Comic script-¡°Space Business¡±

ã€ŠSpace business draftã€‹


 1 - Spacefarers Union

    <h1>Comic script-¡°Space Business¡±</h1>

    <h2>Orbital view of Verdant</h2>

    Title: planet Verdant

    <h2>Admissions office in the Verdant chapter building of the spacefarer¡¯s union</h2>

    Admissions officer: (reading from computer) You are Victor Felfedez?, 25 standard years of age, have a Masters of Thaumotechnical Engineering and Moderate Technopathic ability. Is any of this information incorrect?

    Victor: Negative.

    <h2>*same* officer looks up at victor, retinal scanner thing pops up, officer points at it</h2>

    AO: Well you already passed the professional spacefarer exam so all you need to do is look here, so I can produce your ID card. Do you have any implants that may interfere with a Thaumetric identification?

    Victor: no.

    <h2>*same* victor is looking into scanner</h2>

    Scanner: vvwoop vvwoop

    <h2>*same* victor looks up, card pops out of scanner</h2>

    Scanner: ding!

    AO: Here¡¯s your ID card , welcome to the Spacefarer¡¯s Union!

    <h2>Victor is walking out of the chapter building, he is talking into a wrist device</h2>

    Olde_Reliable_Ai: Well that was quick.

    Victor: I did most of the registration on the web before hand so this was mostly a formality. Did you find any ships within our price range?

    ORA: I did one better, I found an old Stelltech LU-3. It looks to be in good condition too.

    <h2>Victor is walking down the street towards a tram station, he looks both surprised and suspicious</h2>

    Victor: *@#&! There is no way I can afford one of those, even in poor condition, what¡¯s wrong with it.

    ORA: ¡­well¡­It¡¯s missing some of the electrical system and the folding arms are broken, but other than that it¡¯s fine.

    Victor: What you just described is bad condition¡­but¡­send me the link anyway.

    <h2>Victor boards the tram, he switches on a H.U.D. in his glasses which will be represented with a glowing rectangle in front of his face, the H.U.D. shows a listing for the ship as well as a picture of it</h2>

    Victor: well I probably could fix it. Most of the parts I would need I could get from a scrapyard nearby and I know were to find a fabricator for the rest.

    ORA: I knew you would say that.

    Victor: