《Omen of The Days To Come (Title is a work in progress)》


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    Nothing for now, since its almost midnight (not really) from where i am. Come back either tommorow or 2 days from now. I can guarantee at least 3 chapters before school for me starts at september 6. After that, the updates will be irregular, but mark my words, I will never abandon this fiction. Know that however long it takes between chapter, the most will only take up to a week.


    Also, i am not planning any of the story. Its all made up on the spot. Just basing it on my feeling and past experiences, as well as what i like in a story, to create this.... well... this story. So going by that, u (the reader) could also influence what i type about next to some extent, though how its gone about will be completely up to my discretion.


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 Prologue 1

    Prologue --- Part 1


    (Third-person POV)


    "Waaah, Waaaah!!!", And so, a baby was born. In this world, the Fa''sa family of three, was getting a fourth family member this very day.


    In a cetain place, there was a little boy at the age of 8 years old, sitting down by himself.


    He was at the hospital, waiting for his mother to give birth.


    His father couldn''t come because he was "busy" with work. In Siang''s eyes, his father was scum that hangs around trash. He had seen his father one day, when he went to his work place during ''bring your child to work'' day.


    His father is the CEO of D.E.C.A., an international trading company. His father had lots of free time to himself because he would always pass on his work to reliable employees.


    His father was caught having an affair with 8 different women by Siang (how he did it is unkown). So, in order to keep him quiet, his father paid him a huge amount of money monthly to do so. He had even offered Siang that he could choose any women he wanted in the company to be his pet.


    However, Siang didn''t really care about his father''s doings, but decided to take the cash anyways.


    He did not, however, take a women because he was only 5 yrs old at the time, where even though he knew what some things were, he wasn''t at the age where it would just be popping up out of nowhere when he saw defined body lines and exquisite curves.


    And so, back to the hospital. A few minutes after Siang heard the cries of the baby, a nurse came out and told him it was okay to come inside now.


    When he came inside, he saw his mother hugging a bundle of what he could only assume is the baby. His mother was crying tears of joy while holding onto her child. But, seeing as she was dead tired from the expression on her face, the doctor told her to get some rest.


    The doctor and nurses left, leaving the three to themselves. "Siang, my dear child, could you hold her for me as I get some rest" (Mother).


    Siang nodded his head as he prepared to hold his little sister. At this moment though, he suddenly felt his heart quiver and tremble, as well as becoming increasingly anxious for some reason.


    He didn''t know why this was happening, and was probably, for the first time in his life scared, but disregarded this feeling (or at least tried to), and finally held onto his baby sister.


    There was a part of the blanket that had moved to cover up her face during the pass, so he reached out to remove it. As he was doing so, he felt his heartbeat rise exponentially, as well as a few beads of sweat drip down his face.


    Siang truly had no idea what was going on with him today. But if he had to say one thing, it was that at this very moment, he felt as though he was finally waking up. This moment, unlike all others, had felt as though he was in the process of opening his eyes.


    And then..... it came off.


    He knew that usually babies weren''t very cute, and that more than likely, even hot celebrities nowadays were probably ugly babies, as most in the world are (In Siangs opinion).


    But this was the first time (and the only time) that he saw one that could be described as beautiful. Her sleeping face as she (....well) slept, sent shockwaces through his heart.


    Te moment he laid eyes on her face, all the sweating stopped, and his heartbeat calmed down as well.


    In this moment, he finally felt as though his eyes were open for the first time. He could feel the (nonexistent) wind blow through his face. His could finally feel his heart actually having emotions other than indifference and disgust.


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    For the first time in a long time (ever since he moved at the age of 3.), he actually.... SMILED!!!


    His feelings at this moment caused him to unintentionally soften his stiff expression that he has been wearing for 5 years straight, and unconsciously wear a smile.


    And while he was busy with immersing in gis feelings and staring at his baby sister, his mother was looking on at him in shock.


    She had known that ever since they moved, he was never the same. From that time onwards, he would only say what was necessary and would always spend time with his books.


    ¡¶This is incredible. The only time he smiled before was when we hadn''t moved away from our hometown. But even then, that expression and smile he is making.... I have never seen it before¡·-thought the mother.


    Currently, Siang felt as though though it was only him and his baby sister in the entire world, fogetting about even his mother.


    It had stayed like this for a good minute before he noticed his mother''s stare.


    But, as if that didn''t bother him in the slightest, asked, "mother, what''s her name".


    His mother was still stuck in her shocked state, and so only absentmindly said "she doesn''t have one".


    And so, as if it was the most natural thing in the world, he said "okay, then from now on, her name will be Sulara. Sulara Fa''sa".


    Hs mother could only nod absentmindidly before coming out of her stupor. Then, she could only smile and nod once more, before going to sleep.


    And so, for that night inside the hospital room, Siang sat with his baby sister in his arms. staring at her the whole night until he finally fell asleep, his cheek rubbing on her cheek, both the Siang and Sulara smiling beautifully in their sleep next to each other.


    Never knowing that, on the happiest day of their lives, it would also be the greatest tragedy to happen in that century.


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    Author time~~~


    So, how was iiiittttt. Was it good or was it great :)


    Ayways, i know i said i would do two pov''s, but technically i didn''t. One was from a universal standpoint (not sure what that means myself?!), while the other one coming up will be in Sulara''s POV in the next chapter ( tell me if you like her name or if I should change it).


    I also didn''t count how many words in this chapter I did, but I am gonna try to have even more words than this in my chapters, after all the prologue and introduction is gone through.


    And, although I meant to say some other things as well, I forgot.


    So finally, thank u for reading and please tell me what u think about this story.


    Ps. I am actually mak8ng this story for myself, because I''m tired of not getting exactly what i want to read in books.


    Pss. I am writing all of this on my phone cause i have no computer (more like its broken with no way to be foxes), so thats an exra reason why if chapters are taking so long to be published, it will be because my phone sometimes exits out my tab, leav8ng all progress to zero again.


    :-TsavKAnz-:


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 Prologue 2 (warning: slightly(?) mature content

    Prologue 2


    (3rd POV)


    So, with the child born, Siang had a sudden transformation as well. That is, he still treats other people the same as before. The difference lying in that now, he has contracted a rare disease that (although pretty uncommon while at the same time common) almost everyone except brain dead people could see.


    His disease being one that every(?) Otaku (not that he is or isn''t one) can relate to having.


    Thats right. He is a.... siscon.


    As they grew up, Siang heavily protected his sister. Though, he had made careful preparations in order to make sure she didn''t realize, so as to prevent her from becoming spoiled, and also prevent isolation from others.


    Still, he didn''t realize it, but all those measures to keep her from being spoiled all went to waste. The cause.... himself.


    Siang, while he did not give everthing she had ever asked for, still complied easily to her wants and wishes.


    When she was a kid, from fluffy and furry pets like kittens to bunnies, and chocolates to ect (u get the idea), he gave all that she had asked for, and more.


    However, she was spoiled not in the meaning of being arrogant, but in that the ignorance from not realizing that not everybody in the world can get exactly what they wished for by asking their older brother''s.


    When Sulara had first come to know of this, she immediately cried and went to her older brother to tell him about this.


    "How...wuu...shoaw come evshryone dunshint havsh...wuu wuu... ansh oni-shan" she said with a teary-eyed face with upturned eyes.


    When Siang heard her say this with that appearance, his heart started melting and he had a slight smile on his face.


    (Sulara''s POV)


    Hello. I am Sulara Fa''sa. I am currently 4 yrs old. When i was told that everyone doesn''t have an onii-san, i was so shocked that i almost cried (even though she did).


    When i heard that, i stopped playing with my friends and went inside my house, all the way to onii-san''s room. When i opened it, onii-san was reading a book, but stopped to lift up his head to see who had barged into his room without knocking first.


    But before he had time to do anything, i quickly ran into him and hugged him tightly. Before he had the chance to say anything, i looked up into his eyes and asked my question.


    I know i probably looked really pathetic, but i didn''t care. I was too concerned with the answer to my questions to care about how I looked.


    I saw onii-chan smile at me, which made me blush a little. Then onii-chan said "well, i don''t have an onii-san, but I''m still happy, because I have you".


    I blushed furiously at that, but continued my questionings. "What about...sniff... da people who are...sniffsniff... by dumshelves...sniff"


    Onii-san smiled again, but I held on and hugged him more tightly while pressing on him for an answer.


    I felt a bump just touch my stomach, but didn''t pay attention to it cause onii-san was about to speak.


    "Well" he said, "they might be an only child, but they still have their parents and friends to keep them company"


    With that said and done, i finally calmed down. Since it was already night time, i had oni-chan call out to my friends outside to go home.


    Afterwards, when i was about to go to exit oni-chan''s room, "why don''t you sleep here for tonight" is what he said to me.


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    I turn around happy and give a big nod. I love sleeping with onii-san because sometimes he does stuff.


    Like, in the middle of the night, he would nibble on my ears and would touch me every where. I would let him do it because every time he did, i would feel funny.


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    Funny not in a bad way, but a good one. I didn¡¯t know this, but the nibbling and groping of various places like my chest, butt, and legs (thats right, no private spots were touched in the duration of this skit) are what had sprouted the seeds (not the one your thinking of) of affection and adoration inside my heart.


    And so, i slept with oni-san. First, he waited until midnight to start, like always. He moves his hand over my chest first, and then pulls me over. He pulls me to him until my back is tightly pressed against his chest. Next, he brings his hands over and starts to rub and squeeze my boobs.


    As a 4 year old, you''d expect me to be as flat as a board. However, due to oni-chan constantly rubbing and kneading my chest every night, i have a chest equivalent to an A-cup, close to reaching B.


    "Nhaaa?" i moan, as nii-chan starts kneading my fleshy mounds of meat on my chest. Next nii-chan starts nibbling on my ear. "?Nhaahaaa?haa?haah?" i started to moan even louder. Then, "?nii-nii?, ?hah?haah?,?It''s coming?PEEING?Im Peeing?"


    Of course, i didn''t panic to go to the rest room or any thing, because nii-chan already explained to me that when you feel you have to pee because of your feeling really good, that its actually not pee, but is love juice.


    Nii-chan told me that love juice is something that can only be produced when the person they like the most in the whole world makes them really happy and feel good (this wicked older brother!)


    "?nii-nii?haa?haah?kiss?, ?pwease?kiss?"


    So then, nii-chan turned me over, and then started to kiss me. He put his tongue inside my mouth, and started attacking my tongue with it. It coiled, twisted, and mashed together as he gave me no time to breath.


    Then suddenly, "?NHAAA!?" he started squeezing my ass (please excuse the language). Then he backed his head out from the kissing too give me time to breathe.


    Then he started sucking on my breasts. I would keep moaning until finally, "???NHHAAAHAAAAAA!!!???" i spilled all my love juice.


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    Afterwards, we would go to sleep, though when i wake up, there are always used tissiues everywhere.


    I hope nii-chan isn''t sad about something. Lets cheer him up by playing with him today.


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    Author Time~~~


    Ok, so... about the mature stuff. I want to say that they are BOTH still kids basically. Sulara being 4, while Siang is 12 (Siang was 8 when she was born). Also, even i am not that dumb to include u know what between a loli and a shota(?). So with how everything currently is, i think it is fine.


    But if i missed something and broke a rrl rule or something please comment or make a review please (as i get about 300 emails everyday, so theres no chance i would see ur email).


    However, if u just want to rant or complain about how this stuff shouldn''t be here, then please skip them or dont read. As i know, should i really want to write something like that, i know appropriate websites to do it on, where even something like this can be apreciated.


    Last but not least, my original goal was to only have 1 chapter from Sulara''s POV for a prolouge, but it seems that now i might need to write 2-3 more chaps just to exhaust my creative mind for making good (and maybe a bit lewd) chapters.


    This is what Siang looks like all grown up:


    Just imagine him without the demon stuff, and that how he''ll look like in earth.

 Prologue 3 - The Growing Dangers

    Prologue 3 - The Growing Dangers


    (3rd POV)


    So throughout the years, the children of the Fa''sa family grow up happy. Siang continues his antics from before, and is ultimately a changed man, he only shows that part of himself to his baby sister.


    Is nicer when talking to his mom now (cause she was the reason Sulara was born, so he decided to acknowledge her existence), and became a little more amiable with her.


    As for Sulara, because of Siang constantly kneading her ''bread'' in two places, when she entered highschool (Siangs is a senior in the same school now and yes, i did a time skip), she instanly became the top beauty there.


    With her soft and kind nature, as well as her voracious and curvey body, walking alongside Siang, with his cold and devilish, but exeedingly hansome face, they were known as the ''Heaven and Hell Duo''


    Individually, Sulara was known as the ''Goddess'', while Siang was known as the '' Demon Emperor''.


    Sulara did activies such as tutoring students (only when her brother was watching over her), picking up trash, recycling, and joining the pets club to take care of lost animals.


    Siang on the other hand, had been the president of the student council, president of the discipline committee, went to study theories on the atomic nueron of the blablabla (he went and studied about all the smart sh#t in the world....op mc, remember). He had also trained in kendo, juijistu, kung-fu, tae kwon doe, and a lot of other things and trained until he got to the point where even masters of the art couldn''t beat him.


    (He op, but he still had to have an explanation, right?)


    He did all this secretly though, as there was one person who he had to kill, without letting on any clues as to who could have done so.


    His Father.


    His father had made a huge mistake. An error that he shouldn''t have ever exposed to Siang, or in fact, should have never even expressed interest in (don''t mind Siang being a total hypocryte here).


    His father, Kuang Fa''sa, expressed deep lust and greed for the one thing that was Siang''s taboo.


    Kuang wanted Sulara. More accurately, he wanted her body.


    ¡¶This F#CKER!!!¡·Siang thought, the moment he saw that look in his father''s eyes.


    At that moment, he really wanted to kill his father. To gouge his eyes and #ick off, and shove them down his throat, before finally cutting his head off and burning his corpse, not even leaving a body intact to bury.


    However, he couldn''t. He father was a man at the top of the food chain. He was rich, and very influential. All the police and whatnot bribed by my father''s dirty money.


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    (Siang''s POV)


    ¡¶I have never cared whether the money I used was clean or not¡·he thought, ¡¶but if he is going to use it to get MY BABY SISTER!!! Then he better watch out for his life dearly¡·


    ¡¶Because the moment I gain enough power, I will MURDER YOU¡·


    (3rd POV)


    This began when Siang had just entered his 2nd year at highschool, and Sulara entering her 2nd year in middleschool.


    Fortunately or not (not fortunate cause Kuang is still alive), Kuang decided that he wants to wait for her to ripen and mature a bit more, before he has a taste of her.


    And how, one might ask, did Siang get to know this piece of information from his father.


    It is because his father had told him in person. His father had no clue about Siang''s feeling and what he did to Sulara almost every night, or else Kuang might have gone mad from jealousy and anger, and try to get his own son killed.


    As for Siang protecting Sulara from other male classmates trying to ask her out, Kuang just assumes that Siang is helping him with his wish to be the first one to rip into the flesh of that curvey, soft, and exquisite body before anyone else.


    Little did he know that if Siang heard him speak this, that Siang wouldn''t even care about gaining enough power to secretly kill him, and would just kill him right then and there in the open.


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    Author Time~~~


    Ok, so... this chapter wasn''t that big, but like i said, after all the prologues are over, they will definitely increase in size. However, do keep in mind that more content each chapter is will affect the rate of pubslishing them.


    Now then, pro-plot (so to speak) is developing nicely, which will expla8n the characters... character, before they step into the real danger world full of magic and monsters (adding sword in the mix just makes it feel redundant)


    And finally, i hope u enjoyed reading, and will continue reading this story of mine (even though i made it only for myself and am just sharing it with others who might have wanted the same things as me in a book)


    Ps. There might be long sentences sometimes because once i start, i usually cant stop my self until its written, just like this sentence.


    Pss. I had forgotton what i wanted to say earlier, only remembering a little bit now. Which is to say, that Siang has a purple and gold right and left eye respectively, while Sulara has the opposite. And that they both have Purple hair.

