyabal hurry up and get all the head guards I''ll go ahead." " who got free Chief warden? No one in this prison should be terryfying enough to make you sweat that much Right?" " Don''t ask question AND DO IT!" "wawawawa ok on it!" --Meanwhile(again)- Dexter P.O.V. Damn this prison is a labyrinth the guy who made it was a sadistic fuck, how the hell am I supposed to find my way on this level, it''s so frustrati¡­ "halt! Who are you? A prisonner should stay in his cage!" "oh perfect I was lost can you tell me where the exit is?"a guard huh, time to see if I still got my abilities without sound I murmured "instant step" and moved behind him "Heh? Where did he-" " good night." * bonk * ok that''s one down, let''s see what he had on him¡­ Aha a map perfect just what I needed I guess he also got lost sometimes. -Some time later- finally got to the 5th level Now I guess I need to go u- "Stop right there Dexter, it''s time for you to go back into your cage." who the heck is it this time " Oh, Hey Magellan it''s been a while isn''t it? You didn''t come visit me this month I was bored and I see you brought friends eh?" when I say friend I mean the hundreds guards and beast of this prison nice way to say Welcome don''t you think? Stolen from Royal Road, this story should be reported if encountered on Amazon. "I do not want to see my prison get crushed by you, what do you want?" "Well you see I got the news that interesting pirates borned, namely the straw hats pirate, they beat the crap outta crocodile and I wanna meet him." Magellan looked suprised before he took back his composure"Sorry but you won''t get out of here I cannot let the world get in danger because of you! GET HIM!" all the guards and beast rushed at me on his words, looks like I''ll have to fight oh well. "Level 0, Aura blade!" yay looks like it still works, time to fight. The screams of the guards and beast alike resounded around, Level 0, aura blade is a technique that cuts evertything around me without resistance really useful against groups Right? In just a couple minutes every guard was either dead or lost an arm/leg, Magellan looks really pissed right now. "It looks like you didn''t lose any of your power, fine I''ll take you on myself if those fools can''t" hmmm, there''s something like dragon''s head aroung him. If I remember correctly it''s poison right? Don''t wanna touch that thing."Poison hydra!Poison bullet!poison wave!" "wowowow calm down please, Level 0 slow time!" everything slowed down around don''t have to say what it does right?"Level 0 Wind Slash" I motioned something like a sword cutting the air with my Right hand and send a wind slash staright to Magellan "Poison shield!" ok didn''t work then what about this " Level 0, Fire Storm!" It worked I burned that fucker dragon''s head and him also! Magellan looks like he jumpd into lava poor guy- "WOW that was close almost got hit by that one." "aaaah,aaaah,aaah,aaah, You shall not pass¡­ I swear on my name! HELL''S JUDGEMENT!" ------ Hey guys author here, This story was really getting on my nerves and I decided to write it so that I could sleep at night but anyway enough about my life and more about the story right? I need to say some things 1. English is not my main langage and although I am the best in my class #HumbleBrag thre will be errors point them out in the comment so that I don''t make them again 2.some thing will be changed by me, I''m sure all one piece fan out there want''s some things changed in the story *cough* Ace death *cough*, so don''t start crying on me 3. NO BITCHING, I am the a bad writer and I''m doing this on a whim, if you want to say something mean to me ( I''m gonna cry if you do :''( ) elaborate what or why you didn''t like constructive opinions are always good not just "fuck you it''s lame" 4. don''t have a particular schedules maybe another chapter tommorow maybe it''ll be in one week k? Anyway thank you for reading this monstrosity that I made and get ready to see one piece story destroyed by my stupidity bye! title at the end Thanks for the comment and help guys, It makes me happy to see that some people like it even though it''s not that great, like I said don''t worry about bitching or not just do it I''ll read it, cry a bit then correct my mistakes so that they don''t happen again but anyway onto the chapter we go ! ¨C ¨C ¨C ¨C ¨C ¨C ¨C ¨C ¨C ¨C ¨C ¨C ¨C ¨C ¨C ¨C ¨C "HELL''S JUDGEMENT" ehm, that looks like some nasty shit, and it smells so bad I better run away for now don''t wanna die from poisoning before seeing the new kids from the old man, I wonder how he is doing right now? Anyway " I''d really like to stay here