《stray in the multiverse》
prologue
It was a normal day for Aaron, he washed, had breakfast and went to school.
While entering, not even forcing himself to smile, he formally greeted the class and went straight to his desk near in the bottom left of the class, sear the window.
Aaron did not even have a friend.
No he thought, he HAD a friend, until those bastards drived Him away, making Him committing suicide; He was a simplecountry boy, good looking, healty, loved by his mother and father and with a lot of friend at school.
The problem started when his father died under a farm tractor, his mother had toget into debt to keep the house.
First she tried with banks, but the operator rejected her, saying that the bank wouldn''t gain from the investiment and giving her the number of a loan shark. After various months she found out that the operator was colluding with the shark loan anddenounced them to the police, but the next day she went missing.
Aaron tried helping his friend letting him sleep in his house, but after a few days Aaron''s parents found out his situation and chased him out. He did not have a house anymore and at school those that were his friends startedmaking fun of him.
Not even a month passed from his father death and they found his body in adumpster. That day Aaron lost faith in humanity.
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Whatwakened him from his thoughts was a brief quake followedby the shrill screams of his mates, panicked he glancedoutside the window, only to find that a blood colored sky was awaiting his gaze
{I MYSELF AM GOD, AND AFTER DELIBERATING FOR SOME YEARS I DECIDED TO GRANT YOU ALL A CHOOSE: SHALL I ANNIHILATE HUMANITY OR SHALL I LET THEM RULE THE CREATION?}
A voice assaulted his brain, the contents of the message was so ridiculous that he thought of having imagined hearing it.
Yet while he shifted his gaze to his mates in the room he nearly fell from chair. There was an azure po-up message in the air that listed the choices said by the voice plus athirdchoice that would leave everything as it is
| YES, HUMANS SHOULD BE ERADICATED |
| LEAVE HUMANITY AS IT IS |
| HUMANITY ISABLE TO RULE THE CREATION |
His life started playing in front of him as he organized his thoughts, he remembered the information on the websites, complete informations found in the shadow of the regular web; theatrocities in some news, the joy in others, and after a complete examination he picked his choice:¡ºYES, ANNIHILATE THE HUMAN RACE IN THIS WORLD¡». It was not a joke, he could feel it, and his feeling was confirmed by the silence around him; his mates were motionless, theireyes unfocused, nothing that a normal human was able to do.
Yethe made his choice, a choice that condamned the whole world.
When he blinkedhis eyes again everyone returned to normal, the only remaining proof of his vote was the omnious atmosphere, and disappointment grew in his eyes
Right after he extinguished hislast hope he saw a bright white flash that despite his holy appearance filled him of dread and, immediatly after, the cold, freezingdarkness that was rapidly approaching.
Chapter 01 Meeting with God
----Aaron PoV
When I finally opened my eyes I was floating in the outer space, or at last that was my opinion because the space was filled of particles, and every time I was able to concentrate my view on something I was able to view it perfectly, even if it was a particle capable of appear for only a moment before disappearing or a black hole at the other side of the galaxy, and that was ridiculous because I studied for years that black holes should be invisible and..."black"
I was unsure about what I was watching but that...explotions, that...harmony...of colors I was sure that it was not the dull void space
"You are completely wrong"
I turned with an inhuman speed to the other side of the... galaxy? Or at last 180¡ã from the enormous black hole I was watching only to find nothing.
More that nothing, Nothing.Supposing that what I was watching was a space full of colors I was watching a delimited area of space devoid of colors and presences. it was not a black entity, it was more like a black hole, particles were dancing around and behind it but that space was "empty" no more..."invisible".
"Finally you''re giving some correct answers"
Sherlock Holmes once said: <> so I asked the Being "May I ask ifby chance you are God?" Inside I was sweating bullets, I read too many myth where a random god was angry with a human and metamorphosed him in an animal or destroyed him by accident
"AHAHAHAH you are too funny for being the last earthling in the universe" I heard athunderouslaughter and an immense pressure and I recognized my error
"Crap, he is able to read mythoughts" I thenthought about his last few words, can it be that he really...
"Wow human you are sharper than I thought, you are definitely correct, after the votation, no, more immediatly after your vote I killed every human and destroyed every dangerous facility on your ex-planet, why, do you regreat making your choice?"
I was slighty stunned by the sudden revelation of the extermination of mankind but I quickly answered "No, is the opposite, I feel relived that they are unable to cause any more damages, but if I am allowed to ask, may I know why then this one is still alive? why this one is here? and even more, why right after this one vote You destroyed mankind?Unauthorized duplication: this tale has been taken without consent. Report sightings.
[author note: I tried being the most formal possible in this lines, if you have better ideas feel free to say them in the comments]
Immediatly after I asked my question the colored particles around God started rotating andclustering together what appeared from the vortex was the faint outline but I was unable to process the whole immage, as if I was watching alow resolution video
"About the first question you are not alive, do you think that a humanearthling would be able to talk in the outer space and perceivethrough the various dimensions? Ahahahah how amusing"
When I heard what he said I immediatly tried to see my body and I nearly killed myself in fear (only to remember that I was already dead). I couldvaguely see the shape of my body but it was more a faintgray outline with colored bright points inside that the luminous body or void outline of god
Perceiving my question he then started speaking again
"Regarding our body the difference is massive; your souls are the faint outline you are seeing on yourself, shaped through your spirit and now with some element inside, while this vessel is merely a ''skin'' that I wear to be seen by you, while before you were unable to see my because my existence is on a different level than your, if you see me with your current strengh your soul might shatter with a glance. Also please stop be so formal, I incorporate the law of Time itself, i''m not so childish to distroy the lastearthling due to him being informal"
After he said that I immediatly calmed down, a deity can not lie to a mere human, right? But his next words made me terrified and a little guilty at the same time...and maybe a little excited
"About the reason of your summoning here is to curse you, maybe giving you some reward also, and is directly related to your vote"
Seeing how I froze and probably perceiving my thoughts he immediatly continued: " When I made theresidents of Earth vote I fragmented the space-time continuum to make impossible for someoneto influence others and to see the differents reactions; someone decided alone, others tried to threaten the nearly people, but I made impossible to influence the true plane of existence of humans. That made possible to made everyone choose in nearly thesame moment without making impossible to see the vote of others.
Yet you are the only intelligent being on Earth that used TWOWHOLE DAYSto decide, even I had some problem reconnecting the shattered continuum together and with the normal Time!" he continued without giving me enought time to process the informations "Also, until your vote the second and the third choice where equal, so, your decision doomed humans on Earth!"
I was stunned, did I really doomed the humans with my decision? But then a faint childish face emerged from my memory, and I thought: If to destroy those wretches I need to annihilate humanity that it was worth it!
"You, you...ARE YOU FUCKING CRAZY?!? You want to exterminate an entire race for your own revenge? HEAR MY WORD, IN MY NAME %&¡ê%&, I CURSE YOU, TO FEEL THE PAIN, THE JOY AND THE WHOLE LIFE OF THOSE THAT VOTED THE FIRST CHOICE AND THAT FOR YOUR OWN SELFISHNESS HAVE BEEN CONDEMNED TO DEATH! and now disappear from my sight!"
And feeling burning pain I vanished thinking that the glowing face in madness he presented in the last moment was similar to my lost friend.
Chapter 2 A single tear
---God PoV:
After some time that can be called "a few years" for humans, I made my decision about the little blue planet in theOrion Spur of the Milky Way.
I decided to let the inhabitants of the planet decide the fate of their human race. Usually I send a few vessels on the various planets andthrough their life I decide to reward or discipline the various dominant races, yet this time of my three hundred vessels themajority lived a orrible life, and even those that were able to be important in the society ended up killed, betrayed and used. I noted than that sometimes the vessels were able to find promising people, capable of bringing Earth to new height. Usually my vessels only observe and judge the society beforedisappear, so to observe for longer the worlds I sometimes make them use a holy aura, capable of make the vessel mingle with the inhabitants.
I rarely use vote to decide the destiny of a race, only in situations where I''m troubled. This spell, after being used, make the not ruling speciesand the spirits of the World develop temporally awareness to decide the destiny of the ruling race; usually the difference is great and the fate of the race is clear.Thousands of years ago I casted the spell on a world ruled by Elves, and the animals and the spirit of nature decided to vote to make them the legit ruler of the world; due the results being highly pro-Elves I gave them the possibility to raise their world in the spiritual scale, causing a few of them to evolve in High Elves.
This time the votes were equal and the hopes wereleft in the hands of a single, normal, human boy. Letting medumbfound he chosed to destroy mankind,signing their doom. What left mespeechless was that he used over 3 days in the universal Time scale, equal to two days in human time.
Bewildered I summoned him but while in the start his reactions were interesting, trying to understand the way of the Universe, later he was even able to anger me, due to his decision todamn his own race due to a personal selfishness.
In the end I cursed him, letting making him experience the lives of the humans that votedin favor of mankind.
I was thinking,puzzled, over the faint image of his supposed friend that he decided to avenge that was similar to mine when I felt immense hate from his soul. That was extremely strange, that cursein particular was made to break the soul by the sense of guilt; yet his soul, that was nearly broken, was TAINTED black by adense cluster of Hate that was revolving around it.
Left for the third time speechless I immediately checked what life he was currently experiencing and, after finding out, I lost myself in the memories...
----Aaron PoV
After being cursed by the Deity I felt like a strong pushing force and his head being compressed, while the bones of his skull were moving to allow him to be born.
Aaron was able to feel the mixed emotions of the baby but was not in charge of him.
He became an infant, loved by his parent, and after some years he learned to walk.
He started going to thekindergarten and made a lot of friends.
He began to grow up and started going to school. He was afriendly boy in his teen with a sunny disposition. After a few years he started dating a girl and experienced his first love and thedisappointment of breaking up with her.
Alreadyeighteen years old he started another relationship and had his first sexual experiences. His joy after taking his university degree; twenty fiveyears old he married, while Aaron, that was feeling extremely uneasy, started struggling after realizing of what was going to happen. In the end, while the man was driving home with his new born son, the ground shock and the sky became bloody red
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Aaron paled and felt dread in his heart, while the manhearing the voice became scared and turned his head only to find his wife and his sonmotionless with theireyes unfocused. After a moment he choose the first choice and hugged crying his family that returned to normal. The hug lasted only a few seconds, before a white flash stole hiseyesight and he felt his own body burning and melting in nothingness.
After the end of the world Aaron was dragged again, and, without giving him time to blame himself, he found himself bound to a cat. It was a common british shorthair cat, loved by her owner. The owner was a young girl, around twelve-thirteen years old; with her parents divorced she only had her cat, that she immensely loved. The cat lived with her since her childhood, she grew with her,sharing her joy and sorrow, until that day
The ground shock and the cat jumped in fright. The young girl, that stayed at home due to her stomach ache, felt scared too and runned to pick the cat up in her embrace.
{I MYSELF AM GOD, AND AFTER DELIBERATING FOR SOME YEARS I DECIDED TO GRANT YOU ALL A CHOOSE: SHALL I ANNIHILATE HUMANITY OR SHALL I LET THEM RULE THE CREATION?}
A voice resounded in her head and she, now capable of understanding the message, filled with love looked at her owner, and, to repay her of her love, decided the first option.
The little girl started moving againbut the cat was able to see that she was crying. Worried she tried to comfort her owner, but immediately after a white flash hit her, and she found herself outside, on the road, now full of animals, her owner vanished forever. Someone was crying but the majority, abused by their owner and was now happy that humans were gone
Aaron was still at her side, contemplating the world after the mankind extermination and about his choice.
The next second he was gone, yet again near a different person; this time it was a well built guy that was writing an essay for homework.
The ciclewas repeated countless times, until he arrived to a man.
That man''s name was Maximilian, did not have a particular childhood, but during the middle school he started to associate with bad guys and became a crook. Later he married and had a son; he worked in a bank while sometimes hechiselled a bit on thecash, sometimes swindling someone.
Until a day when a beautiful womanopened the door of his office. She needed a loan she said; her husband died and she needed some money for her and her son. He tried to make some tease her making some sexual avances but she rejected him. The man never felt so humiliated by a woman, so he deceived her. He said that it was impossible to ask a loan due to the difficult economical situation and gave her the number of a shark loan that was his friend since middle school.
After she indebited and she found out that was tricked she went to the police, but her request got rejected through some corrupted agent in the station.
Maximilian,made aware of the situation was enraged, and ordered some thugs to kidnap her. Aftertelling a lie to his wife he went to the thugshideout and they raped and killed her. Angry for theunsubmissive gaze of the women until death he traced her son, and, after making him live a living hell he kidnapped him, killed him and sold his organs. With the money then he gifted a jewel to his wife and bribed some officer to silence the case.
After that Maximilian started to adapt to his rich style of life and involved himself with drugs and with the traffic of organs. When God asked his question he chosed instanty the first option, ready to profit from the situation. When the light arrived he was still dreaming, and died without even realizing anything
Aaron when he first was bond to Maximilian was already numb to every sensation, therepeated death of the people near him caused him to be devoid of every emotion, only a massive sense of guilt was left; the cycleof death left him exausted and produced numerous cracks on his soul leaving him only a shadow of his past self.
The first time Aaron saw the picture of the son of the woman in the hands of that man he didn''t feel anything, the second time was the same, the third time he saw him with another boy near a park he felt a sharp pain in his soul, and he returned himself. The cracks in the soul started slowly healing themselves.
Yet, when he saw that small body ripped apart, with each organ taken away and the dead body now empty he felt it. Rage. He was able to see it, a black colored gas that leaking from his body was slowly corroding the space, becaming stronger and painting black even his very soul.
With bloodshot eyes he stared at the man and moved. Under the curse one is bound to assist powerless to the live and death of the designated victims without being able to move, talk or ignore the events; yet, he moved.
Aaron started with moving his fingers, after that the hands, the arms, and the whole body. He was able only to see a scarlet light, a willing of slaughter the abomination that had taken pleasure torturing his friend. While slaughtering Maximilian he started to rimember every particular of their friendship, since they where small to the last meeting in the park with him, with Manuel, before his death.
After he remembered his friend''s name he slowly recovered hisclearness.
Around him there was macabre sight: a pool of blood and gore was covering the floor, while he was surrounded by dark mist with faint red lines. He was covered in blood releasing a demonic aura from his already black soul; his hands were still holdingsome shattered bowel yet he felt satisfied, he was finally able to personally avenge the death of Manuel.
With this last thought in his mind a single tear fell from his eye, and he fainted.
Announcement and poll
Hi, probably I won''t publish anything for some months. That is because I will start my exams and I won''t have time to write the story.
Besides I noticed that I started biting more that I can chew with that introduction [travel as a cursed stray in the multiverse with naruto, one piece worlds, cultivation ones, someone only with magic, others with game system], sure he will do that but I risk to fall in the superficial (I also have only a basic knowledge over most of the anime so I need a little of culture.) If you know some detailed site or/and timeline about the said anime please share them with meStolen novel; please report.
Also, reading the previous released chapter I noticed some flaws. It is difficult to notice because the problem lie in the energy theory I am making to give depth to the story.
Last but not for last noticed heavy influences in my plot from several novels I''ve recently read, so before writing the story I''m planning to polish the base structure.
=>Note: I will remove the plot armor, probably I will be insulted heavily but I will make the MC die a few times, sometimes to change worlds, sometimes because he is unluky/karmic sin, sometimes due to his arrogance, sometimes because...well, hewas fated to die...
Chapter 3; the Mark of Cain revised, Mark of the Wanderer
----Third person PoV
Aaron was too consumed by his Hate to notice, but since he started breaking the curse a personappeared. He, God, was staring at him with a compicated gaze, filled with hate, love, and a little ofguiltiness.
He stood hidden in the shadow of a pillar,motionless, like a mortalspying on histraitorous fianc¨¦e before erupting in a killing spree. It was an unnaturalmotion for a deity like him, that was able to simply became invisible, but he didn''t realize that.
He moved only after the soul of the boy fainted, to bring him back in his palace. He moved slowly, as to feel the weight of the soul on his arms while moving. Finally helaid down carefully the soul on a fine bed. Immediatly after he moved his gaze and his divine sense in the depth of the soul,looking through the superficial layers until he reached a multicoloredsphere.
It was the mind, a slowly rotating sphere; probably before going through the curse it was completely azure, to show the innocence of the soul. Yet, now the azure was only in the depth of the sphere, visible through the deep fissures that filled the surface of the sphere like a broken glass. The dominant colors where red,symbolizing rage and bloodlust, and black; a deep black that seemed capable ofdevour all the light. It was filling the sphere, not only the superficial layers, that were temporary but where arriving in the very core, scaring even God. Over the black surface a symbol was slowly taking form a series of concentric circles with rhombus in the four cardinal points.
Withaccuracy and delicacy God started iniecting friendly thoughts and dreams,relieving the oppressive atmosphere. The black stopped advancing, but it did not retreated following the desire of God.
God slowly withdrew from the soul, with sweat covering his forehead and lamented"Shit this timeI risked too much, I nearly gave birth to a shura, yet he was hitwith the curse of Cain for killing inside the illusions" he was going to exit the room when his gaze, fixed in the black face, spotted two glowing tears.
Immediatly with a wave of his arm the tears flied in a wooden box that closed itself. God then muttered "two chaotic tears of a pure black soul, I thought they were a legend, I need to have them appraised" before vanishing in the hallway.
-----Aaron PoV
I awakened in a soft and fine bed and immediatly memories invaded my mind stunning me. Remembering the pool of bloodmade mewant to vomit, but then Irecalled of being a soul and face-palmed. This made meconscious of the changes in my body, the color was dark gray, nearly black, but different from his first transparent soul and from the jet black soul he was while in berserk, also he felt a little heavier.
<> I asked myself while getting up. I thennoticed the strange room where I was; it was a room wide around 25 sq m where the floor, the roof and the walls were semitrasparent and acalmingtune was in the air.
While I was examining the room I felt a gaze looking at me, and turning around I started crying.<> In front of me was the face of my dead friend, only slighty more mature and older: that person was around one meter and eighty high, black haired and a pair of brown eyes and, a timid attitude and awry smile
"The curse have ended, but you have to promise me to let me finish explain before becaming angry or interrupting me" He said, I calmed myself and after a while I nodded
"First I have to say that I am the deityyou have met before" I tried screaming but I felt unable too, while thinking I realized that I was not even so angry"Second, you made a promise in your soul form, because of the nature of the mortal souls you are currently unable to break promises made with your soul or telling lies, so you have to wait until I finish to became angry and you can not interrupt me". What he did next stunned me "I''m sorry" he said and started crying him too; while I was questioning him with my eyes he said "actually I AM your friend, or it is better to say that he is me, he was one of my clones of Earth, he was really the person you know, the only difference is that he was made from a part of my soul, and after his death he returned in me. I know what he did and felt but I am saying sorry to you because I actually forgot you, and you became the person you are now because of me".
I took a while to realize what he was saying but basically he was myfriend Manuel and also a deityreigning the universe? Holy shit
Watching him still with his head low I made a grin and, after getting close, first I slammed a fist in his stomach, and while he was bent for the punch I raised his face and hugged himIf you stumble upon this narrative on Amazon, be aware that it has been stolen from Royal Road. Please report it.