 Prologue 4 - Secret Endeavers

    Prologue 4 - Secret Endeavors


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    Time skip to 2 years before the wedding


    (Meaning, Siang is 22 right now, while Sulara is 16)


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    (Siang''s POV)


    "Father..... I love her"


    ".............what?"


    "I... I said I love her"


    Here I am, currently trying to convey to my father that I love Sulara, and want him to stop trying to come after her.


    I know this is stupid, to be thinking at my age (which is 22 by the way) that father would suddenly have a change of heart. But here''s the thing....


    "Sure, son. If that is what you want, then I''ll let you have her"


    (Please don''t think they are deciding her fate for her. Instead, think of it as, her veiwpoint is just disregarded for now)


    "..........what?"


    Now it was my turn to ask.


    "Well, remember all the back when you were just a kid. I figured that some day, you might walk in here and ask for a woman, I just would have never thought that you would ask for your little sister"


    "Dad, its not that I didn''t want a woman for myself (of course, before Sulara was born, he did not think this way), its just, there hasn''t been anyone who had moved me the way Sulara has"


    I spoke passionately.


    My father was very surprised I showed this much emotion. But even more than that, he was very angry.


    Had I not been nervous (for like, the second time ever) or unfocused, I would have definitely been able to divert the tragedy that was sure to happen in the future.


    "Of course, my son. When the time comes, I''ll give you and her my blessings"


    When I heard that, I naively was shocked and excited, thinking that my father was turning over a new leaf.


    "Thank you father. If you ever need any favor from me, just ask"


    I said, bowing before rushing out the door. Never would I imagine that my father had spoke out for this favor right after I left.


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    "Kukukuku, my DEAR SON, PLEASE DIE. Kukukuku"


    (Kuang''s POV)


    ¡¶Sh#t, this little sh#t. How dare he go against my wishes.¡·Kuang thought. ¡¶From the way he was acting, it was as if the man was going to ask his lover''s father for his daughter''s hand in marriage¡·(even though that is basically what happened)


    But then, Kuang just came up with a brilliant  (devious) plan. He walks over to the phone on his desk, and presses in a certain pattern of numbers.


    "Riiiing riiiing, riiiiing riiiiing, riiiiiiing #click#"


    (Unknown) "Who is this?"


    (Kuang) "someone who would like to make a huge donation, kukukuku.........."


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    Author Time~~~


    Ok, so..... this times chapter was even shorter (im sorry), but that''s because I am kinda rushing so I can get to the real story I have planned already.


    The next chapter will be from Sulara''s POV, the time period being right after this talk between father and son. It will also be another slightly  (forgive me, i don''t know if it truly is slightly or not, for in my mindas long as i don''t include xxx, then it is fine) mature content.


    Also, the prologue series will end at the 6th one, concluding the results of the wedding, and the details of there next life.


    And again, if u have any question, please comment or reveiw. If i see it, i will give u an answer in my next author''s note.


    Finally, please do remember that i am a Beginner and amuteur (not sure i spelled this right), so do please forgive my mistakes. As i am pretty sure there are a lot of gramatical and spelling errors in this, as once i write this down, i do not go back over it.


    Thank you for reading


    Ps. In the next chapter, I''ll finally describe how Sulara looks.

 Quick Update bout Good News

    This will be very short, but Rejoice!!!!


    I....HAVE.....A....NEW......COMPUTER!!!!!!


    Just arrived 5 minutes ago. So, how could this be good news for you?


    It means that I can type my ideas out faster, leading to chapters more often, and some other things.


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    anyways, that''s all I wanted to say. Goodbye.


    (not really that significant though, considering I had only started yesterday)


    also one more thing.


    expect a chapter later today at about.....hmm..... 8:00 - 10:00

 Prologue 5 - Love (16+)

    Prologue 5 - Love (16+) content


    Sulara''s POV


    "Good morning, nii-chan"


    "Good morning, Lala"


    "Mouuu!, nii-chan baka, (whispers) call me by the name you gave me"


    "Hmm?, what did you say Lala?"


    "Nothing...... what do you want for breakfast nii-chan?"


    As I said that, I got out from underneath the sheets of the bed. I secretly stared at nii-chan while I got up.