Maggi but I don''t wanna die so ¡­ BYE BYE, Sky steps." "Oh no you don''t! Poison Bullet!" "Level 0 Wind barrier!" If only I had my katana, It would be over quickly, well fuck me lets just run away for now --Meanwhile with hannyabal-- Head warden looks really pissed right now, I wonder who that guy is I worked here for so long but I never saw his face in the documents we have. Hey isn''t he coming over here? He is! "Stop right there you criminal sc-" *bonk* " Hmm, oh sorry didn''t see you there I won''t walk on your face again. I would stay and talk anytime but as you can see Maggi over there is really pissed and I don''t wanna die now, my will isn''t written yet anyway, good luck." What is he talking about? And he called head warden Maggie? "Poison bullet!" * Splousch * "heh what''s THIS! ARGH IT HURTSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!" --Back to our Dexter-- He really doesnt give up does he? He''s been chasing me for the last 30 minute and he still isn''t exhausted, plus I''m lost again, it''s gonna be a runing gag is it? Oh, some idications let''s see < ¡ª level 4/Level 5 ----> ok to the left then but before that "Level 0, Earth wall!" witht that he has to go aroung it AH! I''m a genius praise me. Let''s go up now. ¨C Some times later ¨C I think I lost Maggi, I''m now on the 2nd floor and there''s some really weird animals around, especially these gigantic lion thingy saying food stuff. And those guards really don''t leave me alone I had to knock out so many of them. Anyway I freed some prisonners to stop them And I even got info on where they keep the prisonner stuffs, it''s on the 1st floor at the entrance. "FOUND YOU! POISON SEA!" For Christ sake! " Damn you can''t give up do you? You need to see a doctor for your problems dude, I know you love me but you are too obsessed!" Unauthorized use: this story is on Amazon without permission from the author. Report any sightings. AH! there''s a small path here he can''t follow me with his poison demon on his back let''s go" Bye bye maggie Don''t have time for you!" "ROAR!" "oops sorry didn''t mean to wake you up go back to sleep now okay? Hey, stop trying to bite me!" What''s this thing anyway? It has a goat head and a lion head, damn persitant bastard I''m not your lunch dude, go away. I then proceeded to knock him out, or well that was the plan before his tail started shooting poison at me, he even has a head in his back, fucking gross." I Don''t have time for you go play with Maggie instead Level 0 Wind Wave! " "kai kai kai" good luck buddy may you rest in piece you and your 2 other heads, there the stairs, time to go up." Ok Found the place where they keep stuff locked up now I just gotta find my katana and jacket those thing we''re expensive 1.000.000.000 for the katana, I ain''t leaving it here! "Stop right there you criminal !* bang bang bang * " "hey don''t shoot me. Instant step," Got behind him and placed a knife at his throat he should be able to tell me where my stuff os "you see right now i got a knife at your throat. You want to live and I want info we got a deal buddy?" "y-y-y-y-es what do you want?" it''s easy I want a katana, it''s easy to see it it''s scabbard is bright red with black stripes and a nice deep blue jacket with a D in the back know where they are?" " sorry but the katana isn''t here, it got taken away to enies lobby last week to be given to a marine soldier, the jacket is in the chest with the number 153 on it." "thank you now you can go to sleep * bonk *" Enies lobby huh? That''s going to be troublesome isn''t it? Well I guess it''s time to leave this place . .. ¡­ Wait how do I get out? I can''t navigate alone. . .. ¡­ FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU ----------------- chapter 2: To enies lobby ! Thank you for reading this chapter, last one was One thousand word give or take a bit this one is 800 like last chapter leave a comment with what you like what you dislike point out any mistake and don''t bitch for nothing please Bye Bye. Chapter 3 going to enies lobby Thank you again for the good ( or bad ) comments and help you guys did, as for some people that just decided to bitch about how bad it is without saying anything else, try to do the same thing, take 3 hours of your time everyday to write a chapter then re-read it, erase the wrong part or change things you finally don''t want in, then post it. Remember, I''m doing this for the fun of it and to help bored people on royal road. I know It''s bad on certain thing and I''ll try to change it but the only way to do so is to keep writing until I get better at it. ¨C------------------------------------------------- Chapter 