After some minutes I felt a little lighter andmoved away from him noticing that my color was a lighter shade of gray; I tried to ask him but I was still unable.
"Actually I need to say a little more" he said while averting my gaze "When the fragment of my soul left my main I gave him a strand of holy aura, that has the only effect ofletting the owner in a friendlier way. I am not saying that we were friend due to my aura but it helped us becaming friends"
This last affermation blow my mind <> "I know what you are thinking but I can assure you that I do not know a simil aura nor I will use it" he interrupted my thoughts with a sad smile
"why..."so I am able to talk again "why you changed this much from the last time? why I can see you? and where are we? Where are you really from?" I started questioning him about everything I wanted to know
"I needed to convince you about my power so I used a tecnique to hide my body and played the part of the arrogant god to know the truth about your answer, my true personality is more that of a scholar than that of an "Exalted God". I am from a world big around 3 times Earth with Qi in the atmosphere, something like thexinxia world i liked reading as Manuel, probably because I felt home" and made a wry smile again, I was really unable to think of him like a ceertain xinxia hero that liked going around cutting heads and ...kissing... beauties.
Earing my thoughts heflushed red "I am not a rapist and I have only two wifes!!"
While I was left speechless again he quickly changed subject "anyway you are in my palace, like before, but this is a guest room while that was the hall. You were unable to see anything before because you were only a mortal but you are not a normal mortal anymore. Before I was angry and thought that you decided to kill everyone together with that bastard that killed my clone only because you didn''t have the courage to kill him yourself, so I used an old curse to make your feeling emerge.While you saw my death you nearly transformed in a shura, that is something like an immortal that lost all reason create his path with the blood of others in a unending slaughter. That will of kill corrupted your mind and you killed a person in the illusion. That carved in you a curse, called Mark of Cain, in your mind that can not be easily erased. Sorry."
I paled "are you able to erase it?" I already knew the answer but prefered to ask
"No, but as you are a mortal and an immortal I am able to modify it in a way that you may like"
"What do you mean?" How can I like a curse?
"The original curse make the cursed reincarnate in a mortal crippled body unable to killin every lifepreserving the momories of the past life for the eternity. As you are a mortal and I am the original caster I can reincarnate you in any world that you like giving you something like fifteen of your minutes between the death and the birth. If you find the right metod in one of the worlds you can even became a god like me; also the bodies you will reincarnate into will not be crippled from the curse and I will make you even select up to 10 worlds to were you can reincarnate; last but not for last some of the worlds are similar to some manga that we liked reading together, what do you think?I think that I will call it mark of the Wanderer"
How do I say that? *sigh* "Yeah, ok, thanks, also you can have became a deity but your ability to name things is still zero. Also I do not remem.." Interrupting what I was saying he dragged me in a inner garden where a fountain was in the middle.
"Ok, now I will give you a list of the planets in my section, make your choice" Damn he is ashasty as I remember
Immediatly a blue window appeared and I scrolled to select the worlds:
| O Berserk |
| O Kuro no pico |
| O One Piece |
| O Bleach |
| O Fairy Tale |
| O Sword Art Online |
| O Soul Eater |
| O Dragon Ball |
| O Galvan |
| O Harry Potter |
| O Naruto |
| O X-man |
| O Magi |
| O Hunter x Hunter |
| O Shingeki no Kyojin |
| O Detective Conan |
| O Hek¨¢te |
| O Malator |
I didn''t remember nearly anything about mangas, I stopped reading them right after his death so he don''t know "Yeah, the first three, the fourin the middle and the last three"
He glanced me with a very strange gaze and took a step back "Are you sure? have you changed your tastes?"
"Wait then, let me think again" he glanced me that way right after I decided the first batch of world and while I remember a giant sword for berserk and some strange fruit for One piece I don''t know anything about the central one, so I will take the world immediatly after. Also because because I don''t want to be poisoned or killed or even worse being accidentaly near Goro I will leave Detective Conan.