    Nii-chan was ogling my body. I was only wearing a bra and panties, so a lot of my skin was exposed. Plus, although I had on a black-laced bra, I had teddy bears and a heart on both the front and the back, with nii-chan directly staring at that place oii!!!


    Right at that moment nii-chan looked straight into my eyes, and then smiled devilishly.


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    He reached his hand towards me. I was wondering what he was trying to do, but didn¡¯t have enough time to figure out that I was his target.


    "Wwaaaa?!" I yelped.


    He pulled me back under the sheets, and pulled me closer to him. Right until my face was bare inches before his.


    Bewildered and panicking a little, I tilted my head while blushing a little, and asked in a small voice so low, that not even in an extremely quiet room could this be heard.....


    "??Nii-chan??"


    Then, as if a raging beast had started on a rampage, onii-san pressed his lips fiercely against mine at first, before sticking his tongue inside my mouh. His hand supporting the back of my head.


    "?Mmmph?Mmm?Mmmh?"


    Then...


    "?Nnhaaa!?"


    Onii slid his right hand down my backside, rubbing gently before he arrived at my buttocks.


    His fingers first circed around my plump, juicy and full butt, before squeezing down on them and massaging them to no expense.


    "?Nnn?Mmmph?Puuwaa?"


    "?Nii-chan?, ?More!?"


    And in compliance to that...


    "?Nhaaheee!?No?Not There!?, ?Its Dirty!?"


    Thats right. Nii-chan went to a place that not even I had explored... my ButtHole.


    "?Nhaaaa!?" I moaned.


    I felt it, nii-chan''s fingers enter my dirty hole, mixing and ravaging up my insides as hos fingers twirl around in there.


    "?nnnn?Haa?Hah?haah?Mmm?"


    Nii-chan then started moving his left hand toward my bra, which then begins to unfasten (not that he really needed due to their ''bout'' last night).


    "?Nnn Mmm?Nnhahaa?Mmm?"


    Nii kisses me a little before my huge, D-cup melons pour out.


    Then, nii-chan suddenly starts to hug me tightly to himself, while he then used both hands to ferociously and furiously squeeze my ass cheeks, which he would sometimes describe as a ''pair of heavenly soft and heavy marshmallows'' as a representation of my huge ass.


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    All the while tongue kissing for so long, that it felt as though I would drown in ecstasy.


    Finally, my climax was building up and about to burst.


    What finally did it was nii-chan sticking 4 fingers up my asshole while still squeezing my plump cheeks.


    "(Muffled)?Nhaaaahaaaaaaa?Mmph?maah?"


    I had moaned the loudest I ever had before. But because onii-chan and me were in the middle of kissing each other, I had done this inside his mouth.


    The vibrations caused by me moaning inside his mouth must have turned him on even more, because before I knew it, he renewed his attack on places all over my body.


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    ¡¶Sigh.... It¡¯s going to be a long morning¡·thought some omnipotent being as he stared at these two.


    ¡¶But its happening soon, so I better prepare¡·


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    Author Time~~~


    Ok, so.... sorry for the chapter being later than what I said.


    Also, I read the comments of some people (more like, only one person), and i totally agree.


    Its just that, this my first book EVER!!! So its hard for me to focus on the important little details at first.


    I am what some may call a decisive man, I am at the same time one that changes my mind all the time.


    When I decide to do something, I go with it and dont hold back. But at the same time, when i hear an opinion that i find very logical as reasoning, it makes me want to take back what i did previously did.


    In this case of your comment (u should know who im talking to), reading what u said makes me want to go back to my chapters and do a complete redo.


    By the way, im only saying that it makes me a little anxious about my book. Not bashing or hating on any people who are generously constructive in their criticism. And I thank u for it.


    I just have to keep what u said in mind as I continue writing chapters :)


    Also, sorry for the long Author Notes every chapter, I just really like telling u guys what I think about doing in the next chapter.


    Dont hesitate to give ideas either. This next one coming up is pretty much set in stone, but if u have ideas for where they will go or what interactions will happen in the ''another world'', then im all ears.


    Goodbye :)


    Ps. Not sure if i described Sulara or not, soryy if i didn''t.