3 Help --Dexter P.O.V-- hmmmm, I got a boat but I defintly can''t use it alone what to do¡­. Oh I know! Let''s go search for some prisonners that know how to navigate a boat, OK Here we go As I open the door I see behind a lot, and I mean A LOT people looks like I won''t need to go far to find them, " hey, nice to see you all, some of you know how to navigate a boat? I can''t do it alone aha." "Me" "me" "me" " Get Out of my way I know to do it better than all of you!" they started fighting dammit it''s not the time to! "OI There''s not only one boat just get on one and let''s get out of here, I don''t know how much time is left before Magell- *Rumble* *BOOM* -an gets¡­ here." huh that''s not good is it? "EVERYONE ON THE BOATS NOW!" They all started running and screaming, some of them weren''t lucky and got caught in the explosion of the door or poisoned by Magellan poor guys. " DEXTER YOU WON''T GET AWAY NONE OF YOU WILL PIRATES SCUMS! POISON SEA!" Aaaaaaaand more poeple got killed damn " OI MAGELLAN OVER HERE YOU PIECE OF POISON SHIT! LEVEL 0 WIND ROOM!" as I finished my technique a bubble appeared catching magellan into a tornado of wind, making small cuts everywhere on his body, don''t know if it''ll stop him for long but it should do it''s job. "RAAAAAAAAAAH! Poison Rain!" magellan made poison raining, making some boats unusable and killing more Pirates, I have to stop him somehow, think, think what can I do to neutralize him¡­. I know! It should work. I Took a random sword on the ground and used " Level 0 Burning Slash" toward the ground making the wood of the bridge burn, he can''t get to us now " ON THE BOAT, NOW!" . .. ¡­ --an hour later-- Magellan P.O.V. It''s a total disaster, Dexter got away I need to contact Sengoku now and be ready for troubles. The tale has been illicitly lifted; should you spot it on Amazon, report the violation."bidibidip, bidibidip, Kachink, who is it?" "Sengoku we are in trouble! Dexter got away!" * Breaking sounds* "WHAAAAAAAAAT?!?! HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE HE WAS LOCKED UP SOMEWHERE NO ONE COULD EVER HAVE ESCAPED!" "It''s a mistery to me as well Sengoku, in the 10 years he was locked up here he never tried, guess even this cage couldn''t stop him." "Anything on where he was going ? A clue, a city, A name ? " "Well¡­ He said something when I tried to ask him why, he said that something interesting are happening again, he also said he was interested in the strawhat pirates, Got nothing else." "Hmmmm, I''ll send kizaru on his tracks, he is not doing anything at the moment, If you find anything else call me. Kachink." Let''s hope he doesn''t cause trouble for now¡­ --Dexter P.O.V-- I''m so rusty, I really need to get back my katana so that I can use my Level 1 or else it''s gonna be a pain. Also right now everyone was cheering loudly at our escape. "AHEM, Well Congratulations to the people that could get away. But before anything terrible happen again¡­ Someone know how to get out of here? If I remember correctly we''re stuck here until one of the 3 gates open." Dead silence, looks like I dropped the happiness level to 0 quickly, Uwah stop looking at me with dead fish eyes you guys ! I''m not good under pressure. "I can help with that, if we have enough fire power and we''re light enough I could take us off the stream for enough time, the problem is we can only do it once and the ship will take a lot of damage and it will sink shortly after¡­. Also" "THERE''S STILL MORE?!?" "-also we can only stop at 2 places, Enies Lobby or marinford¡­" That''s some great news I''ll be able to get to enies lobby quicker than expected but it doesn''t look like the other are thrilled to the idea of going there better do something about it. "Ok let''s go to Enies lobby, this boat has everything we need to navigate without being lost and it''s the only place where we can go. It''s a simple thing really, we get there try to not gather attention to ourselves, take a boat or anything to get out and get to the closest city, anyone has objection?" as I said that I made my fist make some noise to emphasize my ''plan'' and it looks like they understood. " Here we go then !" ¨C----------------------------------------------- 870 words ( not counting the author rant ) hope you enjoyed Chapter 4: Jabura Chapter 4: Jabura ------------- --Dexter-- " YAHOOOOOOOOOOOOO! WE ARE FLYING!" we are currently flying across the sky, I can see Enies Lobby and it''s damn huge, how am I supposed to find my katana in here? * craaaaash * oh we landed let''s see¡­. Ugh we landed on the bridge to the gates, talk about trying to sneak