"Ah right I read it wrong, it is not the second in the forth, ahahah, plus the four in the middle and the last two; I will take only nine, I am sure"
"...Ok if you say that...As an apology gift I will give you aself-analysisstatus screen and a spatial bagbound to your soul, so that you will not lose everything during reincarnation"
I was going to say thanks but the words were unable to leave my mouth; while my sight was becaming hazy, I swear to have seen him say Thanks.
final announcement please read
I admit defeat.
I hereby ask for forgiveness to every author of this small planet called Earth.
I admit that, reading such beautiful works on this site made me overstimate my abilities and to think of being able to write the story I have always thought of writing.
The past week Iperused the chapters I published and I came to a conclusion: it was hell. I gotgoosebumps while reading them, I now understand how I gained a 0.5 rating!
Starting from the prologue, were I first wrote that his best friend suicided and then a few lines below i wrote that his body was found in adumpster. (I corrected it)Support creative writers by reading their stories on Royal Road, not stolen versions.
In another chapter I mistaken I with HE because of the PoV change....
Another problem is the PoV change itself, it do not flow with the story.
In the end I solved the conundrum: I shall drop the story; it is too complexand long to actually write it down with isolated chapters, i have first to write it down! not only the important events like the MC died, the MC was enlighted here, etc... but a realdraft of the story with details too.
Still I do not want to kill my story. I have the ideas, I have the mc, i have his past, his future and some of his Karma. So, more than dropped the correct term is indefinite hiatus, because i do not know when i will became enough proficient to write his history down. It is like trying to use the high-grade fire magic meteor with fire magic lev. 1
So I plead you to write in the comments all of your critics, even if harsh, to help me grow and learn the right way to tell my story
RE: prologue
Facing the scared girl thehoodlums raised their knives.
Their objective was not to kill, but to scare in submission the young girl to taste her body.
Usually they would use prostitutes to placate their feelings, but that eveningthe boss made them so angry that they wanted to do something more violent to appease their rage.
Originally they thought of vandalize some house, taking some pocket money and hitting a few times the owners; but they changed their mind when they saw a gorgeous girl crossing the road.
Judging from the uniform she was wearing she was a student of the nearby Karakura High School, so still fresh.
After having baited her away from the crowd, they dragged her to a secondary street where they surrounded her
"what do you want from me?" the girl was not so innocent to don''t understand what was happening but she hoped that, at last everything would end with a simple robbery
the bigger hoodlum stepped forward and extended a hand "beautiful lady, we don''t have lost all our money and we are hungry can you please give us some money to eat something" while his gaze continued to look at the scared girl
"H-here" the girl extended her wallet, but she could not breathe a breath of relief before she realized, with horror, that the man''s hand had not stopped taking the wallet, but that it had continued to her chest
This story is posted elsewhere by the author. Help them out by reading the authentic version."thank you beautiful lady" continued the man "to thank you we''ll make you feel in paradise".
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"No please nomphh!!!!"
crack
while men were dressing before the body of the girl formerly known as Ryo Nagasawa, the sound of an object breaking rang out in the street and the men tensed up.
Before they could turn a huge shadow covered them, and after inhuman screams the road returned to silence.
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In the shadow, a creature was standing still,staring intently in a small puddle of blood.
The creature was blackcolored, withyellowish-white strips vaguelysimilar to human bones; the body was bigger than a bull, with frog-like legs and human-like hands and fingers as thick as sausages. On the head, a bone-white scary mask dirty of bloodwas covering his face, with crimson drops still dripping in the puddle, giving him amenacing aura;
In the middle of the chest, a large hole was present, completely going through the creature.
AroundIt, parts of human bodies were scattered onthe road, a crushed brain was under It''s foot, andafew meters further was possible to see the rest of a dismembered body near atrash can.
In front of that being, a woman corpse was lying nakedon the ground witha still bleeding cut in the neck.
ROARRRRRR!
Suddenly the creature released a loud roar and diverted his gaze, and staggering walked toward a nearly manhole, where It disappeared
''head......hurt.......''.