in we''re right behind them and with all the noise we made I''m sure they are coming here. --Same time-- "Commander Spandam ! A boat of the marine landed on the bride behind us, from the information we got it is full of pirates, what should we do?" "What should we do? What should WE do? YOU are gonna go and capture them obviously!" "Y-YES SIR ON IT!" Bunch of idiots why should I go myself let''s get the CP9 they''ll take care of them. *Bidibidip* *Bididibip* * Kachink * "Yes?" " Jabura? A bunch of pirates landed on the bridge Behind Enies Lobby, one of them maybe has a devil fruit, take care of them " "Yes, Spandam * mumble * " * Kachink * ¨C Back to Dexter-- Damned, we just got here and we''re surrounded. This sucks "Ok boys prepare to fight, we have to get on the other side of the bridge!" Scream of hundreds of pirates and marines alike resounded from everywhere, they are so loud. *swords clashing and gunshot * Left,right,left,right,slash,kick,right,left,slash again, So many of them it''s unbearable I''m not gonna make it to the other side of the bridge at this rate let''s speed up the pace. " Level 0 Fire slash !" the screams of marines soldier burning is the best sound you can hear in this situa- "Rankyaku !" * Breaking sound * close one, but my sword didn''t make it. "Ah? One of them really uses a devil fruit, who are you?" " Isn''t it fair to say his name before asking someone?" " Oh right, where aer my manners? Jabura from the Ciphor pol 9." "Dexter, nice to meet yo-" "Rankyaku!" * slash * Should''ve seen that coming honestly, this guy doesn''t look like a fair fighter, if he wants to play then we are gonna play! "I''m gonna hurt you so bad ! Level 0, Earth shot ! " "Tekkai!" the shots just broked on his skin, looks like he''ll be a tricky one. "That''s all you''ve got ? It''s going to be easy then !Rankyaku!Rankyaku!Rankyaku!Rankyaku!Rankyaku¡­." If you encounter this story on Amazon, note that it''s taken without permission from the author. Report it. Fuck! It hurts like shit! I can''t dodge all of them! "Level 0, Earth wall! Level 0, tornado!" " Kami-E !Rankyaku! " ( in case you forgot Kami-e is a dodge skill, tekkai makes the skin hard as metal and Rankyaku launches something like an air blade ) Fast! Couldn''t see him move, ok time to go faster then, " Level 1, Body reinforcement !" I can see him now! Perfect then let''s go "Instant step" "Level 1, Fire punch !" " What? Dammit Tekka- ARGH ! It fucking hurts like hell !" '' but now he''s in range for it !'' "Shigan!" "Instant step" Behind him again and now " Level 1, Fire punch !" "AAAAAARGh !" *Crash* He crashed into the ground he won''t move any time so- "AWOOOOOOO !" -on¡­ Devil fruit user, wolf type it seems, his speed is going to get on another level and he is gonna anticipate my movement because of his earring, another problem huh? "Now I''m Angry! Soru! Rankyaku !Soru! Rankyaku !Soru! Rankyaku !¡­ (soru makes him move fast by tapping on the ground 10 Times fast.) He keeps appearing and disappearing while throwing wind blade to me, I can''t follow him like this ! Fuck it, If I can''t hit him then I''ll hit everything around me " Level 1, Fire tornado !" I''m sorry to the pirates that got caught up into it but it''s the only wa- "Shigan" * Blood gushing * ack, aaah, aaah, aaaah¡­. * Thump * "Gnyahahaha you fool ! You really thought you would get me like this huh ? And now you are going to die on the ground like a dog. Pitiful Gnyaahahah !" " Lev...el 1, shadow puppet" * slash,slash,slash,slash,slash,slash,slash * " Ku¡­ ah,aaaaaaaaargh!" Jabura body is cut everywhere, one of his arm got cut off, shadow puppet is a technique that allows me to move my body like a puppet for 5 seconds, the drawback is that I won''t be able to move for a full minute after. * Double thump * " I told you¡­. It was going to hurt really¡­. Badly¡­ aha" As I finish talking I could feel my body moving as I black out . " take him on the boat he needs emergency healing !" ----------------------- Was it good ? Probably not but it shouldn''t be that bad right ? As always leave a comment of what you thought of this chapter and don''t go bitching for nothing thank you for reading Ill restart the story after taking a lil'' break I came to the easy conclusion that there was many problems with the chapters. That''s why I decided to re-write the story again. probably the first REAL chapter will be tommorrow or the day after, This little trial I''ve did helped me a bit to understand what to or not. thanks to the little people that helped me and gave me some tips. I''ll delete this fiction when I put the next one ( will have the same title )